Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m back with a new chappy ?
I really didn’t think that u guys would miss my ff like this.I have been updating continuously for 8 days.Yesterday me& family went for a tour so couldn’t make it double DHAMAKA.
Thanks to Staicey & bubblu for sending me pm on missing my ff.
Last day I missed raksha’s name on thank u note; sorry dear.
Hi sakash, thanks for commenting on my ff for 1st time; I’ve read ur stories too.
This is 25 the chappy & am so happy.Thank u mahi on already mentioning silver chappy of my ff.I am sorry that I cannot give 2 chaps today.
For previous chappies www.tellyupdates.com/user/11299/?profiletab=posts or check profile
Colour suggestions
Chap 23
Rasika, mahi,Verna,Palak: pink- love
Bubblu: purple- cute romance ,
Sanyukta: – overcoming problems
Sakash: red- romance
Nikita: gold- cheerful moments
Chap 24
Mahi, aliza111: green- new starting
Bubblu,aliza111: pink- romance
Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attacked Gouri but was saved by Om & rikara married.
Tensions develop in their married life.She goes missing & came back to OM after one day.Finally, both have united.
Hope u will like this part.Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this.
Colour 25
“Gouri….Gouri….”
She heard him calling her on top of his voice; she was busy in kitchen with the other ladies.She looked & buama for permission.
B: go beta, he might b searching for something.Go fast; it’s time for flight now.I will keep the food ready; jaao.
An: waise chutki..Even jhanvi anty wouldn’t have run behind him like this in his childhood ( laughing)
G: didi…..( irritated)… she ran upstairs.
As she reached her room, she saw a calm Om standing in front of mirror & combing his hair.His eyes shined as he saw her coming in.
G: ka hua omkaraji, y did u call me? any problem?
O: no… nothing..
G: y did u call me like that then??
O: hmm….just wanted to ask u whether u have kept me bags ready..
G: bilkul, I did it yesterday itself.I have kept ur phapers, that laptop, files, dresses … Everything…I showed it yesterday itself…
Om moved to her& took hold of her by her shoulders.
O: ha…but I really wanted to see u,n ot check all these; that’s y I called like that.Otherwise u wouldn’t come to the room, sure.
Gouri took back the hair brush from him & started combing his hair.
G: is this a one week trip?
O: ha, shivay is not well there in delhi,so I will have to do everything for him.Probably , it will take one week.
G: will u miss me( sad)
Om knew she was sad.Buy he wanted to make the moment lighter.
O: nahi yaar…in fact I will b getting some freedom after all( smirking)
Gouri stopped combing his hair and she moved forward; but she couldn’t escape easily from his hands.
O: what happened my pagli, do u really think u have to ask me this silly question?
G: I want to say something.Please do look after ur health, eat food properly, don’t catch diseases ok?I won’t b able to call u & remind everything.
O: fine baba, lekin I have to give u few instructions,look after ur health, go for your art classes correctly, take ur tuitions well &..
G: aur…
O: aur kya…do video call to me daily.
G: hmm….ok…ok…come have ur food .It’s time for flight.
O: ok baba…
Gouri was really missing him; more than anytime during their marriage.Even when she was working in the canvas, his memories were simply filling upon her mind.During his journey in flight, Om was constantly thinking of gouri; specially when someone asked for tea he thought of her glucose wali chai.
It was a really jolly day for gouri.She had gone 4 shopping with prinku & Rudy.She selected few dresses for Rudy; this amazing duo was a fun to watch.
R: waise bhabhi, kamal hai tumhari selection.Usually I wouldn’t allow anyone to select dress for me; but chulbul bhabhi u r awesome.
P: haan bhabhi..u have selected all my favourite colours, really…I love u bhabhi.
R: waise how do u adjust with O bhabhi?matlab…he is not normal na… always talking diplomatic things about life in complicated methods…how do u manage with him?
G: tumhe pata rudra, even I thought about him like this.But trust me, he really enjoy all these just like us; I think u haven’t seen that version of him.One day v should take him also for a trip like this; what to do he is always busy…( laughing)
P: yes,v will have fun with Om bhaiyya.
R: y don’t we go for an ice cream then?
G: arre rudra, instead of ice cream y don’t we have gol gappas?
As they reached home they saw anika seated on the hall.
A: oh bête ki, did u shop the whole city guys?
G: haan didi…bohot badi shopping & movie too.
A: not fair guys, u didn’t take me along na( pouting)
R: but u were not well na…
P: ya, otherwise we would have taken u also; but don’t worry bhabhi, we have brought many things for u.
A: haan…I don’t think I will b able to come with 4 outing like this for few more months.
G: ka hua, didi; kuch problem hai?
Cherry came running to them happily.
C: chulbul chachi, tumhe pata , Finally someone smaller than me is going to come.
R: oho…from where??
C: oho chachu, I’m going to b an elder sister to my chotu.
Gouri, prinku & Rudy screamed together at the se time,looking anika.All 3 of them went & hugged anika.
R: it’s party time guys…. really…woho
A: no Rudy, let shivom come back then we will do.
G: didi , did u inform bhaiyya?
A: no last time I informed him first, this time I thought I will share this news with u guys.
P: com on bhabhi. u should inform bade bhaiyya now.
G:& I will tell this to omkaraji.
R: oh god, to whom will I say this??
Jhanvi came there.
J: I think u should inform pinky rudra( laughing)
R: fine…I will call choti maa.
Rikara in video call…
O: kaise ho tum gouri??
G: I’m fine omkaraji, had some time with prinku & Rudy.
O: did u go for your classes?
G: woh…no…ji… actually there is a special news here!!!
O: kya hua??
G: we r going to b chacha chachi once again!!!
O: matlab bhabhi…
G: haan… Omkaraji ( laughing)
O: such a happy news, oh, I’m so happy.
Cherry came to the room.
C: is omkie chacha there?
G: haan cherry, come sit here we will talk.
She sat on Gouri’s lap.
C: hi omkie.
O: hi, MERA sweety…r u happy dear?
C: bilkul chacha, finally I am becoming a sister yipee….like ma& chachi…
O: v will celebrate this after v come ok? we will enjoy
C: now I have only one more wish!!!
O: kya hai wo mere sweety….
C: hmm….now I want someone like u & Papa.
G: matlab??
C: means, I want a cousin , like u & Papa.Papa is ur choti papa’s son, ur cousin na, like that I want a cousin & we all will have obro moments like u have!!!! yay!!!
Both rikara were shocked with Cherry’s wish; they were in fact blushing.Suddenly anika called for cherry; she gave a bye to om & went down.
O: gouri….( teasingly)
G: kya…kya… Omkaraji?
O: didn’t u hear Cherry’s wish?
G: omkaraji….I….I. will call u later.
O: oho…if u start blushing like this, then how will Cherry’s wish b fulfilled? It’s her first wish na? Shouldn’t v grant it?
G: chi, like didi says, this is…2 rs wali talk…I’m going…
O: fine u can escape just now…ok pagli… bye…
Gouri went to Om’s studio & was enjoying that picture of them with a kid….she was dreaming of such a life with Om.
Hoping u guys r liking this.
Next chappy coming tomorrow!!!!
30 Comments
Excellent
sis u nailed it ya
Fabulous and romantic
Fabulous….lovely update
Thanks niriha….
Thank you for commenting regularly?
Awesome episode.Keep writing dear.
Congratulations 4 completing 25 chappies.
And i wanna give u apricot color for admiration of ur writing skills.
Sweet and cute update
Thank you Staicey ….?
AMAZING AWESOME CUTE EXCELENT MIND BLOWING SUPERB?????????
Hi., Im new here. I read your stories, really feel happy while reading all those. Waiting for some good moments in DBO serial too. Amazing stories. Congrats.,
Awesome yaar… loved it… Excited for the next part… Post it soon… Congrats for your 25 episode
Thank you thank you dear, u were always a regular reader of my ff.Thank u once again?
Amazing episode diii.. …keep it up….nd post nxt part soon….?
Thanks shreya, of course next one coming soon?
Awesome shraddha!!!! N congratulations for silver jubilee!!! ??? many more to come…….
Hey congrats for 25 chappy.. and wat a super CUTE episode.. loved it to core.. Color of double happiness
Congooo on ur 25 th , I’m sorry that I couldn’t comment regularly, but I do wait for ur updates , loved cherrys wish , I was smiling like hell all the tym , plzzzzzz do post the next update ASAP
Wow dear its just awesome…..
Kaash DBO serial mein bhi yahi story hoti….
Today’s episode colour is orange for completeness…
Post next episode ASAP…
Wow dear its just awesome…..
Kaash DBO serial mein bhi yahi story hoti….
Today’s episode colour is orange for completeness…
Post next episode ASAP
CONGRATULATIONS ON COMPLETING SILVER JUBLEE OF UR FF….
KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS…
Superb update
OMG… such a cute colour didi…I enjoyed the way cherry wished 4 her cousin…Awesome one di..fantastic…ur 25 color is a hit..congratulations on that…my colour silver for 25 color nd cherry’s cute wish ..Eagerly waiting for the nxt color
Hey shraddha, congrats for your 25th chapter. Loved today’s chapter. And aww… Little Cherry’s cute wish. Imagining rikara’s reaction. Waiting for the next…
Superb shraddha
I am eagerly waiting for ur next chappy.please update soon with double dhamaka?
D way Omkara was calling her, I was like kya ho gya ise?? N it was nothing ?
Cherry’s wish?? Omkara is getting rilli naughty day by day..or I shud say episode by episode ??
Really dear..hats off to your regularity
Loved it Amazing
Cherry’s request is so sweet
Waiting for the next
Lovely. Om is getting naughty day by day. Awesome epi waiting for next epi.
Hey Shraddha….
Finally i reached till this episode …sorry dear …i couldn’t post my opinions earlier…firstly CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SILVER JUBILEE EPISODE…secondly all the 25 episodes are inclusive of the different combination of all colours..the FF is beautifully painted … the journey of Om and Gauri is so exceptionally portrayed …you totally gave an different angle to how the original DBO could be modified…i am in awe of your writing and i am so happy to read this…..and not only that you didn’t miss to give special place to all the other jodi’s….superrbb dear….i was reading slowly and enjoying it to the heart’s content…every episode was special in it’s own way….and it is difficult to choose which one is my favorite….i wish this FF never ends….the little one in the FF is so cute and every time she appeared in the FF i smiled …i am still at loss of words to appreciate you in a much better way….this is awesome just wonderful and beyond words to explain the feeling….keep writing and entertaining us….
no doubt you are a professional writer writing everything so precisely and making the readers hug every line from your hand…hope to see your books published in future and we standing in a line waiting for you to get an autograph from you and then letting my other friends know that i know this writer personally….she is my friend through TU…..and upping my collar….with a broad smile…..
thank you for such a beautiful FF and i will be waiting for the next update very eagerly…..
CONGRATULATIONS ONCE AGAIN FOR THE SILVER JUBILEE
Omg, one of the beautiful comment I have ever got .
Thanks a lot di, I hope god will bless me to write more & reach heights; thanks for ur wishes too?
Wow Shraddha itne sare blush moments (wink wink). .. u r realy awesome dear.. I dnt have words to explain how good ur writing skills r.. love u
It is awesome dear… Congratulations for sliver Jubilee…