Episode 31
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
chhodo ji ye gusa zara hans ke dikhaao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
chhodo ji ye gusa zara hans ke dikhaao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
As soon as everyone heard dis song, they burst put laughing, but Sonakshi was quiet. She didn’t say anything. Dev gulped, as he knew dis was d silence before a storm.
chhoti-chhoti bato pe na bigada karo
chhoti-chhoti bato pe na bigada karo
gusa ho to thanda pani pi liya karo
khali-pili apana kaleja na jalao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
chhodo ji ye gusa zara hans ke dikhaao
dadi-amma dadi-amma man jao
Dev somehow stopped d song. Sonakshi inserted her fork into d fruits she was eating, n gave a deadly look to Dev.
Sonakshi: (gritting) how dare u call me Dadi Amma!!
Dev was terrified looking at her.
Nikki: Bhaiya, RUN!!
Dev quickly ran, while Sonakshi was running after him trying to catch him, shouting at him.
Sonakshi: Dev, I won’t leave u today, how dare u call me Dadi Amma..
Dev: Sonakshi, I was jst trying to pacify u..
Sonakshi: like dis!!
Dev: arey, but.. Kunj..he sent me dis song, beat him not me..
Kunj: Bhaiya, y r u framing an innocent person..very bad..
Dev: accha, innocent..n U!! I’ll kill u for dis Kunj..
Dev runs upstairs n Sonakshi too follows him. Dev reaches his room n as soon as Sonakshi enters d room, he closes d door from inside n locks it. He pulls Sonakshi by her wrist, n holds her close.
Dev: Sonakshi, I’m sorry..plzz forgive me..
Sonakshi: no, I can’t forgive u now..(she looks at Dev’s sad face) bcz I had already forgiven u at d breakfast table..u were so cute while singing dat song..”Sorry Sorry Sorry” (mimics Dev n giggles)
Dev hugs her tightly n kisses her hair.
Dev: thank u so much Sonakshi!!
Suddenly, from d other side of d door, someone shouts..
“Now start packing!!”
Dev n Sonakshi open d door, to find Shraman, Twinj n NRN at their door. All grinning at them.
Sonakshi: wat packing??
Suman: arey, won’t u both go for your honeymoon..
Dev: honeymoon!!
Twinkle: yeah, we’ve got u honeymoon package for 7 days n 6 nights in..
Devakshi: in….??
Nikki: Venice ??
Sonakshi: Venice, dats such a luvly place..thank u soo much..
Kunj: bhabhi seems too excited, haan?!
Sonakshi: Kunj!! Kuch bhi??
Shravan: ok now, let’s leave them alone..
All leave from there. Dev again closes d door n pulls Sonakshi closer, by her waist n takes her in a passionate kiss.
Next day morning
Dev n Sonakshi r taking everyone’s blessings, before leaving for Venice. All r gathered near d door. Ishwari’s condition is bit better, so she is also there.
Ishwari: Dev beta, take care of Sonakshi plzz..n..u forgot d bag in which Kicchu packed food!?
Dev: maa, we don’t need dat bag..u don’t worry..well eat something at d airport..
Ishwari: but beta, in Venice??
Nani: Ishwari, Venice won’t send back your son hungry..he won’t starve there..so don’t worry.
All laugh n Ishwari too smiles n hugs Devakshi. She breaks d hug, n they leave for airport.
Dev n Sonakshi sit in d car. Kicchu keeps d luggage n they leave.
Dev looks at Sonakshi n she widely smiles at him.
Dev: so..ready Miss Bose!?
He asked forwarding his hand n winked at her.
Sonakshi: it’s Mrs Dixit for u
She placed her hand in his hand n placed her head on his shoulder.
So, dats it!! I end my ff here..plzz don’t ask y..bcz u all know dat!! I didn’t get even 10 comments on d previous episode..even if it wud hv been 10 negative comments, I wud hv been happy dat atleast 10 ppl read my ff n think dat it’s worthy of a comment..I was seriously not going to update..I updated only bcz Kashish requested more than thrice..she’s very angry bcz I promised to update on Monday, but I didn’t update..I was hell busy on Sunday..first of all I was with my friend on friendship day..then we had our cousins’ night out..so I couldn’t use my phone from Sunday 7pm to Monday morning..Monday was Raksha Bandhan, so I was busy till 2pm..I also had a fast on Monday, so couldn’t type on Monday..yesterday was my BBA orientation in college..so I left at 8 in d morning n came back home at 1pm..after reading Kashish’s comment, I was very sad..I do value my readers..I value them a lot..but wud anyone hv d courage to update even after getting such less comments!? She said dat I’m like all d other writers, who leave their ff incomplete..I don’t want my ff to hv dat “incomplete” tag at any cost..so I’ve COMPLETED MY FF!! I had literally researched on Venice..but dats of no use now ? I was planning on starting a Devakshi SS, but dat plan is also almost cancelled.
THANK YOU TO MY READERS ??
14 Comments
Beautiful update…sorry agar meri baat ka bura laga…jo apki ff ki apki value samajhte hai atleast unke liye update dedo plz…or ha i qaiting 4 ur ss….keep writing dont waste ur talent
Thank u for your comment..tumhare comment ka bura nhi laga..continue krne ka abhi bilkul courage nhi h..na hi koi excitement h
U ppl can see d screenshot on my wall, abt how much I had prepared to give u all d most romantic Devakshi honeymoon!!
plzzzzzzzzzzz baby sorry na. abhi bacche ki jaan loge kya?
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can it more romantic???
No idea..
hey it was nice and please don’t stop
i am new and i will comment promise
pkka wala promise
Thank you for commenting Vandana..for now, I can’t say abt continuing it or not..
hey it was nice and please don’t stop
i am new and i will comment promise
pkka wala promise
First of all I am very sorry. I commented on the previous chapter but it didn’t get posted. And I didn’t check after that. Toh saari galti TU ki hai. Plz don’t end it so soon. I will comment. Plzzzzzzzzzzz. forgive me for the last time. And I will recommend the story to some of my krpkab fan frndz. So u will have more comments plzzzzzzzzzzz. at least for the last time meri baat manlo. ?????
Thank u for your comment Ritika..u don’t hv to apologise..plzz
Ya i know how discourged u feel when i dint see the comments n am sry for commenting late as i was busy it was a ending i hope u can go on or on wattpad
No no..plzz don’t say sorry..I understand u were busy..
I won’t be continuing..only 5 ppl hv commented till now, so no chances of continuing ??