Hello this is VHM back with an updates on IB ….please ignore the spelling and grammatical mistakes…
Ragini ‘’hello Bhai’’
Samar ‘’Ragini…where are you? I was trying to reach you and I have some very important info to share with you’’
Ragini ‘’I will answer your questions later ..but tell me what’s the important info ?’’
Samar ‘’Anika has resigned her job as secretary to me and withdrawn her services from Malhotra industries..all in all she is no more an employee to me or you or our company’’
Ragini ‘’Whaat? ‘’ she looked at Anika with widened eyes
Shivaay turned towards Anika and said ‘’Anika are you done with your packing…it’s getting late we should leave now’’
Anika ‘’yeah..i am ready…just have to put on jacket…I guess it is very cold outside…isn’t it Ragini?’’
Ragini ‘’Shivaay is Anika going with you? But why ..i mean… I know now that she is not working for Malhotra’s…but even then why will she accompany you?’’
Shivaay ‘’relax Ragini… OmRu has pressurised me and Anika to work for Oberoi industries now…you know I can never deny my brothers …so she will be working as my secretary now…and what more to say…wherever I go my secretary needs to follow me…’’
Ragini was in shock and was looking at Anika in disbelief…….
Anika ‘’Thank you Ms.Ragini for all the help you and Samar did for me all these 3 months but I had to give in when the matter is about OmRu…..i hope you will have a good time in Sweden and I am sure you are tired so we will make a move now…see you on the day of travel to Mumbai…have a nice trip ahead’’
Anika hugged Ragini and later… Shivaay and Anika started towards airport………
Ragini broke her phone in anger and vowed to herself that she would separate Shivika once they reach Mumbai…without knowing the real truth about they getting married again and taking their relationship to next level in her absence …….
Shivaay and Anika took the flight to Swiss and landed there safely……Anika was amazed to see the beauty of Swiss …..
They went to Interlaken, Luzern, Gorengrat, Zurich, Geneva…since it was winter it helped them to remain attached to each other cosily……..Shivaay did everything to make her feel comfortable , happy and elated……..he bought everything she asked for and everything she didn’t ask for…..the nights witnessed their lovely union …..it was as if she was living a dream…Anika also ensured Shivaay had best personal time of his life with her …….she would kiss him, tease him, love him, fight with him and do everything that makes her Anika…..in only a half day he completed some work and then back to enjoying their private time……..two days passed by as if it was two minutes and they had to return to Sweden to complete the remaining works
By the time they reached their villa in Sweden, Ragini left for Denmark………
The next three days they roamed in and around Sweden and as promised Shivaay took Anika out …..they had their best possible time …….
Finally Ragini completed her work in Denmark and came back to Sweden on the evening a day before their travel to Mumbai……
When Ragini reached Shivaay and Anika were not in the house…..
Ragini looked for both of them…….and irritatedly went to kitchen and asked Staff to give her some vegetables
While she sat eating Shivaay and Anika returned with lots of shopping bags……
Ragini was shocked to see them so happy together
Shivaay looked at Ragini and so did Anika
Anika ‘’mein ye sab andar rakhne jaati hoon’’
Shivaay ‘’ya’’
Shivaay turned towards Ragini and
Shivaay ‘’Ragini so you are back…all good and everything set ?’’
Ragini ‘’yeah…all good…you made me work so much Shivaay’’
Shivaay ‘’it’s good for your and our future’’
Ragini smiled
Shivaay ‘’I mean for the future of our deal…don’t take me wrong’’
Ragini’s face shrinked ……..
Anika too joined them while the staff called them for dinner …….all three left to have dinner
While the dinner was set again with thaam zhaam…Ragini decided to taunt and insult Anika
Ragini ‘’Anika …I know you are not comfortable eating with fork spoon and knife…so don’t worry you have food with your hands…atleast you will not fall unconscious again’’
Shivaay looked at Anika and asked her to stay calm………..Anika gave a smile
Anika ‘’you know what Ragini…time is not same for everyone…I know or I don’t know ..how to eat food with chakku choori is not important…what is important is we enjoy food or not’’ she again gave a smirking smile
Ragini ‘’You No-Class gals..’’
Shivaay ‘’Ragini ‘’ he shouted
Ragini looked at Shivaay who was very angry , while Anika had a layer of tears
Anika left from there…..Shivaay looked on
Shivaay ‘’Anika listen ….Anika …wait a minute..you shouldn’t leave food in middle and go…come back’’ he tried to stop her but it was too late as Anika went in and closed her room door
Shivaay turned to Ragini in anger
Shivaay ”what the hell were you trying to say Ragini? do you think a high class lady should stoop down to such a level to taunt and insult someone…this was not expected from an educated person like you”
Ragini ‘’it just slipped out of my mouth Shivaay…I …I didn’t mean to say anything of such sort’’
Shivaay ‘’Ragini …I already warned you in flight while coming here that you cannot insult or taunt Anika ..as I cannot bear anyone insulting or taunting her …even if it’s you ….and despite that you did the same…you repeated the same mistake…now I think I should also keep my words of breaking all my chords with you…shouldn’t I ? ‘’
Ragini ‘’Shivaay…I am sorry…I didn’t mean it…if you wish I will apologise to Anika …but don’t be angry ‘’
Shivaay ‘’don’t apologise because I wish …apologise if you think you did wrong…and enjoy your dinner as with whatever you did I am not feeling like having dinner with you…good night’’
Shivaay left from there in a huff and Ragini just pushed the table in frustration……….
The day ended and they boarded the flight as per their schedule…………
Anika sat alone in the lounge of flight and was looking out through the window….Ragini joined her and so did Shivaay
Ragini ‘’Anika ..i am ..’’
Anika started leaving from there when Shivaay held her hand…….Anika locked her eyes with him while Ragini looked on with jealousy…..
After a brief eyelock
Shivaay ‘’I think you must stay …we couldn’t have dinner together …let’s have lunch together’’
Anika nodded
The stewards bought them their lunch and before Ragini could get a chance to taunt Anika…Anika put on her napkin on her thighs , tied bib around her neck …picked up fork and knife and started eating…….Ragini couldn’t digest what she was seeing…she never expected Anika to eat so polished and her brain was running in many directions with more number of questions….Shivaay looked at Ragini and smiled within himself
Shivaay POV ‘’Get ready Ragini …you will have the biggest shock of your life once we reach OM’’
Anika completed her lunch and was talking very politely to the stewards and airhostess and was cracking jokes with them…..the inflight staff were also happy to talk to
Anika…..Shivaay was feeling proud of her wife ….Ragini couldn’t bear anymore
Shivaay ‘’Ragini…after reaching Mumbai, would you like to join us and come to OM? I have a surprise planned’’
Ragini ‘’Surprise? For me?’’
Shivaay ‘’yes a huge surprise for you …you know you are my very good friend…so I should also give you the surprise along with maa, papa, badi maa and bade papa’’
Ragini ‘’why not ..i will definitely accompany you’’
Shivaay ‘’thanks…few hours more and we reach’’
Ragini nodded and left to her cabin
Shivaay ensured she left and moved towards Anika…….Anika felt his presence very near to him and excused the staff and started moving towards her cabin
Shivaay too followed and closed the Cabin doors behind
Shivaay held Anika by her waist
Anika ‘’Shivaay your every action will be recorded …so control yourself…we will reach Mumbai very soon’’
Shivaay ‘’yesterday night I missed you and today night God knows what will happen in OM’’
Anika ‘’I hope everything goes as planned’’
Shivaay kissed her cheeks saying ‘’don’t worry I will handle everything’’
Anika too kissed him back and opened the cabin door and pushed him out teasing him….
Shivaay smiled at her antics and left towards his cabin…..
They finally reached OM after a long flight…….As specified by Shivaay a day earlier OmRu did all the arrangements……..and Dadi, Pinky, Shakthi, Tej , Jhanvi , Om , Rudra, Gauri,
Bhavya, Sahil and Khanna were waiting for Shivaay , Anika and Ragini near the door……..
A red carpet with flower bed was laid from the parking lot till the main door of OM……..Pinky was ready with Aarthi Thali ……
Shivaay got down with his usual style and charm , followed by Ragini and then by Anika…..
Shivaay walked over the flower bed laid above the red carpet and soon Ragini and Anika followed…….he reached the elders and took blessings of them
Pinky ‘’OMM …Shivaay ab meri bahu se tho milwana…jab se OmRu ne kaha ki tum mere bahu ko lane wale ho… mein tho khushi se mads ho rahi hoon’’
Shivaay ‘’Mom…relax…mein milwata hoon …tabhi tho maine ye sare intezaam karvaya hain…aur mujhe yakeen hain aap aapki honewali bahu ko bade pyaar aur samman se iss ghar mein rehne dengi…aur iss baar mujhe aapse koi shikayat nahi chahiye……’’
Pinky ‘’haan Shivaay….mein koi shikayat’s nahi karoongi…aakhir teri choice’s tho sabse bests hoti hain’’
Shivaay smiled and looked at OmRu …they showed him Thumbs up and walked away without getting noticed by anyone and reached Anika…….
Shivaay turned back and called out
Shivaay ‘’Ragini ….’’
Pinky went mad with happiness while Jhanvi’s face shrinked………Ragini was elated and was smiling very happily
Ragini POV ”this is what i exactly wanted and this is what is happening…Anika tumne mujhe bahut pareshaan kiya…ab tumhari baari rone ki..mein tumhe Shivaay ki zindagi se bahar fenk doongi…aur woh bhi bahut jald…tayar rehna……”
Ragini smiled and started moving towards Shivaay , when
Shivaay ‘’Ragini…will you please give the way for my wife Anika………’’
Pinky and Ragini were shocked to core while Dadi, Jhanvi, Bhavya, Gauri, Sahil, Shakthi and Tej clapped in happiness…….
Om and Rudra carried the palanquin in which Anika was seated , while the staff that stood beside the carpet threw flowers all the while when Anika was being bought in palanquin…….
OmRu placed the palanquin down and Anika came out of it……..Shivaay extended his hand and Anika held it with pride and happiness……..
Ragini was not able to come out of shock and so was the state of Pinky
Pinky remembered Anika’s words ‘’Mere aur Shivaay ke zindagi mein iss pani ki bahut ahmiyat hain Pinky aunty ji ………aur aaj mein isi paani ki kasam kha ke kehthi hoon ….iss
baar Shivaay khud mujhe maan aur samman se iss ghar mein apni patni bana ke le aayenge’’
Pinky stood still
Dadi ‘’pinky…chal ab Billu aur Anika ki arthi kar aur grihapravesh ki rasam karade’’
Pinky looked at Shivaay and then at Anika
Shivaay ‘’mom…why are you looking at both of us like that? ‘’
Pinky ‘’I don’t accept this marriage…Shivaay did you foget what she did 6 months back…still you git married to her?’’
Shivaay ‘’mom…I knew she did something big 6 months back…but I also got to know she did under some pressure…so I trust her mom and I expect you to believe her…..and above all I LOVE HER …I think you must accept her as you said just a while before’’
Pinky ‘’but you announced your engagement with Ragini and then you are saying Anika is your wife…..’’ she fumbled with every word she spoke
Shivaay ‘’let’s go inside and then I will let you know everything…so now no if’s and but’s…… ’’
Pinky did the arthi of both of them uncomfortably and asked them to come in…….while Ragini looked on in shock
Ragini ‘’I think I should leave now…I am feeling tired’’
Shivaay ‘’Ragini ..i am sure you can stay back for some more time …I promise I will make arrangements to drop you to your home…so come in’’
Rudra ‘’yeah..shivaay bhayya is right Ms.Ragini Malhotra…you have many more things to see and know…so please come in’’ he smiled and so did Om , Gauri and Bhavya
Gauri and Bhavya held Ragini’s hand and took her in……..
Shivika completed the grihapravesh rasam and everyone got seated in the living room
Jhanvi ‘’I am so happy Shivaay you married Anika after whatever happened 6 months before’’
Shivaay ‘’Thanks Badii maa …but all credit to mom and Ragini’’
Pinky POV ‘’OMM…did Anika reveal the truth to Shivaay?’’
Pinky ‘’OMM..i’s ? what did I do and how did I help you’’
Shivaay ‘’Mom …Relax…..i will let you know everything…3 months back my engagement announcement with Ragini was fake…and I cleared it to Ragini…isn’t it Ragini ‘’ he turned to her and asked her
Ragini ‘’yeah..yeah…you said it’’ she spoke fumbling
Shivaay ‘’Ragini helped me a lot to make Anika jealous and Anika did become jealous ……when I entered deal with Malhotra’s ..Anika joined Samar as her secretary so that she can keep an eye on me which I dearly wanted…..then when we went to Sweden…due to unexpected circumstances.. I and Anika got some personal time during which we sorted out our differences…we realized our love for each other….’’
Pinky looked at Ragini angrily…..Ragini kept her face irritated……..
Pinky ‘’but you said you are bringing my Bahu…when did you marry Anika and how?’’
Shivaay ‘’mom…remember you called me and said about the auspicious muhurat that Guruji gave you..on the same day same muhurat I got married to Anika and OmRu, Gauri,
Bhavya and Dadi were the witness…I called them online and infront of them I made her wear Mangalsutra and filled in vermillion in her hair partition…..thus completing the incomplete ritual that was left 6 months back…..so thanks to you for letting me know the muhurat’’
Ragini stood up in anger
Ragini ‘’so you were playing with me Shivaay all these days? You were playing with my emotions? You both were using me and my brother? Didn’t you feel bad for whatever you did with me and my brother’’
Anika ‘’not a word against my husband …you are talking about cheating and feelings Nagini…I mean Ragini…if I start saying what all you did the whole day will not be sufficient’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika relax…look Ragini…I had no intentions to hurt till we reached Sweden…but when I heard the truth from your own mouth …I had to do this’’
Ragini ‘’truth …what truth’’
Shivaay explained what all he heard in the board room in Sweden and then what he did and how he planned ……OF members and Ragini were shocked…
Shivaay ‘’So , when you fell so low…do you think Shivaay Singh Oberoi will leave easily…..you never understood that I loved Anika and I will always love Anika…you were a friend to me …in fact a very good friend to me…and you took disadvantage of our friendship……
You wanted to trap me…..like really Ragini…you wanted me trap me so that I would be left with no other option than marrying you….you continuously tried to insult Anika …you faked…you lied …you did every cheap thing that makes you fall not only in my eyes …but everyones eyes…..i expected your help being a friend of you and you were actually digging the grave……
You forgot that you were dealing with Shivaay Singh Oberoi and this was the major mistake from your end…had you remembered this, then today you wouldn’t have faced this humiliation….You tried to dig grave behind me but you yourself got trapped in it…….
But you know what I valued our friendship and hence continued with the deal…..and as I said ….from now on till the deal ends we will have professional relationship and later no relationship at all…the doors of OM will be shut for you from today…….and if someone still welcomes you then I will break the chords with them too..whether it’s my family or outsiders……..’’
He spoke the last lines looking at Pinky…….
Ragini ‘’I …I am ‘’
Shivaay ‘’you can leave Ragini…before my anger reaches to other level’’
He turned towards Khanna
Shivaay ‘’Khanna drop Ragini safe till Malhotra mansion and come back…ensure she again doesn’t step in OM ever’’
Ragini looked at him angrily
Ragini POV ‘’you will face the consequences Shivaay for this…’’
Anika ‘’Don’t even think of creating new problems for Shivaay after this…because you will have to face me….and now I am sure Shivaay also wouldn’t stop me’’
Ragini looked at her thinking how could Anika read her mind………..
OmRu & Gauri-Bhavya ‘’not you alone Bhabhi…she has to face all of us’’ they together said
Rudra ‘’Ab aap jayengi ki mein aapko bahar tak kisi aur tareeke se chod aaoon’’
Ragini looked at Shivaay teary eyed ,yet controlled her tears and Khanna and Ragini left from there……
Shivaay ‘’let’s relax everyone…we battled this fight too…together
ShivOmRu, AniRiVya hugged together in happiness
Anika went to Pinky who was standing a bit far and said
Anika ‘’pinky aunty ji maine apna kasam poora kiya ……aap keliye meri izzat abhi bhi waise hain jaise pehli thi…aur mein kabhi aapke aur Shivaay ke beech nahi aaongi…Shivaay mere pati hain lekin mujhe hamesha yaad tha aur rahega ki woh mere pati se pehle aapke bete hain… isliye umeed karti hoon aagey aap kuch aisa nahi karengi ki mein majboori mein Shivaay ko sacchayi bata doon… par iss baar agar aap hame alag karne ki koshish kii tho shayad mein apne bardasth se bahar ho jaaoongi’’
Pinky looked on and Anika turned to go when she saw OmRu behind her
OmRu folded hands infront of Pinky and said ‘’Choti maa…Shivaay bhayya’s happiness lies in Anika Bhabhi…so please don’t do anything that will make him sad forever’’
Pinky ‘’I will also see till when will your’s and Shivaay’s relation sustain’’
Anika smiled ‘’pehle aap apne aur Shivaay ka rishtha banaye rakhne ko sochiye…kyun ki aaj nahi tho kal Shivaay mujhse woh sach pooch hi lenge aur iss baar mujhe sach batane se koi rokh nahi sakta…kyunki mein jaan chuki hoon ki Shivaay ko mein sambhal sakti hoon….aur jaha tak mujhe samajh aata hain agar Shivaay ko sach pata chal gaya tho sabse bada nuksaan tho aap hi ka hoga …haina’’
OmRu ‘’aur haan choti maa…hamne aapse abhi vinati kii hain…lekin agli baar seedha vaar karenge…kyunki ab tak aapki soch nahi badli…sambhal jayiye choti maa isse pehle bahut der ho jaaye’’
Pinky couldn’t utter a word…..OmRu held Anika’s hand and took her near Shivaay……
Shivaay ‘’what’s happening Mom?’’
Pinky looked on…..
Anika ‘’nothing …general talks between MIL and DIL…isn’t it OmRu and Pinky aunty ji’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh…then I must also know’’
Anika ‘’you will know everything soon Shivaay if something goes wrong this time’’ she looked at Pinky while speaking to Shivaay…
OmRu ‘’Exactly’’
Shivaay ‘’ohh ok fine’’ he held Anika’s hand, kissed her forehead and said ‘’I LOVE YOU ANIKA and nothing will go wrong this time’’
Anika reciprocated the hug and said ‘’I LOVE YOU TOO SHIVAAY and I believe you will not let anything wrong happen’’
They both hugged each other and very soon all the younger gen came and joined the hug shouting ‘’DIL BOLE OBEROI’’
Everyone left to their rooms being happy and Pinky being Pinky …..
————SHIVAAY’S ROOM
Shivaay pulled Anika towards him
Shivaay ‘’Anika tum khush hon a?’’
Anika ‘’yes..i am very much happy’’
Shivaay kissed her and said ‘’Then make me happy too’’
Anika ‘’what do you want me to do?’’
Shivaay ‘’I am missing Pari…so I want you to be mother of an other Pari’’
Anika blushed
Shivaay ‘’Anika if you blush nothing will work’’
He carried her on to bed and got over her….the lights became dim and then……….
YOU ALL CAN IMAGINE WHAT THEY WERE UPTO !!!
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THANK YOU TO ALL WHO SUPPORTED ME THROUGH OUT THIS SS……I TRIED TO MAKE THIS AS AESTHETIC AS POSSIBLE..IF BY ANY CHANCE I MADE ANY READER UNCOMFORTABLE WHILE READING , I SINCEARLY EXTEND MY APOLOGY’S FOR THE SAME…..THE MAIN PURPOSE OF WRITING THIS SS WAS TO BREAK THE STEREOTYPE THAT SURROUNDED ME THAT I CAN ONLY WRITE ‘’MYSTERY STORIES’’…SO I WOULD DEFINITELY LIKE TO HEAR FROM THE READERS OF THIS SS…. WHETHER I AM SUCCESSFUL IN WRITING ROMANCE OR NOT…….THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN…THANKS A LOT !!!
So this was the Tenth and Final episode …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments positive or negative are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…………
74 Comments
You ar a wonderful romantic writer as well as humourous dear..Loved the OMM if pnky and Ragini And the cute newly weds..Will wait for another 1?
Thank you so much Kajol…thanks a lot…will come with something else when right time comes……
Di u nailed it
Thank you so much Komal…thanks a lot
itssss amazing VHM …….I have read each n every part n each n every word…. u r an amzng writer……
Thank you so much Beba…thanks a lot
Amazing epiiiii………
Love to the core…….
Hope u come with next ff ……….
From the first to last part it was beyond words …….. ……….
I want this to happen in real ib especially that ragini ka sach…….
Love u diii and miss u also
Thank you so much Sumitha…thanks a lot…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…will meet whenever i come up with the next one…till then be happy
Amazing. Pls come with another FF
Thank you so much Swapna….thanks a lot…will come up with something new whenever some good idea strikes my mind
Phenomenal…. juzz amazinggggg…
U fully succeeded in writing a romantic story… as always u even nailed dis too……100 marks from me??….. plz come wid another ff or ss juzz dis or d previous again, no matter on wat zone whether a mystery or a romantic sequence or anything uh feel like…. but do come up soon… waiting for it…
Take care….
Love uhh loads…
N keep smiling…..
Hey Lauren…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you for such amazing lines dear…will come up with something new whenever some good idea strikes my mind…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Lovely u just nailed it…It is really awesome I read the entire part but thought to appreciate at least now u were really awesome in writing dear
Welcome Deepu….Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…so nice of you to appreciate me…thanks again
heyyy di…
firstly …
dunia ka sabse bada wala sorrrrrryyyyyyy for not commenting on the previous two parts ..
I’m feeling reallllllly badddd right now ..my exams finished today i.e. 10th August and I’m feeling on cloud nine but few works are left to be done as well…and now I couldn’t resist myself from commenting….
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you are an all rounder writer di…i was inspired by your mystery skills and now by your romantic writing skills as well…no doubt there were moments when I felt awkward maybe bcz of my age group ..
but you wrote all the parts soooooooo mesmerisingly …
I wish I could write like youuu…and be 0.5% like you..
I’m so sad that it ended …wanted to read further but can understand…
pleaaaasseeeeeee come up with more of your works…we realllllllyyyyyyyy love them and especially me ???
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lastly …thankk youuu tons for commenting and liking the 9th part of my ff ie. AN ISHQBAAZ FF ~BY SAIRISH ..i reallllly means a lot to me …sorry for not replying there itself but was sooo busy that didin’ t got time to reply everyone personally …
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TAKE CARE DI
LOTS OF LOVE
SAIRISH
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Hey Saiiiiiirrrrrrrriiiiiiiiissssssssshhhhhhhh….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot for all the amazing lines you wrote…and sorry to make you feel uncomfortable while reading…i tried to make it as aesthetic as possible…but somehow couldn’t edit those scenes….
you are already an awesome writer dear and i need to learn from you….and posting my opinion on your FF is always a apleasure….
love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Awesome fabulous mind blowing….???loved it to the core di. U r a fantastic romantic writer di…u nailed it.eagerly waiting for ur next work di come back soon….Love you ???????????????so much… Take care
Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you to say that dear…will come back whenever some good idea strikes my brain…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Hey dii
I m slient reader till this update…But i can’t resist myself to appreciate u r talent..
Ur really awesome,….????
Come up another exciting story..??
I m waiting??
Fantastic dii…..and dii today only I read Ur ff “the past and the present”….it was superb…..and will wait for another one desperately…..
I bet u should read di’s MMKAD ff it’s ???? u could find it in di’s portal …….
Succesful matlab….. full on khidkitod romantic Ff likhti ho tum and this was one of the best ff ever you written…… hope you will come back once again with a bang..
Keep writting like this. ……….good luck my dear frnd lots of love to you……
Thank you so much Arpita…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear….will try to come back soon whenever some good idea strikes my mind…loads of love to you …keep smiling and take care
Hey that was Super awesome khidkitod update. Loved Ragini and Pinky’s Reaction to ShivIka marriage news.
You truly are a wonderful writer. Loved your mystery stories as well as this romantic story.
For this story i think you should also write epilogue of this story.
Also looking forward to another of your stories
Thank you so much Dipti…thanks a lot……awee so sweet of you for those awesome lines dear…i haven’t planned any epilogue…if i write then i will definitely publish it…filhaal will work on your storyline….keep smiling and take care
OMM u Jst made me restless ….. Di u r the best Whether it’s thriller r romantic u Jst keep nailing the topic????….. Waiting for ur another kidkithod ff …. See di my character is tat if I wait for smthng I’ll keep biting my nail & if u make me Nailess by making me wait long tym ….. I’m sure that I’ll complain to ACP Bhavya abt my own pyaari Didi???…… luv u a lot di????
Hey Ajeeba…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear for those lines…will come up with something else whenever a good idea strikes my brain till then keep yourself and your nails also safe….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…ha ha ha ha Complaint to ACP Bhavya…ha ha ha ha
Hi there..
I m a silent reader but I love this ff so thought to comment about it..
Plz continue this ff..this is my favourite and I want to read it..everyday it is like a routine for me to read ur ff..whenever I read it I feel literally happy..u r such a wonderful writer…I jst can’t express how wonderful u hv written..it jst took my heart..
U r cannot continue with dis story then plz write another ff..but I recommend do continue this ff..u can expose pinky..and many more things…u r d best writer for me
Lots n lots of Love
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Hey Avika…welcome …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….this ss unfortunately ends here …awee thank you so much for those amazing lines dear…i will come up with something new very soon…thank you so much for those compliments dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Di this was wonderful…. amazing… awesome..superb.. mind-blowing…
Di not only u passed in romantic genre but also topped it with bonus marks…???
Di u r just simply multi talented…
U wrote Everything whether be a mysterious or a romantic one very beautifully that the readers can imagine it
..nd that’s the beauty of a writer… U made the reader stuck nd addicted to u stories..
I know u’ll come up again with another khidkitod work of urs…
This story was too good…not so many villains nd plotting…only lovely Shivika moments… I really enjoyed it…loved it..
Love u too..
Nd best wishes for everything….
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Hey Tanzeela…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…OMG so many compliments are not digustable…yeah will come up with something else very soon……love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Nice , aesthetically romantic
Thank you so much Deepmala…thanks a lot
Hi my friend… how are you doing?… sorry I couldn’t comment on the last episode. As I always said that You are amazing as always, in this episode also you did a great job. You concluded this part with oh my mata of nagini and pinky, Anika’s coming back to OM with all respect, omru’s great support for their bhabi, Anika’s tit for tat reply to pinky, Anika and Shivay’s cute romance in the flight and in their room. everything is just perfect. Even though this is a romantic story( not robotic romance), you handled it with modesty. You don’t have to apologize. Last but not least, you know that I will wait for your comeback very soon and until then I will definitely revisit this edition of my favourite writer VHM. Keep smiling and Stay blessed. Bye and take care dear…
Hey Katz….i am doing good dear…thank you…how about you ?
Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…you are such a sweet heart …you encourage and motivate me immensely…and this makes me write very carefully, to match upto your expectation….yes dear…i will come back whenever something good strikes my mind….keep smiling and take care……..
I loved your stories and I read all your stories more than 2 times. The first story I don’t know what to say. I loved your way of writing. You are really a gifted writer. Hope you will come with another awesome story track. Eating for your next dhamakidher performance.
One more thing thank you for your correct updates. You updated your story every day in the scheduled time itself. Once again thank you for giving such a wonderful story. God bless you with all the amazing ideas. And all the best for your future life.
Hey Sharmila….welcome…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so overwhelmed to read the entire opinion of yours…thanks a lot once again as this opinion made my day ….thank you for your patience and time…thank you for the wishes…keep smiling and take care
Beautiful ending,loved it
Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot…i am glad i could find four words instead of tow on this final update…my wish of seeing long opinion from you is yet to be fulfilled…will wait for it though…….
Khidkitod conclusion di !!! U are great in writing all genres of stories… be it romance… mystery… comedy… or any other. U have a beautiful talent inside u… which we have all seen. U have let out all the frustration of nagini and pinky frm ishqbaaz very well in this ff.
Shivika trip to switzerland was beautiful… though it was short. They did everything possible in their hands to make the other happy ?…. and this is wht i love the most… they both caring for each other’s happiness before theirs. Shivay tryin to romance in the plane as well… such a chalu cheez doesn’t leave a single chance to romance with her ?. Wht a grand welcome of anika in oberoi mansion ( i preferred to ignore pinky and nagini at the moment but their fuming expressions would have been worth watchin ?)… omru brought her in the doli and then she was welcomed with flowers and all ?. It was all just so beautiful and magical. The last scene was soo nice… anthr picture in the process ??.
I was so eagerly waiting for nagini and tht pinky’s oh my maata. U showed their scenes and each of their emotions so nicely. Be thankful nagini u didn’t get to face the actual wrath of the great shivay singh oberoi… otherwise u would have done tata bye bye to the world by now… seeing his anger and protective nature for his wife. When shivay called her name outside oberoi mansion… uske man me laddoo phooth rahe the lekin uske baad aise ghusse se lal hogayi ke uske sar pe hamburger bhi fry ho sakta tha ?. No more of nagini in oberoi mansion… ab rudy ka mood isss manhoos ko dekh ke kharab nahi hoga. So heartwarming to see how all the youngsters stood together with anika when she warned nagini.
Anika spoke to pinky in the right way and it was much needed as well… she first tried to explain like a good person but aftr tht she warned her not to do anythin wrong otherwise she would have to face the wrath of ASSO. Omru u are the best devars anyone could ask for… always standing by their bhabhi like a shield and protecting her frm all evils like nagini and supporting her in uniting with shivay or any other thing.
Happiness is back in oberoi family with the comeback of their eldest bahu anika as well as their old billu ?. I loved the whole ss di… u r just brilliantly amazing when it comes to writing be it any kind of genre… u r just awesome and a khidkitod writer.
Though the wish of writing for a serial may not be fulfilled but u can make short movies or smthn of tht sort ?. Thank u for givin us such mind blowing, heart whelming stories. Take care di and love u❤❤❤❤.
Hey Maryam…
Thank you so much for the khidkitodh opinion as always…i waited for your opinion everytime i posted an episode…thank you so much for the support and encouragement and for all those amazing lines…yeah will try to contact someone for short movie …that’s a good idea..thank you for this dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care
Acchaji..mujhe time nahi hain…mein kal baat karungi…untill then take these words…
U made me proud sissy..cant explain the beauty of this ss in few words.
Dii…really i cant explain d beauty of this ss…its very calm..peaceful..romantic..giving all positive vibes from d very first episode.
The most beautiful part is omru holding d palanquin and shivaay askingfor her hand…wah..i really wish something of this sort happen in serial too….such a lovely part.
So d beautiful story ended and i know u will comeup with another one..waiting for that..bye dii.
Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….awee so sweet of you to write such amazing lines for me…i am so happy to learn you liked this SS….yeah will come up with something new whenever some good idea strikes my brain…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Ufff …. totally nailed it …. each and every line of thiss story was something beautiful written… i am seriously wishing to read it again ….. i guess you can write anything…. i must say your writing skills are god gifted.. and pinky and ragini OMM……. and thank you sooooooooooo much for giving me the different shades of SSO…. his tadi … his romance…. thank you sooooooo much
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Hey Bestie …thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you dear for those amazing lines…YOUR SSO is different na…i am happy because you are happy…love you loads Bestie…keep smiling and take care
You were very good in as I’ll miss you and your ff????????
Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…will miss you till i come up with something new and then we will be meeting in the comment section once again…am i right or am i right?
Moti Ben tame mane bounce kari didho.???
Fantabulous chappy?
U nailed it Dii…
You always make me travel Wow to Awwww and Aww to wow and again Wow to Awwwwww????????
Khidkitod answer by AniOmRu to Pinky and Shivaay to Ragini.
But i would love if u had added Samar❤?.
Naughty Shivaay ????
Strong Anika??
Loved it each and every part.
You r saying you r Mystry Queen then i would love to read Mystry story from you❤❤❤???????
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°°°°°°°°°°°°☆❤Romance❤☆°°°°°°°°°°°°
Hey Bro…Gujrati…..thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you for all those lines….
I never said i am a mystery queen but most of the F’s or SS’s i wrote were in that genre….not such a good writer i am ….read MMKAD of Nikita…i am sure you will like it as the concept is Nikita’s…
Love you bro…keep smiling and take care
Wonderful di…. u just nailed it… Beautiful story n happy n perfect ending… sso ne achha sabak shikhaya ragini ko… loved anika is back in his khodkitod avatar rone dhonewali anika bilkul achhi nai lagti tadibaaz anika ne iss baar kya javab diya hai pinky aunty ko too good… aww this trio devars n bhabhi their bond so adorable…. chahe koi bhi situation kyu na ho omru unki anika bhabhi ko pura support karte hai…. u r the best di chale wo mystery stories ho ya phir romantic… come back soon di… Eagerly waiting for ur next work……
Lots of love
take care…
Hey Ankita…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so nice of your for those awesome lines….will come back once a good idea strikes my brain…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care
Superbb di..This part is really worth to a conclusion..khidkitod end..I read your previous works..Tou are better at romantic than in mystery..You should write romantic ones.. Also..plzz give qn epilogue
Thank you so much Anitaa…thanks a lot…i am so happy to know you liked the SS…thanks a tom once again…he he he so sweet of you dear…i haven’t planned for any epilogues but if at all i write i will for sure publish it
AMAZING EXCELLENT FANTASTIC GREAT MIND BLOWING OUT STANDING PERFECT SUPERB????????????
Dear Vhm
Today Episode Is Best Ending???All Part In This FF I Really Enjoy???Exepect Naagini Insult Anika?Your All Story I Really Like It Your Writing Skils Perfect In All Emotions I Really Love Your Story????I Know Aap IB Ki Current Track Se Apna Storys Banayegi Thab Aage Aap RuMya Ko Add Nahi Kar Paaungi Ye Bhi Patha Hai,But Please Try Karna RuMya Ka SS Ya OS Ya FF Banane Ka.Serial Main Unka Story End Hua Tho Main Thoda Upset Tha But Ab Wo Upset RuMya Include FF Read Karke Kam Kartha Hu.But Ab Tho Kuch FF Main RuVya Bhi Hai Tho RuMya FF Thoda Kam Hotha Hai.Aisa Nahi Main RuVya Ko Accept Karne Ka Try Na Kar Raha Hu.But Same Love Jo RuMya Ke Liye Hai Wo RuVya Ko Nahi De Pa Raha,Patha Nahi Kab Main Unhe Heartly Accept Karunga.Aapse RuMya Ka Story Write Karne Ko Request Iss Liye Kar Rahi Hu Because I Love Your Storys And Your Writing Skils So That Why I Request You.But Iam Not Force You.Come Back With Another Story?
Keep Smiling And Take Care And Stay Safe???
Hey UF,
thank you so much for that khidkitodh opinion of yours…thanks a lot…i can understand your view …i know you miss RuMya but i generally write my SS or FF’s based on the current tracks and so RuMya will not fit…however if i write something from previous tracks i will definitely include and involve Soumya…thank you so much once again for the support dear…keep smiling and take care
Awesome Story di… simply fantastic.. fabulous Just perfect. You are no doubt the best ff writer here. Hope to read another kidkitod story of yours real soon
Thank you so much Himani…thanks a lot…awee thank you for the beautiful compliment…will come back when some good idea passes by my brain
Wow di!! Marvellous ending with ponky n nagini’s OH MY MAATA!! Still do u have any doubt di, that u r successful or not…..OF COURSE 100% U R SUCCESSFUL ROMANTIC WRITER!
Full part is just perfect…. No words to explain di! Shivika’s cute romance, OmRu’s support for Anika, ponky n nagini’s shocking faces, OF’s happy faces…….all the scenes n dialogues r perfect di….fabulous!!
Take care n keep smiling Mrs. Jhanvi Singh Oberoi……….hehehehe!!!! Love u loads di.
HEY Gayu aka Mr.tej Singh Oberoi….
Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee thank you for those lines dear…thanks a lot once again…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care