avneil ff: kyun main jaagoon (episode 6)

This is my ff, hope you like it.

The lines in ‘ ‘ colour are for what Avni is thinking and speaking, – – colour ones are for song and black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation.

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Avni’s pov (Morning)

‘ Me baith to gai ho train me but kya jo me kar rhi hu vo theek h? Mene Mumbai to delhi ki train to book karli thi ye soch kar ki itna time akele rhe sako utna achcha but ye bahut lambi and tiring journey ban jaegi. (Author’s note: she is talking about physical and mental tireness). Mujhe jald jald delhi puchna hoga Aru ke paas. Ek kaam karti hu, surat ke station par utar kar vaha se delhi ki flight le leti hu. (I sat in the train but what I am doing is right? I booked Mumbai to delhi train thinking that I will get alone time but this will be very long and tiring journey. I should reach delhi soon, to aru. lets do one thing, I will get down on surat station and then take flight to delhi.)

New York ka kya karo, jao ya nhi, kiski sunu, dil ki ya dimaag ki. dil nhi maan rha h. Ek ajeeb sa ahsaas h. Jaise kuch galat ho rha h, kuch galat karne vali hu. Kuch samjh nhi aa rha h. Aru ke paas ja kar usse help le leti hu. Tab tak ke liye new York vali flight cancel kar deti hu. Chalo ab ye to ho gaya, abhi to bahut time h so jati hu alarm laga kar.(what to do of new York, should go or not, whom to listen, heart or brain. My heart is not permitting. Its a weird feeling, like something that is happening is wrong, like I am doing wrong. I am not getting anything. I will go to aru and seek his help. Till then I will cancel new york’s flight. Finally its done, now lets sleep after putting alarm) ‘

Alarm rings, causing avni to wake up and turns it off. When she wakes she rubs her eyes and opens it up slowly.

‘ Oh no, itni jaldi alarm baj gaya. Abhi to soi thi, aur itni achchi neend aa rahi thi sab kharab kar diya stupid alarm. Station aane hi vala hoga. (oh no, why does this alarm rang so early. I had just slept, I was having such a good sleep, and everything got messed up stupid alarm. Station must be arriving) ‘

After 5 minutes station comes, and avni takes her luggage and de-boards the train. She drags her trolley bag on the floor of the station, and then carries it when the stairs come.

As soon as she comes out of the railway station, heavy rain starts which drenches her completely within seconds. She didn’t move because her feet refuse to move, because what has caught her sight surprised her to infinite depths. A person standing in front of her, who is none other than neel.

– Chehrey mein tere
Khud ko main doondun
Aankon ke darmiyan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Kwabon ko bi jaga na miley –

“Neel” avni whispered

“avni neel says

Then he runs towards her and hugs her. She hugs him back

– Ye mousam ki baarish
Ye baarish ka pani
Ye pani ki boonden

Tuje hi toh doonde
Yeh milney ki kwahish
Yeh kwahish purani
Ho poori tuji se
Meri yeh kahani –

Neel breaks the hug and without wasting time he crashed his lips onto hers and kissed her passionately. Avni is taken aback but after a second or so she reciprocates the kiss. It was her first kiss, her first kiss was taken by none other than HER neel. She is on cloud nine.

– Kabi tujse utrun
Toh sanson se guzroon
Toh aaye dil ko raahath

Main hoon betikana

Panah mujko paana
Hai tujme de ijazath

Na koyi darmiyan
Hum dono hai yahaan
Phir kyon hai tu bahta
Faasle.. –

Neel breaks the kiss and pants. Both are heavily breathing.

“I love you neel avni says

“I love you too avni neel says

– Yeh mausam ki baarish
Ye baarish ka pani
Ye pani ki boonden
Tuje hi toh doonde
Yeh milney ki kwahish
Yeh kwahish purani
Ho poori tuji se
Meri yeh kahani –

And leans forward to capture her lips again.

Alarm rings, avni wakes up and realises that it was her dream not reality.

‘ Avni to pagal hai kya, ye kaisa sapna dekha h tune, control yourself avni control. Chodo ab isse, bhul jao. station aane wala hoga. (avni have you gone crazy, which type of dream were you dreaming, control yourself avni control. Leave this, forget it, station must be arriving) ‘

After 5 minutes station comes, and avni takes her luggage and de-boards the train. She drags her trolley bag on the floor of the station, and then carries it when the stairs come. When she comes out of the station she takes a taxi for the airport. After sometime she reaches airport, she goes inside and then boards the plane for Delhi.

Author’s POV

All the khanna family members come out of the airport with luggage. They go in a taxi and reach the address which neela gave to the driver in the beginning. They all come out of the taxi and see the house which is in front of their eyes. It is a white coloured mansion, with a big front lawn. It is beautiful, a very beautiful mansion like theirs.

They go inside and gets comfortable on the sofa. After sometime of waiting Avni finally arrives there with a guy.

Neel couldn’t control his emotions and runs to her, lifts her and twirls her few times before putting her back on the floor. Everyone smiles seeing their act of love. He didn’t stop here in expressing his emotions and hugs her tightly.

Neela senses the situation and neel’s over flowing emotions and gently pats his shoulder and says “kaha tha na mene vo aaigi (I told you that she will come back). Neel understands her hint and release avni but puts his hand on her waist.

“Avni beta mujhe maaf kardena(avni please forgive me) shweta apologies to avni and folds her hands in front of her.

Avni holds her hands and says “Aunty aap maafi mat mango(aunty please don’t apologise)”

Shweta says “Phir aunty bola na to me samjh jaongi ki tune mujhe maaf nhi kiya(if you again call me aunty then I will understand that you have not forgiven me)

Avni says “Aisa nhi h(it is not like that)

Shweta says “Phir mujhe mom bolo, jaise neel bolta h(then call me mom, like neel calls me)

Avni says with moist eyes “Mom, shweta hugs avni

Bebe says “Puttar mujhe maaf kar de(please forgive me child) bebe also folds her handa, avni holds her hands and says aap maafi mat mango(don’t apologise please)

Maddy says “phir bolo ki tumne hum sabko maaf kardiya, varna hum sab aise hi maafi mange ge aur(then say that you have forgiven everyone, else we will say sorry like this)

Avni cuts her in between and says “maaf kiya mene sabko(I forgive everyone).

They all goes and sits back on the sofa. Prakash tells her everything that how neel proves her purity and expose riya.

The guy that came with avni threatens neel smilingly “Dude agar ek aur aaso aaya na meri bhen ke aakho me bata rha hu I will not leave you(dude because of you, my sister ever get even I single tear in her eye then I will not leave you) (he was in background and no one paid attention to him in front of avni)

Neel says”Kabhi nhi aaege I promise(it will never happen I promise)

Amol says”Bhai(brother)? di

Avni says “Amol … actually ”

That same guy interrupts “Amol.. iska matlab ye aman h(amol.. this means he is aman)

She nods.

That same guy “Oh my god… aman.. “and he goes and hugs him, he continues “Dude u have no idea ki me kitna khush ho tumse mil kar(dude you have no idea how happy I am after meeting you)…

Amol is still confused.

He continues “And u have no idea how much your sister loves you and missed you… bachpan se… aman kaisa hoga.. etc etc. (since childhood, how will be my aman. Etc etc)”

Amol gets happy knowing that his sister loves him very much.

“Aru.. intro to du apna..sab confused h(aru.. give your intro. Everyone is confused) avni reminds him

That guy says “Oh yeah.. hey i am aryan.. Aryan mehra..chasni ka bhai(Chasni’s brother).. neela ma ka beta(neela ma’s son).. not biological one..

Everyone except aru, neela and avni gets Confused.

Aru says “When they were in new york.. then saath vala ghar humara tha.. dad humesha kaam me hote the.. and my mom had died long ago.. they were also sad.. to ek din me inke ghar gaya… aur friendship karli avni se.. tab se ye meri bhen chasni ban gai.. and mene neela ma ko apni ma maan liya(when they were in new York, there I was their neighbour, dad was always busy in work, and my mom had died long ago. They were also sad. So one day I went to their house and befriended avni. Since then she is my sister Chasni and neela ma is my mother)

Bebe asks avni “Puttar avni .. aman..amol.. ananya ye sab kya h(avni, amol, aman, ananya? Whats happening)

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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget to hit the like and comment down below please.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak