Hey guys sorry for the late update. Here is episode 11.
A nurse comes and informs Saachi that Dr.Kabeer has changed her shift, Now she has the shift with Pragya.
At Night in the party:-
Veer and his friends are drinking wine and celebrating. Veer thinks “Will Miss sneezu come or not?”
Everyone come in the party including Saachi and friends. Saachi comes with cloth tied on her leg.
Riya:- This party is not for patients.
Veer:- Don’t worry Riya, you won’t have to treat her.
Riya leaves.
Veer:- I didn’t know Miss Sneezu that you will come.
Saachi ignores him and walks away. Veer smiles. He goes and stands at the center with a mic..
Veer anounces:- Guys and Girls take your seats, we are playing a game. The chairs are already arranged. Everyone sits in a circle.
Veer:- The game is simple. I will pick a chit and show one of you. You have to write one statement about them and I will guess who is it.
Starting with………. Pragya.
Veer picks a chit and shows it to Pragya. The name on the chit is Riya. Pragya smiles. She writes something on the paper and gives it to Veer.
Veer trying to read:- ‘Gariboun ki model’. What is this? Lemme guess. It’s Riya.
Pragya:- absolutely right.
Riya gets offended. Veer picks another chit and shows it to Riya. The name on the chit is Veer. Riya writes KG student. Veer reads it smiles.
Veer:- I know it’s me. Now next…….. Saachi.
Veer opens the chit and shows it to Saachi. The name is Dr. Kabeer. Saachi writes ‘Khadoos Hitler’. Veer reads and gives a bubbly smile.
Veer:- Everyone in the hospital knows this. Its our Dr. Khadoos also known as Dr. Kabeer.
Vinod:- Veer it’s getting boring, let’s play another game.
Veer:- That what I was about to say. So now………Paper Dance.
Everyone start clapping and whistling.
Veer:- There are 2 bowls A and B, in it are chits with certain numbers. Guys will pick chits from bowl A and girls from bowl B. Whoever gets the same number will dance together on the paper.
Everyone come turn by turn and pick chits.
Isha:- I got 2.
Pragya:- 7
Saachi:- 11
Riya:- 3! Who else got 3?
Veer:- No…….. I got 3.
Veer and Riya are shocked.
Veer:- I am never gonna dance with my sister.
Riya:- Me never as well.
Veer sees Sam talking to Saachi. He rushes to him.
Veer:- Did you get 11?
Sam:- Yes.
Veer:- Shall we exchange partners?
Sam:- No way.
Veer:- I got Riya, that’s why. You know I can’t dance with my own sister.
Sam:- Riya? Then OK.
Veer is very happy and staring at Saachi. Saachi gets nervous.
Veer:- So Miss. Sneezu?
Saachi:- I wont break the rules, I want my real partner.
Veer:- When he has no problem then why are you showing tantrums.
Saachi reluctantly agrees.
Paper dance starts. Everyone are dancing enthusiastically.
Veer to Saachi :- This game is going to get intresting with every round.
Saachi gets goosebumps. In the 3rd round.Saachi intentionally gets out.
Veer:- I know you did it intentionally.
Saachi:- Everything is fair in love war!
Saachi turns to go, Veer pulls her back and looks directly in her eyes.
Veet:- Is this Love or War?
Saachi stares at him and then releases her hand and goes. Veer gives a sarcastic smile.
After the paper dance game.
Veer announces :- Now it’s time to play the most intresting game ‘Dare and Dare’, it means when the bottle is spinned and points at you, you have no other option except to choose Dare. And if you fail to do it then you have to pick your punishment Task from the chits. Clear?
Everyone shouts :- Clear!
Veer spins the bottle and it points at Pragya.
Veer:- So Pragya, your dare is to slap your most closest friend.
Pragya turns to Saachi and Isha. They look at each other. Saachi stares at Veer with anger. Veer smiles, showing his teeth.Pragya goes and slaps Veer tightly.
Pragya to Veer:- My closest friend!
Veer gets angry, everyone start clapping. Saachi laughs at Veer.
The bottle is spinned again, this time it points at Riya.
Veet:- So my Darling Sis! Your task is to toUch Dr. Khadoos feet and take his blessings.
Riya:- Never in your wildest dreams!
Veet:- Yeah! Not in dreams But in reality.
Riya:-Without a second thought! I will do the punishment task.
She picks up a chit and is shocked to read
‘Dive in 8th Feet water’.
Riya :- Veer, you know I can’t swim.
Veer:- Don’t worry sis, if you drown I will save you.
Riya:- You too cant swim.
Veer:- Then we will drown together.
Everyone start laughing.
Riya keeping a granite on her heart, agrees to do task.
Riya knocks on Kabeer’s cabin door.
Kabeer:- Get in!
Riya comes in and stares at Kabeer.
Kabeer(looking at her) :- Riya, I am really busy. Whatever you want take it and go.
Riya drops her pen near Kabeer’s feet and bends to pick. In the meantime she touches his feet.
Kabeer moving his leg back:- What the hell is wrong with you Riya? Firstly I an very irritated. So pick your pen and get lost.
Riya comes back sadly.
Veer:- Anyway Riya. Which blessings he gave you?
Riya gives an angry look and everyone start laughing.
Veer spins the bottle again and it points towards Saachi.
Veer:- Finally! So Miss sneezu , your task is to hug me.
Saachi:- Never!
Veer:- Come on Saachi you can’t back away. You have to follow the rules.
Saachi:- I will do the punishment task.
Veer:- OK then, pick your chit.
Saachi picks her chit, reads it and makes a shocking expression. Veer snatches her chit and reads it aloud. ‘Say I love you to Dr. Kabeer’.
Everyone are speechless.
Veet:- So now Saachi, what will you do?
Saachi thinks for a long time and then tears flow down from her eyes.
Veer:- Stop being emotional Saachi. Make a decision.
Saachi:- I will never hug you.
Veer:- Oh so you will say……
Saachi:- Yes! I will say him I Love You.
Everyone is silent. Saachi leaves.
Saachi knocks on his cabin door.
Kabeer:- Now what Saachi?
Saachi gets puzzled thinking how he got to know of her presence. Saachi enters. Kabeer is busy doing some paperwork.
Saachi:- Sir I……..
Kabeer:- Yes,?
Saachi stares at him for a while without saying anything.
Saachi:- Sir actually my patient wants to read a novel.
Kabeer:- this is a hospital not a library.
Saachi:- I love you!
Kabeer(lifting his head) :- Whattt?
Saachi:- My patient wants to read the novel.
‘ I love you’
Kabeer :- let me ask you one thing. Does an 8 year old boy read novels?
Saachi makes an embarrassing expression and says nothing.
Kabeer:- Saachi, if you have recovered from your pain and have no other work to do then I have hundreds of things to keep you busy with.
Saachi:- No Sir…… I mean I must go now and take some rest.
Kabeer stares at her, she goes.
She comes out and everyone are standing.
Veer:- You cheated.You had to say him I love you and not make an excuse.
Saachi:- You call it an excuse or a reason, but it’s done. Your game is over!
Saachi leaves. Veer thinks ” the real game has just begun”. He goes into Kabeer’s cabin. Kabeer holds his head.
Kabeer:- Look Veer, if you are here to irritate me then I will punish you all.
Veer:- No sir! I am here just to submit my file.
Kabeer thinks.
Kabeet:- Do one thing Veer. Collect everyone’s files and bring it here.
Veer:- OK sir.
He goes and start collecting everyone’s files.He knocks on Saachi’s door. Pragya opens.
Veer:- Dr. Kabeer told me to collect everyone’s files.
Pragya :- I hope it’s not a prank again.
Veer:- definitely not
Pragya gives hers and Isha’s file.
Veer:- Saachi’s file?
Pragya :- She is bathing.
Pragya asks Saachi as to where is her file.
Saachi replies it’s in the first drawer of the last cupboard.Pragya takes it out and gives it to Veer.
Veer takes out a chit from his pocket and says to himself “Just imagine Saachi, what will happen if this chit in which you wrote Khadoos and Hitler reaches Dr. Kabeer, then what. I am so excited to watch”.
Veer keeps that chit in Saachi’s file and submits all the files to Kabeer.
Precap:-
Kabeer is explaining Saachi and Veer about the surgery. Later, Saachi is locked in the store room by a nurse. Kabeer and Veer are looking all around for Saachi, as its time for the surgery.
25 Comments
Nice episode
Thanks Sewatitli
Nice ff pragya part was awesome when she slapped veer and the sisbrother why can’t they show some Riyadh veer scene waiting for next part
Thanks a lot Ashnitha. Happy that you liking it.
Excellent Today’s episode was best loved it. ?
Thank you Ayonjia
Wow nice episode yaar I loved the party scene veer-sanchi scenes were nice ? Haha when veer had to dance with his sister ???, haha khadoos hitler best part was garibo Ka model ??? and yeah pragya is so smart she couldn’t choose between isha and saanchi so she slapped veer awww ??? too funny ??? oh so that I love u was for the game ??? haha when riya had to touch dr Kabir’s feet poor riya ???
This episode is really funny precap getting a bit worried for that ?
U r an amazing writer keep it up wardha
Yeah u can call me Joyee or jo ?
OK I will call you joyee or jo. So thank you joyee or jo for commenting ?
Areh I said call me either Joyee or jo anyone of them “Joyee” or “Jo” ????? wardha Wah Wah u r very smart ??btw r u on wattpad?
You are really an amazing writer yaar!
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You r story is just going on fabulously??
I just hope that the dangerous ?? ?☠
Game of love starts soon btw. Sachi and kai want more of karachi??
Would love to see scenes ,Like getting locked up in the cellar/garage, etc..????
Waiting for your next update eagerly?????
More kanchi scenes ahead. Be patient Lucky?
Sorry I meant dangerous game of love btw. Saachi and kabeer and want more of kaachi????
awesome dude waiting for next update….pls post asap yaar….
Thanks again Preetha.
Awesome episode.Keep writing dear.??????I loved it.????
Party scene was damn gud.Riya as garibon ki model ha ha ha ??????Both brother and sister r dramebaaz.Poor Riya apne Sayyan ke feet touch karne pade.But Riya i think u accept swimming task but u don’t know swimming .???
Saanchi love u yaar.but feeling bad for u ,u have to dance with prankster Veer and u also have pain in ur leg na.Without thinking at once say i luv u to Kabeer,kya buraai hai dikhne mein bhi smart hai.
Veer today u rocked,but Saanchi’s name given by u Miss sneezu is cute like u.???????Veer u got slapped by Pragya.
Veer one more prank again.
Dear author,I wanna suggest u that in the real show we all know Sanveer is the main lead so fans want something else.U can also work on Kaanchi pair.There r so many Kaanchi fans.
It can be a love triangle also.But if u want love triangle then u have to change Kabeer’s altitude towards Saanchi.I mean to say if he become Khadoos like this then how their love story will move on.Kabeer ko dhire dhire Saanchi ke liye feel karao.
Amd if u want Sanveer as a lead couple,it’s gud also. But uske liye i think Veer ke dadi aur Priya ka intro Saanchi se karva dijiye.We will definitely love to read it.
U r a very gud writer that both couples will suit in ur ff.???
I know my idea is too bad sorry if i hurt u.
Sanyukta your comment is one of the best I ever got. Thanks a lot for your suggestions.
As you and everyone might have understood the lead pair are Kanchi. I never wanted to make it sangeet but Saachi and Veer scenes are only for comedy and to confuse you guys?
The main reason for me to start my ff was to overcome my sadness. Those CV’s made sanveer lead, so I thought to make an ff on Kanchi. I always love Kanchi.
Now a little hint about my ff is that kanchi will never become friends and Kabeer will always try to behave rude and strict but with loads of feelings in his heart for Saachi. So the suspense is to see how they explode.
Omg,Kaanhi is the main lead pair.
Keep writing dear and this is one of my favourite ff.
awesome episode enjoyed every part of ff party , paper dance ,dare of sanchi
You are really gud writer waiting for your next update
Thanks Vinal not Vishal?
very loving scene plz more scene kanchi ( sanchi and kabeer) next episode updated soon plz
Allready updated taking time for review.
hey wardha its the best episode written by u..i give u full 5 stars for this wonderful update..really yaar every dialogue written by ubrought a smile onmy face..and bechara dr kabbir koiusse kaam hi nhi karne de rha..and khadoos hitler and gareebo ki model..wow ..really pragya slapping veer awesome..just amazing..the concept was awesome..oh this naughty veer..precap is damn awaiting..nice u posted.thank u for wonderful writing
Thank you for such a wonderful and pretty comment
Pragya slapping veer was very good loved the I love u scene
Thanks for commenting Ammu