Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I’m back with a khidkitod double DHAMAKA
Sorry for not updating for two days.Yashu, had sent me a message missing my update.
Sanyu, ur poem on ishu’s pain was so mind blowing… beautiful….u should try more of these types ?
Mahi, Verna sorry for giving ur Om a bad fate; don’t worry he will recover fastly?.Thanks to lavi who commented for first time.
Sorry couldn’t reply this time also, but shall definitely do for this post….
Most of the colour suggestions are grey & black.
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Recap:-Anika and gouri r part of Jodhpur royal family.Om came to know the truth & apologised to gouri.Kali attacked Gouri again,but was saved by Om & rikara married.
Gouri lost her baby due to an accident planned by Buama & Mr.Lal.
Hope u would like this chappy.Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this.
Colour 37
As gouri entered their room, she was shocked to see Om sitting with syringes.His eyes were red, his hair was messy, his veins were clearly seen trembling, his face was wet with tears.
This view was terrific for Gouri; she remembered the past where once she had stopped him from doing this.She ran to him.
He was sitting on the floor , hopelessly.She went near him & threw away the syringe.Om was looking at her helplessly; he was like a glass piece which would break into thousands of pieces.Gouri hugged him tightly, by screaming his name.He buried his face in the crook of the neck.
The 2 broken souls were trying to fix themselves in that embrace, her neck was being wet due to his tears.She pulled him back; his guilt did not allow him to face her.
G: kyu Omkaraji, kya hua ajanak se?
O: I’m I’m a sinner gouri…It’s…it’s because of me…me…that v lost her…. because of me.
It took her a moment to register it; she remembered bua ma talking to Mr.Lal; the same person against whom obros had filed the case.So that means he had created this accident to blackmail Om to take back the case.
G: I…I know omkaraji…
Om looked up;how …how …did she know this?Mr.Lal had been threatening him for quite a few days.He even received a call from him just before going to the temple threatening him to lose something precious; but h being a daring man had not listened to it.But he never expected that he would have to pay such a hefty prize to his underestimation of his enemy.He was being drowned in this pool of guilt ever since that tragedy; he feared to share this to her since he thought that she would b too weak to handle this also.But now…how did she know this??
G: don’t be sad….don’t think u r responsible for this….u have only stood by the side of truth…& truth is bitter sometimes.But it will b sweet at the end…
O: nahi…Gouri…I can’t do this again..He….he had called me again…. saying he will….he will…..
He totally broke down crying; she was dazed.How to console him? He wouldn’t hear whatever she is saying him now.
O: I can’t afford to lose anything again….I’m going to ….I’m going to take back the case…
G: omkaraji nahi….v vill have a solution…
O: No gouri, what if….if he will do something to u..
She kept a finger on his lips, silencing him.She was wiping away his tears & tying his hair back to a pony.
O: when did satyavadi Om became a coward?U urself have told me, if u have ur family & truth opposite to eo, u will choose only truth.U have told me that courage is interwined with truth; it is the base of truth.What happened now? U shouldn’t fall weak to any obstacle that keep u away from truth.Only dharam can win & will win.It is the biggest weapon & biggest boon.Sankarji ke kasam, v vill together bring dharam back….We can…but for that don’t do self destruction….u have promised me not to go back to all these.Now u will have to promise me u wouldn’t touch all these in the name of….our …our honey…
Om wanted to cry in the very mention of that name; but he was feeling a fire in him thinking of the one who had killed his honey.He stood up with trembling legs & hugged gouri.He didn’t say anything; but she could understand his promise & the fire in his mind just through his hug….
Days of intense planning by shivomru & aniri against their enemies.Only these people knew about the sacchai of bua ma.This was an utter shock to all, specially Om, who considered bua ma as his own mom.It was later they came to know that she was revenging for the death of her son ratan by snatching away the happiness from the hands of Om who, she thinks, is the killer of Ratan.
Her room was perfectly arranged with all voice & video recorders by the gang to capture all her plans with Mr.Lal.Shivay managed to find the lorry driver of Mr.Lal who had created the accident & make him confess the truth.All evidences of this crime were collected.Mr.Lal was trapped & was in Khanna’s custody.
Finally, it was the day on which the second attack on rikara were planned by bua ma.Other family members were unaware of all her evil deeds.She had leaked the info of rikara’s trip to a resort to Mr.Lal , who approved the palm of accident to her.But little did she know that Lal was in Khanna’s custody & he made Lal to say like that.
But things twisted when rikara asked bua ma to accompany them
She rejected the offer to the maximum as she knew about upcoming accident; but it didn’t find success.
Finally as their journey reached halfway, Om halted at the place which was supposed to be the spot of accident , saying he needs a break.Rikara noticed an extremely tensed bua ma.They were approached by some racing vehicles from opposite side.Fearing the accident, bua ma jumped out of the car & ran back only to be halted by the police squad.She was utterly confused seeing all this.
O: kya hua bua ma, ur plans were failed.
G: it’s ok buama, we will try to finish the game next time.This time the number of lives are finished.U won’t get an extra life too.
Sensing her failure, she made her last attempt to accomplish her goal.She snatched away the gun from the police & shot gouri.But this was an unexpected move; it wasnt gouri but Om who was shot at his right hand who had come as a barrier for gouri….
Stay tuned guys, the next would be coming right behind…..
27 Comments
OMG..such a daring om..dark red for his courage..Gauri is very understanding cute Rikara
Hi bubblu, Thanks yaar
& Ur os was awesome…
Ur first creation is this much beautiful..
So do come up with more…
Thanks for mentioning me?
Thank you di
Hi Shraddha… I have read ur story from somewhat episode 9 or 10..but couldn’t comment..bt today I thought to comment…I’m totally loving ur story..loving Rikara..u very beautifully portrayed all the emotions…nd ur posting speed is also just wow..keep updating nd entertaining us…
Best wishes…
Hi zaveesha, thanks for commenting…
Happy to know that u liked it…
Do continue?
Amazing yaar… Missed ur episodes a lot… Excited for the next part
Oh sorry sagi, was bit busy….
Next one is already updated?
Do read…
super. loved it to the core.
you have good writing skills…….
Hi kavi, thank u for commenting…
Do follow the coming updates too…
Oh….awesome…..poor Om but I like Gauri so much….update next part
Asap
Ya , do read the next one too san
Awesome as usual.?????
Keep wrriting dear.
Thanks u sanyu for regularly commenting?
It is nice one dear… Color of fire… Orange and red mixture is the anger ness and revenge of rikara from Bua maa
Hi Niki, thanks for colour suggestion?
make the next update fast…waiting for it
Sure FIda, next one is coming?
What a dhamakedar episode….
@shraddha is back…. with double dhamaka….
Excellent episode
AMAZING FANTASTIC SUPERB??????
Awesome update
Loved it to the coree, plzz post the next update ASAP omg I think blood red for hate , anger and loss
Awesome
Amazing!!That was really an awesome part.Nothing to say more as I love every chappy of your ff for your writing skills.Missed your ff this weekend but this dhamaka has fulfilled that.
Colour of fire for exposing of buama.
Awesome. Waiting for next epi.
Awsm as usual ???? Dying to read the next part……. Bt my Om is pavam Yaar……. red for rage …. Pls post asap ???
Superrrrrrrrrrr……