Hello All,
Back after a long time to writing an OS for shivika.. not related to the serial at all.This OS is dedicated to my dear Anu from PKJ family
Yesterday while driving to work, I was about to dash a car, I did apply the brakes fully an on time, so did not dash… but just then the dialogues formed in my mind, and I reached my office an just jotted them down..
Its just some simple words, an a simple story.. here it goes
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‘Dhoooooom!!!!! ‘ Anika felt a jerk sitting on her champa and turned back to see who had hit her bike from behind
The guy sitting in the car muttered a ‘shit’ and thought ‘oh my God! Now this girl won’t leave me, with so many issues happening in the country, everyone will beat me to pulp’
He was completely tensed when the girl came and tapped on his window.
He lowered down the window of his car and saw her, and just got lost in her, so mesmerizing
She raised her eyebrows asking him about the small accident.. he raised his eyebrows too
She laughed at that. He felt it like the strings of a guitar, totally melodious
‘I did not hit the break on time an you were very close’ he said answering her query.
‘Have you heard anything about keeping a safe distance between two vehicles’? she asked him
He just stared at her , her eyes were twinkling…
Seeing him surprised she asked ‘have I asked you something out of this universe’?
He came out of his reverie and said ‘yes’
‘Yes to what??’ Asked Anika ‘the first question or the second one’
He smiled and said the first….
‘Then why did you not keep a safe distance, you have hit my bike’ she said
He could sense she was trying to keep patience, when may be all she wanted to do was hit him
He batted his eyelashes, put on his most charming smile and simply said “SORRY”
He noticed her expression changing, she seemed surprised by his apology
‘Wait’ she said an walked to her bike and inspected it properly.
Just then anika felt him behind her, an turned
‘No harm done’ your apology accepted.
She turned to go.
‘Wait’ he said, I am ‘Shivay Singh Oberoi’ holding his hand for her to shake
She took his hand and said ‘anika’, that was the firmest grip he experienced, coming from a beauty
They both turned and went their paths.
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Few days later
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Anika was browsing her Facebook account, when she saw a post which read
‘an unusual thing happened on a usual day, I got mesmerized by a girl so strong yet patient and beautiful, whose only first name I know, ANIKA. Unable to locate her, so please share this post and help me in finding her, an Anika If you are reading this post, will you come on a date with me’
She read it and reread it countless times, it was the same guy ,Shivay she had met few days ago., he was so handsome an richness oozed out of him, she had liked him at the first sight, wanted to enquire more but he felt completely out of her league. But not even one moment had passed after that day, when she had not thought about their meeting, every day she went the same path, the same time hoping his car would hit her bike, or her bike crashed into his car.
Seeing this post confirmed that he liked her too, and she blushed furiously as he was asking her on a date, she immediately went to Facebook and typed something
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Oberoi Mansion
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It had been two days Shivay was continuously staring at his phone for some notification for his post, in hopes of finding anika, she was continuously in is his thoughts, he was not able to concentrate on anything, other than her, an finding her.
He had got lots of likes, comments and shares for his post, but not even one from Anika.
He was losing hope when suddenly he saw notification for a comment on his post.
It read
‘an unusual thing happened on a usual day, I got mesmerized by a handsome man whose full name I know SHIVAY SINGH OBEROI, can’t wait even a minute more to see you, 5PM today, the place where we met an it’s a date :)’
Shivay jumped up high in the air and got ready for his date, to meet the girl who had held his heart for some time now, and to make her his.
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Hope you all liked it, please do leave your comments.
61 Comments
Awesome. Plzzzz post the next part asap.
Thanks Deb.. but this was a one shot.. there wont b next part
khidkitodh
update soon
Thanks Aashi.. but this was a one shot.. there wont b next part
Lovely episode ????? plzz do come back with another dose of ur writings
Thanks Dhar.. i will try to come back soon next time ..lots of love to u
Amazing..Loved it.And happy u r back with this lovely os.Thanks for relaxing us.
Thanks Mehak.. m so glad u liked it an it relaxed u..
Amazing…
Had such a relief after reading this.
Come back again with a bang on.
Thanks Madhu.. will try to come up with another one soon 🙂
I just loved it….superb dr….and it was so cute……
Thanks Arthi 🙂
Wow! Archu!!! First thank you soooo much!! I just dunno how to express on how much this meant to me!! ???
I loved it! Every line every word… it was very simple…. and something that we can very much relate to! And shivika were so cute! ???
And with the current track! Reading this OS was such a relief! It truely lightened me up!!
Thank you archu???? luv u!!
And btw.. gal! U do too much thinking on the road! Many a times u say.. I was driving and this stuck me.. I was at the signal and got this thought.. and now today U r saying u almost hit a car!! Not good!! Be carful.. stay safe!!
I am so happy an glad to read ur comment.. it really means a lot that u liked it.. nah loved it 🙂
an also that it was a relief to u.. an lightened ur mood
Ur always welcome dear.. an love u too baby(hearts,love an kisses smileys)
yes dear i need to stop thinking on road.. such a bad habit.. m gonna b careful from now on an stay safe
Cute os
Thanks Alekhika 🙂
Lovely…❤
Thanks Sabhya 🙂
I found you so funny in this OS!
So far as antics of ANNIKA is concerned, I am ok with, but the way You portrayed ANNIKA drooling over Guys which she is and was never! You butchered ANNIKA! Unfair to the image with which I am commenting!
Shekhar
Anika is my favorite character an I always feel her character resembles a lot to my life.. I can never butcher her., I mentioned that She had liked him, an wanted her path to cross with Shivay, so that she can meet him again.. Wen u like someone it does happen..
an drooling means literally falling over the guy… I don’t think anywhere in my OS I mentioned tat anywhere.. I wonder what made u feel so.. An ur comment hurt me..
ARCHIYA
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I was not meant to hurt you at all. Thought, after seeing so many “!” you consider it on the lighter side, but in vain. It seems I am weak in making fun out of comment. Sorry, if it has hurted you, but rest assure, I never mean that.
SHEKHAR
its ok !!
Thanks for getting my views
Awesome one. Loved it❤❤
Thanks Jerry.. 🙂 an i love ur DP ..handsome shivay
Lovely Archu.
Was imagining their mannerisms along the story, loved it.
Thanks Rani 🙂 .. when ur reading something an u can imagine it, it means ur totally in the story .. always happens with me
Really a cute one dear.
Thanks Navz 🙂
It is lovely dii… Love you a lot dii…
Thanks Nikita.. love u too dear
Hey archi,,
It was just fabulous.
Magical….
Reallly loved it,,,.
Ammmazing
Kanfi
thanks dear.. an i love ur DP 🙂
Awesome….
Shivaay’s post was too cute….
Shivika r adorable…
Keep writing… 🙂
Thanks Shivika 🙂 will try to come up with another soon
Superb cute os
Thanks Fffan 🙂
Wow awesome and different too??? and be carefull while driving di it’s my sweet advice
Nila
Thanks dear 🙂 n m taking ur sweet advice seriously dear,, thanks for it
Thanks for the caring sweet advice (hearts)
Amazing.. loved it..
Thanks Ankita 🙂
Amazing….. So cute Shivika! Loved it. Be careful di!!
Thanks Gayathri 🙂 an yeah i will be careful , thanks for the caring
Archu…..thts owsm…yr article totally swept clean vanished yesterday epi dear….i simply loved .. dont stop keep continue writting dear…..and thk u so much 4cheering me up…..luv u…
Pushpa
Thanks dear 🙂 i will come up with a next one soon.. m so glad it cheered u up..Love u too dear
So so beautiful.itna cute ha dono.
thanks Archu di mood light kayleya
Thanks Arfa.. n m so glad isnne apka mood light kiya 🙂
Archu , that’s so sweet , simple and so so so cute . Just WOWW !! ??
By the way , Archu . Wats this ?? U always get lost while driving . I know ib and pkj is something in which we are almost every time lost . But , u were about to dash ha . Be careful na , while driving and all .
Love u . ?❤
Surbhi
Thanks dear.. So happy to c ur comment baby…first time I felt so happy that someone is scolding me.. Can feel the care in it…n m gonna b careful.. No more thinking on the bike.. Love u loads ? ? ? ?
Good one…
Thanks Zaveesha 🙂
The mehendi in ur dp is so so beautiful ??
Thanks…
Wow…it’s fantastic..!
Amazing …loved it!
Love ya!
Thanks Neha… ? ? nice dp I ?
Archu
It’s sweet. I liked Shivay more, he is really cute. ?? It’s a welcoming change in his character.
Keep such good ones coming. We need it this season.
Btw I totally second Anu. I too ve noticed it. It’s not so good to b dreamy on road. If u want to b dreamy, plz b while you are at home or at office but never on road.
Lax darling..
thanks for the review.. yeah we surely need some positive vibes
ok Mam.. no dreaming on road.. only in home or office 🙂
nice archu
Thanks Piyuu 🙂