Hi..Guys..thanks for all u support..
I’m really happy that u all like my ff..and sorry for the correction.. And let u think to understand the words..I’m very sorry for that..I’m didn’t noticed the mistakes..that’s y..sorry once again..and try to correct mistake..
So let’s start with another part…
Karan room
Karan was thinking lot..and smiling thinking his moments with naina..
Karan : I’m feeling happy when naina was around me..but what if she gets hours because of me..I can’t became good husband for her..she us such a good heart girl..I don’t want she have to bear me her whole life..
Other side
Sandhya called Nk..and told everything.. Nk gets angry..
Sandhya : so sorry..karan..I know ur happy with naina..but what to do..I’m don’t liked this..whenever I try to separate u both..same time u both r getting close..I don’t want this happen..that’s I don’t left any chance..now work will be easier to separating u from naina..
Then goes to cupboard.. Opens it..then small screen which was she hiddenly..kept it in..
Sandhya : talks..i m doing this all for u..for ur happiness..
Naina goes down to call meghna..and kunal..
Meghna is in confusion.. Kunal words and naina words r disturbing her..
Kunal other side.. Thinking that how to unite karan and naina..
Karan comes down thinkingly.. Naina also coming down same time.. Karan feels His heart beating fast..tunes sees naina..naina also looks at him..smiles..seeing her smiling face..he forgets what he was thought..he moves towards her..naina also comes to him..
Naina : karan..
Karan : naina..
Nairan : r u k?..
Both : smiles..
Naina : in mind..I’m missed u karan..
Karan : miss u so much naina..
Both r lost in each other eyes..
Sandhya comes there..while talking to phone..but seeing nairan..
Sandhya : I’ll talk to u later..
Sandhya : gets angry..here I’m trying to separate them.. But u both r lost in each other.. If this happened like this..then all my work will be wasted..no I won’t let this happen..u have to be in my control karan..I can’t let u go away from my hand like this..then all will be waste in this years what I’m makes u..
Kyathi and kunal looks at nairan..kunal smiles at them..kyathi left from there..
Karan : breaks the eye lock.. left..
Naina : try to call him..but seeing meghna she kept quite..
Meghna : sees naina..chiku..what r u doing here..
Naina : dhi..I need to talk to u..can u plz come to ur room..
Meghna : k..come..
Naina : u go…I’ll come..
Meghna : where r u going..u want to talk to me na..
Naina : I’ll come u go..
Meghna : but…
Naina : u go dhi..I’ll come just in 2 minutes..
Meghna : k..
Naina : went to call..kunal..
Kunal : was checking the files.. In guest room..
Naina : knocks the door..
Kunal : looks at her..araay..naina..come in..y r u knocking the door..u don’t have to get permission for entering my room..
Naina : jiju..think again..what if I entered in when u r doing romance with my dhi..
Kunal : u r looks like kid..but in real..u r not..talking so much..
Naina : what to do jiju..with attitude..
Both burst out laugh..
Kunal : k tell..me what u wanna say..
Naina : oh..no..jiju plz come to ur room.. I need to talk to u..and called dhi also..I hope..if u r there then it will help me to make dhi understand the things..
Kunal : k..come..
Kunal room
When meghna enters in..
Meghna : what chiku want to talk to me..
After her kunal enters in..she looks at him..then naina and vishal..
Seeing vishal kyathi also comes to kunal room..
Kunal : vishal..
Vishal : hi..jiju..
Meghna : do need anything vishal..
Vishal : no..chiku only called me here..
Meghna : looks at naina..chiku..
Naina : I’m sorry dhi..I’m didn’t informed it..but its need now..
Vishal : chiku..r u k..y r u both talking seriously.. Everything is fine na..
Naina : no..bhai..hugs him..nothing is fine here..
Vishal : cares her hair..u can tell me..I’ll do anything for u both..
Naina : bhai..is karan allergy problem..is air burn..and will spread in cough..talking to him..and laughing with him..
Vishal : gets shocked hearing this all..
Meghna : chiku..I’m asked it about to vishal..
Vishal : wait a minute gudia..that means whatever u asked me that day was its all for karan..but u didn’t mentioned his name..that day I said it happens in rarely.. And karan jiju allergy is not like that..
Meghna : what..
Kyathi : han bhabi..even me kunal bhai..mom..dadaji also here..and talking to bhai..most of all mom was with bhai..did anything happen to anyone of us..
Meghna : but I’m heares that karan allergy will spread..that’s y..
Kunal : u r not at thinking practically.. U r also here tus many days..uveven talked to karan..did u feel anything like this..
Meghna : remembered.. No..
Vishal : gudiya..u r getting worried for nothing..think ur self..then u will get urs answers..whatever u done is right r wrong..but I want to tell u two things…listen to me carefully..
Meghna : looks at him..
Vishal : first..karan jiju ready to face His problems because of our chiku..she was his support system..u r snatching it from jiju..if u does like this then he will return to that darkness.. Where he was this many years..
Second.. Chiku was happy with jiju..u also saw it..then y r u letting this happen..gudiya..I hope after thinking a lot..u will change ur decision…
Kyathi/naina : bhabi/dhi..whom tells u all about karan allergy will spread in cough..air burning.. And all..
Meghna : was thinking about vishal words..
Naina : dhi..
Meghna : but was lost..
Kunal : naina..u all go..she need some space..now..
All nods left..
Kunal : even I want both karan and naina happiness.. Think deeply meghna..saying it..he kissed her forehead.. And left…
Naina comes down..but shocked to see sharda there..
Naina : dhi..ma came here..come down..
Meghna : comes down..
Nk : see..sharda ji..how much happy in my bahu’s face..
Meghna and naina hugs her..sharda also hugs them happily..
Meghna : ma..all of sudden u r here..
Naina : everything is fine..na..ma..
Sharda : about say..
Nk : I’m only invited sharda ji..here..
Then remembered.. How he got to know everything from sandhya ji.. then he called sharda ji and asked her to come here..and sandhya left from here for some work…
Nirmala : comes..hugs her..how r shardha ji..
Shardha : I’m fine..u..
Nirmala : fine..
Nk : I’m called because.. U can take ur both daughters along with u..
All r shocked..
Nirmala : what r u saying?..
Sharda : y r u saying like this ji…
Nk : whatever I’m saying is right..when u both daughters don’t want to stay with my sons..then y they have to stay here..
Sharda nirmala meghna and naina r shocked..
Sharda : what r u saying..
Nk : y r u asking it to me..ask u r elder daughter..she will tell u his she sepearates karan and naina..and takes her room..and kunal staying in guest room..which was most little in this house..
Sharda : asks meghna..is it all right?..
Meghna : nods..s..
Sharda : y u did this gudiya..is that I’m taught u..u did wrong Meghna..
Nirmala : sharda ji..meghna didn’t done any wrong..what is correct..that one she did..she is not at all wrong..we r only wrong..because karan has allergic problem from childhood.. That’s y he didn’t mingled anyone.. If he wants also..cause he thought that..if he mingled with anyone of us..then they will get any problem because of him..that’s y..cries..
Sharda : shocked to hears its..
Dadaji : whatever u hears all right sharda beta..me and nirmala..was not present in marriage.. And we thought that u all know about karan problem.. But when meghna confronts us..then only we came to that u all font have any idea about karan..allergy problems.. We r sorry beta..
Sharda : no pabuji..
Naina : no..dadaji..in this all u and ma not at all fault..even one once..its all happened what god wants…so don’t feel guilty.. Plz..
All r looks at her..
Dadaji : sharda ji..u r both daughters r good..and know to handle the situation.. Whatever ur decision we will accept it..
Sharda : I’ll give this decision to naina..because its her life..
Nirmala : looks at her..
Naina : dadaji..its my home..my sasural..and my husband also here.. Then where should I have to go..I’ll stay here..with u all..and karan..
Karan : u leave from here naina..I’m don’t want this relationship continued..
It’s was shock for all include nk..he smiles winningly..
Naina : karan..listen.. I know y r telling this..
Kunal reached home..
Karan : I’ll give divorce to u..u have no future with me..try to understand.. Just ieave..saying it he left..broken naina behind..
She also went to room..packed her dresses..and comes down..while she looks at karan room..went to see him..hut karan was lost in thoughts..holding their wedding photo..and tears r flowing from his eyes to cheeks..
Naina sees its all through mirror..without making noice..smiles with tears..
Naina : I know karan..u r doing this all because of ur concerns towards me..u said that u Will give divorce to me..but seeing ur tears I came to know that..how much u needs me..want to be with u all time..u only asked me to leave..I promise I’ll return to ur life when u realise that u needs me..then only ill enter this house with ur permission.. And this time…not a friend..but will be ur wife..its my promising to my self before leaving this house..
Meghna kunal nirmala..tries to stop her..but she left saying that what she will do here..when karan don’t want her in His life…
In middle
Naina asked sharda return to bundi..
Sharda : what will u do all alone here…
Meghnal : not alone..
Sharda : u both.. R here..
Kunal : how can I let my saali like this..and when I know that karan wants her in His life..like also naina..
Meghna : I thought being away from karan..naina will be safe and happy…but I’m realised that its more painful for her being away from her love..I can’t let my chiku suffer like this..
Naina : ma..dhi..its my swabhimaan..I’ll fight alone..u both r my strength.. I’ll over take everything..
Sharda : hugs them..
Kunal : ma..I’m also here.. U r showing ur love only towards ur daughters.. Not son..this us not fair..
Sharda : spreads hand..kunal hugs three of them..
Sharda left..naina finds places to stay..and informed about this meghnal..
Karan enters his room.. But wherever he looks naina only visible for him..ye can’t able to stay in..so comes out of room..he try to calm..but couldn’t..comes down..
Meghna : karan..
Karan : turns..ji..bhabi..
Meghna : I’m sorry…
Karan : its k..bhabi..
Meghna : but this time u r wrong karan..
Karan : stops..looks at her..
Meghna : y u said to go naina out of this house..
Karan : he was already upset..and hearing meghna..he gets angry..u only asked me not to allow near to me..and she will suffer..if she stays also what will she do here..if she is here..then away from me..if I want to talk..I can’t..because I’m promised u..I won’t see naina..because of u she is out of my life..now u r happy na..u will be..angrily wents from there…
Meghna : looks at him shockingly.. Because he never talk to anyone like this..and more over his painful words r hurts her..
Kunal : comes..did u see and hears what karan said..whatever he did and done it na..this for all naina’s betterment.. But the truth is he can’t able to handle himself now..I’m bet naina was also be there like him..all broken..didnt u see the pain in naina eyes..when she was away from karan.. he loves naina..but bechara he didn’t realised it..
Meghna : I’m dome wrong kunal..
Kunal : somewhere u r wrong..but it will help them to realise their love..and this time..when they enters in their life..no one can break it..karan was overprotective towards his beloved once..they both done marriage because of our happiness.. Now its time for us to give them their happiness.. It will happen when both became together..
Meghna : I’m also with u kunal..in this…i m also want them to be happy…
Precap : nk and sandya exposed ingront of kunal and karan…
So guys how is this part..
Will karan realise His love for naina..?..
Will meghna apology karan?..
What nainas next step?..
10 Comments
Good one
Sorry because last time I think so I was the only one who complained.I should have understood it that it was your first ff.I regretted alot after that.Sorry again.Talking about this part it was awesome.If it would have happened in real so I would have been the happiest one.Karans new avatar is too nice that is concern for naina.Loved it.Post ASAP.Loads of love.
Its k..Yarr..I’m not at all sad..there is some to correct anyone.. U said what fault..I’m happy for that..don’t feel bad..because mistake is mine..dont mind..and be happy..keep smiling..thanks Yarr..
Welcome Henny.Can we be friends?:-)
Of course..y not..
Stupendous episode. The conversations and deeds seemed all too realistic and lively. The fact that I visualised every scene before me is the best part right now. A great compilation of words which presented a whirlwind of emotions and indecisiveness of thoughts. A wonderful work of art..
Henny! I really liked it yaar! How I wish the serial was just like this! Nice yaar! Good job!☺️Mistakes occur but that’s not a problem at all!
Hello dear…. This was indeed really nice… I loved it…. karan furious at meghna for taking away his naina and followed by meghna’s regret was superb… Lots of hard work for kunal!!!…?? keep writing…..
Awesome one!!!
Henny I loved it and I’m sorry for complaining in the last one it’s ur first ff and i commented something bad I’m so sorry if i hurt u ??love u ??