Let me show you some real one shots..
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SHIVAAY-ANNIKA
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(1)
She broke his car window panel glass. She broke numerous glasses and he know its for his goodness. She broke his heart like a glass piece and he don’t know its also for his goodness.
(2)
He kept on staring at her. In anger,frustration and keep going on insulting her. She realised he has fell in love with her so deep. His green eyes said her opposite of his actions.
(3) He kept on holding to his old useless belief on Name-blood-lineage. She fell down from stair and blood oozed out from her head. He realised both their blood are same red.
(4) He looked at his designer shoe and remember her Chamki-Chameli-Chandni. Then looked some crow dung then realised both are doing same duty despite of their different cost price.
(5) She threw a glass of water at his face. He picked her up and threw her in the 5 feet deep pool. He has promised her to return 100 times love she showers on him.
(6)
He drank the coffee..his special Americano or expresso. She taste his kaali coffee and spit on his brand new white shirt. He got an idea to wear white shirt daily.
(7) He eat his food with fork-spoon and knife but she folded her full sleeve top and began to eat with her hands. Onlookers felt they both are perfect for each other ..takkar ke ishqbaaz.
(8) He saw his brother hugging his wife and they were laughing happily. Her brother came there limping. He felt they both have three brothers.
(9)
He was at the door,her breath quickened,She feel michmichi, some raita spread on her heart and ran to hide away from him. He located her and found her easily because he also feel the same like she does.
(10) He kept on feeding her. She looks at his caring face. She feel how a good father he will be in near future.
(11)
She is very khidkitod beautful. He is too tadibaaz businessman. They are match made in heaven but find each other here in earth.
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Omkara-Gouri
(1) He show unnecessary attitude. She looked deep in his brown eyes and knew instantly..He have a deep wound in his heart.
(2) He thought she is a gold digger but she made him realised relationships are more precious then platinum.
(3) He kept on trying to throw him out of his house. She tried to go away from him but they soon find not in house,they both live in each other’s heart.
(4) He keeps on drawing and making sculptures. Every thing looked imperfect and less beautiful to him. He looked at the sleeping beauty on his bed. God is the best creator and in front of almighty his creations are looking dull.
(5) He thought he have long beautiful hair. He tie it like a pony tail. Her hair looked more beautiful to his eyes when in open state. He untied his own hair .
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Rudra-Soumya
(1) He is a fitness freak who drinks protein shake. He meet a chubby fatty and felt…Gobi Paratha are real tasty food.
(2) She looked beautiful in her lehenga dress. He said..Till now I have been flirting with other girl who are relative of match stick.
(3)
She left inside the waiting area after security check. After he looked sad. He loved her so deep that words never supported him when she comes in front of him.
33 Comments
Wow
nice analysis.
Its not analysis bhaiyyo…its some real one shots indicating deep love meaning.
Wow baby…..I have just one word….Awesome…..
Thanks Nita. Thought to write some real one shots!!!
Amazing one Astha di…. Again my instinct went right that it’s urs…. awesome…
Thanks Zaveesha..Your seventh sense with telepathy.
Nice update
Thanks Alekhika..
Beautiful os….
Thanks Anu16.
It is awesome and lovely ashu dii…
Thanks Nikku dear.
Superb yaar… U just made me remember all their moments… Loved it..
Thanks Dhar.
awwwwwwwww astha di it was khidkitod beautiful and the most loving part is u have paired rumya instead of ruvya
Ishu…Thank you.
After reading your cmt..I thought ..the actual work of a writer, she/he just plays with the emotional feeling of a reader. I did the same by choosing Soumya over Bhavya.
soumya is good with rudra always so always pair soumya and rudra in ur work please
Its just amazing….loved it…..lovely Astha di
Thank you Prajkta.
so ….it was you …well…i had an idea about it only while having a glimpse of the title itself….
this is superbbb…
Sairish…I only did this crazy monkey stuff.
Amazing…
Thanks Ankita…
Aastha…its awesome Asusuasl… and for thefirst time i didnt have any wild idea that it was written by u…but it was superb.
Navya… finally I didn’t give you chance to catch me lol. Thank you
This was something hatke….but it was wonderful ?
These were certainly the parts which make sense and have some logic….. something that can happen in real life too….and I think that’s why you named it ‘Some REAL Shots’….
I’m glad you didn’t add Bhavya in this….but wait how could you even add her part to ‘Real’ shots….. I mean she seems to have come from some other dimension….no logic at all ????
This is really the way stories should be enacted….but…. Indian audience doesn’t like something so straight-forward….they want a rollercoaster ride…. and in the name of a rollercoaster ride Writers add all types of Naginis and KKs(?)
In short I just loved this realistic version….
Bye Di?
Love you ❤
Thanks Tanz. Love you too.
I named it some real one shots because it is the possibility of the real meaning behind each incident..positively.
Why i m not coming IB page miss such a beautiful FF.tdy come then i saw this i samaj gayti ki aap ha
its mindblowing
AB…thank you..you find it nice.
AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT SUPERB??????
Dear Astha
Aapse Ek Baath Poochna Chaathi Hu.Aap AARAMBH Dekthe Hai Kya?…Nahi Hai Tho Dekhna.Main Bhi Firstly Dekha Nahi Tha Phir Sab Log Bol Rahi Hai Ki Wo Show Acha Hai Tho Main Starting Se Hotstar Pe Dekhna Start Kiya.It’s A Very Intersting And Good Story.Aap Bhi Try Kijiye Dekhne Ko.Pasand Aaya Tho SATURDAY TO SUNDAY NIGHT 9.30PM TO 10.30PM Dekhna Okay?Main Iss Liye Bol Rahi Hu.Becoz Good Story Hokar Bhi Uska TRP Kam Hai.Baahubali Pasand Kiya Log Phir Kyu Uski Writers Ki Story Nahi Dekh Raha That Is Really Sad Thing.Main Bhi Ab Decide Kiya Hai Ki Good Story Serials Ko Hamesha Support Karungi And Unki TRP High Hone Main Bhi Support Karungi, Iss Liye Aapse Ye Baath Share Kiya.So First AAP Starting Se Hotstar Pe Aarambh Episode Dekhna Pasand Aaya Tho Phir TV Pe Bhi Dekhne Ki Try Karna?
Keep Writing Beautiful And Amazing Storys
Take Care?
UF…main Aarambh dekhrahi hoon. Mujhe Rajamouli bahut pasand hai Baahubali se bhi bahut pehle from 2009 after Magadheera.. I like SS Rajamouli a lot. Telugu movie ke maharathi hai Rajamouli sir. I am loving Aarambh because its Aaryan-Dravidian fight. Love and war together.
By the way Barun Dev is loking more hamdsome after rebirth. Nice story. Main aage bhi jaroor dekhungi.
#STAR PLUS…NAYI SOCH.
Superb one shots
Thanks Fan..