Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.
One more thing.Me, kiya, verna have started a new ff on rumya.I know there r many rumya fans here.So please check it out,
http://www.tellyupdates.com/think-im-waiting-rumya-shots-kiya-shraddha-verna-intro/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/think-waiting-u-rumya-shots-kiya-shraddha-verna-shot-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/think-waiting-u-rumya-shots-kiya-shraddha-verna-shot-2/
Sorry for typo errors,try to give a colour for this chap.
Colour 38
A leap of few months……
Gouri was wearing her long ear rings , looking the mirror.A tear escaped from her eyes….This was the ear ring gifted to her by a person whom she loved the most….had loved the most….bua maaji….she didn’t know y she was wearing it…Is it because this matched to her orange designer sari?Or since they had visited her in the govt.mental asylum the previous day that her images kept flashing in her mind???
She had imagined a lot …bua ma & jhanvi taking care of her child & herself.But the dreams were shattered, she lost both her child & bua ma.It was true that, she simply hated her after knowing the truth, but when she came to know that bua ma had lost her mental balance she had cried like hell in her room.But Om had asked her not to shed tears for that ruthless lad, he would never give her a chance.She gets reminded of the dark past, whenever she sees that wound in his arms.How much she had screamed seeing that view when he falls down after the shot, her trust & prayers to Sankarji for him…..
All these dark stories were flashing in front of her eyes, when she sensed a warmth in her nape….a soothing warmth….she gently closed her eyes as a reaction to this.Her ear rings were made to dance by those fingers….she was smiling…..Her eyes met two magnificent eyes at the mirror; she could feel all the comfort she could get whenever her eyes met his eyes….
He whispered in her ears…
O: U look very…very….
She was blushing…..
O: very dumb( laughing)
The redness of the cheek slowly moved into her eyes.She turned back to beat him but he beautifully slipped away.She wanted to punish him for this ….
G: I swear, I wouldn’t b talking to u or coming to u for one whole day….See…
And she turned back continuing her make up.He knew it was a joke, she would keep a deal like this & he would easily break this in 10 or 15 mins.So he simply sat their adoring her as she was getting ready.He didn’t notice the passing time until she came close to him.
O: kya hua, u have backed off from this bet right?
G: ha omkaraji, but I want to say sorry to you.
O: oh it’s ok, u r my wife so it’s not necessary.( casually)
G: but this is necessary.
Saying this she threw a glass of water to Om; the timing was so perfect that shivika entered the room seeing this.Both were hell shocked seeing a wet Om & a daring gouri.
G: Oh bête ki, when did u start this chutki??
Sh: come on Anika, she is ur sister & she learnt this from you.Of course!!!
O: my sherwani(pouting)
Sh: come on Om, our life is going to b drenched in water as v married this pagal set of sissies….
G&A:oh so v r pagal…..
O: of course, throwing water, candies…& what not…
G: see didi, he is learning ways to show tadi like bade bhaiyya.
A: yes chutki, I think he should publish a book “100ways to display Tadi, by Billuji” so that all husbands can study from him.
S: oye hello, u r lucky enough to get hubbies like us.Any other person in our place would have thrown u out earlier itself…
A: oho, so u both think u r perfect in every ways.
O: no doubt bhabhi, u would have done some good deed in last birth to get partners like us, hai na shivay?
Specially u gouri, with all ur dumbness & dabbang gouri.
S: y only gouri? Anika too, with all her uncivilized, strange language…
G: didi, u know I thought of not talking to him for a whole day.I think I should extend it for one more day.
A: oh yes chutki, even I’m planning to do a 2 day strike on not to talk to this bagad billa.
S: oh that will b a blessing.I wouldn’t have to hear all ur rantings for 2 days.Come on bro let’s party…
O: of course shivay,even I will be rescued from all her bareilly stuff which she keep on narrating to show her courage.
Aniri looked themselves thinking of their value in their hubbies minds.Their eyes were talking & doing some strong deal which the bros failed to notice.
G: fine, let’s see what u guys r gonna do without us for 2 days.
O: R u going for kashi yathra?(joking)
A: no probably we will b here, but totally busy with our own works, not giving u guys a space in our life.
Sh: it’s a deal(forwarded his hand)
A: yes a pakka deal( simply did a namasthe)
G: A double deal for gouri( signature step of Salman)
O: a fair deal for me (flicking his hair)
Shivay moved his hand thru his hairs in his way,when they heard dadi calling them.
The sisters moved out of the room with full swag mentally preparing a note to teach them a lesson of their life.
Whereas the bros were simply chuckling at the idiotic antics of their wives….
But who knew what was gonna happen!!!!
Precap:- what is that special function of Oberois???
Hope u will like this, shall see u in next chappy.Waiting for every comments.I might not b able to post regularly buy I shall definitely reply to all of u….
Bye,
take care….
32 Comments
Mind blowing episode….
Waiting for next chappy…
plz post ASAP…
Colour for today’s episode is baby pinky for happiness and new start in life….
Also I don’t need to be SORRY dear
Even we understand that it was the demand of the story….
I was just Angery for making my pappu….
But now I am not….
ALSO I AM SOORY IF MY WORDS HURT U….
LOVE U DEAR…
Typing mistake
its also *You don’t need to be sorry
AWESOME AMAZING EXCELLENT FUNNY ? INTERESTING OUT STANDING SUPERB??????
I waited for your episode for the past 2 days. Really enjoyed both the episode. Will see who gonna lose this deal. Waiting for the next one. Update soon.
Lovely episode plzz post the next update ASAP, this one was a lighter one after the last intense one , I think baby pink colour for their cute tashnan
Awesome…loved it eagerly waiting for next part update soon
OMG..such a cute update di..I was laughing throughout the chappy.. Cute nok-jhok between the O’bros and O’bahus. gauri splashed water on om..it was superb di…orange for their tadibazz nok-jhok
Shradha …..love u a lot…..kya kidkithod episode hei yaarrrrrr…….really you r awesome…..Glad to see shivomanri together…..Likes their nok-jokes…..Who will win the bet?????excited ? for next part……
excellent
Awsm shraddha,
Late update…but, good
It is awesome dear
Superb update
Nice update ? Too good
Amazing part…. Om n shivaay r underestimating their wives …. Excited for the next part.. post it as soon as possible
Wow..very intresting yaar..eagerly waiting
very nice update.i am really missed ur ff for past two days .so please update daily dear.i can’t wait for the next update?
Awwww!!Such a beautiful moment.Eagerly waiting for your next update.Please post ASAP.
Colour-Orange for those tadibaaz.
Oh my god I loved it.I am soo excited for the next update .I really want shivaay and om to realise that these stupid talks make their day. Make the next episode kidikithod..I hope it will be a long one.
I was a silent reader but today I want to say to you that the name of this ff is soo unique.It will get caught in every readers eyes.Please , please post soon .I love your double dhamaka episodes.Make the next episode a little dramatic.Love your ff.
Hi Nanda, thanks a ton for ur appreciation.Happy to know that u love my ff.Please do follow this?
FABULOUS
Hey shraddha sorry for not able to comment on previous chapters. But they were as always awesome. Poor rikara they lost their child. But good that buama is gone. Initially I was very tensed if om is well or not. But now everything is good. Loved obros and obahus moments. Waiting for the next….
Wow Awsm di….. plsss post asap ?? I just rofl hearing shivom & anri’s talks ….. wanting girls to win ….. Haan d i know abt ur rumya ff when will u post the next part I’m dying to read the nxt part …… luv u di??
Hiee .. I totally thnk u fr writing all these chappys .. I mean i am an insomaniac nd so used to get bored whole night but thn i found out about ur stories nd tried thm for 30 chappy but i loved so nw i am used to read one chapoy daily nd nw gettin some sleep .. I really wish the story in the original one was like this too coz i nw tht whn we feel thrilled to read it thn how amazing will it be to watch on screen.. Once again luv u fr ur imagination thnks a lot.. all chappys r superb waiting fr the next one..
Cute update dii.. I was silent reader of ur ff till now… loved it to d core..m loving d cute nok jhok … colour- baby pink for their cuteness…
Post next asap
Hi yaar, thanks a lot for commenting.Do follow the next too?
Awesome.Keep writing dear.????
Fab as usual.Baby pink for happiness after black clouds of sadness.
Khidkitod parts.. such a great part.. first part emotional and slowly they have moved on and happiness returned to my Om’s life.. so I spear u this time.. but don’t u dare to give too much pain for my Om.. Better u give hard times for him.. not pain okay..
??SHERNI VERNA
Awesome shraddha!!!! Loved their nok jhok….. Waiting for the next part… N sorry for not commenting on last epi… U don’t msg me now.. Don’t know y… ?? but I’ll try to read every update in time.. ..
Sorry richa, I’m bit busy so cannot pm…but I will try to do it for sure…
Thank you for the comment?