Hiii guys…thankyou sooooo much every one for such lovely comments.Thank you sooooo much for all the love.
And im now trying to write a new story and this is ff not os and there is slight change in the character’s relation . Hope you guys like it.
The characters are
sanchi and nisha are sisters who lives with their mother jaya and nisha completed ms and sanchi doing mbbs and her final term is going on.
sanchi is independant and wants to live with her mom .
kabir and veer are brothers and their parents dead at their early ages and they adopt a 12 year boy chotu and lives in us.
veer is elder and a doctor in us and kabir also completed his mbbs and started working in the same hospital where veer is working.
kabir : veer, ab tho tum shaadi karlena chahiye.
chotu: yes bro nd we want a bhabhi
kabir : look at this(kabir showing matrimony website) veer, her name is nisha and look at her profile she is perfect for you
veer : k guys we are going to india in next week and talk to them
kabir : next week oh no! but i have some work here.First you guys go on and i will meet you there
veer : k then gud nyt and all goes to their rooms
At india :
sanchi : mom ab tho nisha shaadi karke chali jayegi ab sirf tum aur main
nisha : stop it sanchi.One day you also leave mom and every girl one day leave their home
sanchi : but im not leaving mom
jaya : chalo ab tum dononka tho har roj yahi chalega
sanchi and nisha makes puppy faces
jaya : by the way tomorrow evening veer is coming to see you nisha and go to bed have some sleep .
nisha : k mom gud nyt
sanchi : gud nyt ma love u
Next day at afternoon
pragya nd isha friends of sanchi
pragya nd isha in the bus and sanchi chasing the bus and climb it
sanchi : i need to go fast the groom might have come
pragya : abeo shadi nisha di ki dulha tumhe dekhne nahi aa raha hain
sanchi : pata hain phir bhi mujhe bhi tho dekhna hain
isha : k bye sanchi we will meet you tomorrow
sanchi : k bye guys
sanchi is in the way to her home.
precap : veer nd chotu comes to see nisha and kabir make a visit to india
Hope you guys like it more kanchi scenes after kabir visits india
Once again thanks for the support guys.
21 Comments
It is really very good hema plzz post nxt episode asap.
thanks
its sooo nice dear
waiting for the next episode
Yaar it’s awesome lovely can’t wait update soon
thankyou soo much
Hema, it was a good one…nice intro it looks like kanchi will hate each other and will finally fall for each other….nice one post your next part as soon as possible
thank alot actually its basic plot if taken from a movie and i made changes to it
hope u like it
Omg the most best or u can say ajeeb I find like Kabeer as younger brother nd veer as elder still story is going to be superb mindblwimg have a happy nd great writing z?
thankyou trisha i take basic plot from some movie and developing it into another story
hope u like it
Hey hema awsm dear an amaz n different story in which no mishra agarwal confusion n i like u used veer n kabir as brother cant wait plzzzzzz update nxt today asap
yaa there is no mishra agarwal here
thank you dear
It is very nice….plz update asap
thank you
Soooo soooo soooo amazing…. U rocked it!
thanks alot
Nice
thankyou
hema dear it was simply amazing……… just amazing…………keep up the good work dear……….
thanks alot riya
it really means alot
Thnkx fr ecepting my request to write a ff . And this ws great pps post next one asp
thank you sooo much