Hello guys
I am very sad????
As, the number of comments are decreasing
In my previous episode,I got only six comments
Thank you to them who have commented
If you think this is a boring ff
You can tell me
I will end it soon
Do tell me your views
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episode-4
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Episode starts with kunj sitting on his bed and thinking about his life and has tears in his eyes.
Kunj:but I still love you.
Voice:BHAIIII
K:meher
M:bhaiyu bhaiyu bhaiyu. I missed you so much
(By saying this she hug him and he hug her back)
K:I missed you too my drama queen (she breaks the hug)
M (being annoyed): I am not a drama queen bhai
K:you are
M:No
K:yes
M:No
K:yes
M:No
K:yes
M:No
K:No
M:yes
K:yes
K: as always I won
M:bhaiyu uu
(The silence filled the atmosphere )
K & M:(burst into laughter)
(Two eyes were watching this from behind and they have tears in their eyes )
CAMERA ZOOMS TOWARDS THE EYES
And,the eyes are of non other than yuvraj luthra
Y:After 10 yrs, I am seeing you laughing and smiling because of her you forgot to smile.I know you carry fake smile for your family member so,that they can’t be hurt.I miss my old kunj my old buddy???
Flashback
ABC collage is shown
Camera zooms
There a group of boys and girls is shown
They are
Kunj,uv,rohan,cherry,chinki,priya,maya
They are shown laughing and giggling as,kunj is shown cracking jokes on teachers.
(His thoughts were broken by Meher)
Flashback ends
M:uv bhai
U (he quickly wipes his tears without her notice): meri pyaari baby sister (he pulls her cheeks)
M:don’t do that
U: I will do that (he again pulls her cheeks)
M:you two are not my good brother.ahhh ahhhhhha
K (by pulling her ears):what you said.tell us again
M:bhai forgive me . please, mere kan chor do
K(he let go of her ears):tune to kaha tha ki tu yaha nhi aaegi aur tune mujhe phone pe kya kaha tha-me aap se bhot Gussa hu (mimics her)
M:how I can stay away from meeting you both.i love you both so much (the trio share the hug)
K & U:then who will love our abeer jijuuuu.
M:BHAIIII I
(She started chasing both of them)
(After sometime they all sit on the carpet and burst into laughter)
(A voice is heard)
U:chalo,dinner kar lo aur meher tum ne apne bhai ko aate hi tang karna start kar diya (she hold her ears)
M:ahhhhhha maaaa
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Scene 2
Next morning
A house is shown were a girl is shown doing poo ja.
Let’start hear what she is saying
G:bhagvan ji kuch to kripa karo hum per.kitna satate hoo.ek taraf meri job hai jo lag hi nhi rhi aur ek taraf meri chachi h jo larko ki line mere piche laga I hue h.ab to kuch karo naa aa.
Camera revolves and shows her face she is twinkle taneja
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21 Comments
Amazing zoya loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much ….
Plzz don’t hate me …
????????????….
I have told my decision in KAATIL do read that …
Don’t know when it will get posted …
Love u bye. ??????
Thank you so much di huh
But,if your decision will be wrong
Then I am saying you many times
I HATE YOU
No ending ??……Sorry I couldn’t Comment for many days…so please sorry…..it was an amazing episode and I loved it…post next soon ??
Thank you cheena di
Awesome…
Loved it…
Too good..
Post soon
Plz continue
Thank you so much diiiiiii
Love u
Keep smiling ☺☺
Fabulous epi zoya
I love this ff very much???
Don’t think to end it soon else I will not talk to u?
Awww…my darling got angry
Thank you so much aapi for your precious comment
If i will not get sufficient comment then I may…….. (you know blackmailing????)
Hehehe
Love u
Aww really cute episode
Hey plz don’t be sad Coz of less comments
And yes try to post regularly
Do continue
Thank you so high di
I will try to post regularly
Love u
Keep smiling
nice epi
Thank you very much
Yrr plz don’t end it plzzz
Episode was awesome???????
Yrr sry me comment nahi kar pa rahi hu sorry ??
Sab writers mera ek comment hamesha add kar liya karo plzzz
Kya tum meri fr banogi
Luv u????
Bbye post soon
Thank you so much
Ya,I will be your friend
Love u
Keep smiling ☺☺
Awesome loved their bonding
N it’s just amazing awesome Super
Loved it to core
N plss don’t end
Love you keep smiling
Thank you ramya di
Love u too
You too keep smiling
OMG!!!! ♥
loved it………♥
amazing……♥
yrr I guess did stry is totally different from zindagi ki mehak……….♥
kon khe rha tha did is same……♥
srsly loving I…….♥
osm marveleous……♥
cute……♥
lods of love……♥
Thank you baby di
Thank you for your precious comment
Love u ???
Keep smiling ☺☺☺
hey zoya don’t be sad for less comments
where worst writers like me exists
there u have no right to end it
and I know I’ve not commented in ur previous ff
but believe me I’m really much lacking of time as my school has reopened
I haven’t commented on anyone’s ff except aamu’s
plz don’t mind girl
I readcur all posts they are fabulous
fantastic
outstanding
marvellous
superb
mind blowing
plz don’t end it
will u not listen to this sister???
and plz whenever I’ll not be able to comment plz add one
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DON’T END THIS FF
love u to the square of infinity ♡♡♡♡
byeee
urs sis com friend,
Ayesha
Don’t you dare call yourself a worst writer
You are the best writer
Ek kripa kijye mujhpar,aap apna previous ff You are a devil post kardijye.????☺☺☺☺
If you think you are my elder sister then please post please
Ek to aap mujhe bol rahi ho ki end nhi karne ko par aap khud apna ff post nhi kar rahi ho.
Please,post your both the ffs
I know you have lack of time but try to post
Thank you for your comment.
Love u too to the square of infinity❤❤❤❤❤
Urs sis
Zoya