Hello guys!!! I m back with next part. Sorry for being late.
Shattered Soul(swasan ten shots)
Shot 8:
Recap: Sanskar forgives swara.
Maheshwari house:
SwaSan Room (morning)
Swara opened her eyes and saw Sanskar hugging her tightly. She smiles looking at him and tried to come out of his grip but in turn Sanskar tightened the grip.
Sanskar: where are you going??
Sanskar asked opening his eyes.
Swara: I have to get ready otherwise mom will be angry if I will get late.
Sanskar didn’t said anything just keep on staring her.
Swara: what??
Sanskar: don’t u feel bad when mom always taunt you and behave rudely??
Swara’s eyes got filled with tears and she started crying.Sanskar got shocked and pat her back
Sanskar: swara
Swara: I used to cry thinking all hates me here and u know I was thinking to go back to ma but then may it was publishment for my mistake
Sanskar cups her face and said
Sanskar: no one hates you swara they are just angry Swara.
Swara(blink her eyes): really??
Sanskar: yes
Sanskar kiss her forehead.
Swara: may I go now??
Sanskar (smiles): okay go
Swara took her clothes and left to washroom.
Hall(Dining table):
Sanskar came after getting ready and take his seat. Swara smile at him and serve him food.
Sanskar (whisper): thank you
Swara:welcome.
Sujata felt happy seeing Sanskar back to normal and she can’t deny that it was bcoz of swara. If she has broken him then she is the one who is healing him.
Sanskar: swara u go with uttara to college.
Swara: okay.
Sanskar: uttara u have any problem??
Uttara: no bhai.
Sanskar went to office after breakfast and swara and uttara left to college.
Karma industries:
Sanskar’s cabin:
Sanskar’s pa came inside after asking permission.
Sanskar: yes anuj???
Anuj(sanskar’s pa): Sir we got call from a multinational company that if we are willing to do business with them then we should prepare the presentation about our company.
Sanskar: how many other companies are in race ??
Anuj: there are many sir but we should be scared of only bose company.
Sanskar(flown): why???
Anuj: bcoz from last week its on top.
Sanskar realizes his ignorance towards work and adarsh had played his cards very well.
Sanskar: alright give our company’s name I m going to attend that meeting
Anuj: but sir if they will do partnership with adarsh boss then we will be in loss.
Sanskar: u don’t teach me just do what I said.
Anuj: okay Sir and who will make the presentation?
Sanskar: I myself will prepare.
Anuj nodded and left from there.
Sanskar (think): this is the right time to answer that adarsh boss he used swara as my weakness now I will make her my strength and defeat him.
He got busy in his work.
Outside the college:
As the college ended swara came out and she is waiting for sanskar as he said he is coming to take her. Swara saw uttara leaving and called her
Swara: uttara
Uttara came near her and asked
Uttara: what??
Swara: wo don’t go as Sanskar is coming to take us.
Uttara: okay.
Uttara stood beside her. There was silence for sometimes later swara said
Swara: I m sorry uttara for hurting sanskar and all of you. It was just I did bcoz my bhai said to me. Plzz forgive me.
Uttara: its okay swara I know your brother used you.
Swara(extend her hand): so again friends???
Uttara(laughs); ofcouse and u r still childish swara.
Swara hug her.
Uttara: you know I have so many gossips to do with you I had controlled with great difficulty.
Swara(pout): Even I m very curious to listen.
They started talking about college and what all they missed these days.
Sanskar came and saw them laughing.
Sanskar: I think patch up is done ???
Swara: yes
Sanskar: that’s good now lets go then I have work.
Uttara: okay.
Swasan and uttara left and after leaving them at home Sanskar went to office.
Uttara’s room:
Swara came inside after knocking.
Uttara: swara u want something??
Swara: I need your help.
Uttara: yes tell.
Swara: wo I want to propose sanskar.
She said looking down shyly.
Uttara: really bhai will be very happy so how can I help you.
Swara explained her something.
Swara: how is this idea???
Uttara: great bhai is going to love it.
Swara: then let’s go and make all preparations.
Uttara: yes wait let me change.
Swara nodded.
Evening:
Sanskar came back home from office. He was tired due to overwork. He went to his room but didn’t find swara.He after fresh up came down looking for Swara but she is no where.
Sanskar: uttara where is swara??
Uttara: ohh bhai I forgot to tell you that Swara went to park and now plzz you bring her.
Sanskar: why she went there??
Uttara: I don’t know.
Sanskar: okay then I should bring her.
Uttara: hmm
Park:
It is the same park where swara broke sanskar’s heart claiming that she don’t love him. After that day sanskar never visited this place. Now as he was entering inside his eyes got wet reminiscing that day. He enter inside the park and was surprised that the bench where he and swara used to sit is decorated with baloons and a cake is placed in the centre. There are some people in the park but all are busy in their own work.
Sanskar was curious to know so he went near the bench was surprised to see what is written on cake.
” I love you sanskar”
After reading it the first thing that strike his mind was swara. Swara did all this for him???
When he was fighting with his own thoughts, two soft hands cover his eyes. Ofcouse she is Swara. Sanskar remove her hands and turn only to see smiling face of his love.
Swara(exclaimed): surprise
Sanskar was shocked to react.
Sanskar: swara this all ??
Swara(teary eyes): u didn’t liked??
Sanskar (cups her face): no no I loved it.
Swara smiles.
Swara: yesterday night you asked me one question that whether I love you or not?? So I m here to answer you.
Sanskar: but I know the answer.
Swara(shock): how??
Sanskar(lean and whisper): bcoz I read on the cake.
Swara(pout): then also u should listen me.
Sanskar (laughs): okay I m waiting.
Swara held his hand and said
Swara: firstly I m sorry for hurting you and I choosed this place as I had spoiled everything here so to forget those bad memories I thought to make new good ones and I promise you I will never leave you and most important thing I want to say is that yes I love you so much sanskar and this time I really mean it nothing is fake.
Sanskar’s eyes got wet listening his confession. When last night she didn’t answered his question he had lost all hopes to get her love ever. But he never knew his little girl can surprise him like this also. Without saying anything he hugged her tightly and whisper against her ear
Sanskar: I love you toooo.
Their moment was disturbed by the clapping sound of the people present in the park. Swara looked down blushing profusely.
One old lady asked Sanskar
Lady: she is your girlfriend???
Sanskar (smiles): no she is my wife.
Lady: ohhhh
Swara: all come here and let’s cut the cake(excitedly)
All people stood around the bench and swara give knife to Sanskar.
Swara: okay sanskar cut the cake I had specially made for you.
Sanskar pull her closer and held her hand in his.
Sanskar: we will cut together.
Swara(smiles): okay
They cut the cake celebrating their special moment. Firstly Sanskar feed her then she did same and later they all distributed the cake and enjoyed.
Sometimes strangers also make your happy moments special.
In the car:
Swasan are coming back to home.
Sanskar: so swara u did all this for me?
Swara: yes but uttara also helped me.
Sanskar: ohh
Swara: now only I have to pacify mom others all have accepted me hope so she will also forgive.
Sanskar: don’t worry she will.
Swara (smiles): hmm
Swara lean her head on his shoulder.
To be continued…..
Precap: adarsh face great loss.
I know I m posting after long gap my all stories that’s the reason readers lose interest and response is decreasing but I m trying to cover them all and will try to give frequent updates. Kindly support and compromise with it.
So how was swara’s proposal?? Give your views.
Thank you
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89 Comments
lovly dear
Thank you so much dear tc???
Its really nice I just love it .?. Don’t stop writing . l am a silent reader I am broking my silence because u wrote that you are stopping so don’t stop it’s my request.
Hey don’t worry I won’t stop writing I mean I will cover them slowly that’s why I told that. Well thank you so much dear and I m happy you commented tc???
Awesome
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marssu… we will never ever loose interest in ur ffs.. may be becoz of sme other reasons comments r decreasing.. anyway loved it
Thank you so much dear and yeah may be other reason of less response never mind tc???
Marsuuuuuuuuu amazing part dear… loved it to the core… finally everything is fine between SWASAN…..
Waise you know there’s a poll on antv of best pair please vote there for SWASAN… they are literally losing it….and do tell other swasanians too…..
Thank you so much nepuuu and plzz can you tell me the link of the poll or where we can vote and I will try to tell others also tc???
Well can vote on#swasan… go in latest and further ahead you can find that poll..
I will try to send the link
Alright nepuuu???
mind blowing
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Awesome yaar
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Awesome..loved swara’s proposal ??
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Awesome di…
Loved it alot…☺☺
Thank you so much dear tc???
Omg marsu I was imagining swasan by reading it .just awesome pls yaar apne ff roj post Karna diya kar chota bhi chalega.n did u contact with that writer if ur busy its OK take ur time but pls yaar try jaroor Karna
Thank you so much dear and will try to give regular updates and sorry still I didn’t contacted with writer but will do soon and inform you tc???
No need for sorry take ur time n u can inform me.but pls for now I want u to complete ur ff n post it regularly. I really like ur writing skill that’s y ask u to write other ff in ur way.
Thanks dear i m glad that you asked me and now only I saw that ff and I had read it dear and I personally want that it should be continued and I had messaged her on her account hope so she will reply me then will tell you her decision as soon as I will get?????
And I will give my ffs also regularly????
Love u marsu ur really amazing lots of love dear I am100% sure everyone will like It if u write that ff .again marsu a big wala thank u aur jorse jadu ki jhappi.
Its all my pleasure dear love u toooo????????
nice
Thank you so much dear tc???
Awesome Mars it’s really amazing but one thing want to request if in future u write stories like this and when Sanskar is at fault so I also need the same forgiveness like swara got it very easily agree tht it wasn’t her fault totally but still..
No offense it was really cute and amazing keep writing and now would lose interest in ur stories
that comment is for samaira… wrongly postd down
Thank you so much dear and sorry to disappoint you by forgiving swara easily and will try to follow your request in future. I hope I will be able to do Justice with all characters.
Thanks tc???
Awesome ???pls post next part soon..
Thank you so much dear will post soon tc???
dear sorry for interfering i know your comment is for mars..but still.. from many days I’m seeing your commentsd asking should write a story in sanskar favour nd swara at fault.. i know u r a varunholic nd sanskar holic , nf admires tejasswi…nd i know u too love swasan but more preference to sanskar/varun… so u want that… there r many swasan ffs too before showing swara at fault ,in some sanskar is at fault nd in sme both r equal in pain, whatever may be the content… eventhough marssu may be hellyholic nd me too but when it comes too swasan we love dem equally.. more than swara or sanskar deey r swasan for us.. nd yaar sometimes we like to see more pain at swara’s side..not becoz we r hellyfan but becoz that character is a woman[my personal opinion], becoz we too r women… nd now becoz of some ppl another rsn too emergd, who loved to make swara a vamp/characterless, nd pairing sanskar with someone.. may be sanskar can be too wrong der but it is optional.. hope i don’t hurt u.. nd marssu sorry for long comment…
i know its SWASAN for US bu anytime like everytime i read the stories only where swara is gud and who im Sanskarholic im Varunhoic not Sanskarholic.. nd i know more than swara or sanskar they r Swasan but still difference could be clearly shown.. Im actually SORRY i shouldnt have commented tht im really sorry if i have hurted anyone! U guys can continue i have really no problem.. And talking abt Sanskar i ave never read any ff in which favour is in his trm thts y.. maybe u have read..
IAM SORRY ITS ACTUALLY MY FAULT ONE MORE THING FOR ME VARUN AND SANSKAR R VERY DIFFERENT SO NO COMARISON AND YEAH I DO LIKE TEAJSSWI BUT NOT TEJASSWIHOLIC
sorry for long time next time i wont post anything related to it.. hope i dint hurt anyone and sorry MARS
Heyy anu and samaira no need of sorry and u can share your views and I always try to give equal importance to swara and sanskar but sorry to disappoint and yes in future also I will give equal importance to them as I love swasan equally and plz one request from my side no more discussion on this topic bcoz together we are known for swasan so plzz hope u understand.
Thanks?????
sorry yaar if I hurt u too… nd yaar i said u r an admirer not holic… just saw it in your status.. i have no prlm in it.. it was nd will always ur choice.. nd will check nd give names of ff in favour of sansksr if u want… much love.. marssu once again sorry …..
Its okay anuuu dear and u can share your views with me I don’t mind at all and anuu and samaira you are always welcome to say what you feel about my stories I don’t have any problem as you are my readers and we are here friends so no sorry and all???????????
Hey Mars dear… It’s very sweet and cute.. ?? So everything is sorted between SwaSan.. Waiting for more SwaSan moments… ? Thank you.. Tc..
Thank you so much dear will give swasan moments in coming updates tc???
Awesome dear
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Awesome epi….U r an amazing writer …Plz keep writing
Thank you so much dear your words means a lot tc???
Superb marsu.*hope u don’t mind me calling so* swasan were so cute. I just loved it. I don’t have words to describe this. Plss try to post others ffs also.
Yuppppp you can call me marsuu I don’t mind???? thank you so much dear will post my other stories also soon tc???????
Awesome epi…ur all stories are really amazing..Plz keep writing
lovely chappy dear…keep writing 🙂
Thank you so much diii tc???
Awesome dear I loved it
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awesome so cute loved swara proposal
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Awesome and excellent dear
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nice dear☺
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Its awesome nd loved it.. .
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Sorry really sorry… I read it in hurry actually I’m stuck with a project… So I couldn’t able to comment properly…. I hope my work would done… Even I’m not eating properly… Sorry marsu…
About chappy it’s awesome finally swara confessed her love. ????????? I m happy to see Sanskar happy. Only sujju left soon she will also firfiev swara… Ok bye now I have to go ..
Nooo problem depuuu dear and don’t stress take your food on time???? thank you so much dear tc???????
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Nice marsuu ??
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Amazing dear…..swara proposal beautiful lovely loved it
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