Hii guys ….I m here again with a new chapter…tried my level best to write as best as I can…..pls don’t forget to tell me how was it……next update will be on 6 Aug Sunday….hope u will like it..and do read the precap and tell me….
Happy reading!!
Here anika was busy in argument and our shivay was feeling guilty for spoiling his date….
Anika – this time I m leaving you…. Otherwise tum Jaisi ladkiyon se toh main apni chameli se baat karti hoon… And anika turns…….
Anika- shivay…. But she doesn’t find him anywhere…..she comes out of the club…. And shouts shivay’s name…. But she doesn’t get any response… She starts walking when she notice someone sitting in the garden… And she knew who was it….. She goes to him and sit beside him on the bench…..
Anika- shivay….
Shivay- anika I didn’t do anything….he started explaining…but anika kept her finger on his lips…..
Anika- shhh…shivay you don’t need to explain anything to me….I told you na I trust you more than myself…
Shivay- but anika….whatever happened inside….
Anika- shivay it was her mistake and I gave her tight slap also for that… she speaks smiling….shivay also smiles….
Now anika thought of some masti….
Anika- by the way shivay….she was not that bad…I mean she was beautiful…you got a nice chance…
Shivay- I wish I never get this chance again….it made me remember the time when tia also used to flirt with me like her…..and he sighs …after few seconds he realises that anika called her beautiful…
Shivay- beautiful? No anika she was just a mad girl….you don’t know how was I feeling when she was touching me….if you wouldnt have called me here then I would have ran away that time only…..he speaks with so much of irritation….anika laughs at his statement…
Shivay- hmm…now you are laughing…
Anika- no shivay I was just imagining the scene….
Shivay- imagining? But you have seen all this inside then why are imagining?
Anika- woh actually shivay i didn’t know what happened inside…..shivay looks on ….as when I entered the club I was searching for you and then I saw you standing in the corner….and that nagini was talking to you….I thought she was talking like that only but when I came near you I saw your face and felt like ….I mean you were so uncomfortable….that’s why I pulled her towards me but god knows how she fell down…and she makes a questioned face…
Shivay- iska MATLAB you didn’t know what she did and then also you trusted me….
Anika- are Maine kab bola mujhe nahi pata tha…..because when she had fallen down…I saw your kanji eyes and mujhe pata chal gaya ki Jo kuch woh Kar rahi thi woh sahi nahi tha….and I felt very angry at that time so I just slapped her…
Shivay- but anika how you just come to know about all this …..just by looking into my eyes..
Anika-shivay I think you don’t know that ….but eyes are mirror to your heart and I had started reading it since I saw you for the first time…..when you were helping that lady who had met with an accident…..and that time only my one and only heart also met with an accident….and I decided that I will meet you one day and will tell you that….
Shivay- what ?
Anika- I wanted to tell you that I just love looking into your eyes shivay….I want to see love for me these eyes….
Shivay was touched by her words….
Shivay- I didn’t know that someone can love me this extent….
Anika- even I didn’t know that even I will have be able to see that love in your eyes….which is just for me…and she smiles..OK so just forget about that nagini….shivay smiles and nods…
Shivay- but anika I m sorry ….just because of me everything spoiled ….
Anika- nothing has spoiled shivay….actually I m happy as if we would have been inside then neither you won’t be able to hear me and nor I…
Shivay- hmm….I was also feeling the same that how will we talk in such a place….
Anika- hmm…but why you called me here then? I mean I really didn’t know that you like these places…
Shivay- yes I don’t like these places at all…but wait I didn’t call you you here…you had sent me the address…
Anika- no shivay actually I had got a msg from your no to come here….
Shivay- what? But ….
Anika- OK let it be…you are here thats enough for me….it is a unique date….
Shivay- yes its unique…..they keep silent for sometime….and were looking here and there….
Anika- mom was right I m not at all romantic …..see we are on a date and instead doing something special…I m making you feel bore…she says innocently…
Shivay holds her hand and lifts them and keeps them near his heart….
Shivay- actually anika….sitting with you is also a very special thing for me…anika blushes…..
Shivay- finally I could see you blushing…..and this made anika’s cheeks glow more red….shivay kisses her hands ….anika had closed her eyes….and shivay was just admiring her ….anika opens her eyes and found shivay looking at her lovingly…..she was just lost in his gaze….
Shivay- do you know anika? Yesterday night I had slept very peacefully……as you had given me something very special….I never felt such an amazing feeling….can I get it today also?
Anika- shivay par Maine toh aapko kuch nahi diya ……she asks innocently..I don’t remember it….waise kya diya tha Maine….and as usual our Mr. Shy again feels shy ….
Shivay- nothing…..I was just saying like that only and he looks at her bracelet….or should I say he was trying hide his wish…….in the mean time anika was controlling her smile….so she knew very well what he was talking about…..
Shivay- I have got something for you…..he speaks smiling…actually I had gone to market to buy something special for you but couldn’t find anything ….and at last I found this….I hope you will like it and he takes takes out chocolate…. ( you can imagine cadbury silk) anika becomes very happy….
Anika- aww…..shivay its my fav….aapko pata hai mujhe yeah bahut pasand this aur ek din Maine papa se kaha tha ki mujhe yehi wali chocolate chahiye par…..she becomes sad and she was also having some tears in her eyes…..she looks at the chocolate and her tears fall on it…one more tear was about to fall when shivay holds it in his hands ….
Shivay- aur USS din tumhare dad ne tum par haath uthaya tha….he speaks looking at her tear drop….
Anika looks at him….
Shivay- anika actually when I had come to meet you yesterday ….that time you were sleeping and in the mean time I was admiring your pictures placed on the table but I found something and he takes out a small dairy which had a line written on its cover ….my best friend….and when I was going to see the diary my hand hitted the lamp and it fell down….and by mistake I kept the dairy with me…..at night when I was changing…… The diary fell from my pocket and I read something …..I hate you dad…..these lines made me remember my relationship with my dad…so I read it….sorry anika I know I shouldn’t have read your personal diary…anika suddenly she starts crying and falls in shivay’s arms ……
Shivay- I m really sorry anika I hurt you….I m sorry…..
Anika- no shivay ….you have full right to know everything ……I m not crying because of you…..she said crying in his arms…shivay I used to love my dad very much but……he didn’t give me back that love….shivay I just wanted my dad to give me a chocolate….so that I could tell my friends that my dad also love me like their dads do….but he slapped me shivay….he slapped me…..she cries…
Shivay – anika I can understand …..even I have gone through this experience…I know how much it hurts when somebody whom you love the most hurts you….even my dad was also …..and he was also having tears in his eyes….they both had suffered from the same pain….shivay breaks the hug and wipes her tears……
Shivay- anika…pls don’t cry ….I promise you…..I will give you so much love that you will not forget every bad happening of your life……now anika had stopped crying…..
Anika- thanks shivay…….
Shivay – so finally I got a chance to listen thanks from you…..now I can also say anika do you have an extra bag so that i can also carry these thanks to my home….and anika laughs remembering her dialog which she used to speak when shivay used to thanks her……they both laugh….
Shivay- so now will you have this chocolate otherwise it will melt….
Anika – hmmm…and she starts unwrappping the chocolate….shivay yeah packet nahi khul Raha…
Shivay-wait let me try and he starts unwrapping the chocolate…and gives it to her……hmmm have it now…
Anika takes the chocolate and forwards it shivay ….shivay looks at her….
Anika- have it shivay….warna ek baat Maine khana shuru kiya na phir aapko nahi milegi…
Shivay- OK….and takes a bite….its very tasty anika!!!!!
Anika- I told you and she starts eating the chocolate ……she was enjoying each bite of the chocolate …..and now she was having chocolate near lips….her hands were also having a layer of chocolate….shivay was just looking at her lovingly…..now she finishes the chocolate ….
Shivay takes out his handkerchief and holds her face…..she looks at him….he was wiping off the chocolate very carefully….shivay was just busy in his work where anika was looking at him…suddenly she holds his hand and stops him…
Shivay- what happen? ….to be continued
Precap: today no precap because I want to ask you all whether you want me to continue the romantic date sequence for sometime or should I end it here and move on to engagement….will do as per your wish…..
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Amazinggggg dii… plz continue dis date….
Continue it… It was just awesome… Loved it to….. Plzz do post the next update ASAP
It was fantastic
Shivika unique date and their conversation was superb
Impatiently waiting for the next part…
Hi Shyra!! I Have Always Been A Silent Reader Of Ur ff.Ur ff Is Really Nice…The Story-line Is Also Perfect…And A Suggestion From Me That Plz Add More And More Shivika Romantic Scenes,I Just Love It….
And Coming To Today’s Epi,it Was Really Nice And A Bit Emotional Too..In Anika’s Language EK DUM KHIDKITOD..
It is awesome dear please continue…
AWESOME BEAUTIFUL CUTE EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT INTERSTING MIND BLOWING ROMANTIC SUPERB????????????
Dear Shyra
Aap Ye Romantic Date Sequence Continue Kijiye.Kuch Different Beautiful Things Bhi Add Kijiye. ShivIka Ki Every Moment Unique And Beautiful Banayiye.
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Fabulous…plz continue this date
Lovely update Di. Can’t express with words but I only write keep writing Di,your writing are fab
Awesome update.. plz continue this date…
Amazing update
superb episode dear ..keep it up ..luvd the way u expressed each and every way
Amazingggg update dr……
Nd yeh continue d romantic date….
Waiting 4 nxt….
Awesome ??loved it..pls continue eagerly waiting for next update soon
Awww such a cute update di
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Plzzz continue date..
Ammazingg update
no plz continue writing awesome ff plz carry on
no plz continue writing awesome ff plz carry on eagerly waiting for the next one
It was such a nice episode dear !!!
Shivika’s first date was surely a unique one. It was just sooo good to see the undying trust anika and shivay have on each other… shivay had trust tht he would get anika back… and anika had trust tht shivay wouldn’t do anythin wrong ??. This is called true love ❤❤❤.
Awww…. shivay got her favourite chocolate for her. Anika and shivay both have gone through the same pain ???… which makes them better companions in life.
I would like to see them goin on some more romantic dates so tht they get to knw each other more better (ex:- their likes and dislikes) and thn engagement.
I loved the epi and eagerly waitin for the next one. Take care and love u ?❤?
Excellent dear….! They trust each other…..this is what I want in IB! Bcz trust is veryyyyyyy important in all kind of relationships. And their pain also same…..so they can understand each other’s pain! U proved Shivika r made for each other in all way!!!! Loved this part. Plzzzzz continue their date in next part also, then show engagement.
Khidkitodddd.