Hiii guys.. This is the first time am writing
I hope you guys like it..
All the characters as same in the serial and there is no mishra and agarwal thing
So lets come to the story.
Sanchi before going to do internship in SDCH goes to her friend’s marriage.
At her friends engagement day
All are enjoying the function but sanchi just thinking about jaya and anand malhotra and how to reveal the anand’s true colors to all.
Pragya : abeo itna kya soch rahi ho(what are you thinking?)
isha : may be about her prince charming
sanchi: phir shuru hogaye tum donom?
bride: sanchi tumne promise kiya thaki you will enjoy all functions and don’t be sad
sanchi: ofcourse . And i never be sad again ab chalo tumhara fiance wait kar raha hoga tumhara liye
All goes outside beside the swimming pool.
And both bride and groom’s friends are there.
All are started to play truth and dare.
pragya spin the bottle and stopped on isha
pragya: truth or dare?
isha : always dare…
pragya : then see the uncle there who wears red kurta goes to him and say i wanna marry u
isha : its not fair
sanchi : go ahead isha you said na always dare . Go and enjoy now.
isha goes and completes the dare.
And akhil( grooms friend) spin the bottle and stops on sanchi
akhil: truth r dare
all others said dare dare dare..
sanchi : k dare
akhil : then see a man is coming towards here go and propose him
sanchi : hey i don’t know who he is how will i?
others: No you have to and cheers sanchi
sanchi breaths high and starts moving towards him.He wears blach suit and he looks so hot(obviously he is none other than kabir kapoor groom’s childhood friend came to attend his marriage)
sanchi : hii.i know you don’t know me but i wanted to tell you something that usually i don’t believe in love at first sight but when i just saw you i was wrong.I can’t keep my eyes on anything.i want to live my whole life with you .I love you.I don’t know you love or not but i just want to share my feelings towards you.
kabir : are you lost your mind.I don’t have time to listen your stupid pranks.go now.
sanchi nd kabir comes to beside swimming pool
sanchi : How khadus is he?akduu
isha: don’t call him like that look he is so hot
pragya: by the way he is groom’s friend
isha: whats his name?
sanchi : hitler
pragya:hahaa no kabir
sanchi about to turn but slips due to lehanga and about to fall in pool but kabir saves her by holding her waist and they had an eye lock.
After sometime they came into senses and parted away.
At sangeeth :
All get ready for sangeeth
sanchi wearing a blue lehanga and kabir blue suit.
Chits are ready for choosing their partners and
isha – akhil
pragya – sid
sanchi – kabir
etcc
All are started danching and kanchi hesistantly stepped into dance floor
Phir bhi tumko chahunga
main phir bhi tum ko chahunga plays
And kabir puts his one hand again her waist and other joins with her hand
sanchi puts her other hand on his chest.
They lost in each other eyes while dancing.
sanchi break the ice and said whatever yesterday she said was a dare and she has no such feelings for him or anyone
kabir: shhh.and places his finger on her lips and says akhil said me that a while ago that Its a dare
sanchi : sorry
kabir : said na its kk
sanchi : friends?
kabir : k
At marriage :
All ladies get ready very beautifully
while they are coming kabir just mesmerised by seeing a girl wearing a beautiful pink lehanga with loose hair and simple ornaments and coming towards him.
kabir : murmering you look so gorgeous
sanchi : what?
kabir : nothing you look good today by the way
sanchi : thank you
And marriage completed and all went to their places.
kanchi just lost in each other thoughts and they don’t realize that they have feelings for eachother.
Next day at SDCH:
kabir:Shouting on some nurse and says all reports are to be in my desk in 1 hour.
nurse : k sir.and goes.
ms.fernadise: dr.Kabir this is the interns list and batch starts from tomorrow.
kabir: k
and he checks the list and found a name familiar
sanchi
he thinks about her and their dance etcc
He realized he is liking her but thinks i don’t know her surname
this is just a name lets forget it and starts preparing a presentation for interns.
sanchi isha pragya came to SDCH
sanchi : I have to complete my father’s wish
isha nd pragya: u will and we support u
sanchi : Thankyou guys
They enter into SDCH and veer comes there and plays a prank with them .
At class room:
All interns are in class and kabir enters.
kabir:Good morning all of you
all: Gm
kabir: turns to board and starts writing something
sanchi pragya isha nd veer: excuseme sir
kabir: first day also late how you guys think you become doctors and turns towards them
kanchi just look at each other and shocked.
sanchi : kabir..tum yaha
kabir: smiles in mind and says its dr.kabir and come in
sanchi : sorry sir.
After completing the class he distributes the files and goes to his cabin.
pragya nd isha: omg i can’t believe he is dr.kabir the strict and hot doctor here and he looks good in marraige but now he is totally different
sanchi:khaduss but he is nice
pragya isha: starts teasing her
nurse came to them and says dr.sanchi dr.kabir is calling you in his cabin
sanchi:knock the door and may i come in sir?
kabir : yes.why dont you tell me that you are a doctor and you are coming here.
sanchi: you also don’t said you are a senior doctor in SDCH.
kabir: k . you are my student here and in off time you are my friend
sanchi: whispers how khadus ye bhi aisa bol raha hain ki mujh par ahsan kar raha hain
kabir: Did u said something
sanchi : no nothing murmers hitler
In these days kanchi became best friends and both have feelings for each other.
But both are said to themselves that they are teacher nd student relation between them and can’t think like that about each other.
On one day kabir realized that he can’t stay away from her and can’t lose her so he decided to propose her and calls sanchi in his cabin.
sanchi : may i come in sir
kabir : yes.
sanchi : i have study the file of critical condition patients and
kabir stops her and goes near her and says shhhh. its off time and i call you to tell u something
sanchi to herself how khadus sometimes kind and sometimes hitler
kabir : then meet me at 8 pm on parking lot we are going out
sanchi :out but why?
kabir: comes close to her and she steps backwards and hit the wall
he pinned her to the wall and lean on her and says in ear be ready and im waiting for you .
And they parted.
At eve.
sanchi wearing a light pink saree comes towards the kabir’s car and kabir just admiring her beauty.
sanchi: kabir . where are you lost
kabir: no.Get in
At restaurent
kabir: sanchi i want to tell you something .when you first came and said i love you i thought u also like other girls.But after that i realized u r not those type of girls who try to impress me.You r unique and you don’t have any need to try to impress me because i already fallen for you.I love you sanchi.
sanchi with teary eyes : i love you too but my first priority is my goal and my marriage can’t effect me acheiving my goal
kabir: putting finger on her lips and says this relation would never effect your goal and after completion of your internship we will marry.
and kabir started to clean her tears on her cheeks and they share a deep and passionate kiss and they parted after lack of air.
sanchi embrassed by the sudden gesture of kabir and blushes and turns red
sanchi: I need to tell you about my past and shares all about anand deeds
kabir: i don’t believe he could do that and he is a mentor to me and i don’t know itna kuch ho raha hain illegal is hospital mein and iam unaware of that.
sanchi : u know na now.its k
kabir: we will collect the proofs against him .
sanchi : s we will
And they both starts towards the car.
kabir drops her to the hostel.
In hostel :
pragya: kya huan .Tumhare chahere pe itna muskurahat ke vajah
isha: bataona kya hua aur kaha gaya tune
sanchi: i will tell you but keep it as a secret.kabir proposes me
pragya nd isha : aur tune kya kaha bataona jaldi
sanchi: haa kah di aur main usko anand malhotra ke bare mein sab kuch batadi
isha: ab tho hame kabir jiju ki madad bhi milegi proofs ikatta karne mein
sanchi : jiju ?? stop it isha . he is our teacher in duty time
pragya: jo bhi ho wo tho hamare liye jiju hi hain
and they go to sleep
and sanchi messaged him
sanchi : u went home safely
kabir : s
sanchi : k gud night then
kabir : itani jaldi
sanchi: kya karun kal subha mera shift hain aur mera khadus senior tho mujh par uska sara gussa nikal lega agar main late hua tho
kabir: stop taunting yaar
sanchi:hahahaa
kabir: k gud night tomorrow 7 am report me in my cabin.
sanchi : k bye khadus..
At mrng:
sanchi comes and sees kabir in his cabin
kabir: u come late by 1 min 35 sec
sanchi : not next time
kabir : k .
and they started to collect proofs against anand goes to prohibited area and gets all proofs about anands deeds
At eve:
police comes and kabir gives the evidence to them and lashes out angry on anand and kanchi succeed in sending him behind bars.
kabir offers sanchi to drop her at hostel and they goes towards car and it suddenly starts raining
sanchi starts dancing and feels it and kabir just admiring her.
sanchi grabs kabir and both drenched in rain and dance romantically and share a passionate kiss and parted ways after thundering and starts towards car and sanchi slips due to wet and kabir holds her by waist and screen phrases on their pose.
And they lead a happy life thereafter.
thats the end guys.i hope it reached your expectations and its a bit lenghty and in a fast forward mode.Actually this is my first writing so if any mistakes than forgive me.I need your suggestion guys.
43 Comments
its gud dear
your intro was amazing
keep writing
Nice…. Awsm… But If it’s the end…. Then what will be in the second part…. Because this is ur first part right…. Because in title it’s written Part 1….That why I am litte confused…
while submiting im not mention anything
it automatically takes part 1
and thankyou so much for liking it
Bhut bhut bhut sweet.wonderful,awesome and ??amazing and beautiful story taar.keep it up …………..??
thanks alot anu
Superrr.I really liked it.????
It’s not long and it was upto my expectation. Keep writing dear.???
im glad u liked it and thankyou
It is so amazing hema loved it a lot.
thanks a lot dear
It was awesome..but I am a bit confused…if it’s end them what will you write in the second part because in the title it says episode 1 so you will continue it? Anyway if you will post your next part soon ??
its the end and while submiting it automatically take part 1 and i forget to wrote os and it may automatically takes as first part
and thankyou sooooooo much for loving it
and by the way im huge fan of ur writings
Wow it’s so amazing superb mindblowing
thank you so much Ashnita
Hema dear welcome to writing???!!! The epi was awesome ??? and you did a great job but is this a OS or are you going to continue?
its os i forget to add that and it takes automatically as part 1
next time i will be careful while submiting
thanks a lot dear
hello Hema……ur os was simply amazing……..loved it a lot…kanchi scenes were more or less like a tashan waala love-story………keep writing & eagerly waiting for ur nxt update asap………
thanks a lot
Hey hema it was amazing keep writing dear.
thankyou so much
nice one….i loved it
thanks
Its nice….Im eagerly waiting for the next one with a hope that u will write soon
thanks a lot and i’ll try to write soon
Bahut bahut cute and superb
thanks alot neera
It’s really very cute story and if get time then write some more os or ff
thank u and i’ll try to write more
It’s amazing Hema superb but I have doubt if it’s ending here and it is a part 1 then what will be next part confused. But this was awesome
thanks a lot divya
actually while submiting it automatically takes part 1 and sorry for the confusion
next time i will submit carefully
Hema ur os is simply amaz dear keep it up post more ff or os waitting for nxt
thanks niyaa
i’ll try to post soon
Really amazing Yr… An the best part was marriage part…… U r really good no.. U r awesome… Plz start writing next… Loved it!!
An what a coincidence I wrote my ff and use song phir bi tumko chahunga and now I read this… But it was wow!
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thankyou soo much im huge fan of ur ff and it really means alot that you liked it
serial me Kabir k sat Kya hoga wo to pata nehi but m still happy that we hv wonderful writer like u …. thanks a lot for making it kanchi??
thanks a lot
and im also huge fan of kanchi
don’t know what happens in serial
Awesome hema perfect loved it to the core superb mind blowing ???????I would love to read more frm u sweetie
u r d inspiration for me to write
all ur ff nd os im huge fan dear
thanks for liking
It was awesome to have such an amazing OS from you. A well thought out plot and with so much romance was amazing. The OS was so cute and confetti should have been thrown for having such a stupendous start. Pls write more. Ur OS was really amazing to read. Can’t wait to see more work from you ?
thanks a lot it really means a lot to me
i love ur ff and i will definitely write another os
thankyou so much dear
this is amazing dear
but u can elaborate other functions like haldi mehandi etcc
actually im south indian and we have different rituals compare to north
so thats y i cant elaborate more
and thanks