Hello guys …I am
Trisha here back with my first chapter shot of new story …
“Beintehaa”
First of all guys thankyou for your comments nd appreciation on my precious story…
It’s a sincere request to all of my readers as well as my silent readers please give your reviews about this new story …I am quite nervous with this fs…
And thts my 72nd post on TU …Nd not so soon but I am excited for the century ??
Sorry for being over excited but I was just kidding
Further let’s not waste more time …(I know I hv wasted lot of ur time ?) nd continue to the chapter ….!
………..SHOT 1…………..
A dark terrace is shown ….there a boy and a girl is standing ….!
Girl is wearing a long decorated gown with long metal earrings high heels nd loose hairs with light makeup….
Boy – I love u miss …will you marry me …?
He takes out a box with a diamond ring from his pocket nd extended his hand towards the girl nd himself bent on his knees ….!
Girl is having a stethoscope around her neck…!
Girl- yes why not …!
He makes her wear the ring ..
Boy- baby but pls take out this telescope !
Girl(angrily)- shut up ! Thts my first goal..so don’t dare !
He romantically holds her hand nd drifts towards him…
She- “sssh” first show me your mbbs degree …!
Boy- here it is !
He shows her his degree nd then….he leans on her towards her lips…
“Uthja chulbul pandey “…someone shouted at the peak ….immediately patting at someone’s cheeks ….
She works up with a gasp…
Nd yells…”what the hell yr u agin spoiled my first kiss u idiot”
And guess wht she too got the hath reply ….”babes kiss me !
But pls get up we have lots of things to do else that makeup queen will repeat her makeup as she did from last half an hr “…
(That “someone” is Saachi)
Saachi- yuk! Chiiiii! I will not kiss u ! Chiii !
Pragya- shut up ! I am asking on cheeks …duffer !
Saachi- oh then fine ….! Pls lemme sleep just 5 minutes pls only 1 kiss pkka!
Pragya- ok mt uth kumbhkran…i m deleting your shaadi dot com account….
Only to find someone shouting ….”nhiiiii” nd she again woke up gasping ….!
All got ready…they needed to pack their stuff that day as the day after that day wd their first day at sdch…time skips to the showroom …..
Saachi- nhi bhaiya show tht right one …this is so small…!
Isha- baby doll…r u planning to get fit into this ..!
Saachi- huh ! Atleast bag should have some space …!
Pragya- ishaaa understand yr she’ll buy gn acc to her amount of books …!
Shopkeeper shows them a bag as req by Saachi…!
Saachi- yes bhaiya this is perfect ….!
Before they could speak further someone came from backside looking at the bag…!
He- perfect …! Right krish ?
Krish(kabeers frnd)- of course ekdm jhkaas…!
Saachi- o mr…we choose that so look for something else !
Kabeer- never…! I take what I like !
Saachi- hd hai ! Hot ho that doesnt men u will do what u want…(she bites her tongue)
Kabeer- what ? Hot ?
Saachi- taaref chodke kisi or bag pr dhyaan do…!
Krish (whispered to kbeer)- pehli baar someone spoke infront of u my bro! Propose her today only !
Kabeer gave him a glare to shut him …!
Shopkeeper- sir; mam pls cooperate I don’t have the same size anymore this is the last piece !
Saachi- no problem bhaiya he will adjust …pls make our bill !
Pragya- haan bhaiy jldi kijiye…!
Kabeer- no way I will take this ….!(angrily)
Saachi- uncle pls take something else …you not fit into this …?
Kabeer was just enraged by her word “uncle”….!
Krish tried calm him but failed till then the girls cleared their bills nd moved outside….in the building of the mall nd then towards parking lot !
Kabeer just couldn’t handle this …Nd quickly followed them to the parking nd hold saachis hand before letting her sit in the car…!
Ish nd prgya had already sat in the car but they could see this nd same was for krish he was standing there trying to calm Kabeer…!
He jerked herself towards her …
Saachi- what the hell !
Kabeer- how dare u call me that ?
Saachi- uncle !
Kabeer- I know that …!
Saachi- kasam se I said truth …!
Kabeer was at first angry at her but seeing her antics even after his anger he was just lost in her ; their eyes met….Nd his anger just reached the delhi nagar nigams dustbin…!
After few seconds
Krish – ahm ahm !
Both came in senses nd felt awkward nd immediately left for their places…!
Precap- kanchi in front of each other…
Saachi- Amrish puri yhan ?
Kabeer- ye yhan? Stalking me ?
Pls pls give ur sweetest comments guys that really means a lot to me nd tata tc see u soon in next shot !
Regards
TRISHA
46 Comments
super trisha…i loved it…tooooooo good
Thanku glad you liked it
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow Trishu amazing, mindblowing ,superbbb. aur batao kiya kahun main………………………………………..I was told you earlier that no words for you yaaaaar…….
Awww thanku so much anee
Ur comment made my day sweetie …
Chill sweetie as always it wss fab. And dont you worry about it . I realy loved it
Thankyou sweetie …I am so happy you like it
Amazing Trisha sanchi nd kabir seem so different in it loved it to the core plzz post soon dear.
Thanku so much dear nd thanks for liking this one
So funny cant stop laugh. And new type of ff attract alot
Thanku kanchi that means a lot sweetie
Simply superb …
Thankyou neha
What a starting …….it is just amazing….keep it up…… please please please update soon……????
Thnku and sure
Wowww trishu congo for 72th post and this was really light hearted and nagae nigam dustbin was hilarious!!
I loved it to value of pi!!
Thanku abhilasha …I am glad u liked it sweetie
Soooo cute story yaar….maine to pehle title pe hi fidda ho gaye….its such a osm…title and outstanding fs…..and kabeer uncle!…thats not fair sanchi….loved it yaar….always great.waiting eagerly for next part..love u
Awww thanku so much vrushti….ur words are honour so glad to see u as Hm reader …love u too
Wowwww u again nailed it this is outstanding marvelous lovely awesome ravishing lovely amazing superb mindblowing and many more no words to say again . U stole my all words grand salute to u I can’t stop smiling kuch toh daya kardo it’s so amazing huggs and kisses to u and luv u very very much
Thanku so much ashnita … I am so happy u liked it ….nd yes ur cmmnt made my day sweetie
Return hugs nd kisses from my side to you ; lots of love to u ?
Wowww good super duper good pls update next…
Thanku nd sure
Hey trisha episode iis woooooow spandabulous fantabulastic fantastic awsm start n m waiting for ur 100 update or century so fast update regularly hehehehe…..
Thanku so much niyaa nd yeah sure hehe ???
Wow Trishu this was awesome amazing fabulous mind blowing ur awesome sweetie
Thankyou so much divya ????
wow, amazing update my Cutie pie…….what else can I say other than….it was a superrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrr waala episode……..72nd post…….no, not possible……..feels like abhi hi toh padhna shuru kiya hai…………never ever want a break in this process………just keep writing………waiting for 100….200…..& so on posts……..& never ever want this to stop………u r such a great writer………. luv u a lot dear……….
Awwwww thanku so much my chocopie nd sure sure I am always there for U guys…love u too my dear may god bless u ?
It’s really nice…..kanchi nok -jhok was just awesome…..
Thanku sana
Sweetie, this was fab…i have to open my dictionary to look for words to describe you and your ff…amazing yaar…you are took good and can t wait to see your next epi…and congratulations for your 72th post….hmm 72 still too little? a writer like you should be 10000 right? I won’t bore you with my comment…love you dear ??
And sorry for asking what does the title mean ..sorry dear I don’t know Hindi that much
That’s absolutely ok sweetie …”Beintehaa” means “unlimited”; “without an ending” “to the infinity ” like “unlimited love “we can say or may be “beintehaa mohobatt “…!
Sorry for being an boring explainer but I hope u got that else u can google it also …!
Hehe ? of course nd thankyou so much tania…it is an honour to have u ; a great writer as a reader …Nd yes I can never be bored wd ur comment so chillax…lots of love to you too
This is really good. Loved the uncle part ?!! Can’t wait to read more
Thanku palak glad u like it
Grt start yr…lovely content…post nxt part soon…
Thanku nd sure sanyukta
First of all congrats on your 72th post ??? about the story amazing start dear and it was sooo funny??? how Kabir and Sanchi fought
Thanku so much ruwani that really means a lot
This story is really very good matlab thoda sa hatke hai… Good Trisha very nice.. ??????
Thanku tiya for commenting sweetie
ITS REALLY AN AWESOME STORY…………….IN LOVE WITH UR FF……………HOW CAN U WRITE SOMETHING SO LOVELY………….U EXPRESS YOUR IDEAS IN A BEAUTIFUL AND CLEAR WAY……….ITS AN INTERESTING PLOT…………..
WAITING FOR UR NEXT UPDATE
WITH LOTS OF LOVE
UR SILENT READER
SIYA
Thankyou so much siya … this is really an hnour to write something for u guys …love u too my dear
I am laughing my hearts out after reading this “uncle” ?? was the most amazing part. U are such a creative writer.. A big hug for being such an amazing writer.. Totally in love with this story..
Thnku so much annie . Glad you like it that really means a lot to me