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Episode 18:Episode 18
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Episode 19
“Sanskar what r u saying??? Revenge??? That too on me???” swara asked sanskar pushing him aside….
“Yes swara!!! It’s revenge only!!!!”
“Sanskar what i did??? Y u wanted to take revenge on me??? And also i haven’t seen u before!!! First time i saw u on that day when u came to badi as mad!!! Thats it!!! Then y u wanted to take revenge on me???” swara asked with hurt tone….
“Just think!!! U will get to know!!!” sanskar said…. After Some time swara said,”No sanskar i didn’t know!!! I didn’t hurt u in my conscious!!! Pls tell me sanskar” swara said and had tears…. Sanskar saw her tears and cupped her face and wiped her tears with his thumbs and said,”Don’t think too much!!! Just before u come to this room what u did???”
Swara with confused face yet with tears in her eyes asked sanskar,”What i did???”
“U forgot this soon!!! How dare u say to laksh that u will forget me and move on with him??? How can u say like that??? Don’t u know i love u soo much???” sanskar asked and swara looked him with shock….
“So u wanted to take revenge???” now she asked with little anger…
“Ya!!! I just wanted to make u afraid…. Thats it…. But i am angry on u how could u give my Place to him???”
“Sanskar i said it just like that!!! Just for fun i said and the next moment i also said i can’t forget u!!! Didn’t u Listen that???” swara asked and sanskar nodded his head as no and said,”Even for joke don’t say like that!!!!” sanskar said in anger…..
Swara started to beat him…. Sanskar try to escape but no use she pushed him on the bed and came on top of him and started to beat him…. Then she closed her mouth with her palm and bite his cheek and neck…. Sanskar shouted in pain but none heard it as swara has covered his mouth with her palm…. Then she kneel down in his legs and gave some force such that her knee pressed his legs and it pained him…. Then sanskar got up and wrapped his hand around her waist and tightly hugged it and swifted to his right that again swara fell on bed and sanskar on top of her…. He leaned to kiss her lips but swara kept her palm oh his mouth…. Sanskar saw swara with a frown!!! Next minute swara pushed sanskar…. As they were in the edge of the bed sanskar fell down….
“What barbie!!! My god its paining!!!” sanskar said keeping his hand on his hip and sitting in indian style….
“These all are not enough Mr.Maheswari!!! Wait saying this she saw here and there and went and took a vase and held it high to put it on sanskar!!! Sanskar is shocked….
“Barbie see what u r having in ur hand!!! If u put this on my head then i will be dead baby!!!” sanskar said and swara kept it aside…. She again made sanskar lie down the floor and sat on his stomach!!! She started to beat him again…. Sanskar hold her hand and stopped her from beating him…..
“Oh god!!! Wait!!! If i would have said the same thing to another girl that i will forgive u and will move on!!! Will u accept it???”
“I will kill u dammit!!!” swara said with anger….
“Same!! Even i got angry like this!!! For that see how u r torturing me!!!” saskar said innocently!!!
“Ya i said i will kill u but i didn’t say like u that i married u to take revenge!!! U know what u were looking like a bollywood villian who is ready to rape the girl!!! Huh U idiot!!! U know how afraid i was!!! I thought ur love was fake!!! U faked everything!!! That one minute i feel like killing myself!!!” swara said with tears…. Sanskar felt bad…. He wiped her tears and said sorry keeping his hand on his ears…. Swara stood from sanskar and sanskar too stood up….
“No way Mr.Maheswari!!! U have to be punished!!!”
“Okie i am ready for ur punishment!!!”
“Ur punishment is simple!!! U shouldn’t touch me for 1 day!!! No no u shouldn’t touch me for 1 month!!! This is the best punishment and haan listen even ur small finger shouldn’t touch me….” swara said with a smirk…. Sanskar is shocked listening….
“Barbie i can’t!!! See i will accept other punishment but not this!!!”
“No punishment is punishment!!! Nothing will be withdrawn…. Now i am getting sleepy…. U sleep in the bed i will sleep in the sofa….” saying this swara took pillow and bedsheet and went to sofa and lay down….. Sansakar who is standing in shock saw that and told swara,”Okie lets make a challenge!!! If i win u should withdraw the punishment!!! If i lose i won’t touch u as u say!!! Okie???”
“No way!!! I know u have something in ur mind!!! U will surely cheat me!!!”
“Ha ha i know u r afraid as u will lose the challenge!!! Huh” sanskar said sarcastically…. Swara got angry….
“Okie i am ready!!! Now tell me the challenge” swara said….
“The challenge is not a big thing!!! Now the time is 11:40…. 24 hours that is tomorrow before 11:40PM i will kiss u infront of everyone…. If i win this u should withdraw the punishment!! If i lose as u said i will accept the punishment!! R u ready Mrs.Sanskar???” sanskar said with a smirk…. Swara thought for something and accepted the challenge…. Then both slept in their places….
After talking to swara, laksh went to his room…. He saw ragini standing in the door…. He took her inside and locked the door and made her sit in the bed and told,”Ragini i know we married suddenly!!! I don’t love u now!!! But i have faith that i will love u in future…. Till today i have seen u as my friend only!!! Anytime this friendship can change into love!!!! So till that will u wait??”
“Laksh i haven’t even dreamt that i will marry u after u proposed swara!!! But now it happened!!! U r with me!!! And i am sure u will love me one day!!! So u don’t worry!!”
“Thanks ragini!!! And one more thing swara is my friend and also she became my bhabhi!!! So if at all i talked with her pls don’t feel bad or get insecured…. U r only my wife okie….”
“Okie laksh….”
“Hmm u sleep in the bed and i will sleep in the coach!! Good night!!” saying this he went and slept…. Ragini too slept in happiness….
Next day morning…. Swara woke up early and got ready and saw sanskar sleeping…. She silently went near him and caressed his face and kissed his cheeks…. Then she saw him for few minutes and then kissed his forehead and went down….. After swara went sanskar slowly opened his eyes and smiled….”Huh barbie this is cheating!!! U told me not to touch but see u alone kissing me!!! It’s not fair!!! Huh” sanskar said with sad pout and then again drifted to sleep….
Swara came out blushingly but avoided as others shouldn’t suspect her…. At that time she saw ragini coming from her room…. Swara smiled and went to her,”Ragini!!! U could have told me that u love laksh na!!!”
“Swara i don’t want to get laksh by begging u!!! I don’t need such life too!!” ragini said and swara is shocked listening her harsh tone….
“Ragini why r u speaking like this???”
“See swara from childhood u snatched everything from me!!! So don’t act like innocent!!!”
“Ragini what i snatched from u???”
“Oh don’t act!!! Haven’t u snatched ashvik from me!!! Ashvik and i are close friends but u became friend with him and snatched him from me…. Ashvik’s ma likes me a lot but after u became ashvik’s friend u became her pet!!! Even my papa,dadima,dadaji everyone praised u when u got third prize…. But they just congratz me for my first prize…. Laksh came to see me but fell in love with u…. If he see me before u surely he would have been in love with me only!!! Even after knowing that laksh has came to see me my papa and dadima accepted ur proposal for him and didn’t object when sharmistha aunty asked….. But see the fate that god itself gave me my laksh back…. And keep it in ur mind now i am going to start my life so pls don’t snatch this also from me…..” ragini said and went from there….
Swara is shocked…. She didn’t know ragini hates her this much…. She broke down and stumbled to fall but before that sanskar held her and took her to their room…. After reaching the room swara went and fall on the bed and started to cry…. Sanskar is feeling sad for swara at the same time he is angry on ragini…. But as of now his priority is swara…. He went near her and held her shoulder…. Swara woke up and hugged sanskar tightly….
“Sanskar why!!! Am i that much bad that ragini hates me!!! See how she is speaking…. Sanskar, ragini was not feeling well for many days…. At that time i and ashvik became friends…. After she comes back she saw us together and started to avoid…… We tried to talk to her but she didn’t listen to us at all…. Then sanskar all praised me for getting third prize becoz i rarely participate in competitions when i am small but ragini always gets prize…. Thats y they just congratulated her while they gave me a small party….. And about laksh u know na i don’t love him!!! Then y she talked to me like this sanskar???” swara leaned on his shoulder…..
“Shhh barbie listen u didn’t do anything!!! Its just ragini has misunderstood u!!! So u don’t take tension…. And also now u both are going to be in same house ans also as time passes she will understand u…. So forget everything…. In this don’t forget our challenge!!! It’s still there….” sanskar said with a naughty smirk to change the environment….. Hearing it swara immediately pushed sanskar and said,”Sanskar u r an opportunist…. As i felt sad u took this as an opportunity and hugged me!!! How dare u???” swara asked with a fake anger….
“Vo is it!!! Then what u did in the morning haan??” sanskar asked raising his right eyebrow…. Swara blushed but masked it and asked,”Hello what i did???”
“Oh so u didn’t know what u did haan??” saying this sanskar came near swara…. Swara moved back….
“Don’t come near me…. I am warning u otherwise u have to face the consequences!!!”
“Swara i am just showing u what u did!!”
“No need Mr. i know it!!! Huh…”
“No i have to show it barbie….” saying this he came near her…. But swara pushed him and ran from there…. Sanskar laughed finally making his barbie smile….
Swara came down and saw ragini in the in-house temple…. She just went and stood near her…. Ragini sang a song and did small aarti…. Hearing her song all came…. All joined the pooja…. Then ragini gave prasad to all…. Swara went and got blessings from the elders…. Ragini also got blessings…. Then ap said,”Swara beta,ragini beta today is ur first day after ur marriage and u both have to cook today!!! So swara beta u cook in the morning…. And ragini beta u cook in the afternoon…. And u both don’t forget to prepare a sweet!!! It’s the main dish u have to do….” hearing this swara and ragini nod their head…. Swara went inside the kitchen to cook…. Others went to the hall…. Before swara start to cook parineeta made tea for everyone and took it to them and gave it to all…..
Swara is alone in the kitchen preparing the dishes…. At that time sujatha came there and asked swara,”Beta r u happy with this marriage na??”
“Aunty i am very happy!!! Infact i am very very happy after knowing sanskar is the person who i loved!!!”
“No beta actually at that time sanskar is normal but now he is not!!! I know u love him!!! Still just for confirmation i am asking this!! And don’t take me wrong….”
“Aunty u don’t worry at all…. And surely i won’t take u wrong!!! I can understand ur feelings…. And about sanskar u don’t need to worry!!! I am sure sanskar will become normal soon…. U don’t worry aunty…..”
“Beta call me mom don’t call me aunty okie!!!”
“He he okie aunty sorry mom…” saying this she hugged sujatha….
“Okie beta!!! Sanskar likes basanti!!! Prepare that swara….”
“Okie mom….” saying this swara again indulged in her work…. Sujatha went from there….
After preparing breakfast swara arranged the dining table and called everyone…. Laksh came with sanskar…. Then all sat in their places and swara started to serve everything…. Everyone started to eat…. After eating all praised swara and gave her neg….. Sanskar didn’t eat at all….. Seeing it sujatha asked,”Sanskar what happened y r u not eating???”
“Barbie has to feed me!!! Then only i will eat!!!” sanskar said innocently…. Swara is shocked… Others behaved normally as for them sanskar is a small boy….
“Swara beta we all finished our food!!! U go to ur room…. I will send ur’s and Sanskar’s food…. U feed him there…. And parineeta and uttara will do the works u go beta….” ap said and swara nodded and smirked seeing sanskar…. Understanding this sanskar didn’t get up at all…. He said,”No no i will eat here only!!! I will eat here only!!!” he started to shout…. Without any option Left swara feed him…. Sanskar smiled victoriously…. After breakfast is finished he went near swara’s ears and said,”This is the first step of my challenge!!! Now i will surely win….” Hearing this swara glared him…. At that time ashvik came there and said something which shocked sanskar…. Swara smiled seeing his shocked face…..
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Guys i updated today only on all of ur insistence…. Many didn’t have faith in me at all!!! Huh how come i can make sanskar negative after showing him lovable…. It’s okie no problem…. Hope this part is good…. And one more thing i got many comments in this update some comments i haven’t seen it even in one episode of this ff!!! I really don’t know u guys are reading…. But thanks for breaking ur silence…. Hoping to see ur comments in the future too…. If this chappy is not nice then forgive me….?
Bye….?
29 Comments
Wow super sis you really rocked it
I love you faceoff very much and never miss it,
continue your excellent work
Superrrr awesome ??
Superb diiii
I want sanskar to win the challenge
Hope he wins…….
Love it
Awesome​ dear
Awesome
loved it..tc..
hehe..now my detective brain can take rest
Awesome ep…huh ?? to ragini….full of poison
Swasan challenge?? I think ashvik came for taking swara home for ritual??
Awesome dear
Nice..
Amazing update… I thought for a moment sanskar is actually taking revenge from swara… curious to know who wins the challenge… and if sanskar will teach a lesson to ragini for her behaviour towards swara… eagerly waiting for next update… pls post next update soon…
awesome update next part soon.. ashvik to take swara home i think loved swasan challenge make him win… cant wait for till wednesday.. update soon waiting for ur OS.. i have faith on you re but kya karu tum jatka hi twist aisa diya.. btw waiting for next parts
Awesome bf….
Ohhh gooddddd i was dying from inside after reading ur last episode thank u soo muchh that u didn’t make sanskar negative… Thankzz a lottt and all ur episodes are just awsme… till now i was a silent reader but ur suspense made me to write this comment… and this is my fav ff luv u for making such a beautiful ff..?
Aww thank u soo much!!! Ha ha in last part many silent readers breaked the silence…. Thank u soo much dr….??
Ha ha ha……. nice…..
Hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahah u hve no idea how nuch angry i was on sanskar ???….
Loved it shan
Ha ha i know!!! Thats y i replied in previous episode don’t beat me!!!??
awesome…. Thank god its only that revenge
OMG! Akka, Neenga engala nallaa bayamuruthitenga!! Aana supera irunthuthu. Hehehe….paavam Sanskaar! Yaara win panna vekka porenga?
Yaru win pananum????
Sonnadhan sort???
Soru *
Apo nan solra varaikum wait panu….?
Enaku sanskaar akka!!!!!!
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Awsm shan di
Awesome..loved it.