Hello guys!!! This is Mars with sufferings season 2. I know it is unexpected but I really want to share this story with you all. If you had not read season 1 then also u can read this bcoz it is a completely new story and has no similarity with season 1. Actually this story I was going to write for os competition which was held but then it was very lengthy and I dropped the idea so i m giving it as ss hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin
SUFFERINGS(SwaSan SS)Season 2
SHOT 1:
CHARACTERS:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 25 years old very simple person. He loves his wife swara and his daughter Ashi a lot but sometimes his love get overpowered with the respect he has for his mother sujata. He is very obedient son and If he has to choose between his mother and wife then he will prefer his mother. He follows whatever her mother says.
Swara Sanskar Maheshwari: 23 years loves her daughter Ashi to the core. She is her everything. Swara never let ashi feel low when whole family discriminate with her just for being a girl. She loves Sanskar also and never felt bad that he gives more importance to her mother. Ideal wife dil and perfect mother .
Ashi Maheshwari: 3 years old. Very cute bubbly like her mother. She is always found with swara. Loves her mamma like anything. Swara fulfil her every wish. She likes her cousin brother rahul also but never understand that why her dadi gives all her love to rahul not her.
Adarsh Maheshwari: 28 years old sanskar’s elder brother and dominating husband. He even beat his wife Pari as his mother encourage her. He is not alike sanskar in this case. He encourages Sanskar also to dominate swara but Sanskar respect swara so he never follow him. Puppet of his mother.
Parineeta Maheshwari: 25 years old simple and sweet lady.She is scared of adarsh. She consider swara as her little sister and also love ashi and her son rahul equally. She always share her feelings with swara.
Rahul Maheshwari: 3 years old just one month elder to ashi. He is pampered by everyone as he is son of the family bcoz of which he is stubborn and spoiled.He is his dadi’s favourite.Son of adarsh and pari.
Sujata Maheshwari: Head of the house. All are scared from her. She don’t like swara as she has given birth to daughter and even hate ashi. She likes pari just bcoz she has son. Dominate everyone. If anyone need money in house then they have to ask her.
Maheshwari’s are landlords in village. They are most rich in the village and all farmers work under them. Whole circulation of money is done by sujata and sanskar and adarsh get little money every month.
Rajasthan(village)
Maheshwari Haveli:
Moving inside we can see a lady in late fifties is making one boy ready for school as its his first day.
The boy is Rahul and the Lady is sujata.
Sujata: study well okay then u have to be successful in life.
She said cheering him but he just nodded his head as he didn’t understood anything. Ashi is sitting on sofa little far beside swara holding her arm who was cutting vegetables. She was continuously looking how sujata is making rahul ready and he is excited to go to school.
Ashi look at swara and said slowly
Ashi: mamma I also want to go to school with bhaiya.
Swara look at the little soul and was about to answer but before only sujata said harshly
Sujata:u will not go to School,swara take your daughter to kitchen that is her right place.
Ashi got scared and hugged Swara.
Swara smiles at her trying to make her feel better.
Later, swara went to kitchen and ashi ran to her room(swasan room).
After completing her works swara went to her room to see ashi.
Swasanshi room:
Swara enter inside and saw ashi sitting on bed with her head buried in her knees. Swara went near her and hugged her
Swara: what happened to my ashi??
Ashi look at her with teary eyes and said
Ashi: I also want books(whispers)
Swara(wipe her tears): why to cry when your mamma is here.
Ashi blink her eyes at her looking cute.
Swara got up and went to cupboard and unlock it and take out few books.
Ashi stood on bed to see what is there. Swara came back and place books on bed.
Ashi look at them and then at swara.
Swara: these are for my ashi.
Ashi(pick one books): this is mine.
Swara nodded and ashi jumped on swara in excitement.
Actually sujata said that ashi will not go to school but swara will not let her daughter illiterate. So she bought nursery standard books for her.
Swara: okay now we will write ashi’s names on books.
Swara started writing names on her books. Ashi is so excited and clap her hands.
Swara: ashi don’t tell anyone that i teach you and bring books.
Ashi(innocently): why??
Swara: bcoz this is mamma and ashi’s secret okay promise.
Ashi: yes pinky promise.
Swara kiss her cheeks and then took one note book and teach ashi to make “A” alphabet.
Swara: A for???
Ashi thinks keeping pencil on her cheek.
Swara smiles seeing her antics.
Ashi: A for Ashi
Swara: awww very good ashi is very intelligent.
Ashi giggles and they had fun while studying.
Evening:
Hall
Rahul is sitting in sujata’s lap and ashi on sofa playing with her doll.Then only sanskar and adarsh came from work.
Swara and pari are in kitchen preparing for dinner.
Rahul: dadi today I learned to make A
Sujata: ohh good.
Rahul: ashi u don’t know what it is?
Ashi(instantly): no I know mamma…
Then she remembered swara’s words
” This is mamma and ashi’s secret”
She ran and jumped in sanskar’s lap.
Sanskar smiles and hug her.
Sujata: this girl started disturbing my son when he just came don’t u know he must be tired.
Ashi hide her face in Sanskar’s chest.
Sanskar: its okay ma I m fine.
He said and kisses ashi’s head.
Swara came with water and give to sanskar and adarsh.
Sanskar smiles at him.No doubt how much tired he is but just seeing his smiling wife and daughter he felt relaxed.
To be continued….
So this is first shot I know its short but this I had given to make you aware little about the story.
So how’s it???? The main story will focus on swasanshi(swasan and ashi)
It will show mother’s struggle for her daughter.
This story is little real lifestory and yes if you are interested plzzz let know. Even one word comment is enough to let me know if you want to read it but don’t be silent plzz
One thing more this is not any new topic about girls and if you find this similar to any other story then let me know bcoz I don’t want to copy.
Waiting for your feedback plz don’t disappoint me.
Thank you
Bye
Take care
124 Comments
its nyc dear
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Its awesome I have read first season waiting for this season post soon
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Marsuuu I am back again and u welcomed me with ur story…I loved the concept…post soon…will meet u in wattpad…
Ohhho welcome back dear soo happy to see you back and thank you so much dear will continue soon tc okay will meet on wattpad.
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It seems to be interesting..
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Loved post…..post next part soon
Plzz also post he is dangerous
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Amazing dear.. I really like the concept.. Its totally different.. Waiting for the next part.. Post soon.. Bye and take care…
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Hey Mars dear.. As usual very nice dear.. Poor Aashi..? I hate Sujatha here.. Waiting to know what is Sanskaar’s role in this mother-daughter struggle.. Continue soon and thank you.. ??
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Awesome ???
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Very good plot continue dear
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Superb yar… ❤❤
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I think i m going to cry after reading this ff. Its ok … anything for swasan.
Yeah may be there are possibilities of crying let’s see thank you so much dear tc
It’s awesom Marsi…
Yar I liked it..,pot ashi but I love the way she is behaving innocent and mature as well…and Swara so sweet and Sanskaar don’t know what to say…just wanna read next sooner and yes post shattered a i I’m soon to
Thank you so much dear will post shattered soul also soon tc
As always amazing but I feel sad for that little soul, Swara and Parineeta?
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Nice
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Nice dear mothers struggle for her child and the little soul is confused about partiality love to read further
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Different story….. Like it….waiting for next
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interesting..
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Its awesome…
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Marsu its awesome but what about other ff dear pls post it yaar kitna makkhan lagana padega bol de.n sorry I couldn’t update on ur other story as I am busy I hope I don’t mind
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Kal se pane updates regularly dugi pakkka thank you so much dear tc
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Superb waiting for next part
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Awesome..loved the concept..tc??
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It’s NICEEEEEEE, simple. It happens in real life also… Boys have given more preference. U know Mars my dadi ma also don’t like me when I was born but then, I was soo cute na. Don’t know but she melt for me. She stated liking me. Even my brother use to tease me then dadi used to scold him. ????????? I missed her a lot. But dadi was never against my study. ??????? U know when Dad scolded he i used to hide behind dadi…?
Sorry for bakwass. But suddenly yaad a gai. About chappy I loved it. Even though sujju ???? is not good but one day she will understand the importance of ashi. I appreciate Swara. ?????
No its not bakwass I liked your story of being cute…. Yuppp sujuuu will realized what is importance of ashi in her life. Thank you so much dear tc