GOOD MORNING LOVELY READERS,
I felt so so so glad to receive such a positive response to promo thanks alot for such a warm welcome
I just hope our relationship continues like this n I be able to stand upto ur expectations n never disappoint anybody
A big thanks dear Riya, Rehmat, Divya,Ruch, Anu, niyaa, sanjukta, ishi, abhilasha, kanchi, sanveer, alia, neha, jessica,abhinita, prachi (ur comments encouraged me alot)
Thanks dear silent readers (those who read n liked promo)
Moonlight(my dear chandni I hope u will read this ff n like it n support me like u did in my pre ff )
So lets get started
A magnificient hospital is shown
SAVITRI DEVI HOSPITAL
Dr Kabir is written on cabin
Two young drs r standing
Dr-Am sorry sir please give us one more chance
A dapper gentleman looks at both with anger
Gentleman (firm voice)-no, this u both should have thought before falling in love, u r my interns u r here to become doctors n not romio- juliet my decision is final am restigating u both.Go continue wd ur affair n internship somewhere else
Lady dr-Dr kabir am sorry but one doesn’t think n fall in love it happens love is magical its not mistake
(Dapper gentleman is dr Kabir n that young couple r his some interns who love eachother n Kabir came to know abt their affair so is resticating them )
Dr Kabir (irked)-Ohhh please dnt lec me this love n all is bullshit it can only ruin relationships u both immediately leave my cabin n this hospital
Both leave hand in hand
kabir keeps hand on his head
Scene shifts
A flat is shown
A name plate is shown
SANVEER is engraved on it
A simple n elegant lady dressed in pink Salwar Kameez comes
Lady calls out-Anmol Anmol Anmol baby where r u
She looks outside Window n gets angry
she rushes downstairs
A young cute child is shown sitting on swing in society’s garden.Its drizzling n child is enjoying the feel of rain drops on his face
Just then lady comes wd umbrella
Lady (angry)-Anmol wat r u doing y r u getting wet what if u get fever chalo get up lets go home
Anmol (makes puppy face)-mumma five mins pluhse pluhse am enjoying rains
Lady picks him in her arms-no means no
she forcibly brings him home
Lady-chup chapp stand here I will get towel to wipe u
Anmol-no means no am katti badi wali katti wd u
He leaves teareyed
Lady looks on n gets upset
A senior lady keeps hand on shoulder
Senior Lady-Sanchi beta y u scold Anmol when it hurts u most Sanchi beta dnt be so possessive its nice to be caring but kids too need some fun
(Guys Anmol is six yr old in my ff its played by shivansh kotia ie child naksh from yrkkh he is jaan of my ff n I hope u all will love him He is Sanchi’s son n that senior Lady is jaya Sanchi’s mom)
Sanchi-Ma Anmol is so Anmol to me n u know na his immunity is so weak he gets little wet also then he gets fever n I cannot see him sick
Jaya hugs her
Jaya-I understand Sanchi now go convince ur rajkumaar
Sanchi is shown making something in kitchen she goes to Anmol’s room she has a glass in hand
Anmol has hidden himself under sheets
Sanchi (lovingly)-Anmol Anmol, my prince mumma’s baby see what mumma got for u choco milk shake Anmol
Sanchi goes n takes of sheet she notices Anmol shivering
Sanchi panics-baby kya hua Anmol
Anmol (wd shivering teeth)-mumma thandi lag rahi hain
Sanchi takes his hands n rubs it-Dnt wry beta I will call dr nothing will happen
Tears fall from her eyes
Anmol hugs her he wipes her tears
Sanchi is confused
Anmol-mumma sorry am fine nothing happened to me I was just making u scared sorry sorry
Sanchi (angry)-Anmol u trouble mumma alot am katti badi wali katti wd u
Anmol holds his ears n very sweetly-sorry mumma I love u
He kisses Sanchi she hugs him-I love u too my baby
Jaya looks on wd smile
jaya-Anmol is veer’s complete shadow naughty n sweet like him we all miss u alot veer this family would have been complete if u were here
Tears well up in her eyes
precap-Kabir’s head collides with Sanchi she quickly passes by him n her duppata covers his face Kabir is lost
So guys how was it?
How is Anmol? whose child he is?
Where is veer? y Kabir hates love any guesses
15 Comments
Great start Rushi ??? please reveal the pair soon if you can. I hope it’s kanchi, but your choice ???
Interesting story
Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing ur awesome Rushi
Awesome Rushi again with lots of mysteries you are back… Sorry not able to comment in promo dear
hi dharani u r ntr fan.waiting for Jai lav kusha eagerly
Hey rushi amaz epi dear reveal the secret atleast one whr is veer or why kabir hates love plzzzz post nxt asap sweetie m eager for ur ff …
Hey Rushi dear….i am so happy you are back…i just loved the epi…from where do you bring this amazing ideas….such a splendid work…i guess the child is Veer’s and he died in an accident maybe….Kabir loved Sanchi but she went with Veer that’s why he is very strict like that….just my guess…..keep writing dear..i am in love with your writing skills…love you loads…???
Wow this story is really interesting, I read ur previous ff which was a Sanveer one where Sanveer had twins if I m not wrong right! Actaky i read ur sanveer ff halfway I wanted to read the full story from the first epi and then comment but you ended that before that ? But anyways am happy u wrote another ff and this story is damn interesting
I think veer is anmol’s Father i have a feeling this is Kanchi ff this time and yeah when I read ur promo I was like please Veer Ko maat marna ? But anyways I understand it’s ur story u can do what U Want and I find this ff damn interesting
I love Both ur ff
awesomeee yaar.Hope kanchi is final pair
wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more pliz make it kanchi but it’s up to you sweetie. waiting for next part
Loved it lots dear and yr its so sweet and a power packed of emotions of all kinds… Gr8 work!
And I have feeling that its something like ye hai mohabatten but veer is dead or… But anyways lovely yr!
Nice update soon
Dear ruch, divya, priyashani, dharani, randomfancreations,amnaa, abhilasha, moonlight, ashnita(sry wrote ur name wrng last tym),shweta, niyaa thanks alot for ur lovely wrds each comment I value alot thanks thanks thanks
waiting for more 😉 😉
omg Rushi dear, u just left me speechless with this update & I too love shivansh a lot…….he’s so cute……..thnx dear for giving such an amazing plot………eagerly waiting for the nxt one…….
Absolutely amazing plot… Loved it…. And shivansh is so cute??… Plz update asap