Hi guys iam Ashnita
This is my first official fanfiction on TU. U guys made me cry showing so much love thank you very much and this is my return gift. I didn’t write before iam bit nervous sorry in advance for making mistakes. U guys r my idol.
Authors Note
This is very unique ff. Very different from original SDCH, this ff is about Kabir & Veer friendship and one side love for Kabir
Introduction
Kabir Raichand – A handsome, fearless
Orphan, a drunker always
drinks, loves veer and
sanchi equally he can do
anything for them and
always writes diary and
follows it
Sanchi Mishra – beautiful girl ,daughter of a
Don , very angry girl always
throw phones and loves
veer .
Veer Malhotra -Handsome a big shot,
owner of SDCH, loves
sanchi and hates Kabir
Pragya, Isha, miss Fernandez will play important role and riya loves Kabir will be positive .
Promo
Veer pow- I luv her
Kabir – u luv her I luv her we love her same
taste
Kabir to sanchi – I luv u sanchi
VEER ENTERED
SANCHI TOOK ROSE AND GAVE TO VEER
Sanchi – I luv u veer
VEER SMILED AND SMIRK TOWARDS KABIR
Veer – to kya problem hai me abhi
sanchi se shadi karunga
Man – u can’t u know sanchi is already
married how can u marry her
Suddenly he comes running towards veer with knife to stab him. They both get shocked to see another person gets stabbed.
Sorry guys for mistakes. Do comment and tell me how’s it and should I continue or not. Lots and lots of love to u all.
Regards
Ashnita
22 Comments
Ashnita dear wow yaaar really curious to know what is in your mind dear.plzzzz cntnu.
Awwww that was so different nd equally khidki tod u killed it girl
This was fabulous pls start soon
Luv uh loads ?
Ashnita it was interestimg and new loved it and make it kanchi
Heyu Ashnita..happy to be 1st to comment.. loved ur plot. Good luck for the rest episodes..it looks like a suspense thriller.. Murder mystery.. cool one
Go ahead.
Yes ashnita u should definitely continue it dear…… it’s really something different
Plzz start it soon dear.
It looks like Arya 2plot
It’s amazing Ashnita make it kaanchi
Hey ashnita u r amaz u remind me aarya ek diwana movie …btw this is amaz nd unique plot dear keep it up nd yesssssss u should definately start it plz plz plz plz update ist part asap dear…
Hey ashnita u r amaz u remind me aarya ek prem pratigya and arya ek diwana movie i loved them both movie …btw this is amaz nd unique plot dear keep it up nd yesssssss u should definately start it plz plz plz plz update ist part asap dear…
Just amazing update soon
Seems really interesting plz continue waiting for next part
IT IS FILLED WITH LOTS OF SUSPENSE……YOUR INTRODUCTION IS AWESOME….WOULD LOVE TO SEE ANOTHER UPCOMING GREAT AUTHOR…..THE INTRO HAS REALLY GOT ME ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT……SO MUCH MYSTERY…SO MUCH THRILLER…..
GOD…..I SWEAR I MEAN IT…..YOU HAVE TO POST THE NEXT EPISODE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
REALLY DYING TO KNOW WHAT EXACTLY ALL THIS IS…
A READER OF A LOVELY AUTHOR
SIYA
Oh god….. U know what I love thriller stories and this is really unique….. Butterflies are racing in my stomach to know more….. Plz update soon…. Loved it so much!!!
Ashnita, this was fab intro…loved it…the story is so unique….i love thriller movies….please continue soon yaar..i can’t wait
This was amazing mindblowing fabulous awesome perfect unique superb. ……………………
I have no words to describe.
Pls continue and pls update as soon as possible pls pls pls pls pls pls ??
Nd belated happy birthday to u my dear sis.??
Luv u
Sorry for late comm. But it was gr8
Ashnita dear, whats this……….such unique concept, such new portrayal of characters………omg its just like reading a murder mystery plot………….eagerly waiting to know whats ur nxt move in the storyline………
Wwooww Ashnita amazing ??? very unique plot. I totally loved it. Welcome to the writing world……!! ???
That was fabb ashnita and plz continue it its very very very different and unique plz continue
And dont feel sorry anyone can do mistakes not ance but thousands time
Wow you writingba ff . Whatever you will write i am going to love it .. update soon
U just reminded me of a movie named Arya …..allu Arjun was starting in it…. though I loved your intro…..it will be good to see Kabir in such avatar…
Nice intro…….