Hi Guys this is Anosha Maheshwari you people know me as (Anee).Actually Anee is my nick name. Friends you call me whatever you like but I prefers Anee every where…Inspired by Sandeep Maheshwari Bcoz Sandeep Sir Always tells that do that in which you feel batter….I saw lots of videos on youtube….No No….Guys don’t think that Sandeep Sir is my relative Our Surname is merely matches nothing more than it. And writing is my hobby I loves writing i can write day or night But due to some family’s rules and regulations i cannot use mobile laptop and pc late night….Ok you are thinking If I’m not an Indian so how I know Hindi As very well So i telling you Guys …Yes that’s true I’m not an Indian but I wasn’t told you that i don’t know Hindi In fact I learn to write Hindi from Indian television…But in my country there is same language speaking by us but name is change. Here we are Speaking Urdu….Yes guys My native Language is Urdu..and I feel proud to tell you that I’m from Pakistan…Yes Guys you heard right I’m pakistani.So I don’t estimate what’s your reaction after reading this.
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It’s Morning:
Kabir is speaking on phone with a girl Saanchi sees him from side.
Kabir: How are you? When you are coming? Tomorrow, Ok I will pick you,then we will go to church for marraige.
Kabir smiles between talk on phone Saanchi estimate he is talking with his girlfriend. She gets Ruffle. She is weeping. Then isha and Pragya comes there.
Isha what happen Saanchi?
Saanchi: Weeping Dr. Kabir has gf and he will going to marries with her.
Pragya: what sachii??
Saanchi: (Nodded) haan
Isha: no Saanchi surely you have misconception. Kabir sir is not like that?
Pragya: Abe o do minute chup bathegi?Hum baat kar rahen hain na?
Veer comes there and apprehend their confab.
Veer: O miss golgappa why are weeping?
Pragya: Dr. Kabir keliye.
Veer: kiya baat hai?
Isha; Saanchi philosophy is that Dr. Kabir has girlfriend and he will go to get married with her.
Veer: I cannot beliefs never.
Isha: main bhi toh isse yeh samjhrahi hun.
Pragya: Saanchi you need to solve it.
Saanchi: but what I do? He does not love me. He loves someone else. (Still weeping)
Veer: idea Saanchi go Kabir‘s cabin and steal his phone, In which we get to know her name. Then we will do something.
Saanchi: no it will be fallacious.
Veer: Everything is fear in the love and war stupid.
Pragya: yes Saanchi veer is right. You need to sort out the situation.
Saanchi: ok guys, mujhey kiya karna prega?
Veer: first you go in your Kabir’s cabin and obtain the phone and take out the number of the girl.
Saanchi: then??
Veer: then you wait and watch what we do with this girl.
Saanchi: I don’t think your ideas will work.
Veer: trust me my plans never fails.
Pragya: abe inta kiya soch rahi ho? Jao na
Saanchi: ok guys.
The trio smiles greats her and thumb up and says go good luck.
At Kabir’s cabin
Knock knock
Kabir: Dr. Saanchi what are doing here?
Saanchi: sir who main …. Who… main …who….
Kabir: dr.saanchi why you uttering like Goat meme meme…
Saanchi: Sir, are you told me goat??
Kabir: no I not say you goat I just said why you are uttering like goat.
Saanchi: yaya its same thing.
Kabir: no it’s not same both are different.
suddenly Kabir remembers something then whispers oh how can I forget she is coming and I don’t buy anything for her. I have to go and buy something for her. Excuse me.
He goes from his cabin. Saanchi move and glimpse to him. Afterwards Kabir’s phone resonate Saanchi lay hold of phone and sees the name of sandy on the screen. Saanchi not understands she is girl or boy. Saanchi make an effort to attend the call just then Kabir immediately snatch the phone from her hand and says this is my phone so stay away from it.
Saanchi: whispers aisa kiya hai iss phone main?
Kabir attend the call and says.
Kabir: haan bolo tumari flight ka time kiya hai? Main kab aaon tumain lene?
Saanchi: mummers oh she is a girl that coming between us.
At the cafeteria:
The group is mingling here.
Pragya: Saanchi kuch pata chala?
Saanchi is weeping terribly here and says.
Saanchi: I found her name.
Veer: O Miss golgappa don’t cry tell us her name fast.
Saanchi: her name is sandy
Pragya: saandi abe yeh kesa naam hain be woh bhi kisi ladki ka?
Isha: Pragya its not saandi it’s sandy.
Saanchi: ab naam toh yehi hai.
Veer: naam kiya krna hai?Aur kuch pata chala kiya?
Saanchi: yes she will coming tomorrow from USA Kabir sir will go to pick her from airport.
Isha: Kal???
Veer: this information is enough for us to execute our mission.
Saanchi: Kon sa mission??
Veer: Kidnaping
They trio are in shock and says what????( in one voice)
Saanchi: Kidnapping?? Are you serious veer?
Pragya: Abeo Tera dimag toh kharab nhi hogya hai. Kidnaping koi bacchu ka kaam hai kiya? Kidnapping kisi ko pata chal gya zindgi kharab ho jayegi humari. Kuch bhi, kidnapping.
Isha: yes veer please soch samjh ke bola karo.
Veer: I’m dam serious guys we are kidnaps her and tries to console her to leave Kabir sir if she will agree then we will leave her simple.
Pragya: if she not agrees then?
Veer: Toh…… hum us ke paaon pakr ker request karenge ke please Kabir sir ka peechha chod do mata ji. Aur koi chara bhi nahi hoga humare pas.
Saanchi: No guys no need to do this.
Veer: zaroorat hai? Isha Pragya you understand me na? Please try to understand her.
Pragya: sanchi ek baar veer ki baat maan kar dekhte hain kiya hota hai.
Saanchi refuses many times but she agrees to do this just sake of her love.
Next day:
They four are ready to following Kabir for airport.
Kabir comes out from his cabin and sits in the car
Veer sign to isha that he is gone now work on your plan. Pragya follows him through car midway she collides with another car then men’s comes out from car and start fighting with each other. Kabir’s car confine in the traffic. He enables to reach the airport. On the other side veer and isha and saanchi reaches airport by short cut to find her they holds call boards on their hands.
Veer: saanchi yeh ladki kab aayegi?
Sandy is comes in front of them she wears jeans and skirt. Saanchi shocks to see her.
Sandy : Hi I’m sandy but where is Kabir he sends you to pick me but why he is not come?
Veer: sir was busy at all that’s why he send us to pic you just then one voice comes from behind tum log yahan? All are leave in big shock they turns and sees kabir is here. Kabir comes to near them and asks what are you doing here?
Veer: Sir hum yahan….
Kabir meets with sandy very loving mannar saanchi sees and goes from there
Kabir: what happens to saanchi?
Isha: sir woh toh hum sach batayen toh sandy ko kidnap karne aaye the.(she heads down)
Kabir: What??? Are you guys made? But why?
Veer: sir yeh toh aap saanchi se hi pucchiye.
Kabir goes behind saanchi he is searching to saanchi every where.but saanchi removes her tears and walking on the road alone.just then some goons start teasing her one goon tries to coming close to her another is supporting him she runs and bumps with kabir, kabir takes her behind him.
Goon 1: Abe o hero hat jaa.
Kabir angryily galaring to them
Goon2: Dekho Dekho hero ko gussa aaraha hai (all are start laughing but kabir is still glaring them in anger)
Goon 1: ja bacha Ladki ko idher laa.( tries to come close to her)then kabir deadly punchs on his face his one eye bacame completely red second goon attack on him kabir fights with them as hero one by one kabir finish all goons. one goon is asking “Abe kia lagti hai teri jo tune humen kahin ka nahi cchoda”?
Kabir still quit
Goon no# 2 Bata biwi hai teri ya teri saggi hai kiya? abe itna kiun maar hai be?
Kabir bursts pyaar hai mera I love her, mil gaya tum logon jawab ab niklo yahn se warna peron pe jaane ke qabil nahi baccho ge?
Saanchi is in shock to hear this kabir holds her and jerks her then says tum khud ko kiya samjhti aise mujhey chod chali jaogi aur main tumen jaane doonga? Bolo?
Saanchi: Sir your girl friend is coming from USA you are going marry with her.(tears falling from her cheeks)
Kabir: what??? my girlfriend Oh God…saanchi her name is sandhya and she is not my gf she comes here for marries with my friend Raj.I’m going to pic her and reaches her in the church where Raj is waiting for her.you thought that she is my gf.
then saanchi feels relaxe and gets happy then tightly huggs to kabir
kabir: Saanchi log dekh rahain hain.
Saanchi whispers Toh dekhne do Aakhir logon ko bhi pata chale saanchi ne kabir ko paya hai
Kabir: what? (Actually he was heard but wants to listen from her again).
The End
So Hope you guys Like it If yes then Tell me through comments. love you all
Regards
Your’s Anee
43 Comments
Why will our reactions change after knowing u aren’t from India? I am also not from India. I am from USA and people didn’t feel anything different. Similarly, u are always our sweet Anee and an amazing author. This OS was also very cute and well throughout!!! Kabir’s girlfriend?? ?. The concept was very adorable.and the dialogues are cool too. Keep writing more OS’s. We would love to see more from u. ?
Thankuu Annie my little princess…. yes you are right dear people didn’t feel different where from you…and I’m so glad that you liked it…..and yes princes I will write more Os and hope you will also like those.
Hey anee amaz mindblowing os and gang dialogue are awsome and tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho ki hamari soch badal jayegi kya reaction hoga ye janne k baad ki tum pakistani ho i mean seriously tumhe lagta h ki hamein tumhare pakistani hone se farq padtq h… Sabki apni country h sab usse bahut pyaar karte h and we request u and ur country too… So aage se ye kabhi mat kehna ki hamein farq padta h …haan farq padta h jab tum yaa koi sochta h ki her indian pakistan dushman hote h nahiiii yahi soch to badalni h hamein we r friends and always be friend forever koi farq nahi padta hamare desh culture background ka okkkk sorry itna lengthy comment se tumhe bore kar diya hoga bye and tc post nxt one sweetie and last but not least we love u a lotttttt..
so sorry Niyaa dear maine tumain narraz kiya na yeh bol kar par trust me meri bilkul bhi yeh soch nahi hai ke Indian aur Pakistani dushman hai in fact dear hum khud India se boht pyar karte hain aur tum ne sach kaha humen buri soch badalni hai mujhay bhi koi farq nahi padta hum sab insaan hai dear aur yeh bhi sach hai har koi apni country se boht pyar karta hai aur hum sab ke emotions ki respect karty hain sab se badh kar kar hum kaanchi family hain right??? aur tumm ne yeh kiun kaha ke tum lenthy comment se muhjy bor kiya arrey pagal lenthy toh padne main bada maza aata hai agr hosake toh aage bhi lenthy comment karna…hehehe…luv you toooo swettie….lot’s of huggs and kisses for you..
Hi Dr I am commenting before reading the os this is not an issue if u r a Pakistani or else u r our anee a super duper writer so so continue ur writing we always respect u OK…
Awwww thankuuu so much Prema you not know how much you made me happy with ur priceless comment. and yes dear you are right it doesn’t matter where from you….luv you dear..
Very nice yaar!!! If u r from some other place it doesn’t mean that our attitude towards u will change negative…. India or Pakistan or any other country I don’t judge a person wherever he or she stays… I always prefer humanity…. I know u r a human even we all r humans…. We have feelings, emotions related to our country but the main thing is that positive attitude of human beings… Insaniyat mayne rakhti hai asal zindagi mein… I never believe in caste, creed, religion etc… U r a very good writer and very sweet… Smile always and entertain all your fans with wonderful os and ff.. If I said something wrong then sorry
No Tia dear you didn’t said wrong anything In fact I believe that humanity is the main thing we are all humans our positive attitude makes us different that’s our actual worth nobody can sntach from us our attitude. and thankuuu so much for liking my writing and this OS. if I hurt you then I want tell you sorry… luv you so much…you comment gives me strengh…so thankuu so much.
Wowww dear it was splendid………. U nailed it and I loved it to infinity……. Fantastic yr…. Superr!!
And I am glad to know that you are from Pakistan…. Dear I m from india and these two countries are sisters and so we too are like sisters and enemity is in elites… We are just same!! So dont feel like that!!! And me too a great fan of sandeep sir… He is the best!!
Thankyouuu abhi dear And yes that’s true we are sisters country doesn’t matter in relations i’m so gald I found Friends Like you…..Luv you dear thankuu so much….and one more Sandeep Sir really great person.
Anee… it was an amazing article. The concept was different…thats what i liked the most. U r a fab writer.
And why will our conception regarding u will change after knowing u r not an Indian? For all of us u r a Member of Kanchi Family and top of that u r our Neighbour dear.. Padosi hai hum ?.
Btw do Pakistan have daily soaps? I mean i know one serial name “Zindagi gulzar hai” of Fawad Khan and Mahira Khan.. but in what numbers..? Just to know nothing else.
Lots of love to u dear.
Good day
Hey Mitali thank you so much dear glad that you liked my article and that’s hundred% true we are Neighbours more over than we kaanchi fans human being we are loves eachother that’s really important for us….And dear Zindagi Gulzar hai….was also my most fav daily soap in pakistan And starrer was Fawad Afzal khan As zaaroon And Sanam Saeed as kashaf. Mahira khan was not in that….and yes Mahira khan Also Great Actress in our Industry…Luv You dear.
Ok.. i thought Mahira was also part of that.. sorry i didnt watched that serial..just may be 1-2 episodes.. but i really loved the serial music track.. I remember it now also..
Good luck
yes music was also osm the song sang by Ali Zafer.
Anee sweetie actually I dnt live in India or USA. I live in Fiji Island. I always loved u and always will. Actually I don’t have a sis but seing ur guys love i got many sis including u. For this os it’s always amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing outstanding and many more iam speechless sweetie. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv loads.
Thank you ashu dear you made my day for your lovely sweet comment actually it’s Too late I’m repliying every one but thank you so much Sweet Sis Lot’s of hugs kisses and love for you tooo…
Hi Anee, it really doesn’t matter from where r u from at the end v all r friends…..sometimes I watch Pakistani drama & I am a huge fan of Faisal qureshi….ur OS is amazing as usual…plz update ur next post asap
Thank you So much Priya you are absolutely right Country doesn’t matter in frienship…I’m so glad to know that you are fan Faisal Qureshi He is briliant Actor in our Industry….Luv you dear.
This os was outstanding.
Ab aate h sis tumhe aisa kyu lgta h ki tum Pakistan se ho to Hume fark padega.
Aisa to nhi h ki hm Indian h to tmhari os nhi padhenge.
Tmhara Pakistani hone ka mtlb ye to nhi ki tum ek bohot achi writer ho.
I have friends from Bangladesh and now M glad to have a friend/sis from Pakistan.
Nd one more thing from next tym don’t ever dare to say these things.
Or haan agar aise hi os nhi post karogi to mai pakka gussa ho jaungi. ? Luv u sis.
So sorry Priyanshi sis mujhy apni Behn ko maaf kardo promise aage se kabhi tumen narraz nahi karungi ok….And thank you so much Feeling really glad that you like my Os Ff and my writing…Luv you Sis.
Anee you our reaction will change after knowing ur from Pakistan for me ur same sweet anee who has excellent skill of writing beautiful stories who make us happy by her writing skills and a member of our kaanchi u know what ur excellent in ur writing skills and I always get happy reading ur ff . So Anee don’t tell this again because we r friends ok . And coming to ur OS it was amazing dear and plsss update ur ff soon can’t wait to read it please.
Divya Divya You Don’y know my dear How much I feel happy After read your comment Sorry dear But I promise you I never tell again these type of nonsense ok your comment always made me happy i’m just thinking yaar someone waiting for your ff….that’s really meaning full for me dear…luv you dear from core of my heart.
Anee we don’t have any hard feelings and hatred for you in our heart. You were a great writer and are a great writer and you will always be. Though I am a silent reader of this page but I really appreciate your writing skills. Don’t think yourself as inferior. You will be always our inspiration and our friend…………lots of love and hugs from this friend
Thank you so much swati Glad that you are likes my writing skills as an author that’s really means a lot….and yes you are right place doesn’t matter if you are positive persons so thankyou so much…Lots of hugs and kisses accept from my side…
Anee we don’t have any hard feelings and hatred for you in our heart. You were a great writer and are a great writer and you will always be. Though I am a silent reader of this page but I really appreciate your writing skills. Don’t think yourself as inferior. You will be always our inspiration and our friend…………lots of love and hugs from this friend. Hey! Don’t you dare to leave us
hehehhe no no i’m not leave you aur waise bhi itne pyar karne wale friends ko chhod ke kaha jaungi bhala…hmmm.
wow wow wow it was superb ,mind blowing and i loved this ff to infinity………………………………..
amazing i don’t care that u r from pakistan but i love the way write the story that’s matter me not from where u r from u r good writer that’s enough for me.
i love the way u write ……………
Thank you so much Dhruti Glad that you liked it…you are all appretiate me with your positive attitue that’s really matter for an author….again than you much dear. luv you dear.
So miss Anee……u r from Pakistan……..not fair….why didn’t u say this b4…….from now on I’m not going to comment on ur post……………………………..do u think that I can ever say u like this………..no dear……….not at all…..u know what……….I alwz feel that dosti hi ek aisa rishta hai jo dil se joode hote hain, jise koi sarhad, I mean koi country,caste ya creed se koi farq nahi padta………..after all ye dil ke rishte hain yaar…..agar tumne kabhi tum mein aur hum mein koi difference nahi dekha, how can u even think we can do that???? I’m really dissapointed with u for this………never ever dare to say this again warna ek zordar thappad padjaega…………u r my Anee…thats it….tum kaun ho that matters to me, tumhara background, from where u came….that can never matter to me…………ab samajh gayi ya koi essay likh ke doon tumhe samjhane ke liye?????………paagal….phir kabhi ye faltu ke bakwaas apne dimaag mein mat lana………..I LUV U MY SWEETIE…..
aur haan….this was a mindblowing, jhakaas, superrrrrrrrr se uparrrrrrrrrr waala os……….luv u yaar……..
Dekho Ri Kaan pakr ke up and downs kar rahi hun aisy tumen narraz karne ke liye….please mujh se narraz kabhi mat hona……dost hain hum yeh sach hai….bilkul sahi kaha tum ne kitni budhoo hun main aise kaise soch sakti hun main….ager tum thapd lagana chahti ho toh laga do meri dimag sahi hojayega…….dosti toh wagai dill ka rishta hota hum dost se har woh baat share kar sakte hain jo hum behn se nahi kar sakte…….bhale hum ek dusre dekh na paayen but humare pyare se words kisi ko is qadr khushi de sakte iss ka andaza aur koi nahi laga sakta dost ke illawa main sach keh rahi hum na??…..Ri I’m So sorry…Luv you Too My Love..And Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much for liking my Os.
Its amazing ……loved it very much…… And i am also from Pakistan
Hey Amnaa thankyou so much Glad to know that you are from Pakistan Luv you Swettie.
This os is just fab Anee ??? loved every scene of it ??? and how could you think we’ll care about where you’re from? Even I’m not from India. I’m from Sri Lanka. It doesn’t matter which country we’re from coz now we all are friends and belong to Kanchi Family ???
He he Ruwani dear than kyou so much For liking my Os Glad that you Enjoyed each and every scene You are absolutly right Country doesn’t matter…..Mre over than we are friends we are kaanchi family….luv you Swettie….you are about my Second sister…dear.
Hey does it matter that u are not from India?Even I am not Indian.I am Nepalese.
By the way our nationality here is we are Kanchians.
It was mind blowing dear. Loved Pragya saying ‘Saandi’.I was laughing and my bro thinks I have gone crazy. Nyway who cares!
Completeky osm update.Hope to see more from u soon.
Hi Anonymousa gald to know that you enjoyed each and every scene of this Os. Amnd thank you So much for appratiation that’s really means a lot for me…..Yes you are absolutly right here we kaanchians…..Luv you dear.
Anee dear, how can you ever think our reactions will change after knowing you aren’t from India…thats impossible….so please don’t say that…we love you not your background or cast….dil ka rishta he hamara ok? So don’t you dare to say that….and about your OS…it was one of the best OS I ever read….it was excellent, superb , amazing….you are incredible…..keep writing more and more…actually I have more Pakistani friends more than Indian friends….and my best friend is from Bangladesh……anyways love you loads dear
Sorrry sorry sorry tanu Dear next Time I promise you I never tells like that ok now calm down Dosti dill ka rishta hota hai suna toh tha aaj apni aankhon se dekh bhi rahi hun you poeple loves me a loads……………..itna pyaar thanku so much Tanu and and and Getting Compliment from such an amazing writter…. I’m on Cloud 9….Luv you loads swettie….bye bye ….. takecare
you are about my little sis….
Amazing dear.. You seriously nailed it girl… The dialogues were so funny that i couldn’t stop laughing… There was a constant wife smile while reading your OS . Loved it…..Fantastic .. Keep it up…..
thanku so much Jesss Glad that you enjoyed whole Os….Keep loving dear…
Hi dear it’s amazing
Superb os
U r from Pakistan even I am from Pakistan
In which area u live dear?☺