AN ISHQBAAZ FF ~BY SAIRISH #PART 1
Hii guys i am new here ..this is my first ever attempt to writing .i am hoping
For the best. So my story starts form when shivaay accused annika for sleeping with daksh
And then she was kidnapped by daksh . I really felt that annika forgave shivaay quite early
That time..so lets start
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Annika has been kidnapped by daksh and is brought to the old factory
Mill (OFM). On the other hand shivaay learns about daksh’s lies.
He was feeling very guilty. He blamed such a pure ,beautiful and
Innocent soul . Without wasting much time he gets into his car and
Rushes towards annika’s house
@annika’s house ..
He found no one except for blood strains and annika’s phone which was already broken by daksh .
He got to know that daksh has kidnapped annika and daksh gave him an open challenge to save annika from his wrath .he rushes towards the old factory mill.
@OFM
Annika was being continued by daksh . She was given electric shocks and now was locked in a glass box in which water was gushing in continuously. She was shivering with fear ..
As soon as SSO reached OFM he saw annika locked in a glass box filled with water and pleading daksh to let her go. Shivaay’s anger reached to the highest peaks after witnessing the scenario
SHIVAAY-S,DAKSH-D
S-daakkkshh (in full rage)
Daksh turned and saw shivaay full red In anger
D- welcome shivaay welcome…..kaisa lag rha hai ..well mujhe bahot achha lag rha hai tujhe tadapta dekh kar annika ko tadapta dekh… I am just loving it ..frikin loving it
And before he could blabber anymore shivaay started to beat him black n blue
On the other hand the water level was rising with each passing minute daksh noticed this and
D-(pointing towards annika) hahahaaa shivaay udhar dekh
Annika could not not take thewater pressure anymore. Her movements were decreasing
Shivaay was trying his best to break the glass box but was unable to do so he then found an iron rod which he found lying somewhere in the building and broke the glass box into numerous pieces and annika came out full drenched in water. She was breathing heavily as if she was not able to breathe and was about to let go of her soul . Daksh again started blabbering and now shivaay could not take it anymore .
S(holding his collar )- himmat kaise hui Teri meri biwi ko haath lagane ki ..ANNIKA SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI ko haath lagane ki .. very soon the police arrived and arrested daksh shivaay went towards annika …Sat there..took her in his arms and “ANNIKAAAAAAA” he shouted . Unshed tears,guilt and the fear of losing his life can be clearly seen in his bluish orbs
“Shi…..shivaay mai zinda hu “annika almost murmured. His happiness knew no bounds but it didn’t lasted for long she again fell unconscious in his arms ..she was taken to hospital and the members of oberoi family were informed about her health too…everyone was waiting for her to gain consciousness and soon she did gain..everone was very happy for her( including pinky). Shivaay was on cloud nine. Annika was brought back to OM but she was sleeping due the effect of injections. Everyone departed to their room and shivaay was taking full care of her and waiting for her to wale up so that he can ask forgiveness for the sin he has committed.
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So guys done with the first part. I don’t know how bad it was as it was my first time. I have to write this first part thrice due to some issues .BUT PLS GUYS PLS GIVE UR REVIEWS. At least for this new comer ?? more thing guys i am really confused regarding the title for my ff so pls suggest one
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PRECAP- WILL ANNIKA BE ABLE TO FORGIVE SHIVAAY (NOT SO EASILY ??
Till then take care
SAIRISH
24 Comments
Awesome.. Waiting for the next part…
Awesome please post next part asap desperately waiting for next
Superbbbbb episode
Greattttt point to start the story..
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Awesome…..waiting for next
Superb start , plzz post the next update ASAP, loved it to the coree
Awesome yaar Not so easily she forgive someone
kitni acha ha ye.beautiful.next part soon post
Awesome
Awesome…. I think she should forgive her after some khidikitod punishments….
It’s awesome dr… nice concept… u will nail it….go on… waiting for d nxt… n yeah even I m big fan of NAKUUL MEHTA…. POST SOOON
Awesome part
It is awesome dear
Thank u so much mannu,shreya,sairan,anoushka,Arfa,debdutta for ur valuable comments and warm welcome
There is an error 3rd para it’s annika was being kidnapped by daksh. Sry auto correct ??
Awesome
Awesome….loved it
Nice…
Go ahead with it.
Awesome yaar … loved it…. Excited for the next part.. post it soon
Amazing start dear..
Continue soon…
Interesting and awesome start. Looking forward to next episode
Great start… waiting for the next update..
Great start…. I Liked it! Waiting for next part.
Sorry, now I have no idea about ur title.
amazing
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