Hello guys …
I ma back with next ch of kanchi forever …I took much time to write two OS and now this next let of ff ….keep commenting …they come as appreciation …so let’s start…
“Some goons held towards him “She was shocked …what was happening ..,.and a “gunshot” was heard ….she looked towards her bleeds hands and stomach ..he got teary eyed …
Kabeer- (shouts at the top of his voice )-saachiiiiii!!”
He got up gasping ….
Kabeer- omg thank god thankyou so much this was a dream …I hope she is safe …..
It was 2:45 am if early morning ;he drives to her hostel …knocked the door …
Saachi opened the door – yes whose there …
He immediately hugged her tightly ….
Kabeer – are you fine saachi ? Did anything ahoowned to you ?
Saachi- kabeer wait wait …calm down I am perfect …you don’t worry
He narrated her all his dream …
Saachi- oh tht must not be serious …just relax and go sleep it’s quite late kabeer ..:.
The night passed …..
Next morning in class :
Kabeer- so the 5 students who will go with me for a week trip are …saachi….veer….ria….Pragya…Isha…..
So guys be ready tomoroww early morning ….this is our annual trip for a compaign…be ready
All 5: yes sir ….
All reaches outside hostel…
Kabeer – so we will be in three groups…that will be ….dr Ria with dr veer …
Veer – crap! My sister sir pls why not saachi !!
Kabeer- she will be assisting me for this compaign …
And Pragya with Isha …
So guys our first 2 days will be a survey of a village area …then we have to submit the proper reports online ….and then our efficiency of depending least of life support services will be recorded …when we have to bs in the tents for next 2 days …and fifth day will be conference …results will be announced on the 6th day …and last day …will be for outing in goa ….but remember we are only allowed to do that with whole group…!!
All left for flight …they were made available two cars there…
In one case there were kanchi….and in other remaining members …..
Kabeer – by the way saachi do you know driving …
Saachi-yes but I won’t
Kabeer – khdus!!
Saachi- what !what did you just said dr kabeer that was your name ….and I am
Not khduus
Kabeer – yes you are hot …
Saachi – ho…?(she blushed )
I guess we reached there …(tried change the topic )
Kabeer-no you can’t run away from me so soon …(he gave an evil smile )
Saachi fumes …
She got a call from her brother during conversation…
Saachi- yes I am fine …
sunny- love you di…
Saachi- love you too
Sunny- really….
Kabeer turned red with anger ….
He out the ph on speaker…
Sunny – say truth moti…
Saachi- I am not Moti and now cut the call…
Kabeer laughed silently ..?
Sunny – you are behaving like that your khduus dr is with you ..!!anyways take care tata …
Call cuts …
Kabeer : ahm …so I am this famous …
Saachi:no I mean it was Pragya who told him…thts it
….
Precap – in the village ….
Veer – sir ; chori chori chupke chupke (hide and seek)
Saachi; veer (angrily )….
Veer : I mean thts a good movie right…??
I know This part was too short guys bcz I wanted to start their journey so…and till then enjoy reading two other OS….and yes fun begins from next part …stay tuned …!
48 Comments
awesomeeeeeeeeeee epi but found it a lil short than usual so pl. update a bit long next time and update asap…… eagerly waiting for the next part and love the phone call part…….
Thankyou so much erica
Hehe precap ?????
Haha pragya, isha , saanchi , veer and Ria makes a perfect group????
Yeah
Superb.
Thanks
Nice one
Thanks a lot
Nice
Thankyou
thanks luv it
U wc
nice episode .
Thankq
dude it so small..
but its nice..
waiting for next one with long ff
Sure and thnks
even though small, but it was a cute episode, loved the phone conversation part and sunny calling sanchi moti………..haha………. (why do every brothers call their sis as moti???? my elder bro also calls me moti even if i’m not at all fat) btw dear, eagerly waiting for ur next update asap……….
Glad you liked it
Superb
Thankyou
Fabulous episode yaar. Keep writing dear ???
Thanks a lot …sure
Superrrbbb dear ….your both os are mind blowing dear…sorry dear actually i’ve no time to comment to os so i’ll comment here itself….really loved the os to the core….really u r awesome writer dude…hats off to ur ffs and os…?????plzzz post next asap dude….
THank you so much lavithra…this means a lot and sure
Awesome kabir jealousy when she was talking to her brother was awesome ..
Trisha i love u yrr (frnd wala).
you are awesome mind blowing person .
your writing skills are awesome.
anyways wat u do . (students i mean wat u do )
Thanks a lot alia…and I just completed 12 th
And yeah love you too aana a frnd
As a*
Amazing
Thankyou
Amazing
It’s perfect
Glad you liked it
you just completed 12in medical or Non medical (doing Engineering or any thing else
Yeah !I completed 12 th in medical …and now I am looking for pvt coachings …
If you don’t mine may I ask you about yours …I mean r u too a student ?
Amazing trisha you are uploading so fast & I am enjoying every episode of ff
thankgou so much
Amazing Trish a. …
I just loved the moti part.
Hey I too completed my 12th in medical and I am also waiting.
Same pinch. And all the best for counselling. ??
YOU too and thankyou
Yes i also studying i m doing Be tech but i aslo wanna keep medical and i just love bio and chemistry and hate physics .Now look im studying about physic only .
and yaa there is nothing to mind in it .i also ask u about ur personal information.
i hope u didn’t mind it .
NO definitely not ..
I loved it Trisha…I am from Kerela (India) Where r u from??
I am from haryana…isha
Short but cutest one……….. How cute was their convoy…… ???????…. Waiting for next!!!
An must take care of ur eyes!
Thankyou abhilasha and yes sure dear
awesome episode and OS .loved both . update next episode soon plzz
Sure Neera will try to update tomoroww
U are our supergirl who can update loads in day.. Thank u soo much.. U are our queen OS writer and updater.. Coming back to the epi it was cute as always.. I am now too much addicted to it. Since u are sick take rest.. But come back soon becoz I can’t spend a day without reading ur beautiful writing..
Thankyou so much annie for the praise …being appreciated by a little writer like you is a great thing ..even when I just started writing …and yes sure