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Next day:-
Shivaay: don’t worry Rudy, we’ll think of something.
Om: yes.
Prinku: yes bhaiya, don’t worry.
Rudra: but I really don’t know what to do.
Anika: why why we’re here! We’ll help you.
Gauri: yes yes, don’t worry, we’ll do something harharaike!
Anika: idea!
Shivaay: please, no one asked you for any ideas….and your ideas are most of the time crazy and don’t worry.
Anika: o hello! My ideas are fool proof and always kidkitod!
Shivaay: they aren’t!
Anika: they are!
Prinku: Bhaiya,bhabhi please stop arguing.
Om: right! And by this we won’t get any solution. Shivaay let Anika speak.
Shivaay: but …
Om: bhabhi, tell me your idea.
Anika: okay, listen. Tej uncle hasn’t noticed rudra’s talent. We should make him notice it! Probably then he might change his mind!
Gauri: but how will we do that?
Soumya: we can get tej uncle to see and hear rudra singing. Probably then, he might be amused by it and recognise his talent.
Anika: great idea Soumya!
Om: but Mr. Oberoi isn’t that kind of person who melts like icecream over these kinds of situations.
Shivaay: yes, but I think that we can give it a try. We have to make our first step.
Rudra: I think an icecream only can cheer me up.
(shivaay and om glare at rudra)
Rudra: okay, maybe not? Lets continue our plan.
(they all discuss)
Later that evening:-
Rudra sits in his room, plays the guitar and sings bawara mann song…shivaay talks to tej and indirectly brings him there.
Tej: He’s wasting his time again! I told him to read those books, the entrance exam is three days away!
Shivaay: bade papa, please don’t do this. He has an amazing talent, just like what om has. Don’t do this to him.
Tej: he’s my son. I know what’s good for him and what isn’t.
Shivaay: Even i’m his elder brother. I have some right on him too. He can’t ever separate from his guitar.
Tej: I think you’re right.
Shivaay: huh?
Tej: I said you’re right. He can’t separate himself from that music. no one can do that.
(he goes…Anika, om and gauri come)
Anika: o bete ki! He agreed!
Shivaay: I don’t know, he didn’t say that exactly.
Om: I don’t think so too.
Gauri: but omkara ji, why do you think so?
Om: cause he’s so so so stubborn and insensitive! I think he’s going to try another trick.
Shivaay: whatever it is, but we’ll not let anything happen.
Anika: yes. we’ll think of something.
(Rudra goes to meet his friend)
That evening:
Rudra comes back and goes to his room.
Rudra: (kisses his guitar case) Rudy is back! And you know what? There’s a national level music and dance competition! And i’m going to ace it!
(he opens the lid of the case, but finds his guitar missing)
Rudra: oh no! Where is it? I think I must have left it in shivaay Bhaiya’s room…
Meanwhile:-
Shivaay: Anika, why can’t you just tell me why you wrote that letter!
Anika: I can’t, and I won’t! What’s you’re problem? Can’t you forget that letter?
Shivaay: seriously Anika? How can I forget it? You broke my heart with those words in that letter.
Anika: I’m sorry shivaay.I didn’t mean any of it.
Shivaay: (holds her close) then what did you mean? (nazdeek hai dil ke plays…)
Rudra comes there..
Rudra: ahem, ahem! Sorry to intrude in your privacy but I think I left my guitar here.
(shivaay leaves Anika)
Shivaay: No, it isn’t here.
Rudra: what! Then where is it? I looked everywhere and asked everyone.
Shivaay: do you think i’m that guitar type? Who sings?
Anika: (murmurs) waise bhi, you can’t expect a person to sing when he is an insult to singing.
Shivaay: Did you say anything?
(they hear Bruno barking)
Shivaay: why is he barking now?
Rudra: he must have seen a rat or something!
Shivaay: you’re right. Go and ask om. maybe he had your guitar.
Rudra: okay then.
(he goes)
Later…
Om: no, I don’t have it. And why will I have it?
Rudra: I just thought you were trying to play it. And my music CDs are missing to.
Om: what? How can this happen?
Rudra: are you all by any chance playing games with me?
Om: do I look mad? Why would we do that?
Rudra: (sighs) I don’t know.
Om: Cheer up. I’m sure you’ll find it.
Rudra: that is one problem and other is that Bruno barking his head off!
Om: can you go check on him please , i’m busy with my sculpture.
Rudra: fine.
(he goes)
In the garden…rudra sees Bruno.
Rudra: Its such a cold night! Brr… hey Bruno, why are you barking so much?
Bruno barks again.
Rudra: oh boy, come here. (he picks him up, he sees a small hurt on his paw.)
Rudra: oh no, I wonder how this happened. Don’t worry Bruno, I’ll just apply some medicine and you’ll be fine.
(just then he notices a glass piece by the side)
Rudra: oh, now I know what happened. (he gets up to go abbr sees fire burning at a distance.)
Rudra: why is there a fire in our garden? Wait here Bruno, I’ll just come.
(he walks ahead and sees someone standing there)
Rudra: who are you?
Tej turns towards him.
Rudra: dad? what are you doing here?
Tej: I was feeling very cold so I just lit a bonfire. I was just about to call all you as well.
Rudra: thank God. It feels so warm and nice.
Tej: I agree.
(just then, rudra notices something popping at the side of the bonfire)
Rudra: hey, that looks like…like the head piece of my…my guitar! (he quickly picks it)
Tej: what are you doing? You’ll hurt yourself!
Rudra: it is a piece of my guitar! Dad, how could you?
Tej: how could I what?
Rudra: I have to get water any put off this fire!
(he turns to go, but tej holds his right hand tightly)
Rudra: ahh! Dad, please leave my hand! I still have pain!
Tej: and what about the pain that you’ve given me?
Precap: Rudra tells everyone that he’s ready to get into business. They all look shocked.
11 Comments
Nice
Nice but pls don’t do this with rudra..how can tej do such a thing….I’m feeling really bad for rudra I hope tej will soon understand rudra feelings.waiting for next part update soon
It is nice one dear.. Sad for Rudy
NYC one… sad for rudra…h
Nice
Pls don’t make Rudy a business man…. Make tej to understand Rudy talent…
Will shivaay and others. Come. To know about tej truth about rudra sodden. Behaviour
Nice update
superb yaar….jst feeling bad for rudy boy ..
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Hey Pixie….awesome yaar! Feeling sad for Rudra!!!