Hello everyone..??
Myself Inara..I m new to Telly updates…
A big big big sdch fan..❤❤
More precisely a big kanchi fan…????
And being a fan..I thought to write a fan fiction..Hope u guys like it.
Kuch galti ho gayi toh choti Behen samajh k maaf kr dena ??
And haan i love making friends…So anybody interested in being my friend..
A girl is seen at the airport..
Finally i reached..My country My India..????
Chal beta sanchi jaldi se ghar dhundh le…Kal se hospital bhi toh jana hai…Yahoo first day at one of the most prestigious college as an intern…
Saying this the girl called someone…
Hello Mr.Sen Sanchi here..
Mr Sen:- O hi Sanchi..Reached Mumbai..?
S:-Ya just 10 mins before my flight landed.Mr.Sen actually i have to join the hospital tomorrow..So i need to go to the house about which u were talking ..So can we meet today..
Sen:- Sanchi i m extremely sorry..I m not in Mumbai..I came to Delhi yesterday..
S:- Don’t be sorry..We can do one thing u tell me their address i will go there myself..U just have told about me to then isn’t it..
Sen:- ya this can be done..And haan they know about u..So i can talk to them and if u like that house..Then u can stay there…
S:- cool.msg me their address..
Sen:- ya sure..Bye.
And they hanged the call.
After few.minutes..
Sanchi’s phone buzzed with a msg.
She reads it..Kapoor Mansion ,Thane..
Kabir ,’s phone no. :- ( owner of the house) 2255678907.
After reading the msg she sent a thank you msg to Mr Sen..
Before going directly to the house I should call him before going there..
And thinking this she called on the no.
But no one answered..she called again but again the same thing happened..she called again for 3-5 times but no one responded…
Now she got angry phone uthana nhi hota hai toh phone rakhte kyu hai..she murmured
So now the only option left is to go directly to their house..
So she called a cab and told the driver about the address.
After 40 mins the cab stopped..
Dr:- Mam we r at ur address.
S:- Finally..
She came out of the car..And stretched herself..
She paid the cab driver and took her luggage and started walking towards door.
The security guard standing at the gate asked her a few questions and then accompanied her till the main door to check whether Sanchi was saying truth.
She rang the doorbell..
A lady of 60- 65 years opened the door.
S:- Hello auntie..m Sanchi..Mr Sen must have told about me..
L:- o haan Mr Sen told that a girl is looking for a PG.
S:- haan it’s me.
L :- u can go Manohar, I know her .the lady asked the guard..
The guard nodded and went away.
Lady asked Sanchi to come inside..
Sanchi entered inside.
L:- Robin ,Kim ye madam Ka Saman andar le aao
Listening to this two young men came and brought her luggage inside.
Lady :- pls have a seat.pointing towards the sofa..
S:- Thank you..She said and sat..
L:- Ur name?
S:- Sanchi.. Sanchi Mishra..
L:- Mine is Kusum..Kusum Kapoor..
S:- Kusum means flower…If m not Wrong..Actually i m not so fluent in Hindi..
K:- smiling ..U r right that u live in New York..So achanak India..
S:- yes auntie..vo actually I m a doctor..I wanted to join a prestigious hospital in India and by God’s grace..I received an appointment email 2 days back.. Everything thing was ok but due to some issues they couldn’t provide me a hostel room for this year ..So for this year I would same to arrange a place for staying.When I told this to dad..through one of his friends,i got Mr Sen ‘s number.He told me about this house . I was ready to meet u but today when I called him,ge was in Delhi ,so I thought to come here alone..I even called Mr Kabir 4-5 times but he didn’t pick up so with no other option left,I had to come here without informing..sorry for that.
K:- no need to say sorry.. its good that u came here. Actually Kabir doesn’t pick calls when he is atthe hospital .
S:- So even Mr..Kabir is a doctor..she asked excitedly.
K:-Ya he is a neurosurgeon.
S:- cool..btw aunty if u don’t mind cam I ask u something..
K:- ya sure..
S:- why did u need a PG.
K:- I get bored living alone here..Actually being a workaholic Kabir never takes an off.
So no one is at home ..and along with this he has appointed servants so that I don’t work..and whenever I ask him to get married he changes the topic..so I have nothing to do other than waiting for Kabir.And since I don’t like parties and shopping , I don’t have friends..
So full day either I watch TV or scold Robin and Kim.
Then one day while reading newspaper I got an idea of keeping a PG.I told my idea to Kabir but he didn’t approve..But my emotional blackmailing worked and he agreed ..
And I called Mr Sen and told him that I want a PG for my house .And two days back he called me to inform about u ..so i told him that I will decide after meeting u..
S:- So kya decide kiya?
K:- mmm Yes..
S:- yay thank u thank u thank u so much sanchi said happily..and hugged Kusum and kisses her on her cheeks
Oh sorry sorry whenever I get excited I loose control on myself.
K:- Koi baat nhi..u r soo cute she said pulling her cheeks..
S:- thank u..auntie one more question..
K:- pucho.
S:- ur husband?
K:- he was in army..when kabir was 10 years old..he was killed by enemies..(her eyes were filled with tears)
S:- I m sorry.she said while wiping her tears.
K:- don’t feel sorry..I m proud of my husband.
S:- auntie ab aap dekhna aapki zindagi kitni amazing ho jaati hai..now u won’t get bored.
K:- smiling..lagta toh hai.
Accha Sanchi u sit here ..I m going to call Mr Sento tell him that I have decided that u will stay here with us.
S:- ok boss!! She gave her a salute.
K:- Badmash ??
While Kusum was on call with Mr.Sen..Sanchi was admiring the hall.
Suddenly the door bell rang.
K:- Sanchi dekho toh kaun aaya hai
S:- ok aunty.
Saying this Sanchi got up and opened the door.
A handsome man of 25-26 was standing at the door wearing an Italian Suit.
S:- who r u? Sanchi asked the person..
P:- excuse me who r u..
S:- I guess India mein sawal k badle sawal pucha jata hai.she said sarcastically.
Anyways I m Sanchi Mishra.Kusum aunty has decided that I will live here as a PG. Now u answer ..Who r u.?
P:- The person whom u addressed as Kusum Aunty is my mom..
S:- as soon as she heard this..she got shocked..
R u Kabir..she asked..
P:- yes m Kabir..owner of this house..and son of Kusum aunty.
S:- oh sorry sorry..I didnt knew who u r..hope u won’t mind and throw me out of here.
K:-i hate sorry..anyways where is mom..
S:- andar hai
After he went inside
Sanchi mimicked him”I hate sorry” Khadoos kahinka.
Saying this even she went inside.
She saw him sitting on sofa drinking water.she went near him and said..
S:- do u have phone..
K:- haan hai..he said showing his red iphone 7+
S:- ooohoo iphone..Ek free advice doon?
K:- kya??
S:- phone utha k phek do
K:- excuse me.
S:- haan throw it..jab phone uthana hi nhi rehta hai toh kyu rkhna..vo kahawat nhi suni..na rahega baans na bajegi bansuri..phone hi nhi rhega toh phone uthana hi nhi padega..and agar phone nhi hoga toh nobody will get angry when u won’t pick up the phone.
Before he could reply..Kusum came.
To be continued..
Phew..I know kaafi long hai..
But I couldn’t stop myself
Hope u guys liked it..
Don’t forget to comment
Lots of love
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~Inara.
Oho forgot to give Precap
Precap:- Sanchi ‘s first day at Sdch and her new friends.
Bye..????
39 Comments
superb it’s perfect ff in length please update next one soon
Thanks a lot Dhruti❤❤??..
btw hii inara…
wow it’s amazing and welcome
Thanks alot Ashnita??
This was amazing episode sis.
And ya if you don’t mind then pls continue next episode of same size it wasn’t long
Eagerly waiting for next episode.
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Hey Priyanshi
Ur wish fulfilled next one is long
❤❤
Awesome ep Inara… I just love it…. waiting eagerly fr next part…..plz update soon…
Yup!!! I want to become ur friend…..so friends????
super
It was so amazing…. Saanchi in a new avataar loved it very much
Wow @inara1906 that was cool and amazing… i can’t believe that this is your 1st article.. Salute dear ? keep it up..post next ine asap. I am eagerly waiting for ur post dear. GOOD LUCK
Ohhhhhh its amazing Sanchi new avtar is awesome . Looking forward to read ur ff. Post next part soon
Nice episode. …….
Welcome to telly update I nara and I liked ur plot soooooo much . Even I am big fan of kanchi and I giving a beautiful hug to u as friend for this beautiful story update soon can’t wait
Hi Inara welcome here dear your starting is just mindblowing waiting for the next one.
No no yaar yeah bilkul be long nahi balkhi too shot next time pls make a long episode and this one was soooooo… Cute I really enjoyed it pls update next episode soon pls Dr
Omg just perfect I loved this ! Amazing !
I won’t mind being ur frnd dear !
Continue soon Nd yes welcome to TU ! It’s good to see kanchi family increasing !
Wow Inara dear…glad to find another Kanchi fan….and yes welcome to telly updates and I would love being your Friends and I love making friends too….coming to the epi…it was prefect…cant believe this is your 1st time…amazing and I can’t stop laughing at Sanchi…she is so funny….you are too good…post soon and love you and I am eagerly waiting
Shall I make you choti behen or a friend??Okay sister from different mother !!!Oh which grade are you studying in?
It was awesome start my dear.So the tashan that started at home would continue in the hospital. Plz post next chapter ASAP.
By the way where do you get these incredible ideas from yaar???
Inara dear………first answer to my this ques…tum kya khati ho?????just kidding……..itna acha likhti ho, that I’m just speechless after reading this…..I guess, u r like a bindaas, bubbly girl & a person with a really good sense of humor…….luv u a lot dear & eagerly waiting for ur nxt post……….
amazing
something fresh start
amazinggggggggggg
eagerly waiting for next one
Inara awesome ff..
Keep writing dr..
Hey Inara,Oh my goodness! It was so so good,yaar… I m a fan of yours now! Articulate presentation! Looking forward to it?
Btw I also love to make friends?
Hi inara first of all welcome on the tu or can say in kachi family…. Epi is amaz mindblowing sweetie…isse dkh kar lagta h jaise tum bhi kafi chulbuli hogi nd yes mujhe bhi dostbanana kafi pasand h main hi nhi yahan sab tumhare friend infact here we r like a big kanchi family … Nd famly increasing day by day…Happy to see a new fan of our kanchi…lovvv u a lot dear post nxt asap …
Hi Niyaa
U r seriously fab.
How can someone know so much about me by reading my first article..
Thanks a lot fr tareef..
And ya 2 part posted
Do read
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Superb inara loved the epi from the core of my heart u jzt nailed it keep writting
Thanks Sanju..hope u don’t mind me calling that..??
Not at all even in this kanchi family and my parents also called me by this name
Hey ur story is really diff and interesting can’t wait for the next part
Thanks a lot RFC..
Hope u even like d next chappy ❤❤
Firstly welcome Inara.. And ofcourse I wanna become ur friend.. So friends ? When I read USA I started wishing saanchi to come from Hollywood, Los Angeles which is my city but she came from NY. No prob I am going to NY tomorrow.But guess what Kabir and my phone’s brand and model is same. Yipee!!! Now enough of my analysis. Fantastic start. OMG the concept u started is so so interesting. I love concepts like this. And kusum is a flower. Even I learned a hindi word. *Confetti falls*. Again I loved the first episode a lot and am already addicted. Keep going since I can’t wait for the next one..?
Firstly thanks fr being my frnd
And secondly I love ur phone ..
I m crazy about Iphone..
And no prob NY and LA both r cousins..
R u an American?
Hii Inaara!!! This episode is tooo gud.I just loved it to the core.???
The way u described each and everything,is really appreciatable.????
I would luv to be ur friend…so friends?
Saanchi the way u did lassi of my Kabeer bhaiya is really remarkable.I hope this ff will be one of my favourite ff.☺☺☺
Keep writing dear.
Yr what to say…… U have left me speechless….. I m spell bound to read the intro…. U r stupendous and even I love making new friends so I think we r gonna rock…. Welcome in abhilasha style…. Luv uh!! Keep rocking!!
Hii inara!! First of all your story is superb, mind-blowing, fantabulous, awesome etc…. What to say no words are left with me… Friends toh yaha sabhi hai …. I mean to say all r very good friends n excellent writers.. I m a big kanchi fan n also of all the writers here. Main toh jabra fan Ho Gaya. Sabki story padhke Dil mein tentanen Ho gaya….. ????????
hey Inara such a great start yaar….loved it soooo much dear….and a warm welcome to T U…..episode one ne hi TU pe aag laga di hai to baki ke episodes kisi earthquake se bilkul kam nahi hoge!!!!! Tumhari writting ko first episode pe hi mera salute…..dusra part jaldi se post karna yaar….hum apka besabri se intazar kar rahe hain….!! Loved it sis….