Guys as you all liked it I’m going to continue
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IMPORTANT NOTE:
1. AVNEIL STORY STARTS WHEN EVERYONE KNOWS THAT AVNI IS ILLIGIMATE DAUGTER OF ASHISHA(ASHA N ASHISH) BEBE GETS HURT AND SWETHA INSULTS AVNI.
2.NO RELATION DRAMA(AVNI AND ALI RELATION DOUBT DRAMA) BEFORE. RIYA AND SWETHA PLANNED BUT NEIL COMES TO KNOW AND FLOPS IT IN FRONT OF THE FAMILY AND DURING THAT TIME AVNI GOES TO MEET NANNO SO SHE DOESNT KNOW THE DRAMA.
THIS EXPOSURE OF RIYA WILL HAPPEN IN BEBE, MADDY, KAREENA’S ABSENCE SO THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT THE DRAMA
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Oberoi Mansion is showed inside full decorations are done and Hall is filled with guests.
Rudra: Here comes the couple for whom this party is arranged.
Shivika and Avneil are shown decending the stairs and in between them Pinky and Shakti and Swetha and Prakash are shown decending the stairs together. When last 3 stairs are left the men asks their lady love to stop for a second and get down the stairs and asks their lady loves to give their hand in their hand through signs i.e by extending their hand.
While they are getting down as Rudy is Rudy he slightly pulled the carpet due to which women were gonna fall but landed in their husbands arms.
(Music plays(song-jeenel laga hoon from ramiya vastaviya))
Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga Hoon…
Everyone has an eyelock.
Swetha and Pinky stand erect and see Avneil and Shivika and get irritated
Main Mera Dil Aur Tum Ho Yahaan…
Fir Kyun Ho Palkein Jhukaye Waha…
(Avneil and Shivika remember their best moments spend together)
Tum Saahasee Pehle Dekha Nahin…
Tum Isse Pehle The Jane Kahaan…
Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada.
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga…
(Shivika remember the blush and swimming pool scenes And Avneil remember their hug scenes)
Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada.
Pehle Se Zyada Tum Pe Marne Laga…
Milne lage dil, pehle se zyada. Pehle se zyada ishq hone laga.
Avneil and Shivika get disturbed by Pinky and Swetha’s sound (they make a sound as if they are setting their throat. Due to which ShivikAvneil came back to the senses. Avneil were feeling awkward and both ShivikAvneil were feeling embarrassed.
Then Rudy comes on to the stage and says
Rudra : Thank you everyone for coming to the 25th wedding anniversary of Mr n Mrs. Shakti Singh Oberoi and Mr and Mrs. Prakash Khanna. Plz enjoy the party.
After around 1/2 an hour all the guests left and only family relatives and best friends were present there in OM. Again Rudra went on to the dias and announced.
Rudra: So guys today we have two special things for our brides and grooms second one is a surprise and 1st one is………..
( Rudy was about to say but the lights were put off so he stopped but as he stopped a voice was heard)
Voice ( male): Kismat bhi na badi kuti cheez hai sala kabhi bhi palat jaati hain par kabi kuck accha lekar aati hain or kabi kuch bura kar jati hain
Esehi inlogon ki jindagi mein hua
Voice ( female): jindagi se kushi ko cheena par pyar dia jis ke kaaran kushiyan kud chal kar angan me utra
Neon lights are turned on Avneil and Ali are shown on the dias
(Same costumes and same act is presented which they performed on Prakash and Swetha’s 25 anniversary)
Swetha remembers the past (real) moments and gets emotional but Pinky supports her.
Voice ( male): Kismat nee badi bazi keli par inhe itna kidkithod jindagi di.
Voice ( female): tho tab jo lamhe jee nahi paye wo ab jeelo.
Saying this they turn the lights on. Shivaay and Anika are shown on dias and Avneil are getting down the stage. When Avneil get down the dias Swetha comes and hugs her tillu and thanks him for the wonderful surprise.
Swetha: tillu, ananya thank you for the wonderful surprise.
Avni/ananya: Aunty, ye tho kuch bhi nahi pappaji ne aap ke liye kuch bahut bada plan kiya hain.
Neil: not only for you mom, maasi….. phufa ne aap ke liye bhi kuch kiya.
Shivaay: Neee muje bhi kuch bolne de.main aur teri bhabhi uske bare mein kehe ne ke liye hi tho kade hain.
Neil(making a puppy face): Sorry bhai?
During the conversation of Neil and Shivaay Pinky and Swetha were looking at their husbands who had a blank expression and then each other and then their children. Anxious Pinky spoke and enquired the surprise.
Pinky: Shivaay ae sab kya hai
Shivaay: Mom it’s a surprise so wait .
Anika: Shivaay der ho rahi hojaegi jaldi bol dete hain na
Shivaay gives a procced look.
Anika: Pyar hota hain tho michmichi machti hain. Lekin vo pyar jo Shaadi se pehale nahi jo Shaadi ke baad ka pyar vo janmo janmo ka hain. Par kehate hain na pyar vali shaadi ka maza hi kuch aur hain to aaj ham aap dono ki 25th anniversary par….( Anika’s sentence is broken by gauri’s words)
Gauri: Harharike aap chron ki Shaadi karvadete hain.
Janvi and Tej who are standing in side hugging pose smile listening to Gauri and looked at each other.
(Tej confessed and apologized to Janvi for his deeds and mistakes.
Now TeJanvi and RiKara are fighing against Swethalana to get the evidences against Tej and kick her out of the Oberoi’s life. Tej and Omkara doesn’t have any differences between them now.Omkara calls Tej as Dad.
Gauri is heartly accepted by Tej and he doesn’t have any problem with any one.Tej just wants his family to be happy and always smiling.)
Shakti and Prakash got down on their knees and proposed Pinky and Swetha for marrying them again which was immidiately accepted by both.
Shaadi gets completed and Bebe and Dadi blesses them. Bebe keeps her hand on Swetha’s shoulder and says
Bebe: Aaj kehana padega meri pyaari bahu bahut Sundar lag rahi hain.
Listening to this Swetha’s eyes gets moist and she hugs Bebe thightly. Seeing this even Pinky’s eyes gets moist and seeing both of them like that Dadi pulls Pinky into an embrace.
Everyone claps for them.
Rudra comes on to the stage
Rudra: guys muje ruake mera makeup karab mat karo. And people plz party without dance ??(making puppy face)?
Shivaay signs the DJ to play the music( budu sa maan from Kapoor and sons)
Shivaay and Neil : Dabi dabi si hansi honthon pe phansi hai
Gudgudi kar rahi hawa
( They sing while moving towards Pinky and Shakti and Swetha and Prakash)
Omkara and Rudra: Oo.. halla macha rahi hai pagal si khwaishein
Khushiyon ki mili hai wajah
( They both Go near TeJanvi)
Shiomrune: Kuch hai junoon sa
Kuch paagalpan hai
Sau baatein karta ye buddhu sa mann hai
( Goes to the center of the hall and takes their lady loves along)
(ShivikAvneil, RiKara, Ishana, Rumya n Bavya): Kuch hai junoon sa
Kuch paagalpan hai
Sau baatein karta ye buddhu sa mann hai
Anika: Karne de khwaabon ko badmashiyaan
Avni: Chalne de nazron ki manmaniyan
Bhavya: Dhoondhe chalo kuch thikane naye
Gauri: Hone de pagli-pagli si nadaaniyaan
Ishana: Hosh mein rehna hai kyun
Rehne se hoga kya
Gauri:Behoshiyon mein hai maza
Sowmya: Oo.. bachkaani harkatein jo hoti hain hone de
Bhavya: Khushiyon ki mili hai wajah
Shiomrune: Kuch hai junoon sa
Kuch paagalpan hai
Sau baatein karta ye buddhu sa mann hai
(ShivikAvneil, RiKara, Ishana, Ruvya n Sowmya): Kuch hai junoon sa
Kuch paagalpan hai
Sau baatein karta ye buddhu sa mann hai
Dadi: Mausam ne bhi ki hai kuch koshishein
Hone lagi dekho ye baarishien
( Everyone starts shouting)
Bebe: Sar pe chadha hai yeh kaisa asar
Daude raftaar mein dil ki sab dhadkanein
Janvi: Dhun koi chal rahi hai, kaano mein dheeme se
Punky: Roshan hai zyada yeh subah
Swetha: Oo.. halchal jo ho rahi hai seene mein hone de
Neela: Khushiyon ki mili hai wajah..
Prakash: Kuch hai junoon sa
Shakti: Kuch paagalpan hai
Tej: Sau baatein karta ye buddhu sa mann hai
( Goes to the center of the hall )
Everyone: Kuch hai junoon sa
Kuch paagalpan hai
Sau baatein karta ye buddhu sa mann hai
While dancing ShivikAvneil, Ishkara and Rumya have an eye lock seeing Ishkara and Rumya together Gauri and Bhavya feel bad , TeJanvi are shocked. Seeing ShivikAvneil Pinky and Swetha get irritated and angry.
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PRECAP:
Anika follows Shivaay and conforts him
Anika: Shivaay aap ne kaha ki aap ko meri NKK se farak nahi padta tho phir aap ye sab……
Bas Shivaay aap kabhi nahi badal sakte aaj yahi hamari kahani katam.
Shivaay’s shocked face is shown and Anika who is leaving her face is shown who was weeping.
In OM
Riya and Swetha keep Avni’s truth out that she is Ashish and Asha’s illigimate daughter and Question on Avni and Ali’s relation. Bebe’s shocked and angry face is shown
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Sorry for not posting yesterday actually I was busy so I couldn’t post.
And even sorry for the lengthy episode actually I didn’t wanna break the flow of emotions and enjoyment. Thanks to everyone one who commented- Nandhini, Alekhika, Nikita, Fffan, Prajkta, Me6104, UF, Ankita you guys are like support system as cause u guys commented I understood you liked it. Guys plz comment as if you like only I’ll proceed or else I’ll complete the story in 2 days by cut shorting the story.
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—-LUV U GUYS
-luvIBN
23 Comments
Nice episode….. I loved all of it…… Post next part soon…….it’s amazing ?? ??
I’ll try to post it soon. And thanks dear.
Wow…..?awesome episode….!? i don’t have words to explain it that how much I’m loving it ?plzzz keep going…& eagerly I’m waiting for the next episode……?
Thank you so much Dear naira
Awesome update
Thanks
I loved it but i dont lik ishqbaaz part amazing but i dont prefer u link no doubt i loves it thanx for lenghty one
I’m sorry dear but it’s an Ishqbaaz and Naamkaran FF so they have equal involvement so I can’t do any thing. Cause it’s an FF for Ishqbaaz and Naamkaran lovers.
I loved this ff. Sorry i could not comment on character intro because of studies. Dear i can perfectly understand ur study pressure because me too a school student . And loo our maths book of 7th standard is having questions and exampler questions, examples of class 9th and 10th. So i can understand why our atyachaari teachers are teaching us those questions and concept to make our base strong for class 9th and 10th. Good luck for ur studies. And I am Samiksha. Call me Sami. Do tell ur name dear friend.
Thanks SWEETIE. Name- luvIBN.
y u r mixingthis ishqbaaz.. its a useless drama..
I’m sorry Avneil but as I’m a fan of IBN I’ve written on that. Actually this is the only episode together. Orelse they have a completely different track. Hv added together in this episode as it’s Swetha’s anniversary and I wanted both the villas to be sis so that in later episodes the confrontation will be good.
And thanks for sharing your feeling. And Sorry for making u sad dear
Superb update.. loved it.. waiting for the next part…
Thanks dear. I’ll try to update soon
Good one dear
Thank you Nikki.
Awesome yaar
Thank you.
Thanks to everyone you guys are my support system for writing the I just don’t have words to thank you people thank you please keep supporting me. Guys if you can please give me some suggestions so that I can write something new because if you give your opinion to be more good you like it more it’s my feeling whatever is there in your heart please commented so that I can put down your ideas in my FFs.
It’s humble request guys to the people who are only ishqbaaz or only avneil fans I’m sorry because you aren’t liking it for joining both of them but as a fan of Both the serials I am writing about both of them please forgive me cause I’m hurting you guys. If you have any suggestions any ideas please tell me all types of critics are accepted causes helps me write better so please guys share your comments so that I can write better.
Nice update
Thanks dear
AWESOME INTERSTING NICE SUPERB??????
Dear LuvIbn
All Celebrate Anniversary That Is Awesome?Why TejVi Shock To See RuMya And IshKara?Who Is Unite With Rudy….Soumya And Bhavya.I Want Soumya Unite With Rudy.RuMya Nahi Tho Sorry Main Ye Read Karna Stop Karunga?
Take Care And Stay Safe?
It’s a love triangle. And Tejanvi are not shocked to see rumya actually the are shocked to see Ishkara cause of 2reasons.
Reasons
1. Om and Gauri are married
2. I’ll reveal it with the story line.
And thanks for giving me a new Idea by asking me about the shock