Hey guys its my first writting os zo plz forgive me for any mistake i jzt hope u all like thiz
So lets start the story
At sdch in mrng
At kabir’s cabin
Knock knock
Kabir-come in
Sachi-sir u called me
Kabir-ya dr.sachi i called u to give these files to
dr.malhotra cz im going 4 surgery and im in hurry so jzt do it
Sachi-ok sir she leaves
Kabir also leave 4 surgery
At Malhotra’s cabin
Knock knock
Malhotra- (while talking on phone ) cm in
Sachi-sir dr.kabir gave these file to give u
Malhotra sign sachi to take these files on the table
Sachi took these files on table and about 2 leave
Malhotra-(on phone) ya gaitry u dnt wry i’ll talk to kabir about his and ria
That if he wants to marry ria
(Author’s note:here kanchi loves eachother but still not confess her love )
Sanchi get very upset as he luvs kabir
Sanchi:(in mind) what if kabir sir will say ues 2
dr. Malhotra after all he respect him alot how will he refuse him
Time skipped
Malhotra in kabir’s cabin
Kabir: sir u here even u called me i ll came to u..
Malhotra:kabir u r like my son and i wanna say something 2 u but before that u tell me one thing
Is there anyone in ur lyf i mean u luv any one ????
Kabir in deep thoughts ..
Malhotra:where are u??
Kabir:nothing sir.
Malhotra so tell me
Kabir: sir yes i luve someone
Malhotra: who is the lucky one
Kabir: sir wo …wo…i’ll tell after confess her
Malhotra: ok then..
Malhotra leaves
Kabir: to himself: y sir was asking me that anyways i know luv sachi now i have to confess my feelinvs 2 her but how
@ kabir’s cabin
Sachi:may i cm in sir
Kabir ya sure dr. Sanchi
Sanchi:sir u called me
Sanchi avoid the eye contact to kabir and looking at the table
Kabir ya we have a surgery tonight at sahrp 8.00
So be ready on tym and ya take these files and read them
Sachi:looking at the file ok sir
And she leaves
Kabir:y is she looking so upset like her world gonna stop
Timeskip:
At ot:
Kabir give me the cotton
No responce from sachi
Kabirr shook her shoulder and say
Kabir : where r u sanchi
Sachi nothing sir here is cotton
The operation get success
Out of ot
Kabir: what happens sanchi y r looking so depressed
Sanchi: nothing sir
Kabir : ok
She was about to leave but faited (due to not eating or drinking anything)
Kabir get tensed and take her to the ward and make her lay on the bed
He treated her
He check her pulse and understood that she didnt eat or drink anything
#precap:Kabir#is#disapointed#by#sanchi
So guys that was my first os
Plz if u like it then throw a cmnt below and silent reader plz dont be silent
The second part of my os ll be update soon
Thnx all of u who read my os
29 Comments
It’s awesome and very unique waiting for next part
Thnx ashnita…
nice one
Thnx..
Nice one
Thnx
Nice one….keep writing.
Thnx n sure dear
Good work friend. Keep it up
Sure dear n thnx
Sure edward
Hey Sanjana dear it was simply amazing eager to know how will they confess thier love to each other so please update soon as you can.
Thnx dear and it ll update soon
Awesome sanjana keep it up dear nd post the nxt one soon.
Awesome waiting for the next one how will tbey confess
Awesome dear but update little longer update soon
Amazing
Awesome yaar.just amazing.keep it up yaar?????
Hey Sanjana dear. Awesome sanjana keep it up dear.waiting to know how will they confess thier love to each other so please update soon as you can.Nice one….keep writing.
Sanju it was really good….great start….???…loved it to the core…i wonder what is the reason that kabkr is disappointed by Sanchi….post your next epi ASAP
Thnx to all of u…
hey sanju(hope u don’t mind calling u this)…….a very nice update………i think the love confession’ll take some more time………coming to the episode, sanchi might avoid kabir after listening anand & gayatri’s conversation…..which’ll hurt kabir…….i would luv to see some twist & turns b4 their love confession………eagerly waiting for ur nxt update……….
U can call me sanju i like this name even my parents also called me by this name and thnx and ya the mathode of confessing is some like different
Superbbb yr……. A very good start and will love to read further!!
Thnx abhilasha it means alot
Its superb and the start os amazing.
Thnx aru
nice and awesome
Thnx sundari