Next day…
Everything is OK.everyone wakes up follow their daily routines…
Sara is little bit tensed …
Avni:what happen sara
Sara: nothing.
Avni:plz don’t try to hide with me.
Sara:do u know ,Justin wants to meet with me , actually he wants to have coffee with me.
Avni: what
Sara:yes ,I think he also likes me.
Avni:so what u will do ,do u know him well .u both met just 3 days before .
Sara:I will not do anything,u have to do.
Avni:what ,plz don’t involve me in this.
Sara:plz ,I know if u will talk with mum and dad ,they will definitely not refuse .
Avni:but why
Sara:plz for me.
Avni:ok fine .
Sara hugs her..
At night
On the dining table..
Sara:mom I want to take permission for one thing.
Shweta:what is that
Sara:mom actually that Justin.
Shweta: then what
Sara: actually he wants to go for coffee with me.
Shweta:what ??then what u have replied
Avni interrupted their talks…
Avni:mom actually she refuses to go with him. I think so she has to go,as she get one friend.he is nice guy
Shweta:avni if she don’t want then leave it.
Avni:but mom it is good if she interact with people and he is designer and may be in future he help him.
Avni sign to Mr mehta so that he will speak on behalf of her
Mr mehta:yes avni is right ,I think she has to go .
Shweta:fine if avni is saying,what do u think neel
Neel:but she don’t know him well ,then how can we allow,ok let it be as avni said so mom let her go.
After sometime..
Sara hugs avni…
Sara:thank u thank u, bcoz of u my problem sort out.
Avni:ok fine.now let me go as I have to wake up early in the morning.
Avni went to her room.
She pick her pillow to go and sleep on couch
but neel stops her..
Neel:avni u can sleep over here ,I don’t have any problem.i think we can trust each other.
Avni gave a sweet smile..
In next morning…
Neel wakes up and found that avni is holding his hand ,her face is covered with her hair, with lovingly neel is removing the hair from her face , suddenly avni wakes up they both share an eye lock…
Neel: actually I….
Avni:it’s ok k.
Avni went to the washroom and neel rub his hair and smile …
Avni is little bit tensed from last night as she is not able to digest that how can be anybody so much friendly within 3 days.
Sara:which dress should I wear
Avni is losted in her thoughts
Sara:dont worry he is nice guy.
Avni:r u sure.
Sara:yes I am sure.
At 5 pm
Justin came to receive sara.
He took her at lonely places.over there she saw Krystal and get shocked…
Krystal:I know that u get shocked
Sara is really in shocked.
Krystal:u have already all met with Justin he is my brother.bcoz of u only neel didn’t marry me.u came in between us.so I planned all this to take revenge with u .bcoz of u only my life destroyed.
Sara:why don’t u tell all truth to ur bro,why r u hiding with him.and I will see u Justin later on ,I trust u and u cheated me.
Justin:its shame that u r talking about trust ,u and ur brother cheated my sis,thanks to vivek that he married with her.
On the other side avni didn’t feel good …
On her phone she search about Justin and go in his biography and shocked to know that Krystal is her sister .
She makes call to sara but sara is not picking the call as she left her phone in the car.
Avni call the security incharge of house and told him to track the phone of sara .they get success in tracking her phone.without informing anybody avni reaches to the place.
There she find sara , Justin and Krystal
Krystal:it’s good u also came over here I will take the revenge with both of them.
Avni:till I am over here u will not be success in ur plan.
Krystal pointed the gun on avni
Justin get shocked to see this as he is unknown about Krystal .
Krystal: now I will kill u and then I will ask him to forget me and I will get marry with him.
Justin understand all the situation and he inform the police.
But suddenly she shoot to avni and suddenly sara came in between she get shoted and Justin run towards Krystal to snatch the gun but till now she shoots two bullets .
Police came and arrest Krystal and Avni rushes to the hospital,doctor have shifted sara in ICU
Avni inform all family members…
They reaches over there and everyone is crying.
Doctor have said that sara is in critical condition.only prayers can save him.
Avni is sitting in the front of Lord Ganesha idol and continuously crying and praying with him.
In anger neel came he pull take her to the outside of the hospital.
Neel:just stop all these drama,this all happens bcoz of u , u r the only reason behind this.sara didnt want to go but u forced her. The day when u entered in our life ,our Life become hell. all girls r lyk that only.why don’t u leave my family,just go away with my family.stay away with them.
He leaves from there in anger…
Avni is totally shattered, that she don’t know how to handle this situation .
In the next episode
Will they r able to save sara,will she leave the house ,how avni deal with it.
18 Comments
Its becoming interesting day to day…nice
Thanks dear.
Nice yaar …. Update regularly…If possible try 2 write lengthy one…Next update .. Eagerly waiting 4r that
Thanks dear,and sure I will update it
Thanks dear,and sure I will try to
By mistake its two time
Update next episode
Sure yrr ,I will
Nice yaar… Eagerly waiting 4r next update…Try 2 write lengthy one if possible
Wow, Absolutely magnificent. Your description & clarification about the twist makes me more curious about the next episode. Clarity of your thought is express in a hidden revenge motive that is really splendid. I hope, Neil will get understand avni when He get to know the situation. I think that Sara will clarify all the incident to Neil after overcoming out of danger situation. As Stars can’t shine without darkness, So story can’t be beautiful without any twist. You prove that. Please keep writing like that & makes me feel & realizes about fact of story. I am waiting for the next one.
Thanks and let see what is going to happen next
Priti i love ur cliffhangers. And the precap was small one. Do write precap longer.i love ur ff
Thanks dear and yes I will remember this next time
Welcome
Please update the next one soon.I’m waiting eagerly
SUre dear,sry that u all have to wait bcoz of me.
Guyz really sorry ,now a days I update the episodes late this is all bcoz of my busy schedules, as from 12th of sep half yearly is starting so due to this I didn’t get time to update it and even to reply ur comments.sry that u all have to wait.hope u all understand my situation and I will try to update as early as possible and and yes lengthy one.
It is ok priti. Even i would update my ff after a long vacation of 4 5 weeks as my exams of 10 marks are there. So i acn clearly understand ur situation