Hello all of u thank u soo much for ur lovely response..n I’m not writing the update date because I could not type as my busy schedule..I don’t want to hurt u than way soo sorry..but I will be giving longer update as u know I will be late always?.love u guys n do comment……plzzzzzzzzzzzz
Let’s begin
Every one were busy with the preparations of today’s Sangeet..jigyasa Manish n misha goes to shopping as per dadi’s orders..they went to some random shops n they reach a big shop..the dresses there were soo costly n rough..jigyasa did not like anyone of them..
They browse through some dresses n misha finds one golden n red the most costliest but soo rough most of its stones were missing n it was looking like an old one n tried by many People
Misha:bhai how is this one
Manish:I really don’t know these things u decide urself.he looks over the shop ignoring her.misha gives a weird look n sees Jigyasa
Misha:Bhabi how is it,
Jigyasa:it’s good misha but..misha cuts her
Misha:ok we we will take this.jigyasa gets confused
Misha:how much does it cost.
Sales man:it’s 8 lakhs..jigyasa widens her eyes
Misha:hmm great so what do u think Bhabi should we final this
Jigyasa:mishu do u really like it I mean look at it the stones they r missing it’s looks quite damaged n old.n look at the rate he is saying.i mean rate won’t matter but the quality do.
Sales man:yes ma’am it’s is an old one but not damaged..n actually this dress is old because it was waiting for a beautiful women to wear it like u.he tries to impress her with his talks n misha does gets impressed.
Misha:Bhabi I think this will be a great choice look how stunning this dress is the stones looks so shiny.
Jigyasa:but mishu
Misha:no Bhabi I like this dress for my Sangeet.bhai I want this dress
Manish:offo Jigyasa if my princess wants it let her take it na she is liking the dress.ok mishu u take it.misha smiles n Jigyasa also nods as an obedient wife.he smiles n asks the sales man to pack the dress..manish looks over the showroom n finds a really pretty one for his love..he sees her n she was looking at the other dresses.he smiles.he was waiting for her to see him.
Jigyasa:misha I think we should get something for Dadi n mom too.misha gets angry at hearing the word mom
Misha:if u want u can take I won’t choose.misha see some Sarees for Dadi while jigyasa sees some Sarees for neha..manish sees her quitely(ranjha naa plays)..she starts walking to the other corner when she finds her anklet stuck is something.she sees it.her anklet opened up n stuck with her dupatta.she sees it n takes it out.she takes her anklet n goes to a corner Manish follows her.she keeps her leg on a small platform there n bends down to tie her anklet.he smiles seeing her.as she was bending more her hairs comes front n block her from seeing her anklet so she was not able to tie it properly.she tucked her hairs back n again tried it happened again.she tried several time n feels few big fingers pulling her hairs Behind her ear she turns to see the person n it was none other then Manish.he smiled at her n she looked at him.he sits down on his knee n takes her anklet n ties it.she smiles.he looks at her n holds her hand n kisses her knuckles.she smiles wider n he gets up..he gestures something but she didnot understand n goes from there.he looks at her confusingly n goes away too..she sees some Sarees for neha but was very confused.she puts one of it on herself n turns to Manish he was looking somewhere else.she slowly said his name n he looked at her.she was wondering how did he heard even she called out to him soo slowly..she gestures keeping the other saree on her other shoulder asking which one.
Manish saw both of them n nodded no..she sees the others n keeps the other one.it was heavy pink one n Manish liked it.he nodded yes.she smiles n asks the the salesman to pack that one..Manish comes near her
Manish:now if ur done can u come with me
Jigyasa:where Manish
Manish:see I know u choosed saree for urself for wearing today but I want u to wear something else come with me
Jigyasa:I did not got that saree for me.its for mom.his happy mood again changes to sad one.he though he was choosing for his wife but it was for his lier betrayer mom..he was getting angry again which jigyasa saw n holds his hand.he sees her
Jigyasa:I am coming with u..he looked at her with much anger n jerked his hand.she held it again
Jigyasa:plzz for misha don’t spoil ur mood today.plzz Manish look at how excited she is n if she sees his brother is not in a good mood today she also will get sad.he sees misha who was busy selecting Sarees for Dadi.he nods.
Jigyasa:come where do u wanted to take me.he points to the side n she walks he follows but misha stops him
Misha:bhai here is nothing like dadi’s taste .
Manish:ok misha wait for few minutes me n ur Bhabi will be back
Misha:r u going to select dresses for ur self
Manish:yes
Misha:then it will take time .there is a saree shop nearby I will see there.. u Both come there after buying ur dresses
Manish:ok but don’t go anywhere from there till we come back to u.
Misha:ok bhai.she went out from the shop.manish goes to Jigyasa.she was Standing near a corner seeing at the dresses Manish comes there
Jigyasa:u took so long
Manish:hmm..he takes the dress from its place n shows it to her.she sees it.it was soo pretty..a golden plane long sleeveless frock with stones all over shining like diamonds n it had a golden long cape with multi colored flowers on it..she was welcomed by the shine of the stones she first had to cover her face by the sudden shine.he smiles.she slowly looks at it n smiles
Jigyasa:it’s very pretty Manish.
Manish:not more then u.he stated looking at her n she sees him.they have an eyelock..(Mahi bolna Mahi bolna plays)she turns her face getting shy.he smiles n hands her the dress.
Manish:now go to the changing room n try it.
Jigyasa:but Manish what’s the need see I have a lot of dresses still which I did not wear.n also u gifted one on the day u proposed me I was thinking to wear that.
Manish:yes but I want u to wear this.
Jigyasa:manish but
Manish:for me.
Jigyasa:ok..she said sarcastically n went to the dressing room to try it..she wears the inner frock.it had a zip n Dori behind.she tries to tie it but was not happening by her.she thinks to call misha for doing it.she slowly open it the door n sees Manish she asks him to send misha inside n closes the door but did not locked it..he was tensed what to do now.he sees if misha came back or not but she was not there.he goes near the dressing room n thinks to say her..he stands near the door.a fat lady watches him all the time what he is doing there.he notices her.he gets more tensed.she walks few steps towards him n her expressions were not so good.she raised her eyebrows angrily n he gets more tensed.he quickly pushes the dressing room door n gets in.the lady was aware of some other girl inside n gets shocked when he enters in.she thinks he would do something wrong with her n she has to do something.
In the dressing room
Jigyasa was facing towards the mirror n looking down n constantly trying to tie her zip but it was soo hard for her.manish gets in n signs in relief.jigyasa sees in the mirror n finds Manish facing towards the door.she turns quickly.
Jigyasa:manish!!! What r u doing here.
Manish:ahh wo actually..he sees her figure in the mirror.her untied Dori n zip n her white skin.jigyasa sees that n quickly hides.
Manish:ahh a lady outside was looking at me strangely n also she was coming to me so I got scared n came inside.
Jigyasa:but I called misha
Manish:she is not here.she went to other shop as there was nothing good for Dadi here.
Jigyasa:oh ok
Manish:waise I can help u to tie ur Dori.
Jigyasa:what ..she gets shy
Manish:now u stop giving me those expressions always.. don’t forget I’m ur husband n y r u getting shy from me..she looks at him..he gestures “can I”..she looks down n nods yes..manish smiles at her shyness n holds her by her shoulder.she looks at him.he turn her around.she was soo close to the mirror..she looks down n Manish moves her hairs a bit n touches her bare back.she feels his touch.she tightens her body n closes her eyes..he slowly ties zip touched her back n then the Dori looking at her in the mirror..his hot hands were still at her back n she was feeling warm.she heavily breathed n he came close..she could feel his breath on her neck..
Jigyasa:manish!!..he smiled hearing his name so beautifully from her mouth.he could not control anymore now after hearing his name.he lost the control over his heart,his heart wanted him to go close to her.n he did.he went on close to her n moved her hairs aside n kissed her neck.she moaned with his one kiss..he touched her bare hands with his moving it all over her.she leaned herself on the mirror keeping both her hands on it.he held his hands on hers n kissed her again on her neck.his wet kiss made her moan louder this Time..
Jigyasa:ma..manish!!.she again whispered n how beautiful it was he thought..he kissed her passionately at her nape line n she could not help.she turned herself towards him n he looked at her soo innocently pleading for her to say yes..she raised her hands n puts them around his his neck.he smiles n they look at each other passionately(Mahi Bolna Mahi bolna..bolna Mahi bolna).they both were lost in eachother that they did not realize when they both started coming close to eachother..they were just an inch away from eachother they were just to kiss eachother when the people outside started banging the door..jigyasa turns towards the door.manish slightly punches the mirror behind her.
Manish:not always yaar.she smiles
Jigyasa:who might it be see how vigorously they r banging the door
Manish:yes wait I will see..u don’t come out..he gets worried n goes towards the door.he opens it n sees a group of people standing n the lady banging it.
Manish:if u want to try any dress then use any other room this one is busy.
Lady:oye busy ke bacche come out(oye stupid kid come out)she grabbed him by his coller n pulled him out.jigyasa kept seeing but did not came out.she quickly wore the cape n wanted to come out but then her husband commanded her not to come out
Manish:arre what r u doing??
Lady:how dare u misbehave with a girl.n where is that girl..what have u done with her.she left manish’s collar n the other people grabbed his hand as he cannot escape now.the lady came in the dressing room n took hold of jigyasa’s hand n brought her out.
Lady:see I told u she was inside..n he went in he was seeing her all the time n when got chance he got inside with this girl n misbehaved with her.
Jigyasa:what r u saying.
Manish:see that’s nothing like that.u first leave her hand she is getting hurt..he wanted to move but the other people pulled him back forcefully
Lady:ohh don’t worry dear he won’t do anything to u.dont worry we r with u we will call police n arrest this rapist..jigyasa gets hell shocked n angry..manish was also shocked..
Jigyasa:no ur misunderstanding don’t call police plzz
Lady:don’t call police!!!…oh now I see so ur also a call girl.u were enjoying with him n now when ur caught ur getting scared of police .
Manish:watch ur mouth aunty.how dare u talk like this
Lady:Oho so u both r lovers n came all the way here to romance.i I see ur parents won’t be agreed with ur relationship so u came here to romance.chee this is more cheap u third class people.hey all of u look at the lip mark at his neck..jigyasa remembers it happened when they came so close to eachother..all the people makes weird faces at them saying how cheap they r.
Lady:n u boy don’t u have a little shame at all..guys like u must be beaten with out their clothes.all the people nod their head in agreement.manish n jigyasa gets shocked..first the lady raised her hand to slap Manish.manish was standing still in shock.before she could slap him someone holds her hand.lady turns n sees jigyasa holding her hand n looking at her like a tigress..she was soo in anger that she forgot the lady was her elder..she came front of Manish holding her hand..her anger raised at remembering all the words she said to her husband.cheap,third class,rapist..she jerked her hand away so hardly that she was about to fall.few people of them holds her.
Lady:look at her attitude.she just.jigyasa cuts her
Jigyasa:look at urself first..who u r to blame us.with out knowing the truth u blamed us,how could a women do this with an other women.we don’t have shame!..actually u don’t have shame…u easily said that we r lovers n came here for romancing hiding from our parents.but have u all seen this mangalsutra around my neck.she takes out her mangalsutra n show them
Jigyasa:this sindoor ..she point her hairline
Jigyasa:have anyone of u noticed that,no..no no no u won’t because u all love to spread n enjoy with the rumors.n same here.this lady said some cheap things about us n u stated it correct.no one ever dared to know the truth.u know what we r husband n wife.n this lip mark on his neck is my lip mark.i kissed him.cant a wife kiss her husband.she asked furiously..
Jigyasa:n yes can’t a husband help his wife in the changing room.she was yet louder n furious at the lady..lady bowed down n embarracement
Manish:u easily said that we r cheap n she is a kind of call girl..how could a women think this cheap about any other women.if not her today if ur daughter would be inside with any other guy what would u do haan.the lady was ashamed.
Jigyasa:n most big comment passed by u was rapist.if anyone would say it to ur son would u be quite..
Manish:leave them jigyasa these kind of people r waste to talk..manager come there n Manish says him all about what happened here.
Manager:do u all know who he is.he is a great business man n she is his wife who is also a business women they r not cheap like u how dare u say them like this.everyone were soo sorry n embarrassed..
Jigyasa:n u lady what did u said u will call police to arrest us.wait.manish give me ur phone.
Manish:but..
Jigyasa:plzzz.he takes out his phone n gives it to her.
Jigyasa:call the police with this phone the next moment u will find the force standing infront of u.she was soo angry today as the lady said soo cheap words to her husband …the lady did not took the phone n stood silently
Jigyasa:u won’t I knew but I will.manish call the police n also the media the world should know about these kind of people n also not all the people r wrong always.manish nods n dials the number
Lady:no I’m soo sorry.i did not knew it plzz forgive me..she joins her hands.manish cuts the call n jigyasa detaches her hands.
Jigyasa:aunty I’m sorry ur my elder n I should not have behave like this with u but all the men r not rapist.people or situations like this make them.u have to see this world with a good sight then u will understand it.n I know how honest is my husband even the world turns around I won’t stop trusting my husband..he smiled at her words..
Manish:n also not every girl is a call girl..u must have learnt about the matter then this would never happen..being a women u blamed a women in a way u blamed ur self..u must be aware of the fact before poking ur Nose in anyone’s matter..n people love to believe in rumors as u all did.she said some rubbish thing n u all believed.u all love to get entertained that way but u should also see whom ur blaming..all the people around were ashamed n looked down..
Manish:jigyasa it’s very late we should leave now..jigyasa nods n turns to him n holds his hand.he sees her n she smiles.he smiles too n they leave holding hands.
All the people praise them n blame the lady she apologizes to them n leaves
.jigyasa goes to another changing room n changes her dress.she comes out in her dress n they go to the counter
Manager:sir after what had happen we hope u won’t punish us.we will see to this matter soon but plzz don’t leave out shop like this
Manish:we will leave but with the dresses pack these three dresses.he gets happy n quickly packs it.manish pays the bill n they come out..misha also came near the shop n bumped into jigyasa
Misha:sorry Bhabi..
Jigyasa:it’s ok
Misha:bhai Bhabi u both took forever to selected dresses do u know from how much long I was waiting In the other shop.now let’s go or else my Sangeet will, end before we reach
Jigyasa:no it won’t with out the bride.she smiles n they get in the car.they leave the place.
Goplani’s mansion
Jigyasa Manish n misha reaches home n they get in.they were welcomed with Dadi angrily standing with her hands on her waist looking at them like she will kill them
Dadi:were have u three been haan.u took forever to choose ur dresses do u know what the time is.its 4 n we have to reach there in two hours.i know this misha have made u both late today.she might have took a lot time to select her dresses.
Misha:Dadi y always me.no I was the first one to select
Dadi:then who was late
Jigyasa:Dadi I was.. sorry.
Dadi:jigyasa I did not expected this from u atleast
Manish:offo meri Dadi she was late because she had to chooses saree for u too.
Misha:yes n I choosed one for u see.she quickly takes it out n show her
Dadi:oye Teri Dadi itni bhi budhi nahi hai jo tu itni simple saree le aii hai(ur Dadi is not this old that u brought this simple saree for me).she pats misha shoulder.
Jigyasa:Dadi how is this one.she takes out other saree.
Dadi:wow this is like my choice.
Misha:Bhabi when did u got it u did not told me
Jigyasa:I was just browsing the Sarees n liked it for Dadi so I buyed it.
Dadi:thank u beta it’s so pretty I will wear this today definately
Misha:but Dadi my saree.
Dadi:I will also take it I will wear it any other time.misha was sad jigyasa sees it
Jigyasa:misha see ur Sarees color is mehendi she she can wear it on ur mehendi function.misha gets happy n hugs dadi
Dadi:yes I will wear it on that day.dadi also hugs her..jigyasa sees neha watching the grand mother n daughter bond n getting happy..jigyasa takes her saree n goes near her.everyone sees her.
Jigyasa:mom this saree is for u.
Neha:but beta.i have many Sarees I will wear any
Abhi:haan many new Sarees like she can open a big shopping mall through it..he taunted her n neha gets sad..
Jigyasa:so then add this saree in ur shopping mall mom this is from ur Bahu n son .won’t u accept it ..Manish was shocked at her word son.
Neha:I can’t beta try to understand.
Jigyasa:mom plzzz for me..she smiles n nods yes.manish starts walking to the dining table to get some water.jigyasa sees him.she wanted him to give the saree to neha..jigyasa forwards her hand to give n neha forwards her hand to take it..jigyasa acts like slipping n she throws the saree in air..manish sees her n holds her hand n pulls her close holding her waist…the saree falls on both of them.they were covered with the saree.they see eachother..they were soo close to eachother they they forgot the family is around n seeing them.they had an intense eyelock(ranjha naa plays)misha n Dadi shared looks n smiled abhi sees them n smiles too.neha also smiles..
“Uhmmm….uhemmm”. The voice brought them back to reality.dadi cursed misha for doing it.she wanted to see them this close always n misha spoilt the moment..manish takes out the saree from both of them n holds it..they both move a step back n gets shy.everyone laughs at them
Misha:waise if ur romance is done can we get ready we have to leave na.
Dadi:yes yes my impatient girl.common everyone go n get ready.she ordered n left.misha n abhi also left
Jigyasa:mom u also go n get ready.manish give that saree to mom.manish sees her n gesture what.jigyasa gesture that the saree is in ur hand..he see it n see neha.neha looked at him hopefully.manish finally farward his hand . Both Jigyasa n neha gets happy.he holds jigyasa’s hand n place the saree on her hand n leaves from there.neha was heart broken.jigyasa was also very sad.but she had to console both of them n kept her hand on neha’s shoulder..neha looks at her like a way she is saying “he hates me soo much he won’t forgive me”
Jigyasa:he will one day mom..she pats her shoulder n neha wipes her tears..jigyasa turns towards the stairs
Jigyasa:n he has to.she whispered to herself which was not audible to neha n goes upstairs..manish was waiting for her in the room with bunch of questions complains.n Jigyasa knew what will they be.jigyasa also had many questions but not today she thought.its misha’s Sangeet n spoiling his mood will be like indirectly spoiling everyone’s mood it’s better to stay quite n also stop him from questioning anything..she went inside the room n manish sees him.she goes to the cupboard.n takes out some clothes.manish goes near her
Manish:what is this jigyasa.she handed his his new golden silk kurta with few dark golden butterflies on it..
Jigyasa:taking out ur dress.
Manish:I can see it but down why did u..she cuts him
Jigyasa:offo if ur detective questions r over then go n get ready we have to leave..
Manish:y r u avoiding my questions..
Jigyasa:I’m not I’m just saying to go n get ready.we will talk latter ok
Manish:is it not avoiding .jigyasa gets angry
Jigyasa:ok ask what do u want to..she almost shouts n folds her hands near her chest.n he gets angry as she talked rudely..
Manish:I don’t want to.he takes his clothes n goes inside.she realized she was rude n now had to make him smile..she gets an idea.she quickly changes her dress in the room itself.she again tries to tie her Dori.she stands near the mirror n tries.manish comes out.he sees her n gets mesmerized.she flips her hair to one side to the other n tries to tie her Dori again.but was not happening by her.she knew he was watching her n turns towards him..they see eachother.manish turns his face.he could not resist himself from seeing her.she was soo beautiful.she makes a cute pout n gesture him to tie the Dori he again turns n she gets sad.but then feels his foots coming near her.she sees him.she smiles.he stands behind her..her hands were still back n he holds them both.she smiles looking at him in the mirror.he slightly squeezes her hands n she moans.”ahhh” her moan filled the room.she was brought more closer to him from the back.he brought her hands near the Dori n left it..she sees him in the mirror.he turns his face angrily..she smiles.she runs n stands infront of him showing her back n asking him to tie the Dori..he did not even looked at her.she takes his hands n puts it on her back.he takes his hands away.she does it again.n he takes them away again.n next before she could again take his hand he puts his hands around her belly n pulls her back.their bodies crushed with eachother..
Manish:now if again u try to take my hand u will regret..he said moving his hands on her belly..she was confused what he meant..but still wanted to convince him.
Jigyasa:manish plzz don’t spoil ur mood by that
Manish:then y do u trouble me like this.i know what u did down was intentionally.i know u wanted me to give that saree to that lady but y don’t u understand jigyasa I don’t want it,I don’t want her in our life.
Jigyasa:she is ur mom Manish..
Manish:exactly she is my mom n What she did to me is something any mother will never do it to her son..I don’t need to say anything more after what she did to us.
Jigyasa:n she is regretting.
Manish:good then she should regret more.
Jigyasa:how much time will u take to forget everything n forgive her
Manish:I don’t know but one thing she does good for both of us that day I will forgive her.jigyasa sighed in relief that atleast he will forgive her one day..she smiles when she finds manish’s lips in her shoulder..
Jigyasa:acha what did u meant when u said “now if i again try to take ur hand I will regret”..he smirks.
Manish:ok wait let me explain u..he turns her holding her shoulders.she sees him totally confused..he steps close to her.
Jigyasa:what r u doing..he smiles romantically n she gets nervous..
Manish:did u understand what I meant..she thinks for a second n realizes it.she looks at him giving bewildered looks..she tries to say something but what.she first gulped in
Jigyasa:ma..manish..he smirks hearing his name yet again..he steps near her n she steps back.she was near the bed when she turns her face n sees a cockroach roaming in the room n coming towards her n she screams n starts jumping..
Manish:what happen
Jigyasa:manish Manish their is a cockroach just throw it out I hate them she jumps on the bed.but her luck the cockroach was a flying one,it starts flying n she gets more scared.she was literally dancing on the bed in a joker way
Manish:u will hurt urself jigyasa come down I will catch it..he was trying to control his laughter seeing her dancing
The cockroach landed on her shoulder n she jumped at heights
Manish:no now u will really hurt urself come down.he grabbed her hand n pulled her down..she quickly hugged him.he smiled
Jigyasa:ma..manish,.plzzz ta..take out that coco..cockroach plzz just do it fast..she cries
Manish:ok ok wait I’m doing wait.he tried to take it out from her shoulder but it goes inside her frock..she jumps getting scared
Jigyasa:look what u did now it went inside ohh it’s irritating do something..she keeps on jumping n he pulls her close.she was buried in his chest.he moved her hairs aside n opens her Dori..she widens her eyes in shock but then the next moment closes her eyes tightly as she felt manish’s hand traveling on her back..he could not see the cockroach still.he opens her dress zip n she hugs him more tightly keeping her hands on his back.his Hand were traveling on her whole back.she felt a shiver down her spine as he touch her body..she clutched her sherwani from back..he knew exactly what she felt..he finally saw the cockroach attached with her frock n pulls it out n throws it away..now she was not scared as she was in his arms.instead she was moaning with his touch..he puts her hand on her shoulder n puts her sleeve correctly on her shoulder as it moved slightly when he opened the zip..he zips her dress again n was to tie the Dori when she moves back n runs from him.he saw her smiling while running n gets happy..he holds her hand near the door n she turns to him..she tries to free her hand n he squeezes it n comes close to her..
Manish:I think u have to say something to me..she looks at him n he smirks
Jigyasa:thank u
Manish:n
Jigyasa:n??..he pushes her toward the door n pins her hand up.she looks at him
Manish:jaldi she boldo warna pachtaogi (say it fast or else u will regret.)he was soo in romantic mood today
Jigyasa:hmm I was saying that u should give a chance..he knew she was talking about mom n cuts her
Manish:oh plzz U r infront of me in this beautiful attire n looking gorgeous.n I am here not able to control.im in a romantic mood don’t spoil it now..she puts her hands across his neck
Jigyasa:mr goplani ur always in romantic mood don’t u forget what happened with us today only because of ur romantic mood.she gives an irked smile
Manish:what can I do if the world thinks that way.i just want to love my wife n they.he smirks n she gets shy..
Manish:u know what when u were trying to convince me I was soo laughing by ur behaviors.u always run away from me n now u urself wanted me to tie ur Dori.wasn’t ur way strange.
Jigyasa:what how mean.she hits his chest.he holds her hand
Manish:arre I mean ur just one smile n specially this shy one is enough to make my mood.she looks at him n gets shy..he touches her face n she leans back.he again holds her hands n intervenes his fingers in her..he pulled her close n holds her hands at her back..she looks at him.
Manish:ur looking soo pretty
Jigyasa:n ur looking very handsome.he smiles n kisses her forehead.they see eachother n smiles.he moves closer to her she sees that.she puts her finger on his lips before they approach hers
Jigyasa:it’s ur sisters n mine brothers Sangeet today we should leave or else Dadi will kill us for coming late again.he smiles .manish moves back n he takes her cape n makes her wear it.she smiles n wear it’s
Manish:let’s go.he forward his hand..jigyasa turns him towards her n puts the buttons of his sherwani..he smiles.she goes to the dressing room n bring a brooch n pins it near his chest.he smiles n while she was pinning it he wraps his hands around her waist she sees her.
Jigyasa:what r u doing
Manish:till u pin the brooch plzz.she nods no in a sarcastic manner n pins his brooch
Jigyasa:done
Manish:no it’s not pin it properly
Jigyasa:hmm mr goplani u just need a chance to romance.she pulls his cheeks n he smiles.they leave from the room..
Everyone were ready n waiting for them in the hall
Dadi:again u both r late
Manish:Dadi she takes a long time to get ready.dadi sees jigyasa.jigyasa sees him soo angrily like she will scratch his face leaving scratch mark he was scared by that look but still giggles at her.
Dadi:jigyasa any explanation..she had nothing because she cannot say Dadi what actually they were doing in the room.
Jigyasa:ahh Dadi..she started playing with her cape end
Jigyasa:girls birth right..she said making a baby face.everyone bursts out in laughter.jigyasa was confused but smiles.they leave for the pandey nivas n Manish n jigyasa were walking behind all of them.jigyasa twists his ear n he shouts “ahhh”..everyone turns back n sees them.jigyasa acts normally.
Abhi:what happen Manish
Manish:nothing dad actually I forgot my phone.
Abhi:so what was there to scream
Manish:just.jigyasa giggled.
Abhi:really!
Manish:u all go I will come soon.jigyasa my leg is paining will u bring the phone for me plzz.she nods n goes to the room while everyone come out n even leaves in their cars.jigyasa n Manish were left alone n jigyasa was in the room she searches his phones but did not find it.she gets a call on her phone she sees it.it was manish’s
Jigyasa:manish is calling but he left his phone here.it means he fooled me now I won’t leave u.wait..she runs downstairs..she searches for him in the hall but does not finds him she sees that the cars r gone
Jigyasa:what everyone left leaving me behind.n Manish also did not noticed me but y..suddenly she feels a hand grabbing her hand n pulling her towards him..she was much close to him by the sudden jerk.she holds his shoulders n sees him.he winks n smiles at her
Jigyasa:what is this Manish I got got scared
Manish:y I don’t think it’s anything scary here
Jigyasa:ur scary
Manish:oh I’m because u always get scared when I come close to u.she looks at him n he smiles.
Jigyasa:now leave me
Manish:not this time.
Jigyasa:what
Manish:this is ur punishment of making me embarrassed infront of all..she remembers it n giggles..
Jigyasa:manish take ur revenges later we r getting late let’s go now.
Manish:no I don’t think anyone will notice us because we r not the bride n groom
Jigyasa:so what we r bride mates n groom mates..we have to take care of people there.
Manish:no first ur punishment.he comes near her n she puts her hand on his waist.he smiles n comes close while she tickles him n he laughs..
Manish:what r u doing..jigyasa also laughs n runs outside
Manish:wait u I won’t leave u..he chases her n she runs n sits in the car.he sees her n sits in the car too..she knew laughing now is like provoking him to start romance again.she kept silent n ignored him.he saw her ignoring n drives out..
On the way
Jigyasa remembers the moments n she giggles which Manish hears it.she looks at him n he was seeing her while driving.
Jigyasa:what r u looking at me.
Manish:that how beautiful ur..jigyasa smiles
Jigyasa:but now concentrate on driving not me.
Manish:if u sit this away from me then I cannot concentrate.she did not understand what he meant but smiled at him..he holds her hand.she sees that.n looks at him.he sees front with a smiling face n then sees her.she smiles.he slowly pulls her on him.she sees him n keeps her head on his shoulder.he holds her hand n interwine in his hand..he brings it to his mouth n kisses her knuckles.she smiles..he can now concentrate on his driving as she was soo close to him.so close near his heart or soo close that she was in his heart..they smiled at eachother.
Pandey nivas
Jigyasa n Manish reaches there n gets inside.the family was again giving them looks for coming late but they did not had anything to say now.they looked down n remembered their happy moments..they looked at eachother n smiled.they joined with others n took care of the guest..
A girl enters in the pandey nivas wearing a yellow off shoulder top with a long neck n a black pants..she was wearing black goggles n came in the house searching for some one..misha who was on the stage sees her n waves her hand..the girl sees her n waves back..she gestures “I’m coming” n walks to the stage.,she was busy looking here n there..manish n jigyasa were standing together turned to the other side.the girl collides with Manish n her phone falls down.manish n jigyasa turns to her.
Girl:oh I’m sorry I was looking the other way.
Manish:it’s ok ur phone.I’ll pick it up.the girl n Manish bends down to pick the phone.while jigyasa sees them specially the girl who was wearing the long neck top.most of her neck was revealing.jigyasa sees that n gets shocked..she did not want Manish to see her like that..she quickly bends down n takes her phone from the floor n gets up.the girl also gets up followed by Manish.
Jigyasa:ur phone..she hands her the phone.
Girl:thank u..she sees manish n keeps looking at him.manish n jigyasa sees eachother confused
Girl:ur Manish right..she points her finger towards him.manish was about to say when she interrupts
Girl:yes ur Manish..she shouts.everyone looks at them n manish n jigyasa gets totally confused.
Girl:yes yes yes I cannot be wrong n I cannot be wrong in recognizing u.ur Manish right.
Manish:yes I’m but who r u.
Jigyasa:how do u know him???.she said a bit possessively.girl takes out her giggles n manish n jigyasa could see herface..she waves her hairs childishly n looked at him
Girl:now u recognized me.jigyasa looks at Manish.
Manish:no I have seen u first time here .
Girl:haan how can u recognize now I’m more beautiful then before right.manish passed a fake smile.
Manish:yeah but who r u.?
Girl:I’m ritika..she said with a lot of excitement n jigyasa looked at him questioningly n he gave a wierd look to ritika
Manish:ritika??
Ritika:don’t say u forgot ur chipkali..manish sees her n tries to remember n then realizes who she is
Manish:oye chipkali tu kitni badi hogai.he said pointing at her toe to head.she smiles n keeps her hand on her waists
Ritika:but how can u forget me Manish
Manish:I know u by ur nick name chipkali n u said ur real name which I never knew or I never Called u by that.
Ritika:yes ur right.jigyasa was silently listening to their conversation
Manish:u here n first of all how r u chipkali
Ritika:firstly I’m fine secondly what do u mean by I’m here haan u guys have not informed me abut my best friend misha’s wedding n when I got to know I came up here taking the first flight but u r saying y I’m here..manish makes a sorry face
Ritika:n thirdly I’m not a chipkali now I was beautiful in the child hood n now too so stop calling me chipkali
Manish:if ur not a chipkali then I don’t know any ritika..who r u?
Ritika:offo Manish u na u will never change ok call me chipkali only now can I go n u know what I have made a scolding list for misha.how dare she get married with out informing me.that was me who called her n she told me about her marriage.now I will take her class.
Manish:yes go she is right there.he shows the way n she starts going.she stops at a distance
Ritika:manish.manish turns to her
Manish:haan..
Ritika:we met after a long time won’t u give ur chipkali a hug.jigyasa gets shocked
Manish:yes but make sure u don’t put ur sticky paws on my gentle skin.he winks
Ritika:manish u..manish smiles n hugs her.they hug eachother n then ritika goes away from there.as soon as she was gone jigyasa holds manish’s hand n pulls his towards her.
Manish:ar…arre..they look at eachother..manish smiles seeing her
Manish:oh my wife is suddenly in a romantic mood..he winks n she looks down.
Manish:acha listen.he holds her close to him
Manish:when I come near u u always step back n what happened now u r coming close to me y Mrs jigyasa Manish goplani.he raises his eyebrows.jigyasa was about to say something when he interrupts
Manish:offo I know I’m looking super handsome today n ur also looking beautifully that u r not able to control but we should be in our limits right see around we are surrounded with all the guest so not here publically madam..he pats her cheeks.she was again to say when he interrupts
Manish:so what do u think.he raises his eyes brows…
Jigyasa:what.
Manish:let’s go in the room.he winks.she gets shocked n opens her mouth..she holds her hand n pulls him upstairs.manish was confused by her sudden change but happy too.
Manish:omg my wife is suddenly turned romantic n I cannot do anything.some one plzz save me today.jigyasa smiled.they reach to the room n gets in.
Jigyasa locks the room.manish was constantly staring her a bit confused..she comes near him n he gets happy.he holds her from her waist n she puts her hands around his neck..they smile at eachother n Manish comes close to her.he closed his eyes n wanted to capture her lips but she keeps her finger on his lips to stop him.she moves back but was still in his arms.he looks at her.she gentle rubs his neck
Jigyasa:who was that girl..manish opened his eyes n looked at her.
Manish:who?
Jigyasa:one who just met u down that chipkali.
Manish:oh chipkali she is misha’s friend n she always used to be with us since child hood.
Jigyasa:oh ok..she did not asked any other think as she did not wanted him to doubt on her being jealous.she again caressed his neck this time softly n Manish could not resist he pulls her closer n kisses her on her neck.while jigyasa hugs him.she did not bother of his kiss as she was thinking something very deeply..of course about that chipkali.today she did not wanted to loose him from his embrace but he moved back after giving few soft kisses on her neck..he looks at her who was looking some where else .he snaps infront of her n she gets back to his world
Manish:where r u lost.
Jigyasa:hmm nothing..she fakes a smile.
Manish:what happen r u ok
Jigyasa:yes I’m Manish what will happen to me
Manish:ok then let’s go down.he starts going n she holds his hand.she bring him back infront on him
Jigyasa:what happened to u today.y r u running away from me.u never do this anytime infact u never allow me to go from ur embrace then y today..he smiles n cups her face
Manish:hey nothing happened to me but something have surely happened to u..u always run from me n now u urself coming close what’s wrong haan.
Jigyasa:y can’t I come close to u what is wrong in it can’t a wife come close to her husband.she says coming closer to him.manish was stunned
Manish:yes yes u can but now let’s go down the guest must be waiting n also the function is going to start.he holds her hand n brings her down.she was constantly looking at him with a kind a pain in her eyes,some possessiveness,some concern,she was worried for him but why she didn’t know..they reach in the hall n Vasu sees them.
Vasu:where did u both go
Manish:no where Dima just upStairs
Vasu:ok now don’t go anywhere n see misha n Aryan r performing.they see them n smiled n settled them self on the nearby chairs..ritika sees Manish n sits beside him.they smile at eachother
Manish:r u enjoying..ur comfortable right
Ritika:yes I’m after all ur family is also mine.I’m good
Manish:great
Jigyasa:enjoying my foot.she stepped her one foot on her other one with wearing her high heels which hurted her a bit but she controlled n released her pain closing her eyes
Aryan n misha were near the stage ready for the performance.
Misha:Aryan do well ok
Aryan:oh hello madam I’m good at dancing u see urs.but I suggest to leave those heel down u can’t dance
Misha:arre these heels r nothing I danced on a pencil one
Aryan:but our dance form is salsa it’s quite difficult
Misha:don’t worry n don’t forget to catch me at the last move I don’t want to fall..
Aryan:ok now let’s go the host is announcing our names.
They get on the stage.jigyasa n manish smiles.jigyasa shows a thumbs up to both of them n they smiled seeing eachother.they took their positions holding eachothers hands n waist..they song place.after a few seconds of slow music the song starts.
(Mahi ve)
Dard bhara dil me itna ke rone ko dil karda…Everyone were shocked hearing the lyrics the most was Aryan..he stopped dancing n misha forced him to do..he noticed the guest around n quitely danced with her in salsa steps.
Tere Nina Bejaaan sa ab to hone ka dil karda
Tujhe chaha rab se bhi zyada..2x
Phir bhi na tujhe paa sake..
Rahe tere dil me magaar Teri dhadkan tak na jaa sake
Judke bhi toote rahi ishq di dor ve
Kisko sunaye jake dil ka shor ve…(I won’t give the complete lyrics)
Mahi ve mahabbatan sachiyan ne….Aryan was not happy with the song but misha sizzled the moment.they were still holding eachother
Aryan:misha we were suppose to dance on some other song but how the song changed
Misha:ohh Aryan that one was an old one I love this song it’s my favorite n I wanted to dance on this today
Aryan:misha don’t u find this song quite seductive.how can u dance on this on a family function..
Misha:offo now don’t spoil my mood n just dance..she forced him while all the family including jigyasa n Manish were totally embarrassed by the choice of the song.the guest were little familiar n starred to taunt them.which was clearly heard by Manish n jigyasa but they could not do anything..Vasu was soo shamed at Aryan n Dadi was at misha.they just wanted to slap them right then n there.but one person was enjoying it was none other then ritika.she cheered for them..
They last step was just near n misha stepped on her gown n trips..Aryan manages to hold her but she keeps her foot on his leg he was hurt by her high heels n he leave her in pain..misha touched the hard surface..she sees him angrily..she find the crowd laughing n she gets up quickly..she fakes a smile n leaves.aryan follows her.
Jigyasa n Manish stops them
Manish:misha r u alright
Misha:do u think I’m bhai after what happened on the stage I m not able to face the crowd in the hall..
Aryan:r u talking about the dance or the fall
Misha:of course the fall
Aryan:oh plzz I’m mostly embarrassed by the dance.. fall n ups r common can happen with anyone they laughed it’s their mentality
Jigyasa:he is right n y do u guys choosed that cheap song.
Manish:yes r u both crazy
Aryan:ask ur dear sister it was her last minute…oh sorry sorry it was also a surprise for me.we decided to dance on some other song but then when we reached the stage I heard a different song n u know what I thought it was a technical. Issue but then it was ur sisters choice..
Manish:misha what is it
Misha:bhai I love that song I wanted to dance so I did..
Manish:but first u should have asked to Aryan about it na.u no what u both won’t be blamed our elders will be blamed for it for letting their kids dance on it.next moment ritika jumps in their conversation n keeps her hand on jigyasa’s shoulder..
Ritika:hey mishu my doll u rocked the stage u just burned it.she said with a lot of excitement but vanished when she saw jigyasa looking at her weirdly.she saw her hand on jigyasa’s shoulder n she removed it
Ritika :oh sorry I think u don’t like..she goes to misha n they have a conversation.aryan Manish n jigyasa sees eachother n comes to the hall..
Vasu:again u all went some where
Aryan:Dima
Vasu:don’t talk to me I will see u later.she sees jigyasa n Manish..
Vasu:beta all the guest r a little uneasy with what happened now.i want u both to handle the situation plzz.i don’t want anyone to leave..this one was the first time she asked them something n they nodded yes..n also it was the first time when Aryans Dima ignored him n was angry with him.he was hurt by misha but remained silent..jigyasa n Manish goes on the stage. Manish stood at a distance n gave a full space to her.she saw him n he gave a best of luck look..she smiled n the music plays
Nagada sang dhol baje…she started dancing with the lyrics ( won’t give the lyrics it will take a long time)
She danced perfectly n the guest enjoyed it a lot..she fell down intentionally after taking few turns n hides her face in her hands..the other song plays.
Sunta hai jab pyaar ho to diye jal uthte hai…she dances n Manish joins her..he holds her hand n she raises it up.he comes behind her n kisses her hand softly..they danced getting closer..they smiled at eachother n then the other one prem ratan dhan payo plays which discribed how much importance is his in her life she tried to convey it n it happened n they danced enjoying the lyrics..she ended up falling in his arms n he holding her n she was really close to the ground n was scared of touching the hard surface..but his embrace was yet more harder..he pulled her close which tugged her head in the crook of his neck..she was stunned n moved back a bit to see him.they see eachother n had a lovely eyelock.(ranjha naa plays)..they detached when realized the being of the crowd around..she composed herself n the crowd cheered for them.they smiled looking eachother n came down of the stage..misha n ritika were not present while all the dance as they were busy conversing in the room.they wondered why the people r cheering.after few minutes the both families gathered and blessed the new Jodi.they smiled..
A few guest nearby started taunting them..
Guest 1:look at the bride who would say she is a bride.we r not soo rich as these people but at our children marriage we will do much better then this.look at her clothes like she’s wearing an old collection of her.they laughed
Guest 1:arre they should have bought nice clothes for atleast the bride.look everyone r glowing but the bride looks dim..the pandey’s n goplani’s were hearing them.
Guest 2:yes ur right.n look jigyasa ..Bahu of goplani’s looks like a bride today.look at her dress..jigyasa saw misha who was very sad..misha looked at herself n found her dress soo cheap..Aryan pats her shoulder n made her out of her thought smiling at her.she smiled back.
Guest 1:n also the performance jigyasa just rocked today n looked a perfect bride but that misha she danced like a cheap girl..
Guest 2:yes she looks cheap,she should get a lesson from her Bhabi for how to react like a rich mannered girl..they laughed n misha was full with tears till then..manish saw her n got angry,he walked to the people to talk but then hear some loud music playing.some party songs..a few girls dressed shortly came upon stage n positioned them self.
Manish:what is happening..the family gave a don’t know look.he saw around n did not found jigyasa..the music plays n the girls started dancing.the families looked confused.but then they were shocked to see jigyasa coming on the stage n dancing with the girls on the same Mahi ve…the crowed were equally shocked.dadi gave a death glare to Manish to do something.to stop her or the guest will get another reason to taunt them..manish nodded at her n ran upon the stage.as he was on the stage he had to dance n he did.he came near jigyasa
Manish:what r u doing
Jigyasa:oh u came I was waiting.she said excitedly n held his hand n danced..
Manish:what is this jigyasa misha have ruined half of our reputation n now u did it all stop it now n come with me.he dragged her but she managed to stay
Jigyasa:I’m doing this for our reputation only.
Manish:what
Jigyasa:if a single or two person does something like this will get taunted but if a whole group does people take it easily..trust me Manish we r doing right..they r taking misha in a wrong way..we need to prove those people wrong n misha right by doing it..he nodded n danced with her..
Dadi:what is he doing first misha then jigyasa n he joined her too..
Vasu:no Annapurna ji I know what she is doing n she is right.everyone looked at her confused
Dadi:u think it is …first of all misha spoiled our status n now they r doing it.
Vasu:if one person does something like misha did today they will be taunted but if a group does they will be praised..Vasu smiled at jigyasa..the girls around jigyasa gave two goggles to her n she gave one to Manish..he took it n they wore it
Kala chashma song plays.they danced n remember the last time they danced at it on ayaan’s birthday.they smiled at eachother n danced well.
Manish:u r smart jigyasa
Jigyasa:yes I’m.she smiled
Manish:acha who taught u this
Jigyasa:what?
Manish:arre just now u gave me a long speech na what was it”.yes”… if one does something they will be taunted but it all does it they won’t be taunted
Jigyasa:acha it was a speech for u ok then go down I’ll manage here
Manish:ok ok sorry now say who taught u this
Jigyasa:Dima..she sees her n Vasu smiled at her..vasu gestured Aryan n misha to go n dance n they joined them too.everyone danced well.
Badri ki dulhanya..song plays n jigyasa Manish enjoyed it.manish conveyed that he will take his dulhanya n Jigyasa ignored him.they enjoyed the dance..
They ended up giving a pose to the guest n the guest roared to cheer them…everyone were happy now..jigyasa Manish misha n Aryan comes down n the family praised jigyasa’s smartness..
Ritika:hey Manish u danced like a rockstar..jigyasa heard her n turned to them..they were laughing talking.she was about to go to them when someone patted her shoulder..she turns to see n finds ayaan..she smiled widely
Jigyasa:ayaaaaaaaan…..manish heard that irritating word n turned to her,he found her hugging him yet again..they seperated
Jigyasa:ayaan what r u dong here.
Ayaan:y u don’t like me to come here.
Manish(in mind):yes I don’t like it.move away from her u dog.
Jigyasa:no no ayaan I’m soo happy to see u here but how did u get my address.
Ayaan:arre on my birth day Manish forgot his wallet at the hotel only I saw the address of his office in his card n went there.he was not there I would have given it to the receptionist but then I taught I can also meet u so I asked his address n came to ur in laws home.there I got to know that today is ur sister in laws Sangeet n finally got the address by a servant n I came here
Jigyasa:ohh ayaan u did a lot for only this wallet thank u soo much..
Ayaan:hey no thanks in friendship right..
Jigyasa:Aha yes yes.come I ll introduce u to my family..he nods n goes along with her to Dadi Vasu dhruv n Adhiti.
Jigyasa:Dima Dadi he is my friend..Dima he is the guy I always said about to u.when I was in America he was with me as my support system..
Dima:ohhh hi beta n thank u for taking care of my daughter..
Ayaan:no Dadi actually I m blessed to have a friend like her..
Dadi:ok beta what’s ur name
Ayaan:ayaan I’m ayaan Dadi
Jigyasa:Dadi few days ago I asked ur permission to go at my friends party it was his.n he came to India few days ago n we met in a restaurant .it was his birthday party that day
Dadi:oh yes yes I remember..just then a waiter passing by ayaan splits some juice on his tshirt..
Vasu:can’t u do ur work properly ..I’m soo sorry beta u go n clean it..
Ayaan:no Dadi it’s ok.
Dadi:no beta u don’t know these workers they r lazy dogs just want to rest n when said work they do these type of mistakes..she scold him
Ayaan:Dadi it’s ok.i know he did not do it intentionally
Dadi:but beta
Ayaan:he may be in hurry he wants to complete his work as soon as possible n rush to his house where his family his children’s r waiting for him..I can say that because my father was also a waiter..everyone were shocked
Dadi:I’m sorry beta I didn’t mean that
Jigyasa:but ayaan ur father is a business man right
Ayaan:all the successful people has to go through a struggle period n it was his struggle period when he was well educated but as not getting any jobs he had to work as a waiter..u don’t worry u go n do ur work as fast as u can ur kids must be waiting.everyone smiled at him n the waisted goes away.
Jigyasa:ayaan u come with me n wash this juice.he nods n goes with him manish sees them going n follows them..ayaan goes in the washroom.manish comes there
Manish:jigyasa I have to introduce u to some one come with me
Jigyasa:arre but whom ayaan is here in the washroom .i will come after he is done cleaning his tshirt.
Manish:y is he a small kid.fine stay here I won’t talk to u..he goes away
Jigyasa:what happen to him soo sudden.ayaan comes out n they went in the hall.jigyasa goes to Manish
Jigyasa:so to whom u wanted to introduce to me..
Manish(in mind):I just said it..I have no one to introduce now.n if I say that she will bang me.
Manish:no one
Jigyasa:what u called me only to irritate
Manish:no the people I wanted to introduce u have went now.
Jigyasa:oh ok sorry..ayaan comes there
Ayaan:hi Manish how r u..
Manish:fine what about u n u here..he said sarcastically..
Ayaan:yes I came to hand ur wallet which u left at the hotel only..he gives it to Manish
Manish:ohh thanks.he fakes a smile.
Ayaan:jigyasa now my work is done so I will leave now..manish gets happy
Jigyasa:ayaan u just came n saying to leave.no u have to stay here till the end plzz.n we did not had a chat too.plzzz
Ayaan:ok..manish was again angry..jigyasa holds ayaan’s hand.manish sees that..
Jigyasa:come lets go to my room i will show u the college albums.
Ayaan:ok..manish did not wanted that..he sees some where.
Manish:oh yes I’m coming.he sees jigyasa
Manish:my friends r calling me I’ll go.jigyasa nods.he goes through them breaking their hand hold intentionally.ritika comes there n takes him away
Jigyasa(in mind):he is going with this chipkali I won’t leave her..but I won’t spoil my mood now..she takes ayaan upstairs…jigyasa n Manish both look at eachother n the persons they r with angrily.like killing them..jigyasa wanted to kill the chipkali n Manish wanted to kill ayaan..they shoot at death glare n went in different directions..
Precap-both the wife n husband getting jealous..ayaan to stay at goplani’s n ritika’s
Psycho side..
Ritika-roop durgapal..u can imagine her playing ritika..
Sorry for a late update but I m really not getting time to type..plzz do comment n let me know about ur views..sorry if any spell mistakes..n u will get to know about ritika in the upcomings..so plzz comment n share ur views..love u guys tc:-)Juveria
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Nice part and two jealous tracks YAY
Thank u raihaneh keep commenting n sharing ur opinion with me dear tc
Too good….Finally 2 jealousy tracks in one go..Trial room sequence was so sweet.And manyasa’s words to the lady was so powerful and bold.Cockroach scene??…And loving the style of jigs convincing Manish everytime.Manyasa’s car drive was so cute..Loved Dadi and misha using every chances to tease manyasa.And rithika’s entry was good.But what about the thrilling precap(psycho side) ???..hope it would not be like the one seen as Maya on beyadh..And jigs’ jealousy dialogues were so possessive.And Manish commenting on those dialogues made it even more spicy.Loved manyasa’s dance part.And finally manish’s jealousy was childish..Waiting for next update.Update soon…Waiting for the double cuteness of manyasa’s jealousy……..Thank you so much for your long updates and Take care dear……
Yes thank u sooo much dear..u will get to know it soon in the next part..a kind of but I don’t know about beyhad I don’t watch it..thank u soo much for such a lovely comment keep supporting n tc
Actually while reading rithika’s part I thought if ayaan is there it would be more interesting to watch both jealous and it happened
Plzzz post next part soonnn really addicted to ur ff I search it everyday and I am reading ur previous postss again and again sooo nice
Thank u soo much priyal..glad that ur liking n yes I will try to but I’m not well so it would take time but keep supporting dear tc
Very nice.????. specially jealousy part. awesome, fantastic ,epi.???????????????????
Thank u afshan..keep commenting n tc dear
Hey I did not told me that u updated…?n about the ff what do I need to say ur amazing n I loved the shopping mall part..n u always create some good scenes with I love.so u go girl love u tc…
Yeah sorry I will tell u next time…thank u baby love u toooo tc
Hi dear I was soo waiting for ur update n I regularly came on the site to check whether you updated or not it’s ok it’s not ur fault u have give much time to ur studies n take care of urself..the episode was fantabulous as always n the way they were getting jealous was soo cute..would love to see much scenes of them getting jealous n each part was justified n I am really happy that I came across such a good writer. God bless you tc
Thank u for waiting dear..thanks for understanding.thank u dear for ur such an over welding comment tc
Hi juveria awesome update. Plzz update soon I rally can’t wait love ya tc
Thank u sammu love u too tc
Juveria hi after soo long ..well really I also did not came to the site since days n I was thinking u would have updated a long time ago n came here to check but u updated today n I didn’t had to search?..n the episode was as usual mind blowing n the best scene was the dance on some party song I loved that part how smartly n honestly she did it for nisha n manish supported her I really loved it u showed a family kind of love in that scene..rithika I’m getting soo many doubts on her..but I know u won’t separate our manyasa. .n I really loved the shop scene where they defended eachither that was soo lovely ..the whole episode was bundle of joy..really loved it tc dear n love u tons
HI Farrah di”.yeh sorry for Bing late..thank u sooo much do keep commenting ur valuable feedbacks n yes ritika u will get to know about her soon n love u tooo tc
Superb diiiii it was amazing enjoyed it love u di tc
Thnk u son love u tooo
Dear I missed u soo happy that u updated I was totally smiling while reading the cute scenes lovely update soon.
Thank u riya tc dear
Ilu ilu ilu ilu juvi ilu sm srsly 2 jlsy tracks tysm for that treat. Amazing as usual juvi that aunty was a quite funny at the begning but when she called mani rapist nd jigs call girl i wanted to lunch her but jigs handled situation too well XD i loved that cockroch part alot u wont beleive i red it around 4 to 5 times ?? i was so mesmerised dnt mind juvi but i found misha to b a lil stbrn. I will kill that ritika but i find ayaan to b nice may b he may help manyasa i think so that end prt when mani breaks their hand lock was amazing nd that wtr one touched my hrt. Jigyasa is really smart the way she saved familiy’s repo was so cool. Loved this to the core wud rate it 200 out of 100 ??? keep it up and keep the food work going i just love u my girl ??? update soon precap left me craving for the next prt.
Juvi whom have u decided for ayaan ?
Hahah I love u tooo..yes She was a kind of cheap..aha thank u I had to add some more lines but u know I was not feeling well so I skipped..misha has her scrip in future..thank u soo much dear for such an cute n inspiring comment.love u toooo…ayaan is just a parallel lead he will be with ritika but again some twist..???
Hi javeria. How are you? The episode was awesome, fantastic, lovely and romantic. Manyasa scenes are awesome. Especially the try room and cockroach scene. Thanks for giving us 2 jealously track. Jigyasa dialogues were superb. It was interesting to read both husband and wife jealously dialogues. During party when jigyasa take manish to the room that scene was very nice. Overall you nailed it again . Great job. Waiting for nxt and take your time to write it. As i am also busy in these days so i can understand your situation. And plz dont say sorry for late update we all understand that you are busy these days. Update next part whenever you are free to write. Love youâ¤. Take care bye.
Hi Maria I’m fine thanks. A lot dear hah yes I’m busy n I’m not well these days so it would take time to update.love u tooo tc
oh finly u post ….u knw how much time i visited here fr ur updatr….but again u naild it dear….u are the mester in creating romnce anywhere….the chngng room romnce was fab and i lvd yhe mani words that ‘not again yar’ poor mani….lol….and the jalsy scens were awsme….i cnt wait fr nxt plx update asap…..plz pkz…tell the date atlst whn will u post….i wnt mnyasa jalsy trck ..l.u .t.c…
He’s finally…hahha thank u solo much..actually sadia I’m not well these days I’m prescribed a complete bed rest n also my studies I’m really not getting time to type but till I try to do so n when I give the date I’m not able to update on that perticular day so Ido twant to hurt u this way so I m not writing the date..sorry dear
but one more thing u must add yhe angry manish for jigs bcos whener mani got angry on jigs he easily come to the nrml mood but i want some serious angry mani…bcoz it will b grat twist hw jigs bear his hatred and angrines towrds her…
Yes i will try dear thank u woo much n keep giving ur suggestions tc
It was an amazing episode. really miss you juvi. And waiting for next part dear.
Thank u soo much rifa I will try to do soo.tc
I saw on insta that you are not well.. I hope you are fine by now.. As you know I always read your updates and wait for it regularly and eagerly.. but due to my account deletion, I am unable to comment each time… And your long updates they are brilliant… Hoping to see the jealous update soon…. take care of yourself dear
Thank u rinka.yes I’m better now thanks u dear never mind I know u read it tc
Di really sorry for so late..
Actually bilkul bhi time nahi tha
Or phir ager m sirf SUPERB lik k chor deti to Y aapki mhnet k saath glat hota..
Well , abhi aap kese ho
Di soroo s start kerte h..
Sab s phle mall vala scene
Di such btaooo aap ne bhot achi kosis ki scene ek massege bhi tha..
Bhot serious scene tha
But sorooo s lker last scene tak meri hasi rookne ka naam nahi l rhi thi
Motii aunty O my god !!!
Lol hahahahahaaaaaaa
Or vo cockroch vala scene bhot realistic tha bhot jyda
Metlab cockroch dek k m bhi bina music sooroooo ho jati hoon..
Or oske baad muje lagta k h ki aap ki tarif m lavj katem ho ja e ge but kuch…
Di plzzz help me
Ager aag free ho to muje romentic classes d do gi..
Ha lakin sirf Theory practical to muj s nahi hoga..
Soch k btna plzzzz or charges bhi fir hum schedul tay ker lenge..
Or muje jig confession ki koe jaldi nahi h..
Confession k baad sara mjaa kraab ho jaega..
Take care
Nd
Love u lot
Romentic scene likna ok !!!
Mera favourite h
Hi kudrat..thank u soo much sweetheart love u loads..n about the romance classes u just need to feel it??…love u tc.
Lovely episode yr jigyasa foran apny Manish k liye ladies ko batien sunati h caring love???
Thank malaika tc n keep commenting
Di sry m bool gae..
Vo gari wala scene bhi bhot acha tha..
Or di Neha aunty ko etni jaldi maaf mat krnaa..
Or manish ko gussa dilvaoo
Taki Jig ose menaae..
Try to update fast..
Love you..
Thank u kudrat love u too..
Or plzz take care
I’m taking kudrat u also dear love u loads
Awesome episode and plz take care of yourself and update it whenever it’s possible
Thank u soo much naik tc
Waiting for your ff dear pls update it asap pls? hope u are all r
Waiting for your ff dear pls update it asap pls? hope u are all right