Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.
Try to find out the colour of this chappy.
Sorry for typo errors.
Colour 23
Jhanvi could notice a special glow in gouri’s face after her return; she was happy for them.
J: gouri beta, r u fine?
G: bilkul maaji.
J: how is Om’s attitude towards u.
G:( shyly) he is also happy maaji.
J: I know , anika told me everything about the past few day’s incidents.I’m sorry on behalf of Om..
G: nahi maaji, aisa mat kaho.I know he didn’t say all those intentionally, it was the situations.
J: he had a very tough time all these years.But his very own strength & weakness was his love towards me.I know that.He has only experienced love fro me & shivru.Now it is u who have to lead him to the right path; to give him courage to overcome all his dark past.I know u might get hurt in this process but remember, he will never ever hurt u intentionally again.He loves u so much; I have seen that in all these days.
G: mujhe pata maaji.I was very insecure when v had started life for 2nd time; I was unsure about his feelings.But now I know that I have a place in his heart; it is enough for me.Im always there with him to share everything & face anything.I will never allow any bad shade to cover him in future.This is my promise.
The saas- bahu shared a hug.But at the same time, someone hearing all this was resolving in mind to destroy rikara’s life!!!!!!
As gouri came back to room, she saw a sleeping Om on the bed; he had slept waiting for gouri.She gently stroked his hair, covered him with blanket and herself slept on the couch….
The most special morning had arrived.As Om opened his eyes.he saw shivru on both sides of the bed, happily wishing him.They had a beautiful moment out there.Both kissed Om on his both cheeks & shared a tight hug.
R: waise O, how old r u now.
Sh: ( slapped him)Chup rudra, r u asking him his age on birthday?
R: bhaiyya, I want to know his age so that I can give him that many no: of gifts to Him ( logic sign)
O: shivay, rudra this family is the greatest gift that I have got. Specially u both( crying)
R: Come on O, don’t become senti…then I will cry & my make up might b spoilt.
Sh: yew….rudra… talking like teenage girls…
Anyway, come on Om get ready fast & come down,ok?
Om slowly stood up from the bed; he wanted to see gouri.He saw her blanket on the couch & was sad that she had to sleep on the couch yesterday.The staff brought tea to the room; it was special glucose wali chai but he wanted it from gouri.Reluctantly, he went to washroom…
As he scanned the hall, his eyes were searching for gouri.He couldn’t find her; he badly wanted her glance.
As they sat b4 the perfectly arranged breakfast table, all were seated.Anika was serving, she called out for gouri.
& there came gouri holding a glass of musambi juice for Om.As their eyes met, they were talking to each other thru eyes.
Jhanvi made gouri to sit with Om; gouri was overwhelmed with emotions.She had wished for this long ago.Gouri was serving Om with everything he need; it was indeed a sight to watch this lovely couple.
After breakfast, Om took the blessings of all elders.He turned back on seeing Tej; but gouri signalled him with eyes.So Om took the blessings of Tej too; dadi was happy.
In the evening, there was a small party for Om in the garden side.He received many gifts from all; but after the gift session, he presented his portrait done by gouri as his most special gift.All were amazed seeing this talented& beautiful duo.
It was almost 8 pm.Om took gouri out for a surprise .They reached the same old hotel; he noticed her face dropping down.Gouri didn’t say anything to him as she didn’t want to make him desp.
As they entered inside, another couple was waiting for him.
O: gouri this is my friend jiya & her husband.
G: the one to whom u talked yesterday.
O: ya, she had invited both of us for dinner, I was simply kidding ya.
G: omkaraji..tu na…( fake anger)
O: ka hua patniji…..
Both the couple had some good time chatting & later moved into separate tables for dinner.
O: het gouri, did u ask anything about me to jiya?
G: no…but she told me.
O: what..what did she tell ?
G: oh..I won’t say those…
O: ok, fine….(pouting)
G: woh omkaraji, she told everything good about you.U were a nice boy, then…u were a good artist &…
O: and???
G: aur…u were the dream boy of college…
O: oho…did my chiraiyya become jealous?
G: (angry)kyun…I’m not jealous… because I know that you r only mine na..( she bites her tongue)
O: hey… what did u say gouri? I didn’t hear clearly…say once again.
G: hmm…no…kuch nahi.
Om liked this side of gouri; finally she is coming out of the shell.
O: gouri, do u remember our last visit to this place?
She didn’t expect this , but was calm & composed.
Om mentally gave himself a slap for asking that question; he wanted to make the mood light.
O: I wouldn’t forget, becoz I got to see my dabbang gouri that day.What an answer u gave to that lady!!!
G: woh…galti tumhari hai.
O: what did I do?
O: when she insulted me, u could have asked her . Since u remained silent, I had to respond ( angrily)
Om was feeling guilty;she had expected support from her husband,she isn’t wrong.
O: gouri, I know I did a mistake.
.I , I’m sorry.I kept quiet as they were our guests; not because I ignored u.
Gouri didn’t mean it like that; she felt sad that she accused him.
G: this is all purani baat omkaraji.I know u r a nice person; I didn’t mean that u should have shouted at her.Even I would have kept quiet; but that situation made me to do so.Actually I was not in a good mood for many days; your absence during that time had really affected me.I knew that u were busy in work; but that loneliness was unbearable for me
I tried to divert my mind to other things; but it was a failure.I really longed to spend some time with u.When I came here & saw a large group, I felt disappointed.
Her eyes were being teary; Om noticed.He touched her hands on the table giving an assuring look.
O: I now understand ur pain gouri; even I faced the same situation after our fight, when u were upset with me.Specially when u went to bareilly.
It was being emotional; Om wanted to change the atmosphere.
O: waise gouri, u r lieing!!
G:kyun omkaraji ?
O: now u told that u badly wanted me with u.But yesterday, u suddenly jumped & went with bhabhi, ignoring me( pouting)
G: oh…that was because…
O: because u don’t like my presence!!!
He was trying to ignite her.
G: what r u saying omkaraji, I had always wanted to spend time with you,sit with u, talk with u…..
She didn’t notice what she was saying.
O: oh bête ki, u want to do all these.But whenever I come near you, you push me away….Not fair gouri..
G: nahi nahi omkaraji…aaj se, I won’t push u away when u come near me. I won’t stop what ever u r doing.
His eyes glittered with a naughty smile.
O: pakka.
G: bilkul pakka.
He took her hand& brushed the knuckles; she was feeling tensed.
O: pakka ,gouri?
G: haan…(she was trembling, she had fell on her own words!!)
He gently raised the hand & kissed on it.
O: is it a pakka now?( naughtily)
G: omkaraji…tum bhi na…bohot…
O: bohot cute hai na??
She smiled, which lit up his face too.
Even though talks were finished, they were still speaking thru their eyes.
Precap:- you can guess it, love in the air??
Hey guys, I am not good in romantic scenes I guess..However I don’t want to give usual rom moments for rikara; I’m definitely trying for a different level, coz they do deserve it.Hope u would have understood this from chap 22& 23.I do hope I can keep the expectations.
Waiting for every comments??
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Awwwwww, awsm… Colour pink for love and romance
Thank you rasi
Awww.. such a cute romance…my colour.. Purple
Oye hoye @shraddha chiraiyya kya romantic episodes diye yrr…..
Dil khush kar dita…..
Waise u lied at the end of this chappy that u are not good at romantic scenes… Aisa bilkul nahi hai…. Its too good dear….
Today there is also a double romantic dhamaka….
1. Tumhare romantic episodes
2. Wahan serial DBO ke precap mein bhi romance…. Gaurikara on fire???????????????
Today’s episode colour is PINK for sweet essence of feeling of love and romance.
Didiii…..keep going Like this..nice update…
Asum 2
Awesome…..now the omri love story became colourful…???
Plzz update soon…
Awesome yaar… loved it… excited for the next part… post it soon
??? Ahhhh! It was AMAZING!
AWESOME AMAZING CUTE FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING SWEET SUPERB WONDERFULL??????????
OMG such a romantic.. lovey dovey Om and Gauri.. I don’t have any words I’m full of happy emotions toady.. thank u for wonderful parts.. Color of love naughty care and confession
It is nice one dear.. Gilltering gold for cheerful moment of rikara…
ohho,Om became romantic singh oberoi,not bad
update soon
asum
fabulous epi
Awwwww….. This was so damn cute yaar!! The previous epi also…. …. I’m loving it!!! ??????? I was smiling the whole time reading it… .. So good yaar!!!!! Ur this chapter and the precap of dbo made my day!!!!!! ? ?
I am dumbstruck ……awesome….waiting to see whose evil eyes are on them
After watching serial and reading ur epi I totally felt today is rikaras day
Really mind blowing episode
Can’t wait for next episode
Naughty Omky.. oooohhhh ?
I feel next episode mein kuch spcl hone wala h..
Hi shraddha.I am sakash.Superb FF chirayya.Love ur chirohta & chirayya love
scenes.Really when i was reading ur FF a smile appeared on my face.Wonderful shraffs(Sorry for calling u shraffs,if u like then i will call u or else ignore it).
Colour red for love ?.(I am new to colour).
Hi sakash, thanks a lot for commenting on my ff.
Of course u can call me; in fact no one had ever called me by that name?
Happy to know that I brought a smile on ur face
Amazing update
haaye u made me blush with these cute moments shraddha by the way u r very good at rom scenes yaar.. please aise hi continue karo
Fabulous. I’ll give the color pink for romance
Awesome ?????lovely update…..
Shraddhuuu diii.. …fabulous episode….i was smiling throught ????…..post nxt part soon….luv u??
Fabulous episode.Keep writing dear.Eager-
-ly waiting 4next episode.
I want to give them wine color for overcoming from all the problems.
It was awesome dear…loved it….dbo ka yesterday wala precap toh stole my heart ….n here ur ff has stolen my heart….it was really good…sry I couldn’t comment on regular basis…busy wid school Tution drawing classes n stuff….n I May nt b able to comment regularly bcoz of them…keep writing…n post nxt episode asap….will definitely comment wen will have tym…n I m so so so very sry dear…
Superrrrrrrrrrr…..
Hey shraddha, both the chapters were awesome. The cute romantic moments between rikara just stole my heart. Waiting for the next…