Kanchi os- the proposal …
It was the time when saachi was almost adjusted to the working of the hospital …..
One evening after duty
Anand called all interns in the hall of the hospital
It was the time when dr saachi and dr kabeer both accepted their love to self for each other but never let each other know that …… he was just so hesitant….
May be destiny wanted them to confess now ….
All gathered in the hall ….
Malhotra — angrily
Welcome all interns I have an important announcement to make
Here is dr saachi … dr saachi aggarwal your head intern ….
Wait a second not only head intern ….. a cheater
All were shocked …. he continued …
She lied to all of us
She is actually dr saachi mishra…
She cheated and lied about her identity
Took the identity of saachi aggarwal … just to be a doctor ….
You are resticated dr. Saachi
You …. you just don’t deserve to be here
Isha and Pragya tried to tell the real story but Malhotra didn’t let them tell ……
Saachi was having tears rolled down her cheeks…..
Dr kabeer was not shown there ….
After few minutes of crying dr saaachi left to leave …. suddenly a known voice stopped her…..
Voice– I have listened dr saachi of SDCH is not afraid of anyone …..
She knows how to fight for injustice ….
She knows how to stop illegal activities
I still remember her each day in the SDCH
She tried her best for the hospital ….
For her patients …
Took their care like her family …
Wow but now she is behaving like a coward …. not fighting for herself when she really needs to ….
Saachi was astonished ….
That voice was none other than of dr kabeer ….
He came in the front
Everyone was shocked to see him……
Kabeer – yes everyone you people heard right ….. I know her story I know her journey ….. I knew from the start that she is saachi Mishra and much to your shock ….. she is the topper of this college she was the first one to deserve a seat in this hospital asa an intern and your dearest mr Malhotra cut her name just because she was the daughter of his old friend who respected justice more than money and his patients more than profits….and as for our dr saachi Mishra she was just here to fulfil her fathers dream …..
Saachi was again filled with tears ……
Kabeer continued — I know most people infact evryone in this hospital don’t like me call me hitler and whtever I don’t care because I know I deserve to be called this specially by the deserving girl…..
Saachi smiled with Tears in her eyes ….
Kabeer – I just want to say if she is wrong in her way even
After knowing the deeds of mr Malhotra then I
Also should punishment as I also didn’t revealed her identity ….. because I believed she is talented and should be judged on her talent rather than her sir name ….
Here is my resignation mr Malhotra … I must leave …..
He holds her hands and moved outside the hospital some distance away they walked …..
She was still filled with tears not because she was resticated but because she got a partnr today ….
It was raining both were wet
At some distance ….
Kabeer stopped
Dr saachi turned and saw him on his knees…
Kabeer took out a little box …
Of diamond ring
Put towards her and asked in a soft tone ….
Kabeer – so ms. Saanchi mishra will you mind being my life partner …
Will you mind sharing your problems with me …
Will you mind sharing your deepest secrets with me ….
Will you mind if I say mrs saanchi kabeer…
Will you mind if I say ❤️I LOVE YOU ❤️….
Saachi was just broke into tears….. she said “no”…sat on her knees and hugged him tightly
He too had tears of happiness and hugged her like they were always meant to be together …
She wispered in his ears “I love you too mr khduus ”
Then he slided ring through her ring finger …
Sudden slaps were heard around them
All members of hospital were there including Malhotra …
Anand- ahm will you both mind if I ask “come back in the hospital, I realised my mistake ”
Both smiled with happiness ….
This was the just start of forever ….❣️
All good and bad comments are welcomed …
28 Comments
Nice
And that was good when annand ask them will you both mind to come back ???
I am
Happy that you liked it dear
First of all thank u very much for giving us ur time yaar…I really loved the way kabir proposed saachi and holding her hand and giving her support in sdch ….superrbbb dude…plzzz post another os yaar…
My
Pleasure …. it’s good to know that you people loved this ….. this means a lot to me
Awesome……superb….minblowing….plz write more n more os on kanchi
Thanks dear
Yeah definitely
loved the way kabir stood up for sanchi…………is dr.malhotra upto something????????but still, we love our kanchi as always………..and trisha,u r osm…….
No he’s not …..
Thankyou
Wowww……. U r very talented….its really refreshing and light……. Loved it!!
I am Happy you liked this …?
No bad comments will come for such awesome os ???????????
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Yaa right…..no bad cmnts 4 this os????
Your words meant a lot dear ?
There are always good comments waiting for such an awesome writer like u???
Thankyou thankyou so much
This just boosted my
Confidence
Really nice
Glad you liked it…
Amazingly done.. Loved the way Kabir stood up for saanchi.. And the confession was really cute.. Loved it..
GLad you liked it
amazing …its supercool and no words to say
I AM Happy you find it good
It boosts confidence
Will you mind if I say that this is the most beautiful OS I have ever read?
Never… in fact this encourages a lot ❤️?
Amazing ! Bravo!???
Thanks a lot !
Very nice story line . Loved the OS keep it up
Thanks a lot Neera