Hi guys!! I am back to bore you all again ??. Anyways after many days I’m posting this ff. So I hope you’ll like it. And if anybody of you have any suggestions about this particular ff then please do tell me by your comments. Anyways here we goes for the next part. And one more thing this shot is very short as I am completely busy with my studies. So pardon me everyone for this. Now I think I have wasted your time a lot with my boring bak bak ?. So let’s go to the story.
Link of the first shot:
shot 1
Recap-Sanskar told Laksh to write a good ghost story. But nothing was coming in Laksh’s mind so he started thinking about Ragini. While thinking about her he saw a lady who was getting visible slowly in front of him.
Continuation of Laksh’s pov
I was too much shocked as well as scared. Who is she? What she is doing here? And how she came inside?
While thinking about all these I saw that she came over and stood in front of me and glared–yes, positively glared down at me, although (to my knowledge) I had never laid eyes on the woman before, to say nothing of giving her cause to look at me like that.
I sat still, feeling pretty helpless I can tell you, and at last she barked: “What are you gaping at?”
I swallowed, though I hadn’t been chewing anything.
“Nothing,” I said. “Absolutely nothing. My dear lady, I was merely waiting for you to tell me why you had come. And excuse me, but do you always come in sections like this? I should think your parts might get mixed up sometimes.”
“Didn’t you send for me?” she crisped.
Imagine how I felt at that!
“Why, no. I–I don’t seem to remember—-”
“Look here. Haven’t you been calling on heaven and earth all afternoon to help you write a story?”
I nodded, and then a possible explanation occurred to me and my spine got cold. Suppose this was the ghost of a stenographer applying for a job! I had an advertisement in the paper recently. I opened my mouth to explain that the position was filled, and permanently so, but she stopped me.
“And when I got back to the office from my last case and was ready for you, didn’t you switch off to something else and sit there and was speaking nonsense so I couldn’t attract your attention until just now?”
“I–I’m very sorry, really.”
“Well, you needn’t be, because I just came to tell you to stop bothering us for assistance; you ain’t going to get it. We’re going on strike!”
“What!”
“You don’t have to yell at me.”
“I–I didn’t mean to yell,” I said humbly. “But I’m afraid I didn’t quite understand you. You said you were—-”
“Going on strike. Don’t you know what a strike is? Not another plot do you get from us!”
I stared at her and wet my lips.
“Is–is that where they’ve been coming from?”
“Of course. Where else?”
“But my ghosts aren’t a bit like you—-”
“If they were, people wouldn’t believe in them.” She made herself sat on the top of my desk among the pens and ink bottles and leaned towards me.
“In the other life I used to write.”
“You did!”
She nodded.
So guys I am ending this shot here only. Next shot will be also be on Laksh’s pov as I told you all that here Laksh is the main cahracter. And may be Ragini will also be there. I’m not sure about that. I thought to write something else in this ff by myself so that you all will get Raglak moments too. I’ll do that in the next shot. And if you are not liking this ff then tell me I’ll stop it in the middle because you will get less Raglak moments. But I’ll try to add their moments. And plzzzzz don’t forget to drop your comments in the comment box. If you don’t like it then also comment and tell me.. I’m waiting… Love you all ??.
42 Comments
Awesome
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Awesome
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awesome shot plz continue
Thanks for commenting Laashya. And about continue this ff then it is depending on comments dear.
Amazing
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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Thank you very much Arjuna for commenting.
awesome dear…
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Amazing
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Awesome episode
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Awesome
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Remembering my school days dr this story is really super story I am remembering my eng teacher coz of u dr
Hey thanks a lot dear for commenting. And it was my favourite story too from last year’s syllabus.
Awesome superb
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Is it from a cbse text book of english
Yes it is from CBSE syllabus. From class tenth english text book.
Superb dear
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Pls continue and awesome
About continuing this ff then it depends on the number of comments dear. If I’ll not get enough comments the way my other ff is getting then I won’t write this ff anymore. And thanks for commenting.
it is super awesome riyu di
so please dont stop this ff pls pls pretty pls!!!
lucky’s convo with the ghost is funny
waiting for the next part
take care
keep smiling and writing
lots of love
bye bye
Thank you choooo much Iqu for commeting. You too take care and love you too, three, four, five,….. ????
nice
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Awesome
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superb episode
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Interesting episode dear and please don’t say that it’s boring. It’s really interesting and please continue. Eagerly waiting for next episode and post next part ASAP
Thanks a lot Ammu for commenting. And your comment is showing that how much you are interested in this story dear ??. I am too much happy by seeing your comment. It made me smile ?. Don’t worry I’ll post next part by tomorrow or day after tomorrow may be. Or in the weekend.
simply superb di…post next soon
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Awesome both parts.
Marvellously written Riyu.
Khub bhalo.
Thank you soooo much Fenil for commenting. By the way you are Bengali?