TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE(Episode 4)
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(Episode 3)
Recap: Post-marriage rituals in Kapoor Mansion & IshPraRiya,Veer & Parth’s plan to send Kanchi on their Honeymoon…..
So guys,today’s twist is…….there is no twist in this episode……haha……..just kidding……let’s start the episode
Kabir,Sanchi & Priya return from SDCH followed by Sanket(of course, he’s the legal advisor & he’s also working at SDCH….)
Kusum:Sanchi beta, Jaya ji called me & said tomorrow u would go to ur maika for Pag-phera rasam & Kabir will go & bring u in the evening…. Is it fine???
Sanchi:Yes ma…
Priya:Bua ji, did u take ur medicines????
Kusum:No beta, actually it skipped out of my mind…..I’ll take it after some time….
Sanchi:No excuses….I’ll make something quickly….u eat it & have ur medicines, right in front of us…ok….
Kusum:Ok Ok….I think I’m not their mother, infact u both r behaving like my mother….scolding me as if I’m ur kid….(Sanket & kabir r smiling at knowing the concern of Priya & Sanchi for kusum)….(all laugh)
After having dinner, everyone head towards their respective rooms …..
Next morning, Sanchi goes to her maika(Mishra house)….She spent some light moments with her mother & dadi & in the evening, Kabir went to receive her…..After spending some time at Mishra house, both returned back to Kapoor Mansion……
Kusum:Had good time beta?????
Sanchi:Yes maa…(& she hugged Kusum & Kusum was smiling)…
Kusum:Beta, how’s Jaya ji & maa ji?????
Sanchi:Maa & Dadi r fine………where’s Priya diii????maa had went to the temple with maasi maa(Savitri) & had bought a mouli(sacred thread) for the safety of dii & her child…
Kusum:She’s in her room….ok maa I’ll just come(said Sanchi & went towards Priya & Sanket’s room)
Sanchi:Diii……how r u & how’s our rockstar?????
Priya:I’m fine & ur rockstar is asking, why’s maasi so late?????
Sanchi:awwww…..soo sorry, nxt time maasi won’t be late…arey, baton baton mein bhul hi gayi….diii, take this(forwarding the mouli)…maa & maasi maa went to the temple for urs & ur baby’s safety & brought this for u……..
Priya:U bought it here, so why not u tie this on my hand?????..Ok diii….replied Sanchi(& she tied the mouli on Priya’s wrist)….
Sanchi:now u take rest dii….good night diii & good night my rockstar(saying this she kisses Priya’s baby bump)
Priya:good night dear….
Some days pass, IshPraRiya,Veer,Parth have already planned for kanchi’s honeymoon & have also convinced Anand with a lot of efforts for granting them(Kanchi) a leave for 15-20 days….everyone including Kusum,Jaya,Priya,Sanket knew abt the plan except for Kanchi….the gang decided to give a surprise to both of them….& they decided not to reveal anything to Kanchi b4,& they’ll be informed at the last moment….(& that is the very next day…)
Next day, everything went on as per the normal routine, but for a change, Jaya along with Sanchi’s dadi had came to Kapoor Mansion that day(Sanchi was really happy to see both of them)…after some time, all left for their work leaving behind Kusum, Jaya & Sanchi’s dadi…..
Kusum:Jaya ji, lets go & pack Kabir & Sanchi’s bags for their trip quickly b4 they come…
Jaya:yes Kusum ji, u r right…lets go…(& they pack all the necessary stuffs of Kanchi in their bags)
When Kanchi,Priya & Sanket r abt to leave for their home, the gang shouts for them to wait as they’re also going with them to Kapoor Mansion….
Sanchi:Why u guys r planning to come & that too all of a sudden…
Pragya:Abeo Maharani….itna bak bak kyun kar rahe ho….hamara mann kia isliye hum sab tumlogon ke saath jaenge….& no more playing quizzes….fed up with ur all time ques & answer round…lets go…
They reach Kapoor Mansion…& a big shout by everyone…SURPRISE!!!!!!!!….(Kanchi r shocked)
Riya:Here r ur tickets for Alibag…& no if & but….we’ve already made every arrangements, u both just go & spend some quality time….(Kanchi looking at each other & smiling)…
Kusum:& we’ve also packed ur bags too….so,no need to worry for that……..
Kabir & Sanchi(together):thnx a lot guys, but what was the need????(everyone was giving a death glare to him)…Ok ok don’t scare me, we’ll go………..
(everyone clap as their joint efforts worked)…Kanchi took blessings of Kusum,Jaya,Sanchi’s dadi & hugged Priya & Sanket & a group hug of the gang …
Time skip…..Kanchi reach the Alibag farm-house & went to freshen up….they were tired due to the journey, so they decided to take some rest….(some time skip)…
It was noon time,Kabir was sitting in the garden reading a book while Sanchi was watering the plants…. While watering plants, accidentally some water drops fell on Kabir…(Kabir glares Sanchi)
Sanchi:Sorry…
(Sanchi’s pov…honeymoon like really…ye Kabir bhi na!!!.. romance to bahut door ki baat hai he’s not even looking at me….Idea!! now see what I’m going to do with u Kabir….)
The next moment Sanchi knowingly sprinkles water on Kabir…(Kabir glares her)…
Sanchi:Ale Ale..patidev ko guccha aa raha hai(& she bursts into laughing)
Kabir:Sanchi, now u r gone………
Saying this, Kabir moves towards Sanchi & takes the water pipe from her hand & sprinkles water on Sanchi…..Sanchi runs & Kabir chases her with the water pipe..(bg music…Ishq hua from themovie Aaja Nachle)…both were now smiling at each other & this was followed by a tight hug…..they went to change their clothes…..
Sanchi:Kabir, what will u have for dinner????????
Kabir:It’s a surprise….get ready by 7pm…we’ve to go somewhere….
Sanchi:Really?????(Kabir nods)wow……I love u Kabir(& she pecked him on his cheeks)…(kabir was smiling)
Kabir took Sanchi to a restaurant named “Boardwalk”………(A perfect picturesque outdoor restaurant right at the Mandwa jetty)
Sanchi:Kabir, this place is really amazing…I just luv this….thnx a lot for this lovely surprise….
Kanchi were talking when suddenly they saw an old man(abt 75-80yrs old) holding the hands of an old lady(70-75yrs) come to the stage……..
Old man:Hello childrens…I’m Peter d’souza & she’s my wife Anna d’souza….& we’re here to celebrate our 50th wedding anniversary(everyone clap) & we want u all to be a part of this celebration….will u like to join us on our Golden jubilee celebration????????
Everyone say yes…….the celebration begins with cake cutting followed by dance performance by the couples present there…
Kanchi start dancing(bg music….Jeena Jeena from the movie Badlapur)….during dance, Kanchi reminisced abt their romantic moments they spent together…..(after the dance, they enjoyed their dinner which was a treat given to all by the old couples…)
Old man:Thank u a lot all my children…….actually we don’t have any children, so me & my wife decided to spend this special day of ours over here…..This is the 2nd best day of my life…
Sanchi:Uncle, 2nd…..why not 1st?????
Old man:2nd bcz the 1st best day is the day my Anna came into my life….(everyone smile)…u can surely understand when u’ll reach our age…….(Sanchi starts blushing)………..Thank u all of u for ur time & we bless that u all get all the happiness of ur life….Bye bachho…….(everyone wave them bye & leave)….
After reaching the farmhouse, Sanchi:Uncle & Aunty were so adorable na????…..Yes(replied Kabir)
Next they decided to visit Alibag(or Kolaba)fort & next they’ll go to Nagaon beach & enjoy some Ferry rides & para-sailing too………in this way,10-12 days passed…
Next day it was raining heavily…so Kanchi decided to stay at home….& as u all know how much our Sanchi loves rain….so she went out & started dancing(bg music Cham Cham from the movie Baaghi) & she also pulled Kabir & both started dancing…..After some they went to change their clothes as they were completely drenched in the rain…..
It was still raining & Sanchi was playing with the rain drops….Kabir was mesmerized seeing Sanchi… He moved towards Sanchi & cupped her face & kissed her forehead & then cheeks & suddenly he stopped & moved back…
Kabir:I’m sorry Sanchi I got carried away without asking ur permission….
Sanchi:Its ok Kabir, we’re couple afterall & when I didn’t stop u, u can clearly understand I’m fine with it
Kabir:that means u r….
Sanchi:Yes Kabir…I’m ready….. (& she blushed & turned to the other side)
(bg music Dekho Na…from Fanaa movie)
Kabir moved towards Sanchi & back hugged her….he started giving trails of kisses on her shoulder, neck while Sanchi moaned in pleasure…Kabir turned her & they shared a lip lock…a soft one gradually turning into a passionate one…Kabir carried Sanchi in bridal style & laid heron the bed…& the screen gets blurred…….
Next day both woke up & freshened up…
Sanchi was blushing remembering the last night while Kabir kept smiling seeing her……
Sanchi:Stop staring at me….its really embarrassing….
Kabir:Why should I stop….I’m looking at my own wife, kisi pados ke biwi ko thodi na dekh raha hoon…
Sanchi:U r impossible……(Kabir smiling all this while)…..& my dear patidev, if u forgot, let me remind u, we’re having our flight in the evening….
Kabir:Oh!! How can I forget this??Its all bcz of u Sanchi…
Sanchi:What did I do…
Kabir:That’s the problem,u don’t need to do anything…. I forget all my works when u r around me…(Sanchi blushes)
Time skip….Kanchi return back to Kapoor Mansion…..
Precap:Priya’s Godh bharai(Baby shower)
Thank a lot guys for loving my previous updates & I just hope, this one also meets up to ur expectations….& & & forgive me in advance for any sort of mistakes….
WITH LOTS & LOTS OF LOVE
PRIYANKA(or RIYA)
23 Comments
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