Chapter 23
Ok I’m back with the next chapter, which is the second one before the last. So on 25th chapter my debut fanfic, “What kind of love is this” will be over. After that I won’t be writing much unless I have a break coz I have some really really important work to finish and that’ll take some time. But don’t be sad coz I’ll be back around mid October with something new.
Alright now I want to thank Neha, Divya, Dhruti, Nkh, Ashnita, Ritz, Anu, Tarasm, Tiya, Riya, Palak, Amnaa, Jessica, Alia, Niyaaa, Abhi, Prema, Tania and Annie for the lovely comments you gave me for the last chapie. Keep commenting sweethearts and silent readers if you could spare a minute for me, please leave a comment.
Ok let’s go to the story.
Previously on “what kind of love is this?”
……….in Kabir’s house……….
After Kabir dropped Sanchi, he came straight to his house. He was surprised to see an unknown car parked. “Yeh kaun ho sak tha?” He went inside asking himself.
“Maa!! App kaha hai?” He walked to the living room while calling her. Suddenly he stopped dead on his tracks seeing the person sitting there with his mother. Even his mother didn’t have a pleasant look on her face.
“TUM? What are YOU doing here? Kabir asked trying to control his anger.
“Is that how you greet me now, Kabir?” The person asked.
“Don’t say my name from you dirty mouth!
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“My!! Look how disrespectful you are!” said the man shaking his head.
“You’re talking about respect? You don’t deserve my respect” Kabir said with venom.
“This is the affect of the types of people you’re dealing with. Specially, that beloved girlfriend of yours” the man said.
“Don’t you dare say anything about her!” Kabir was fuming in anger.
“Itna gussa? Woh bhi ek cheap ladki ke liye?” the man said amusedly.
“I’m warning you! Stop talking about her” said Kabir.
“But that’s exactly why I came here today. To talk about -what was her name again- ah! Sanchi, Sanchi Mishra” the man said.
The man was walking around the living room. Kabir kept glaring at him.
“That middle class girl is taking advantage of you Kabir, why can’t you understand that? She’s only interested in your name and money. She’s just showing you fake love, fake concern” -the man
“Hogaya? Ab jao” replied Kabir.
“Listen to me Kabir, I will never accept that kind of a girl as hamari khandan ki bahu” -the man
“So? Who asked you to? Besides woh tumara khandan ki bahu nahi hai. When your son got married you’ll get you daughter in law. Meri Sanchi, mere biwi aur maa ki bahu. Uss ke sath tumara koi bhi rishta nahi hai!” said Kabir.
“Kabir you’ll ruin your life if you marry her. I’ll find you a beautiful girl with a good family background” he said trying to calm him.
“Iss ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. I’m not interested. I already found the right life partner for me. So stop interfering in my life!” Kabir said trying to control his anger.
Now the man gat angry. “How can you say that? I care for you too you know! I have the right to talk about your life! I’m your-”
Kabir finally snapped. “You’re not anyone! You’re nothing to me and you don’t have any right over me. You left us alone to enjoy your own life with your secretary. Now don’t come saying that you care for me”
Kusum who was watching this fight tried to stop Kabir, “Kabir beta-” but no use.
“No maa, let me talk. He didn’t care about me before. Now aaj ajanak he’s here to talk about my life. He wouldn’t have come here if he doesn’t have a purpose. He probably want me to marry some girl, for some business deal. But when he got to know about Sanchi, he’s here to show his fake concern. I don’t want any relation with this man” saying Kabir went out of his house, got in to his car and drove off towards the hospital.
He was driving way too fast for the speed limit. His phone rang. He thought it was maa and was going to switch off it. But it was Sanchi. When he saw her angelic face on caller ID, he started to calm down. He slowed the car and parked it on the side of the road.
“Hey” he answerd.
“Hey, I thought you’ll call me when you go home” Sanchi said.
“Yeah I was about to” -Kabir
“Kabir, kya hua? You sound different. What happened?” -Sanchi
“Nothing. I’m just tired” -Kabir
“I know that’s a lie but if you don’t wanna tell me, it’s ok” -Sanchi
“It’s nothing like that sweetheart” -Kabir
“Then tell me?” -Sanchi
“Is it ok if I come to your house now? I want to meet your mom” -Kabir
“Now? Ok I’ll tell maa” Sanchi
The call ended. Kabir drove straightly to her house. -knock knock- Jaya opened the door.
“Namaste maa ji! Main Kabir. Sanchi ki-” he took blessings from her.
“Namaste beta. Sanchi ne bataya. Come in” Jaya asked Kabir to sit.
“I’m really sorry that I came like this maa. Actually I was planning to come here with my mom but-”
“It’s ok beta but why so suddenly?” Jaya asked calmly.
“No need to hide maa, I know he came here. I’m really sorry for the trouble he caused and the insults” Kabir lowered his head. Sanchi held his hand.
Jaya patted his head and said, “Beta, woh tumari galthi nahi hai. You don’t worry about that. You seems like a nice guy. Meri beti ki pasand meri pasand. Lekin beta, to maintain a successful relationship, you need elders blessings too. If your father-”
“I’m sorry maa but please don’t refer him as my father. He lost that title long time ago” Kabir interrupted. “And you don’t have to worry maa, yeh jaansi ki raani already won my maa’s heart. She loves her like her own daughter. If I get all our loved one’s blessings, then I’m sure we’ll lead a happy future” he said looking at Sanchi.
“I know beta, I’ll talk with your mom about this too” Jaya said with a smile.
“Thank you maa! I should go now” said Kabir while getting up to leave.
“Take care and drive carefully beta! And yeah next time you come here, come for lunch or dinner” said Jaya.
“Ji zaroor” he agreed. Both Sanchi and Kabir came out side.
“Kabir, don’t worry too much. Everything will be alright!” Sanchi said holding his hand.
He looked at her. Just a one glance and the weight in his heart lessened. “I hope so sweetheart, I really hope so. But every time I think problems are over, there’s a new one awaiting” he said caressing her cheek lovingly.
They stood there in silence enjoying each other’s presence, forgetting all their worries.
“It’s getting so late. You should go now” finally she broke the silence.
“Hmm… Should I come tomorrow to pick you?” he asked.
“No need, I have the afternoon shift. So I’ll stay here and come afternoon” -Sanchi
“Ok then see you tomorrow. Bye sweetheart” he gave her a lingering kiss on her forehead and got in to his car.
As he was driving, he saw Sanchi waving at him through the mirror. The sight itself made him smile.
Inside the house, Jaya was looking at their exchange. **my Sanchi found the perfect life partner for her. I can tell just by looking at his eyes how much he loves her. Please Bhagwan ji, don’t separate them** she thought.
What they didn’t know was what was awaiting them on the next day……
……….next day at SDCH……….
As usual Kabir was working in his cabin. Yes he called Sanchi in the morning and had a sweet convo with
her. He talked with his mother too and got to know that she’s going to meet Sanchi’s mom. He was working but Sanchi was constantly in his mind. Then his phone rang. Without thinking twise he answered it.
“Itna miss hua, jaan?” He asked huskily.
“Arre bhai, at least caller ID ko check karo! Main Sanchi nahi, Veer hu” Veer said from the other side of the line.
Kabir got annoyed. “??? what do you want?”
“Bohoth bada problem hai bhai. I came home just now and Mr. Kapoor’s here” said Veer.
“So?” Kabir questioned.
“So what? He’s here to talk about yours and Riya’s marriage” Veer said depressed.
“Kyaa? You wait I’ll be there” with that he ran out of his office straight to his car and drove to Malhothra mansion at full speed.
When Kabir was entering he saw Dr. Malhothra and Mr. Kapoor shaking hands and wish each other.
“Kabir? You came too? Great! C’mon” Dr. Malhothra welcomed him. Riya looked at him and smiled shyly.
“Sir, can I have a word with you?” -Kabir
Mr. Kapoor eyed him suspiciously and said, “of course Kabir, why not?”
“I’m not talking to you, I’m talking to Dr. Malhothra here. Sir if you don’t mind?” Kabir said getting angry.
“Sure Kabir, come” Dr. Malhothra lead him aside. “Kya hua Kabir?”
“Sir I’m sorry but I don’t agree with this marriage” -Kabir
Dr. Malhothra got shocked. “But your dad said you like Riya and-”
“He isn’t the one getting marry sir, he can’t decide what I do in my life. Please don’t feel bad but I don’t like Riya. I never did. He’s trying to do this marriage for his own benefit and to separate me and Sanchi” Kabir said emotionally.
“Sanchi? She’s your girlfriend?” Dr Malhothra asked smiling. Kabir nodded. “Achchi ladki hai. Alright Kabir, I’ll talk with Mr. Kapoor and get everything sorted” he assured.
“Thank you sir” they went to others and Kabir spoke. “Riya, I’m sorry but I can’t marry you” Riya got shocked.
**how could he still not want to marry me? I made sure his father get their photos so he could make Kabir leave that cheap girl and come to me! What’s happening here?** she thought. “Why, Dr. Kabir?”
“There’s someone in my life already. And how can I marry you Riya? I don’t have any feelings for you” when Kabir said that she started to cry and ran to her room. Gayatri went to console her.
“Kabir what have you done! You hurt her feelings badly!” Mr. Kapoor exclaimed.
“So now you’re worried about her feelings! You should’ve thought that before you talk about marriage. You know I don’t agree for this and still you came here. You just appear after years and expect us to dance to your tunes” Kabir said without caring who’s hearing.
“Look how you’re talking! This is all because of that cheap girl! She’s the reason you’re-” he started to insult Sanchi.
“DON’T drag her in to this! She’s not the reason of my behavior today but YOU ARE! Stop interfering in my life!” Kabir went angrily.
Dr. Malhothra asked “Mr. Kapoor why did you said Kabir agreed to this marriage when he loves Sanchi? She may be a middle class girl but woh ek achchi ladki hai. She’s a perfect match for Kabir”
Mr. Kapoor got annoyed at this but he didn’t show it. With a fake smile he said “I’m sorry about it Dr. Malhothra, it’s my fault. Can I talk to Riya for a second?”
“Sure. Go ahead”
Mr. Kapoor went to Riya’s room. She was crying badly. He patted her head. “Beta, I’m sorry for the way he behaved. I know you love him. I’ll help you” he said with a smile. Riya stopped crying and looked at him.
**Sanchi Mishra! I won’t let you trap my son!** he thought in his mind.
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Soooo that’s all for today. All of you had guessed it right. The mystery person is Kabir’s father. You’ll know why Kabir hate him in the future, more clearly. I know it wasn’t an interesting chapie but don’t worry I’ll try my best for the remaining 2 chapters and don’t blame me but they’ll be long. So until then ???
32 Comments
Amazing
Thanks Alia ???
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Aww thank you so much sweetie ??? I’ll miss you too ??? next one’s submitted now. You’ll get to read it soon
Aj ka episode bhot sad tha yaar but episode is superb………. thanks a lot yaar
Sorry to make you sad Anu ??? you’ll be angry when you read the next one ??? thank you for commenting
Amaz mindblowing ruwani … I lovvv the way kabir defend sanchi fame and understanding btw kanchi awsome yaar …. Curious to know..now what ria and kabir’s father evil plan to seperate kanchi..post nxt asap
Thank you so much Niyaaa ??? glad you liked it dear!! And the next one’s submitted. You’ll get to read it soon ???
Awesome I just loved it ??
Thanks Priyanshi ??? glad you liked it sweetie ???
Ruch23… it was fab episode ..full of drama
It was so interesting that i forgot my work also.. loved it dear..
Thank you Khamoshi ??? happy to know you liked it ???
amazing one
this mr kapoor why he is interfering in kanchi’s life ?
i like the way kabir defend sanchi in front of mr kapoor
now what mr kapoor and riya do to separate kanchi?
let’s see what happen next please update soon next one
Thank you Dhruti ??? glad you liked it!!! Next one’ submitted so you’ll get to read it soon ???
Mind blowing fantastic…. Yr… Oh so our guessings were correct…. Nice yr!!
Thank you Abhi ??? glad you liked it ???
Oh no only two chaps remaining.I will miss your ff.
I am feeling like I will punch that so called dad’s face.How dare he come between Kanchi.
Waiting for next chapter.
Hey Anonymousaa!! Missed you dear!! Yeah only two chaps and then done!! Don’t worry I won’t let you miss me that long. I’ll be back with a new idea around mid October. Anyway thanks for commenting dear ??? next one’s submitted. So you’ll get to read it soon ???
omg Ruwani dear, I just got so much into this…just couldn’t realize when this episode ended…..I mean to say, its just OUTSTANDING………..luv u loads dear……..
Thank you so much Riya ??? glad you liked it!!! Love you too dear ???
Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode lovely update soon can’t wait yaar
Thanks Divya ??? glad you liked it??? and the next one’s submitted. You’ll get to read it soon.
Omg Ruwani dear, this was one fab epi…i just loved it….it was excellent……what a great writer you are….all the scenes were amazing….love you loads dear and please post ASAP I can’t wait
Thank you so much for this huge complement Tania ??? I’m so happy you liked it ??? next one’s submitted dear. You’ll get to read it soon and luv u too ???
Its awesome…. Loved it very much……. Update the next part soon
Thanks Amnaa ??? next one’s submitted so you’ll get to read it soon ???
Outstanding!! Mind blowing!! Can’t wait to read the next chapter, but only two left ?
Thank you Palak ??? hey don’t cry!! If you cry I’ll cry too ??? anyway glad you liked it and next one is submitted. You’ll get to read it soon ???
Hi yaar I thought so early it could be his father now I am afraid of the title what kind of love …. BT I really pleased u don’t unpair kanchi show all them about their true love and trust ….
Thanks Prema glad you liked it ??? and you’re right. Soon you’ll understand why I put this name to the story ???
Awesome dear… It was Fabulous… Amazing… Eagerly waiting to read further plz update soon
Thanks Jess ??? glad you liked it ??? and next one’s already posted.