Hii friends its shivu I write an os for raglak guys its my first ever os is so please if u like my os please comment and tell me how is it u liked it or not so guys plzzzzzzzz do comment
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A beautiful mansion is shown where raglak mansion is written on the name plate
Inside the mansion a beautiful room shows where a couple is sleeping in each others embrace then the girl’s sleep is disturbed by the alarm
Girl-o god 5:30 I’m late come on ragini wake up its ur fast today(yes she is our ragu) my first karvachauth
Then she goes to the washroom and after sometime she comes out wearing royal blue chridar then she stand near the dressing table and wear bangles,ear ring,then she about to apply sindoor someone hold her hand
Rag: what happen laksh what is this
Laksh: Mrs ragini laksh maheshswari its my right and you can’t stop me
Ragini smiles and laksh put sindoor on her hairline then make her wear magalsutra also she gets mesmerized by his gesture
Rag(lovingly):I love u laksh
Laksh:I know sweet heart
And kiss on her forehead
Laksh:BTW ragini are u going somewhere
Rag(combing her hair):no
Laksh:so why u get ready too early today
Rag(angrily):u don’t know what is today
Laksh(confused): no
Ragini (cryingly):laksh u really don’t know what is today
Laksh: tell na ragu what is today
Rag(cryingly): laksh today is my first karvachauth and u forget its too bad
Laksh(lovingly put his hand on her face): awww mera baccha plz don’t cry I’m sorry plz don’t cry
And hugs her
Laksh:tell me what is my punishment
Ragini(sobing): u have to come early today
Laksh: if u tell I don’t go today
Rag:no laksh I know today is ur important meeting u have to go
Laksh: its ok ragu I can cancel it
Rag:no laksh u go and come early ok
Laksh: ok sweetheart
They again hug each other
Rag:now u go and get fresh I’ll prepare breakfast for u
Laksh: ok
Laksh goes to the washroom and ragini at kitchen after sometime they both are at dining hall
Rag:laksh come have breakfast
Laksh: sorry ragu I’m getting late Rag:plz eat something and then go
Laksh: no ragu they call me many times I’ll eat there only ok bye
Laksh kissed ragini and go for office
At evening
Ragini is ready with red beautiful lehenga she looks really very beautiful like angle suddenly the door bell ring ragini smile
Rag:aa gae laksh
She goes and open the door laksh sees ragini and gets mesmerized by her beauty
Laksh:ragu u look very beautiful today
Rag(fake anger):only today
Laksh: no ragu u look pretty always but today u look outstanding
Rag:thank u laksh
Laksh: can I come inside or u talk here only
Rag:oh sorry come inside
They goes inside
Rag:laksh go and get ready I’ll make coffee for u
Laksh: no ragu u can do preparation for ur fast I already have too much coffee today
Rag:ok laksh u go and get ready
Laksh goes to the room on other side ragini doing preparation for pooja
After sometime laksh came down wearing neavy blue kurta and golden dhoti
Rag:wow laksh u look awesome in this dress like prince
Laksh: I know my princess I’m ur prince and u r my princess
Rag:come let’s go and do the rituals
Laksh: ok
They go and complete all the rituals and start waiting for moon
Rag:laksh when this moon show yrr I’m hungry now
Laksh:even I m
Rag:what why u
Laksh: because u r that’s why I am
Rag:ooo
After one hour moon shows
Laksh (existing): ragu see moon has come
Ragu:really ok come and break my fast
Then ragini sees moon then laksh then laksh make her drink water and eat food then ragini about to touch her feet but he stopped her and hugs her
Laksh: ragu I love u
Rag:I love u too laksh
They have an eyelock
Suddenly
Rag:let’s go laksh I m Hungry now
Laksh: ok
They go to the dining table and ragini start eating laksh is about to eat but ragini stops him
Rag:no first I complete my food then u eat
Laksh(confused): why
Rag:because today is my fast not your laksh
Laksh: but ragu I’m also hungry
Rag:no laksh
Laksh (angrily): ok u can eat whole food I’m going
Rag(while eating): ok
Laksh leave for his room and ragini continue eating while eating she hear a sound of falling something
rag:this laksh is so stubborn
And she go to their room
Rag:what happen laksh
She search laksh suddenly she sees laksh lying on the floor unconscious she goes near him start crying and then start rubbing his hand she go to the dining table for her phone then she call the doctor
Rag: hello doctor plz come to the raglak mansion fast
After sometime doctor come and check laksh
Rag:doctor what happened to laksh why he faint
Doc:Mrs maheshswari don’t worry he have low blood pressure that’s why he faint and I think he didn’t eat anything from morning
Rag:ok doctor
Doc:take this medicine and give it to him after eating food ok I have to go now
Doctor goes from there ragini come near unconscious laksh and sit beside him and start creasing his hair and thinks how she behave when laksh is eating
Rag(with tears):laksh why u love me this much ha laksh why u kept fast so why don’t u tell me if something happen to u then what I do
Slowly laksh opens his eyes
Laksh: because its my right ragu
Rag:laksh (sobbing)laksh u are alright (angrily)what is this laksh why are u Behaving like kid why kept fast laksh tell me
Laksh: if u stop then only I tell na ragu
Rag:if u kept fast why don’t u tell me laksh
Laksh: u kept fast for my long life right
Rag(wiping her tears):yes
Laksh: I m also kept fast for my long life
Rag(confused): how
Laksh: because ragu u r my life I kept fast for u
Rag:laksh I love u
Then she kissed on his eyes
Laksh (innocently):ragu now can I have food
Ragini smiles and then again kissed on his forehead
Rag:of course laksh and sorry laksh for my behavior
Laksh:its ok ragu now u go and bring food I’m very hungry
Then ragini goes and bring food for laksh and sit beside him then she make him drink juice and then make him eat food from her hand and they looking lovingly each other and have cute eyelock
Rag:laksh u kept fast for me so why don’t u tell me
Laksh: because I know ragu u don’t allow me to keep fast
Rag:laksh u r best husband in the world
Laksh: I know and u are the best wife
Then they hug each other
laksh:I love u ragu
Ragu:I love u too laksh
And they lost in each other
Plzz let me know u like the story or not
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Thank u sis for ur lovely comment & I’ll sure write more take care u too & love u
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