Hello this is —ANNIE— back with another part of {{WWMTBTF}}
Thank you so much for the comments you gave on last part hope you’ll enjoy this too…
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Episode – 19
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Next Day!
It was the beautiful morning for the newly married couple…! And dream day for Om and gauri…
{shivaay’s room}
They both were laying on the bed annika cuddling into shivaay…draped in a duvet…sun rays started falling on their faces disturbing their sleep…shivaay was first one to wake up and saw her sleeping peacefully but sun rays were disturbing it so he shadowed it by his hand and smiled seeing her smiling in sleep “I love you” she muttered in her sleep and he whispered back “I love you too”
Shivaay’s POV
“she’s great… every time I see her my heart aches… because of us she had to suffer a lot… she claims that she isn’t affected with that anymore as that was past…but I know that isn’t the truth… I can feel your pain annika… I can see in your eyes how much you miss them and get affected by seeing our family moments… though you got a loving family but still I know real family isn’t comparable… I feel so guilty… sometimes I feel like killing myself after all these all mess happened because of diamonds named to my wife and above that…that will… well I can’t change past now as annika says! But I can create magical and awesome future for her with loving and memorable present… she is the perfect example of true love!… she still loved me even knowing that because of us her parents were killed… not only perfect example of true love but also best human along with her buddie’s gang… they are great! They all are great… I promise you annika I’ll never let any more sorrows to enter your life even if they try they need to face wrath of shivaay singh oberoi! THE GREAT WALL OF SHIVAAY…! Will always be there to protect annika shivaay singh oberoi! I kissed her forehead and she woke up smiling”
POV ends
“good morning shivaay” annika looked at shivaay smiling
“good morning princess” shivaay again kissed her forehead “well I saw you was staring me while I was asleep” annika yawned “but how you saw? You were sleeping naw! You just said” shivaay too yawned seeing her yawning “umm… yeah still I was able to sense it” annika tightly closed her eyes while again yawning stretching her arms “yeah!” shivaay’s word stuck in his throat only seeing her stretching her arms “what?” annika asked still closed eyes but shivaay was just smiling and getting no answer from him she opened her eyes just to see him staring her again and looked where he was staring “hawww” annika pulled up the blanket and shyness took over her “what?” shivaay smirked leaning toward her face “nothing you cheapde” annika tried pushing him “what’s so cheap? Didn’t you like it last night?” shivaay smirked while kissing her neck “chiii” annika closed her eyes tightly biting her lower lip “umm let’s have another session” shivaay smirked and looked at her who was blushing “shivaay” annika pushed him and sat up draping the blanket completely “what?” shivaay smirked “you’re na cheap” annika ran toward the bathroom and entering she closed the door but shivaay was faster than her and reached bath before her… “shivaay go na” annika tried pushing him with her one hand as she was holding blanket with other “no!” shivaay nodded “let’s have a bath together” shivaay moved near her “you are wasting time…I’m already so tired…my whole body is paining…today is the marriage of om…it’s my first day here as bahu lots of responsibilities and above that cooking day please go” annika rolled her eyes and again tried pushing him out of washroom “umm paining body” smirked “let me give you a massage” shivaay leaned and she pushed him “please” annika made a puppy face “aww! Okay enjoy my love” shivaay placed a kiss on her cheek and went out of washroom… “Bagadh billa” she muttered and went to the shower side…
Shivaay took out some clothes for himself and some for her. cleaned the bedroom so that his wifey need not to work much as she just explained in washroom!
{rudra’s room}
Rudra woke up yawning and stretching his arms and his gaze fell on his mobile “oh shit! I was talking with bhavya! Last night and fell asleep” rudra talked to himself and grabbed his mobile and it was dead “how can it be dead?” rudra thought and connected it to a charger and went to his washroom…
{om’s room}
Om was still sleeping in his room selling all the damn horses… he was half on bed half out of bed…half covered with blanket and half not… messy hair and tired face but peaceful sleep one hand hanging down the bed and other on bed holding mobile “Idiot wakeup” Jhanvi shouted picking his arm up “maa sone do na {maa let me sleep na}” om pulled the blanket up and turned to other side “om today is your wedding day” Jhanvi rolled her eyes while picking up his things from floor “I know maa! But that doesn’t mean I’ll wake up early I’m tired and sleep is more important I don’t want to fall ill on my wedding day” om explained and started snoring “ufff om wedding day! If you’ll not wakeup than forget the marriage” Jhanvi tried threatening “okay! Then I’ll do court marriage” om smiled in sleep and again snores started “ahh ommmmm!” Jhanvi shouted and he sat up scratching his head “you all are my sleep’s enemies never let me sleep peacefully” om whined and picking up his mobile went to washroom and Jhanvi left the room…
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Morning in MM
{bhavya’s room}
Bhavya was sleeping on a recliner without a blanket she was looking like a baby in a womb {sleeping position} just the size was big…sun rays were falling on her face but she wasn’t bothered about it rather they were comforting her and she was getting more relaxed with the warmth of rays she just turned her face so they won’t fell on her face… dreaming something good she was smiling…
{gauri’s room}
Gauri woke up rubbing her eyes and sat on the bed held her head tied up the hair again and yawned “ufff these wedding days… I’m tired as hell I swear after everything is over I’ll sleep for a week at least” gauri muttered rolling her eyes yawning again… looking at her mobile she facepalmed and picked it up quickly “these late night chats are the cutest…but it gets spoil when sleep overtakes your lover” she read a text from om
“how I wish I was near you so I could just cover you with blanket properly” another msg of om…
“well you slept and here no sign of sleep near me…miles away still no sign” another msg she read
“gauri you know how much I love you?” one another msg
“no one can ever measure my love toward you it isn’t measurable…” om’s message with heart emoji…
“you made me cheesy lover boy cutie!” another msg
“I believed in love but never thought I’ll be like one of the lover boy about whom I have read in books all thanks to you” another msg
“I’m head over heels in love with you”
“I love you soooo much gauri” another msg with 100+ kiss emoji and 50+ heart emoji
—gauri had tears in her eyes with a smile… that was just few messages…there were 200+ messages from him and she kept on reading them…
(let her read let’s go to other room’s)
{khushi’s room}
Khushi woke up because of sun rays and stretched her arms still closing her eyes {she just woke but didn’t opened her eyes properly} as soon as she stretched her arms her hand hit on arnav’s face and he wakes up “ahh” shouting “what the hell?” khushi sat up holding her heart “what are you doing here?” khushi narrowed her eyes “that doesn’t matter… matter is why the hell you hit me so hardly?” arnav too sat up rubbing his nose “well… why should I tell you? Even this doesn’t matter” khushi looked away “what? Now why you’re showing attitude to me and that too early in the morning?” arnav made weird faces “oh why should I tell you it doesn’t matter at all” khushi looked at him narrowing her eyes “repeating matter doesn’t whatever it is again and again I’m sure she is taunting” arnav thought and narrowed his eyes “it does matter you’ve hurt me badly” arnav glared her “no it doesn’t matter at all and my hand just passed by your nose not some hammer that you’re stretching it a lot” khushi made faces “haww… you don’t care about me anymore? You!” arnav sat on his knees on bed glaring khushi “yeah I don’t care… and it shouldn’t matter to you…” khushi too glared him back standing on floor putting her hands on either side of her waist “well than I’ll not tell you what happened last night” arnav looked away and relaxed on bed “umm…I wasn’t drunk last night I was just tired nothing would’ve happened I’m sure he is making me a fool” khushi thought “there is no need to make you fool you’re already” arnav giggled while khushi opened her mouth in a perfect O shape “how dare you? Btw how you knew what I was thinking?” khushi glared him “that doesn’t matter” arnav laughed and stood on floor as he knew he is gone now … hearing the word “doesn’t matter” khushi’s anger reached its peak… and she held her shoe in her hand seeing which arnav gulped “what you said?” khushi showed him shoe “why should I repeat? It doesn’t matter baby” laughed arnav and ran out of room as she started chasing him with shoe in her hand… their chase went on like about 5 minutes…arnav ran down the stairs and up again…jumped on sofa’s slide down the tables and much more… after 5 minutes of tom and jerry chase they both fell on floor with a distance of 2 foot {let’s add some on track word :P} fully panting… and burst into fits of laughter {added arshi scene for some arshi fans otherwise I hadn’t planned their such scenes it just came now only in my mind and here it is}
——————–Back to OM
{shivaay’s room}
Annika was getting ready in simple yet beautiful anarkali as she didn’t liked saree’s and none even forced her to wear till she herself want to wear…
Annika’s POV
“I’m lucky to have shivaay in my life… he is purely a gem…I know he loves me so much…much more than my thoughts… he cleaned all the mess of this first night and other mess too and that too quickly… shivaay! A gem… he can be explained in just a word “GEM” well he brought a anarkali for me tough I don’t like sea green much but he brought it for me so it is the best and my favorite from now own… I never heard HUSBAND cleared room… even If someone had done it but still for me it’s new and precious thing my lovely husband cares for me so much… he is looking so cute in these messy hair… and he wore color-coordinated dress… sea-green suits him…well all colors suit him or maybe every color too loves my shivaay… it feels so good to call him mine!… we are officially of eachothers in every means… now we are no more shivaay annika we have become shivika… 2 bodies and one soul… my hubby…! SHIVAAY! I can clearly see his pain in his eyes though he tries to hide it but I’m not a simple girl I’m lover…soulmate…wife…and bestie of him I can read his eyes and mind and hear to his heart … I surely can understand whatever he is hiding even if he doesn’t tell… that’s the beauty of this relationship and he is feeling pain of mine… I know shivaay… I know you too can understand my pain and is feeling guilty…but why don’t you understand you’re not at fault not at all! Well I need to talk with him about it otherwise it will be like this only he guilty and I in pain…I should really move on from my past not in words only but also in real… I can’t see him in guilt phase never ever and that too when he isn’t at fault… he has to understand that was fate…not someone’s fault and even if it was fault of someone than Rajesh and Sarika Rathod are at fault who told them to go out huh! Whatever we need to solve it though it isn’t a big issue that will effect something or some relation but still he is in guilt because of that so the first priority of mine is to solve it…and that too today only…umm in night maybe”
Pov ends
Shivaay who was seeing annika from the mirror standing little far came toward her and caressed her face from back as she was sitting on a chair “you’re looking Gorgeous annika” shivaay leaned and placed his chin on her shoulder “we are looking cute” annika chuckled and stood up “well that is okay too” shivaay held her and placed a kiss on her hand “I know!” annika giggled and kissed back on his hand “so mrs. Annika shivaay singh oberoi are you ready for your first day at OM as bahu and are you ready to cook {pehli rasoi}” shivaay encircled his arms around her waist…
“ofcourse mr shivaay singh oberoi… your wife is ready” annika too encircled her arms around his neck and they both pulled eachother at same time and bumped “ouch” shivika screamed “knock knock” someone knocked at door… annika ran to open the door and opened it… “aunty ap” annika gasped “not aunty but mom” pinky smilingly caressed her face “mom what happened why you came here some work?” shivaay rolled his eyes “I know you want to be alone but not now and I don’t need your permission before coming here to meet annika and don’t be so mean” pinky glared shivaay “I’m not mean maa” shivaay pouted “btw I came to take annika…” pinky smiled at annika “yeah even I was coming down” annika smiled back “umm really? But the voice I heard I thoughtttt” pinky chuckled while stretching the word thought and shivika looked at eachother and then down “let’s leave” annika moved out and pinky giggling followed her while shivaay just kept on staring annika till she vanished from his sight and he got busy with his mobile
{Rudra’s room}
Rudra after getting ready fully sat on a bean bag placed near charging socket and picked his mobile “let’s see what she said after I slept” thought rudra and switched on his mobile “oh my maata” hit his head “I mean OMG!” he widened his eyes “500 messages… 100 missed calls”
He started checking his message…
“had your dinner?” “did you take your medicines?” “I love you” “I miss you” “where are you?” “you were looking handsome today” “rudra reply me” “I think you fell asleep” “good night TC SD” “I love you” “and yeah don’t forget to take medicine before coming” “bye duffer” “wait are you really sleeping?” “I think you fainted” “rudra I’m getting scared please reply” “khumbkharan wakeup and reply than sleep” “I’m missing you duffer” “Rudraaaa” “oye dumbbell singh oberoi are you listening me” “look reply me otherwise I’ll not marry you” “rudra??? Reply? Me?” “rudra! I’ll marry you with romi I swear on SRK” “Rudraaaa my baby replies me na” “well you know I’ve another secret to tell you reply me?” “I know you’re not sleeping” “why the hell you’re just seeing them why you’re not reply?” “Rudraaaa I’m getting angry nowww!” “I hate you *crying faces*” “I love you so much Rudraaaa I love you trust me” “huff I’m feeling sleepy now” “Rudraaaa” “pick up my call…I love you, baba”
(end of his stamina)
“gosh! She will kill me today at venue only I didn’t reply but I was sleeping… yes! I’ll not reply her I’m sure she will be sleeping now whole night she wasted messaging me” rudra smiled and kissing her picture went out of the room…
{om’s room}
Om was sleeping laying in bath tub though he wasn’t comfortably sleeping in that tub but that didn’t matter the matter was sleep and that too peaceful sleep and he got that but soon it got ruin by the constant vibration on his cell phone opening his drowsy eyes he looked at the flashing mobile screen “CUTIE CALLING”
And he closed eyes and answering call put the phone on speaker “om I’m sorry I slept off last night are you angry?” gauri’s voice reached his ears but he was too lazy to reply so he just said “Hmm” “mean you’re angry! I knew it I shouldn’t have slept but I was tired” gauri’s voice again reached his ears though he wanted to deny these things she was telling that he is angry but few words escaped from his mouth again “hmm” “om are you even listening me why do I feel you’re not listening… om I didn’t do it intentionally sorry! I love you na” gauri’s voice reached his ears but he was sleeping now gauri kept on taking his name but no response came and she went silent… and soon she heard his snorts and face palming cut the call…
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{bhavya’s room}
After talking with om who wasn’t even talking and that wasn’t even a talk as only gauri was speaking…gauri entered bhavya’s room to wake her up and seeing her laying on recliner she smiled and covered her with a duvet “rudra! How are you baby?” bhavya held gauri’s hand as she covered her with a duvet “I’m not rudra” gauri giggled and tried freeing her hand “hmm” bhavya replied and gauri reminded of om’s talk which happened few seconds ago she was angry on the way he responded and listening it again she couldn’t control and picking a water jug placed nearby she poured all on bhavya and she get up with a jerk “hell sugar plum” bhavya shouted “what did I do?” bhavya sat on recliner with a thud “HMM” gauri glared her angrily while bhavya face palmed “I know you don’t like it but what was my fault I was sleeping na” bhavya whined “I don’t care choco chip you should control your words” gauri went out flipping her hair and bhavya cursed her in heart {sister’s do}
“okay so If I’m wide awake I should check weather this dumbbell replied me or not” thought bhavya and picked up her mobile which was fully drenched “phail gaya raita” bhavya glared her mobile and then again cursed gauri “now one more gone she’ll never change keep destroying my mobile” bhavya made irritated faced and tried using her mobile and her screen flashed and went off “dammit gone! Completely gone thank god I had saved all the things in cloud not on mobile otherwise once again I would’ve lost my favorite pictures” bhavya sighed and ran out still drenched just to face gauri…
{in hall khushi and arnav}
They both laid there for about 5 minutes…and was about to get up when mansi arrived “why you’re sweating and why the heck you’re rolling on floor like Dogs’?” mansi sternly asked “maa! She was chasing me” arnav stood up “no maa he started it all” khushi went to her “what he started khushi?” mansi looked at arnav “maa… yes, yes ask her what I started” arnav innocently smirked “gauriiiii” bhavya’s voice reached their ears and they turned to the side of voice and saw gauri coming and behind her bhavya running shouting… “what happened to you both now?” mansi rolled her eyes “maa di na” and before she could complete bhavya slipped and gauri giggled “ahhhhh…such cruel people instead of picking me up you’re laughing at me” bhavya turned her face and laid on floor on her stomach “bhavya common get up beta” Aditya forwarded his hand “finally someone who love me” bhavya forwarded her hand and holding Aditya’s hand she getup “umm what happened to you bhavya? Why you’re so wet? Did you take shower with clothes on?” arnav chuckled “di threw water on me I was sleeping and she threw it on me and my mobile got destroyed” bhavya glared gauri “so why you’re staring me? who told you to say that word?” gauri rolled her eyes “maa I was sleeping and in sleep I muttered HMM and she threw water on me and didn’t cared about me and my mobile…what’s my fault I was sleeping not in my senses” bhavya whined looking at mansi “sleep was yours… that doesn’t matter to me then thing matter was you said that word and that enraged me… so stop complaining as it’ll never matter to me” gauri finished and looked at arnav who facepalmed and gulped shooking his head while khushi got enraged again
“what you did gauri” arnav whispered and slipped from there all were confused “khushi you were telling what arnav did?” mansi looked at her “MATTER MATTER AND MATTER” khushi yelled “is this something you do in morning gauri…I hate it…arnav spoiled my mood and reason was matter and you’re repeating it…huff run beta save your life” khushi added and passed deadly glares to gauri and who was busy looking at bhavya “you are the reason choco chip” gauri passed angry glares to bhavya and ran behind her while khushi started chasing gauri and gauri was busy chasing bhavya “stop” mansi shouted but no use “honey go bring the bucket” mansi looked at Aditya and nodding he left from there and after few minutes returned with a water bucket arnav was busy giggling hiding behind a pillar and his bad luck khushi’s gaze fell on him and leaving gauri she ran to him and he started running and 2 chases were going on in mansion as soon as they reached near mansi and Aditya during their TOM AND JERRY chase mansi with the help of Aditya splashed the bucket water on them and they all slipped there only “ahhhhh” they all shouted “shutup” mansi yelled and they all silently laid on floor only on their back “first and last warning behave everyone! I don’t want to see this fight ever again! Nothing should matter to anyone khushi try controlling your temper and same goes to you gauri…you can’t get angry on a simple word what if someone says that in public will you people react in the same way and will start chasing any random and strange person? NO! so try to be in patience and you both arnav and bhavya stop teasing them if you know they hate this don’t do it…” mansi sternly told “maa but the fault wasn’t mine she should apologies she disturbed my sleep…spoiled my recliner and destroyed my mobile” bhavya pouted “ofcourse she will apologies” mansi smiled “no maa I’m elder then her I’ll not” gauri refused “I don’t care who is elder who is younger you did a mistake apologies now” mansi sternly said “Sorry choco chip” gauri side hugged her and smiled “now arnav” Aditya glared “mistake was equal honey” arnav pouted “both now” mansi sternly said “sorry baby” arshi said together and hugged “ahm! Behave arnav and khushi” Aditya coughed and they got apart… “now go get fresh and do your breakfast and then get ready for the wedding” mansi smiled and left while gauri blushed and rest giggled and left to their respective rooms…
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OM kitchen
Annika was standing in kitchen leaning on the slab “what will I make?” annika thought and picked up some vegetables “no… something different” again she thought and dropped them “I should make shivaay’s favorite dish” thought annika “no! not everyone likes what he loves so something which all will eat… let’s just google it what is the yummiest dish of India” annika smiled and took out her mobile from her pocket and searched and search page opened “alu matar, ewww” “palak paneer, yummy but” “alu gobi, umm not good idea” “beef vindaloo, ewww” “butter chicken, yummyyyyy okay I’ll make it” “oh here is the idea of sweet too… carrot halwa yumm” “so it is done I’ll make chapatti with butter chicken and in sweet gajar ka halwa” annika smiled and started cutting onions took out butter tomatoes and putting a pan on stove she started making butter chicken and while it was cooking she knead the dough for chapatti and started crushing carrots and nearly 1 hour later chapatti and butter chicken was ready and halwa was cooking on stove…
——————-after sometime on lunch table {as breakfast time passed}
“what had you made annika?” dadi looked at annika “dadi butter chicken masala with chapatti and” annika was cut in mid by rudra “and let me guess…kheer” rudra jumped “you love me so much bhabhi” rudra was about to hug annika “I have made gajar ka halwa” annika chuckled as rudra sat back to his place “gauri will make kheer for now have it” annika creased rudra’s hair and he smiled “well let’s see how much tasty it is” all said and started adding the food in their respective plates and annika sat beside shivaay “shivaay how is it?” annika whispered “why don’t you taste it by yourself” shivaay too whispered while smirking “please tell na is it good or not?” annika whispered “bhabi it is awesome no need to ask this billu” om chuckled while praising her food “umm thankyou om” annika passed a smile while shivaay made faces “yes annika beta it is yummy I never had such a yummy food before” pinky praised and then all {I’m shorting it already it is too long}
“thankyou” annika thanked everyone “come here beta have it” dadi forwarded some money as naik followed by all…
“now let’s leave to get ready we don’t have much time guest will be arriving at any time go get ready” dadi announcing left to her room and rest to their room…
—————–jumping to om’s room directly…
Om was sitting on a sofa chair wearing his sherwani again stuck up with his hair tying “well rudra can’t you help me instead of playing a game” om gazed at rudra “why should i? let me tell you why I hate your hair” rudra said in a serious tone “quickly” om narrowed his eyes and fidget his fingers “umm okay because they are difficult to handle give me feel that you are not my brother but some girlfriend of mine” rudra too narrowed his eyes “you both are looking as if you’ll attack eachother anytime” robin entered om’s room crossing his arms around his chest “if I haven’t worn my dress I would’ve attacked him by now” om turned toward mirror and again started trying to tie his hair “seem like he talked about your hair again” tia entered with raised eye-brows… “you know me very well” rudra forwarded hi-fi and tia reciprocated it {lol} “time is near let’s leave?” shivaay entered with a million dollar smiled followed by annika “umm so you got time mr sso? You know I’m regretting that I helped you in getting ready…you mean brother got married and didn’t even bother to ask if I need any help” om passed angry glares to shivaay whose face expressions changed from happy to tensed in a Nano seconds hearing om’s words “you could’ve asked me if you needed help om” shivaay moved near him “don’t you know it is my special day and you should help me without even asking shivaay” om turned his face “okay sorry baba! I’ll help you long hair creature still there is time and now without wasting a second tell me what help you need” shivaay ruffled his hair “this only the thing you ruffled it took a lot time to straight them -_- “om glared him “sorry don’t worry I’ll fix it” shivaay passed a smile “they’re hair bhaiya not a broken tap that you’ll fix it” rudra chuckled followed by all but shivom didn’t paid any heed to anyone and got busy in getting ready while shivaay was helping om rest where chit-chatting with eachother…
———-same time mathur mansion
Gauri was laying on bed in her bridal wear fully ready nothing was left she was looking at the duo who were getting ready in her room “I’m the bride but you people are behaving like the one” gauri threw a chips pack at them “so what? It is your problem that you don’t want to spend more time on makeup” bhavya rolled her eyes “whatever btw you are too mean bhavya you didn’t say a single word of how I’m looking” gauri made a sad face “well you know how much pretty you are so what’s the need to tell” bhavya secretly winked at khushi “wow! Even apple pie is pretty and she even know that than why you praised her yesterday” gauri swayed her legs “well in that case we are wrong totally wrong sorry gauri” khushi felt sad for not praising her “khushi” arnav entered the room “actually sorry gauri are you ready?” arnav went near gauri “yeah bhai I’m ready” gauri sat up on bed “gauriiiii you’re looking drop-dead gorgeous” arnav cupped her face and her face brightens up “yeah even I wanted to say that” bhavya joined them “gauri you know you are so pretty that you never need makeup and whenever you do makeup you looks like an angel people usually says ‘you look no less than angel’ but I’m telling you you’re an angel and if I didn’t praised you than it means I don’t want you to catch any bad sight even if it’s mine” bhavya placed a kiss on her forehead and hugged her “I knew you were kidding” gauri smirked “even I know that were acting” bhavya too smirked “you know what even I was acting” arnav smirked and they both punched him on his stomach “ahh…khushi say something” arnav looked at her “you deserve it” khushi gave a cheeky smile “enough of your Masti lets leave already I think we are late honey is waiting in car come…” mansi stood at door of room “maa” gauri said “princess you’re looking gorgeous now come” mansi smiled and left followed by rest…
—————————OM
Everyone was ready and left in their cars toward venue… and in a quite less distance they left their cars and walked toward the venue…
Om’s POV
“though the venue was same again but the set up was totally different…how can someone be so creative…well we were walking toward the venue even weather was too good… I was so excited I wanted to jump in happiness but it’ll look awkward so thought to hide it *smiles*”
POV ends
The reached near the venue gate and music plays…
Peeche barati aage band baja aaye dulhe raja
Gori khol darwaza
Laaj sharam ki rekha ko par karle
Na na na kar ha ha tu pyar karle
Nachte gate teri gali hum aayenge
Tujhko utha ke gori hum le jayenge
Apni marzi se aaja dil me samaja
Aaye dulhe raja gori khol darwaza
Peeche barati aage band baja aaye dulhe raja
Ja sanam teri kasam kayi meri majburiya
Haye ban na jaye mere hatho ki chudiya
Tera naam liya tujhe yaad kiya
Teri yado ne mujhe tham liya
Aa mere sanam ab waqt hai kam
Hoto pe hai dam mujhe teri kasam
Aankho me aasu dil me hai gham
Aaja aaja tu hai baga mere sapno ke raja
Raja raja aaja raja raja raja aaja raja
Mehndi laga le sola shingar karle
Dulhan banja khud ko taiyar karle
Kab se na jane tere piche pada hu
Dekh tere ghar ke samne khada hu
Me andar aau ya bahar tu aaja
Aaye dulhe raja gori khol darwaza
Piche barati aage band baja aaye dulhe raja
Gori khol darwaza…
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They entered the venue and it was changed now instead of red the carpet was of green color {awkward I know but chalta ha} and instead of flowers small round shaped glass globes were hanging above them and as soon as they entered the carpet started changing colors {lights effect} with the carpet changing colors the globes opened like a flower and flower petals fell on all of them {purple color globe showered purple petals, blue color globe showered blue petals, black color globe showered black petals, white color globe showered white petals and green color globe showered green petals}…
They were happy and once again impressed by the arrangement now annika too was impressed and just like shivaay om too step on a step but it didn’t lift him up and it started moving like an escalator and he was standing infront of the alter where mansi Aditya were standing om taking blessings moved toward the alter and was about to sit when he reminds what he told shivaay yesterday “so eager?” this word roamed in his mind and he stopped there only instead of sitting he preferred to stand… “om you need to sit not to stand” Jhanvi pulled him down ro sit on the sofa placed on alter {for a change I replaced chair’s with sofa} “no mom I’m not that eager to marry gauri so no need to sit soon” om smiled and stood up again “what is wrong with you om you need to sit weather you’re eager or not” tej pulled him glaring and om sat making puppy face “how much ever you try we can still see your eagerness… mr zulfi singh oberoi” shivaay teased him and om turned pink “lo he haven’t teased you much that you’re turning into pinky ops… I mean pink color” rudra chuckled “whatever you people go away stop irritating me” om pushed them “well think again we will not come again if you’ll push us like this… this was the first time that’s why asking you to think again” shivaay said in a serious tone controlling his smile “I’m sure of kicking you away go” om turned his face toward other side “think om they will not be with you during doodh pilai what if your SIL demanded something which involves them what you’ll do” robin peeped from other side and whispered in om’s ear “okay fine bhaiya O has decided to kick us away why to force him let’s just leave…” rudra patted shivaay’s back and shivaay nodded and they both started leaving “hell with you guys stay here can’t you even understand a joke I was kidding man” om pulled them smiling and controlling his inner anger “stay here this is also my decision no more comments” om said in one breath and started talking with arnav who came to meet him…
On the other hand, annika was busy in telling honey and darling about her first rasoi in OM she was going to spill about the mess shivaay cleaned but on time she left biting her lower lip… excuse: maa I’ll bring gauri…
Om’s POV
“okay I doubt if it is my wedding or not? They all are buys discussing their matters what about me and where this gauri is? I never seen such forgettable people sitting here and came for my wedding but I think they forgot…I’m so eager to see how she will be looking, how much more she will be slaying this black and green combined color dress… yeah I haven’t seen her bridal wear still yesterday shivaay and bhabi were color coordinated so it means today we will be color coordinated…I’m so intelligent so much logic just like rudra… “where is gauri?” my maa finally questioned “just coming” my FIL answered still just coming how much more time does she need she isn’t going to some wedding that she is taking so long to get read *bites his tongue* ops it’s her marriage and ofcourse she is going in a wedding she should take more time… this eagerness and dumbbell oberoi’s useless talks have destroyed my common senses… ohh fast heartbeat she must be near I think she is coming “here she is” mansi aunty mean my MIL pointed toward other side of alter from where she was coming with her sisso’s and To be bhabi… GOREGEOUS she is angel oh God I’m not able to take off my eyes from her she’s looking HOT too… my to be wife you’re slaying this dress…though it isn’t some open lehnga whenga but still she is looking breath taking beautiful… I can forget to breath if I’ll keep staring her… her swaying hair’s and her perfect makeup slaying…slaying and just slaying I want to go and hug her but these peoples have surrounded us we can’t even hug…her high heels… what to say more…I said na she’s an angel GOD has gifted me I love you gauri… her each step toward me is just speeding up my heart beat…but I’m much happy than shivaay as we will be sitting on sofa not some chairs”
Gauri’s POV
“I looked at him and he was already staring me…I’m sure he must be thinking about how fat I’m looking in this tight dress but it isn’t that tight too… I knew it we would be color coordinated and my thought was right btw I don’t even want to see his face for the thing he did in morning but we are getting married and I think I should not behave in this way with my PATI ji but still to be… MY ZULFI SINGH OBEORI his hair adds magic in his looks I’m happy he didn’t tie them up in a bun or ponytail and preferred to let them be open… black suits him much… I love the way he looks at me… MY LOVE… but I can’t look at him the way he is looking at me…I love you my omkie…and wow no chairs… I sat down beside him and he immediately intertwined his fingers in mine…ufff theses stomach butterflies”
Priest: now you both stand and exchange garlands {guys sorry I forgot to write this scene for shivika I wrote that in a hurry}
Om and gauri stood up and were handed the garlands…
Gauri tried wearing him but shivaay and rudra lifted him up and he gone above from her level… gauri smiled while all were enjoying… shivru placed him down and again gauri tried wearing him and again they lifted him up and then placed down and gauri immediately almost jumping wore him garland…now it was the turn of gauri’s side so before om can wear her garland annika and bhavya lifted her up om smiled and tried jumping but failed rudra pushed him little up so he can wear her garland but khushi joined Aniya and gauri was more up now om looked at shivaay and shivaay joined rudra and lifted him up as soon as he reached her height arnav joined khushi Aniya and gauri was much up om now looked at robin and he joined but he didn’t reached her height as they were cops and were holding her really up now om looked at tia and she too joined and his height increased little and rest he did by jumping and making her wear garland and falling on ground they all fell due to his jump just boys side…
All laughed out hard…
Priest: now tie their knot…
Jhanvi moved forward and ties their knots
Priest: now time for rounds…
First Round: om walks ahead and promise to gauri to provide food and prosperity to her and their future children…gauri in return promise to take care of him and his home.
Second round: om promises to provide protection to the home and children and promise to stay loyal to her. gauri promises to stand by him and support him in happiness and pain
{all were showering flowers on them continuously}
Third round: om promises to grown in wealth and see to the proper education of the children. gauri pledges to her loyalty and promise to not look at other man.
Fourth round: om claims that gauri is the one who has bought sacredness and together they will be good children to their parents as well. gauri promises to honor om and be a partner in joy and sorrow and vows to fulfill all his wishes.
Fifth round: om calls gauri his “best friend” and his biggest well-wisher. gauri promises to love him forever.
Sixth round: om wishes joy and peace upon gauri and gauri promises to be by his side…
Seventh round: they pledge their entire being to one another…
{guys I’m really sorry if something is wrong in rounds vows I’m not an Indian so have no knowledge about it I searched it on google and wrote it down sorry if any mistake…}
Priest: now both sit down…
om and annika gauri sit down on sofa again…
Priest: now fill her hair partition with vermillion
om happily looked at her mom who forwarded a vermillion box to him and he taking a pinch from it om forwarded his hand toward her forehead and mansi lifted her mang tikka little up and om filled her hair partition with vermillion and she closed her eyes while rest just smiled…
Priest: now make her wear MS…
Now again Jhanvi forwarded a plate which was filled with petals and MS was laying on the bed of petals om carefully picked it up and forwarded his hands toward her neck she smiled and he carefully tied it on her neck adoring her neck with beautiful MS they both smiled and held eachothers hand
Priest: marriage is complete now take blessings from elder…
Omkara and gauri moved toward dadi first and bowed down to take blessings…
“jeete raho {live long}” dadi blessed them and they smiled and simultaneously they took blessings from all…
After cutting a cake They both were sitting on sofa which were placed on stage soon they were surrounded by girl’s gang of bridal side girls sat on their knees and forwarded a glass toward groom “drink it jiju” bhavya smiled as om knew it is doodh pilai so he didn’t ask silly questions “umm bhavya… I don’t drink milk” om made faces “but om” annika was cut in mid “please gauri will drink my part too…but don’t force me my stomach will be upset than” om made a puppy face “okay” Aniya said in unity… “what about doodh pilai amount?” khushi reminded them “oh yeah” Aniya looked at om smirking “so you need to sketch us now right now… 2 options… sketch us {annika and bhavya, or sketch yourself without hair}” annika giggled “what?” om wide opened his mouth “yes! And if you’ll not do it than umm forget the dulhan” bhavya smiled “and one more thing that is what bhavya want I want you to give me 1 lac” annika gave a cheeky smile “both the task is impossible, I mean at least I need 2 days to sketch you as I can’t imagine myself without hair and 1 lac I don’t have right now I just have 20,000 you can keep if you want to” om explained “that is none of our business… do it or forget her” bhavya smirked “okay let’s make it easy not the sketch on canvas you can draw it on APPLE tab and simple one not much detailing in short simple yet elegant” annika smiled “okay…give me tab and khanna please bring some money from my vault” om smiled and started sketching them all the guests were impatient for seeing what he will draw some were even his fans after all he is famous artist…
“it is done” om shrieked “1 hour” annika smiled “show it to me” bhavya snatched the tab and connected it on the big LED and the venue park was echoed with claps om was happy and gauri was feeling proud of him… “jiju this is the best sketch I have ever seen” bhavya’s eyes twinkled {you can imagine the best sketch you’ve ever seen…with bhavya standing behind a sofa on which aniri were sitting in red gowns…}
“you sketched 3 of us… that’s great om thanks for the sketch” annika smiled “now can I take her?” om gritted his teeth “not yet my amount?” annika narrowed her eyes and khanna arrived “here is your amount sir” khanna forwarded a packet to om and he forwarded it to annika “thanks om” annika smiled and left the place… “ops we forgot to give you the milk” bhavya bit her lower lip “it’s okay give that now!” khushi patted her back and bhavya forwarded the glass to gauri who took a sip of it and finding it tasty she drank the whole glass… “phail gaya raita” bhavya khushi and arnav face palmed while gauri smiled
After lot of Masti it was the time of Bidaai gauri didn’t frowned and smiled happily… though she is younger than annika but she is much mature than her sometimes annika behaves childishly but it’s because she is much more sensitive than all she gets emotional soon she gets happy soon everything affects her soon…she tries to be bold and strong but fails at some point but gauri her case is different she shows she isn’t strong but she is much strong than anyone can even think… she get effected but is also strong enough to hide it immediately without anyone noticing it maybe that’s the reason she got someone who is expert in reading eyes and understanding the untold stories and emotions and it was the time for the test of both not by others but by themselves unknowingly they were taking test of eachother {let me show how}
Bidaai time came and gauri and om were standing down the stage on ground… gauri was smiling hysterically which was making everyone wonder om was also smiling hysterically seeing gauri smiling… annika got teary eyes again listening the word Bidaai… “maa” gauri moved toward mansi “I’ll miss you and you too miss me okay?” gauri smilingly hugged mansi “ofcourse beta take care of yourself and you know of annika too” mansi creased her hair and planting a kiss on her forehead she hugged her tightly … gauri is same like her mom strong though there is no relation of blood between them but since childhood gauri called her mother and darling too and have learnt a lot from her while annika used to be with honey learning fighting skill gauri used to be with mansi learning to be strong and working with her in household works so basically annika is like Aditya while gauri is like mansi and that too WITHOUT BLOOD RELATION… now gauri moved toward Aditya who was teary eyed “stop it honey why you’re crying I’m going to my in laws house not to some grave that you’re crying” gauri looked at Aditya “idiot don’t say like this” Aditya slapped her lightly and hugged her followed by a kiss on forehead… “I love you my doll” he creased her hair and she smiled “arnav” gauri just hugged him tightly “I wish you’ll get married soon too…I want to see her daily or in a week at least so for that you need to marry her” gauri planted a kiss on his hand and he kissed her forehead “sure gauri you know what your words mean to me so sure” arnav again hugged her and she smilingly switched to khushi skipping bhavya “umm bhabi I know you’re to be bhabhi but it is good na that I call you bhabi now only so please shift here in India and only in Mumbai not somewhere else please… so that I can meet you daily” gauri hugged her “sure my nand ji” khushi reciprocated and gauri smiled “let’s go?” om asked and gauri nodded while smiling…
Song played and all cried…except gauri she kept on smiling to hide her tears…
baabul ki duaaen leti ja, ja tujh ko sukhi sansaar mile
maike ki kabhi na yaad aae, sasuraal men itana pyaar mile
baabul ki duaaen…………………..
naazon se tujhe paala maine, kaliyon ki tarah, phoolon ki tarah
bachapan men jhulaaya hai tujh ko, baanhon ne meri jhoolon ki tarah
mere baagh ki ai naazuk daali, tujhe har pal nai bahaar mile
baabul ki duaaen………………………
jis ghar se bandhe hain bhaag tere, us ghar men sada tera raaj rahe
honthon pe hansi ki dhoop khile, maathe pe khushi ka taaj rahe
kabhi jis ki jyot na ho phiki, tujhe aisaa roop-singaar mile
baabul ki duaaen………………………
beeten tere jeevan ki ghadiyaan, aaraam ki thandi chhaanvon men
kaanta bhi na chubhane paae kabhi, meri laadali tere paanvon men
us dvaar se bhi dukh dur rahen, jis dvaar se tera dvaar mile
baabul ki duaaen……………………
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Gauri sat in car decorated with flowers and waved and soon the car drove off only of groom…
“bhavya I’m sorry! I slept off last night with whatsapp open sorry” rudra whispered as all were sitting in the car “idiot it’s okay and take care of yourself…and please take your medicine before sleeping I won’t be able to msg you today my mobile isn’t working and I forgot to buy new” bhavya held his hand “do your ashiquee tomorrow now let’s leave” shivaay smirking pulled rudra with him and annika meeting with her family went to her house with her new family…
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“gauri! I know you want to cry you can but just little” om looked at her “are you sure?” gauri looked at him back “yes!” om smiled holding her hand and tears escaped from her eyes “even I wanted to cry but I’m their doll and doll never cries for such small things” gauri placed her head on his shoulder and cried her heart out which wasn’t so much …
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They reached om and stepped out of cars while gauri was feeling dizzy but om was holding her hand… Jhanvi went in and bring arti thal om and gauri stood at door step and Jhanvi did their arti and they stepped in and gauri pushed the kaalash filled with rice and leaving foot prints of alta and hand prints too she reached hall of OM and they got settled on floor cushions and ring finding ceremony took place a bowl full of milk was placed infront of them with flower petals floating in the bowl and on the count of 3…2…1. They inserted their hand sin bowl and the hand fight begins followed by eye’s fight
Annika’s phone rang and she went away to attend “g maa?” annika answered the call “not maa but choco chip apple you know sugar plum had drunk the whole glass of milk so wrap up the rituals soon otherwise the room ceremony will happen infront of all only” bhavya informed annika who facepalmed and disconnects the call…
Gauri and om were fighting with eachothers hands but they didn’t find ring “ops sorry bhaiya bhabi I forgot to add ring” rudra smiled gulping “khoteyo add now” dadi scolded him and he immediately added ring and mixed it they both again started their fight but om held gauri’s hand in bowl and started tickling on her palm already she was in trance so she started laughing … “phail gaya raita” annika facepalmed “what happened” shivaay asked “actually in doodh pilai rasam the milk gauri drank was actually a bhang and its effect has started “what?” shivaay screamed and everyone looked at him “I mean what you are doing find it quickly na we are tired…” shivaay covered up “I found it” om and gauri said together and looked at eachother…
Saathiya played…
“once again takkar ki ishqbaazi” dadi clapped “now you can go to your rooms” dadi added “wait! Gauri these bangles are of dadi she gave me and now I’m giving it to you so take care and stay happy” gauri laughed and she smiled confusingly “gauri come we will drop you to your room” annika immediately pulled her to the room side followed by rest and as happened with shivaay om too reached late but he sighed seeing none there “I can’t take risk what if they are hiding here only to see my eagerness” thought om and locking the door went near bed “gauri be relaxed” smiled om and laid as soon as he laid on bed “krrr krrr” voice came and he jumped off the bed while gauri laughed and everyone came out from their hiding place laughing “fhat the wuck? What was that?” om looked at them puzzled “papar” they laughed and showed him papar’s planted on his side “get out” om shouted and they collecting the papar left from their giggling… “huh” om looked at gauri who was still laughing “thank god they left” sighed om and walked to close the door “best of luck and yeah close and cover these windows too” shivaay peeped in from window with everyone by his side locking the door om slammed the window on their faces and covered them… after doing so he looked at gauri “why you’re standing there come sit near me” gauri said in a husky voice removing all her jewelry “let me help you” om moved “yeah please unhook my dress my hands aren’t able to reach to that” gauri looked at om with her Gulabi ankhein 😉 “umm sure” om moved near her and unhooked her dress and seeing her bare back he rubbed his hand on her back and she smiled closing her eyes “om” gauri again said in husky voice… “yeah?” om turned to her and their noses touched she looked into his eyes and he into hers and she slammed her lips on his this was totally unexpected for om he never expected this from her he was wondering on her different behavior but soon started reciprocating the kiss… she bit his upper lip and entered his mouth while he entered her and they both enjoyed their first kiss with love and passion soon they both got apart and gauri smiled looking at om and again slammed her lips on her closing eyes she was holding his hair and kissing him and again after recovering from shock he reciprocated while sliding and rubbing his hand on her bare back… enjoying the cherry ness they went out of breath and got apart “I love you om” gauri smiled and pushed him on bed “I love you too gauri” om whispered as she leaned toward his face and getting on top of him she again slammed her lips on his and now without wasting time on being shocked or on thinking he reciprocated and this kiss went on long and they both got apart due to lack of oxygen om was shy but she was bold the effect of bhang was helping her a lot she looked into his eyes and bit him near his neck and licking it she started placing kisses and soon om reciprocated it and did same with her by now he was also turned on and he switched his positions and came on top of her and started kissing her…
Soon their clothes were left abounded as if they never belonged to them slowly and steadily the room was filled with their LOVE MOAS! {I’m not so good in these things pardon me} candles which were set for their first night shied away seeing their love making… moon being the witness of their love they completed their marriage… their love session went on for short time as gauri fainted but they were satisfied in an exhausted and a pleasurable manner… seeing gauri dozing off he too dosed off being tired and now one more tiredness but this tiredness was something they would love to repeat… from gauri and omkara they became {RIKARA or you can say Gaukara} their love reached its destination…they became one in all the means of life… an unbreakable bond build up between them…which can never be break by anyone now… RIKARA!
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{shivaay’s room}
Shivaay was taking steam bath to get relaxed after annika got fresh… but it took him lot time to come that annika dozed off on the couch in a sitting position waiting for him as she wanted to talk with him the most important thing “THE PAIN SHE IS HIDING THE GUILT HE WAS FEELING” Shivaay came out from washroom to see her sleeping he was mesmerized seeing her but then he picked her up and laid on bed she held his hand in sleep and hugged it “I love you… guilty doesn’t…” and she slept again even those words she said in sleep only… shivaay tried freeing his hand but she didn’t left it so he settled and kissing her forehead “I love you too” dozed off in minutes…
{rudra’s room}
He slept hugging bhavya’s pic in his mobile…
{bhavya’s room}
She slept hugging rudra’s pic frame…
{arnav’s room}
Khushi entered with 2 mugs in her hand arnav was sitting near window staring moon… “here” she forwarded the cup “ I know you’re missing them already” khushi adjusted herself “yes” arnav replied “don’t worry” khushi smiled “I’m not worrying khushi it is just that they are getting married I mean 2 got married and one will be married tomorrow I never thought about it ever…it is hard to believe that now they will not be staying with us anymore…you know since childhood we have been supporting pillars for eachother… first we were friends before meeting honey and darling we were eachothers mom and dad…so our bond is old we were strangers than became friends than besties than bhai and this unbreakable bond” arnav had tears and khushi patted his back to console him they both sat there talking with eachother and dozed off on bed as they shifted to bed 😉
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So guys this is the 19th part of this FF…I hope you’ll enjoy it too the way you all enjoyed the last one…
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Please do comment guys I thought I will get 20+ comments on last part shivika ki wedding but never mind it was mine fault as I updated late…but now please do comment it took 2 days to plan and write… this is quite long update…I hope you’ll like it and if you enjoyed it please drop the comment don’t leave without commenting if you’ve read let me also know what you think about it…
And guys if by chance in a sentence a word gets missing please ignore that mistake because sometime it happens with me I think to write and assume that I wrote and in actual I haven’t written so enough of bak and bak enjoy it
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Oh God…..I m running out of words now….everything is so beautifully written….I loved it….
Thankyousomuch for your lovely comment Nita❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Yes i enjoyed a lot… i must say that u have soo much of patience to thinkand write an ff like dis.. it soo mazing and thank you for including arshi equally with remaining pairs..
Glad you enjoyed alot❤❤❤❤afteall it’s a wedding who don’t enjoy it? Well I’m a impatient person i can never have patience in any thing but don’t know why patience comes jumping to me while the matter is of IB FF?❤❤❤❤❤ it was my duty to provide the thing my cutie followers demanded ?❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ thankyousomuch for the appreciation ?
Babe ?? it was lovely..! HV no words to describe wat m feeling right now!! Each n every event n those feelings of all of them n everything, each n every scene was just amazing!! M left speechless after reading this!! N yes i like d way u write.. just love it specially Ur long updates!! Long ones give d actual feel of d scene n so just keep gng!! Love it!!
OMG! Reading the word ‘Babe’ reminded me of my bestie for a second i thought she commented but she isn’t on TU nevermind i loved it you called me that❤❤❤❤❤????? I’m happy you’re enjoying it to the fullest…. thankyousomuch for the appreciation babes!?❤❤❤❤❤❤ wish to receive the same love on next too!??❤❤❤❤
OMG! Wht a khidkithod epi dr.loved it 2 d coreeeeee my rikara was on fireee n I never expected dat gauri will act bold in their first night. (Bt I has 2 happen.dat idiot drank d whole glass of milk) n our omki was soOOOOOOO cute in 2dy epi.I can imagine hw cute he would be looking sleeping on his bed one leg hanging down n sleeping in bath tub.ha haaa.his antics r so cute in whole epi.well i’m impressed dr.u did justice 2 our cutie pies rikara’s wedding. I’m so happy. N I thought u r an Indian. I’m shocked hearing dat u r not an indian. U described beautifully all d marriage functions. U nailed it dr.nw waiting 4 ruvya’s wedding. I’m sure u’ll nail it too.bye dr tc
Yeah rikara was on fire in hsp too? yeah barriely ki chiraya drank whole glasd of bhang? actually for me all the couples are same no difference so if i did justice to shivika I’ll surely do much more justice to rikara because youngers get more than elders and that’s cuteness not differentiated thing so ruvya will be justified much more! Happy you loved it and yeah om’s antics are the thing i enjoyed muxh while writing as i imagined i bursted into laughter ???? thanks again❤❤❤❤❤❤
loved shivikas wedding actually love shivika more than rikara it’s awesome plz update next asap with more shivika
Thankyousomuch sure❤❤❤❤❤❤
Nice update
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Amazinggggg annie loved it to d core… post nxt soon…
Thankyousomuch Lauren next will be uploaded by morning or night not sure ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awesome update
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Very very beautiful. Just simply loved it. Pls update asap. ????♥️??????????♥️????????????????????????????????
Thankyousomuch will try to upload by night❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awesome???????loved it to the core ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤???????waiting for next part update soon
Thankyousomuch niriha will try to upload by night❤❤❤❤❤
It is nice one dear… Lovely update
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It was very nice. I have no words to appreciate it. I liked the bhang idea. Update asap.
Thankyousomuch Hkaur❤❤❤❤❤❤
Fabulous…. mind blowing… masti… romance… family moments…. everything was there. It was just wonderful. I loved shivika’s wedding episode a lot… it had everything in it… u included everyone’s scenes… tejvi, shanky and tia&robin as well. The stage decor was wonderful… they made shivika’s stage into a whole new beautiful stage in just a day… wow. And ur concept of chairs and sofas instead of the stools was nice. U r tryin out new and innovative ideas and it’s really nice.
Shivika’s marriage was amazing. Omru dancing to tht song… i could imagine it in my head so nicely… and jab woh usse tad raha tha infrnt of everyone and she was also looking at him… his eagerness for marriage. But bechara wasn’t able to hold hands with anika. His excitement level was so high and he was so eager to get married and make anika his with full right…. wonder how he controlled his excitement infrnt of all. Heard of doodh pilai rasam for the first time i think…. but it was very nice…. and he gave their mu maangi keemat being afraid tht they wouldn’t give him his anika. And shivay taking her to her parent’s grave…. how sweet of him… her emotions are so mixed… like she wants to be happy but is sad frm inside since she doesn’t have them on her special day. The ring finding ritual… i am sure shivay was having a great time there (it’s hard to write without emojis ) and they both caught the ring on the same time and shivay was gonna back out but anika didn’t let him… awww tht was so sweet. Bechara shivay thoda late kya huwa dulhan hi badal gayi. Their first night was just beautiful. He removed her jewellery and strted his romance there only and wht followed next was pure bliss…. the union of two souls who are perfect for each other and are meant to be together. The morning after was just (heart emoji)… shivay admiring his beautiful wife and feeling guilty for all the miseries she had to go through because of him and his family.The forehead kisses were just so nice and it gives u the feeling tht ur very special for him. Shivay’s reaction when anika was yawning… i couldn’t stop laughing…. and their small romance over there and then in bathroom as well… shivay cheapde kahin ke… he cleaned the whole mess they created so tht his wife didn’t have to do it since she’s already very tired… tht was sooooo sweet and caring of him (in love with this shivay soo soo much)…. the romance when they were getting ready… both of them were thinking abt each other only and then pinky came and teased thm a bit. First rasoi was a success i guess.
Om loved his sleep more thn his wedding… haha he had an answer to all of jhanvi’s questions. He slept off in the bath tub. He messaged gauri arnd 200 times… woah i would have slept off reading all those messages. All the love gauri had turned into anger when he said HMMM 2-3 times… and because of him bechari bhavya had to face the outcome. And khushi getting angry on arnav caz he said DOESN’T MATTER… and there followed a cat and mouse chase between the four of them… i couldn’t stp laughing imagining thm running behind each other ready to eat the other up… haha. Nice idea mansi… but u should have put cold water instead of normal to cool down their heads… arshi apologisin to each other was the cutest… “i am sry baby”…. ankhein kholo ur parents are infrnt of u only. Thank god om left his hair open only… i like it like tht only… Zulfi Singh Oberoi. He was also eager like shivay but didn’t mistake of showing it… om is the one who takes all the tips frm shivay’s mistakes lekin aakhir main kuch farak nahi padta… naye ideas aate hai. Both of them were colour coordinated and were thankful tht they had sofas not chairs… haha and om immediately interwined their hands afraid tht someone would take her away frm him. The garland ceremony was awesome… ladki wale ne soodh samade badla le liya… they lifted her up so high tht om had to jump and put her the garland and due to tht he even fell down…. haha. Om very clever ha didn’t drink the milk… i can’t imagine om with no hair…. tht would be his worst nightmare and he had to give in to their demands eventually and i am sure the pic he had drawn of the three of them would have been very beautiful… gauri u drank the whole glass of milk… phail gaya raita. Gauri askin arnav to marry soon… i love the bond aniriya and arnav share with each other… it’s so pure and beautiful and full of love. Gauri is a very strong girl but everyone does fall weak on leaving behind their parents but she tried her best to not show it and om understood her really well and let her cry her heart out when they were alone. Rudy… u frgt to put the ring only…. for so long they were playing with each others hands… and even they found it on the same time. Before anything happened thank god she went into the room otherwise suhagraat would have happened there only…. hahahaha. Om whtever u do… the gang will surely find a way to tease u… close all the windows before u do anything. Gauri was on fire today… seedha went to om and said plz unhook my dress…. om is not able to get out of the first kiss tht she kissed him the next moment only. Rikara compliment each other really nicely rikara’s first night was something different and u have written it wonderfully. I can’t wait to see her reaction the next mrng. I can’t imagine wht u r goin to do for ruvya’s first night.
Shivika’s small romance in their bedroom aftr the marriage was soo nice…. it was small yet beautiful. I love it when they cuddle and sleep.
Wow… i think this is my longest comment till date… and it’s for u only. I am so used to writing with emojis… tht i felt weird while writing on the laptop. Ur next epi will be a blast as well… aftr seeing shivika and rikara’s wedding i am sure ruvya’s wedding will be super hit as well. Take care dear and love u loads. Don’t blush too much 😛
Okay okay! I’m not dreaming ??? feeling like flying in the air and come to you give yiu a tight hug?????? such a long comment and your trust on me ❤❤❤❤❤ that’s something my friends never had on me ? but you❤ just love ❤❤❤ thankyousomuch for the comment maryam and such a long too… it wasn’t needed dear as you was busy but you’ve commented and I’m loving it ❤❤❤❤ i read it for the 3rd time ???? I’m speechless to comment back… you are a great what should i say shortage of words❤❤❤❤ well i loved that you commented and loved you’re loving the shivaay of Fiction story too along with the one of IB? these are totally natural idea’s ? and little from you too dearie???? i was stuck in shivika marriage than i remember you gave idea’s and boom graveyard scene????? i know the weirdness of not being able to use emoji? i had faced alot… as i said I’m short at words to thank and appreciate the comment longest comment you gave I’m wrapping my blah blah with a Huge Thankyouuuuuuuuuuuuuu❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ and a bear HUG❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ and standing applause ???❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ keep reading and you know your comments are the reason I’m here with 19 part because of you and few others i continued otherwise i wouldn’t have continued and give it an abrupt end with low comments but you people GIve me a perfect reason to continue and that’s your support thanks for taking out time and giving a comment specially for me *ninth sky*???❤❤❤?❤❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤? love you loads too❤❤❤❤❤ tc too❤ and yeah i did blushed alot alone in the room✌❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Now u made me blush with such a long reply ??… aww don’t wry dear u’ll find much better friends later on ☺. Recieved the bear hug and here’s one frm my side for u ?… take a panda one since i didn’t find a nice bear emoji ?. And no need for the standing applause and all…. instead u should be the one who deserves standing applause cause u gave us such a khidkitod ff and super long updates ?. And thanks for continuing this ff for me and the others as well. My friend recently strted watchin ishqbaaz and she’s in love with omkara… i sent her this link but since it was soo long she just skimmed through it and went for rikara’s part and she was like it’s amazing ? esp the drunk gauri .
Love u loads ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Blush blush? our blush game is more strong than Shivika one? well panda hug is much good????yeahhhh found one?❤ and you deserved this applause ❤ and I’m glad you tried spreading it and umm a new fan of My fiction character ? I’m on ninth sky again❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤??????? load of love back ❤❤❤❤❤
Amazing…eagerly waiting for the next
Thankyousomuch ❤❤