Hi this is VHM signing in with a new FF ….The concept is given by our friend FFFAN1234 aka Dipti….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….I hope you will continue to shower your support as you have always shown for my earlier write ups …….
Please note I May not be regular in posting the episodes due to personal commitments…however I promise I will not keep you waiting for a long time too……..
I have given the English translations for the Hindi lines used in the Episode…the lines between ‘’()’’ denotes the English translations.
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TAM : Thinking At that Moment / Thought At that Moment
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Shivaay and all OF Members came near her and asked ‘’What happened?’’
Anika ‘’Jhanvi aunty….Jhanvi aunty …..’’
Om ‘’Maa…what happened to Mom…bhabhi please tell what happened?’’
Anika ‘’Woh…woh…’’
Shivaay ‘’will you tell now Anika ?’’ he screamed
Anika ‘’jhanvi aunty is arrested in a murder case……Tej uncle has called to inform us about this……’’
Om ‘’What?’’ he collapsed
While Rudra walked backwards …….
Shivaay held Rudra and Gauri managed Om………
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Shivaay ‘’Bhavya handle Rudra while I call Bade papa to know the details’’
Bhavya nodded and held Rudra …Rudra and Om were in state of shock
Bhavya ‘’Rudra..i will get involved in this case and try to be with Jhanvi aunty…please don’t panic…I promise I will not let anything happen…Rudra are you listening…Rudra’’
She jerked and shaked Rudra but Rudra was not responding
Anika wiped her tears and came to Rudra after seeing Bhavya’s efforts going in vain
Anika ‘’Rudra , Listen to me…nothing will happen to Jhanvi aunty…we all are there …we mill make everything right..you trust all of us right’’
Rudra hugged Anika and cried ‘’bhabhi…maa…mom is arrested for killing someone….my mom is very good Bhabhi…you know na…she cannot do this…she can never kill anyone…’’
Anika ‘’rudra …I know…and you don’t worry…we will do everything to bring Jhanvi aunty safe back home…if you lose confidence how will we solve the issue…so stop crying and be strong’’
Rudra nodded his head and wiped his tears….he said nodding his head
Rudra ‘’yes Bhabhi…you are right…I will have to be strong and bring my mom back home with same respect and increased happiness’’
Shivaay was on the phone call
Shivaay ‘’Hello Bade papa’’
Tej ‘’Shivaay’’
Shivaay ‘’Bade papa…where are you and what exactly happened…I am gonna arrange best of the lawyers for this case…please don’t worry …’’
Tej ‘’Yes…I know that…we are in Nainital and Jhanvi is right now in police custody…rest details I cannot tell you over call..send the lawyers as fast as possible’’
Shivaay ‘’we are also coming there …by afternoon we will be there’’
Tej ‘’fine..meanwhile I will try to contact local lawyers for bail’’
Shivaay ‘’fine Bade papa …see you soon…take care of yourself and badi maa too’’
The call ended and Shivaay turned to see Anika pacifying Rudra and trying to make him normal…when he saw her efforts being fruitful…his gaze turned towards Om who was burning in anger and being in trance…Gauri was trying to calm him but he was in no mood to listen or understand Gauri…he walked towards Om and placed his hands on Om’s shoulder
Om looked at him
Om ‘’What did Mr.Oberoi say? How is my mom? What happened exactly?’’
Shivaay ‘’Om relax…badi mom is in police custody…she is okay…bade papa could not divulge any information of what exactly happened…he asked us to send lawyers at the earliest…’’
Om ‘’I am sure he might have done the murder and put blame on my mom…what else does he know…other than this……I am ashamed to be born as his son…and if something happens to my mom …I will kill him…I will just kill him’’
Anika ‘’om please …relax….till we don’t know about the exact details we should not come to the conclusion’’
Om ‘’how can I relax…my mom…my mom is suffering…she has always suffered and yet again …’’ he spoke while tears ran through his eyes……
Anika wiped his tears and he hugged Anika at once…Anika pacified Om and said
Anika ‘’please stop worrying Om…you are so matured and you very well know how to be in such situations….Shivaay will take care of everything’’
Anika spoke the last sentence looking at Shivaay…he blinked his eyes for a moment and came near Om and again placed his hand on him
Om broke the hug with Anika and looked at Shivaay and then looked at Anika and spoke
Om ‘’Sorry Bhabhi…I became emotional…..and I ‘’
Anika ‘’Om…you are my devar and above all my younger brother and we are a team…so no sorry’s and no thank you’s ‘’ she said smiling
Om nodded with a smile
Shivaay ‘’OmRu, don’t worry… this is promise of SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI that I will bring Badi maa and bade papa out of all this mess clean..in couple of hours we all will be leaving for Nainital’’
ShivOmRu had a Obro hug, while Anika, Gauri and Bhavya took a sigh of relief…..
Shivaay arranged for the best of lawyers and they all started to Nainital in Oberois chartered flight …..they straight away reached to Tej making no delays….
Shivaay ‘’Bade papa….’’
Tej turned towards him
Tej ‘’Shivaay…you came…finally…I was waiting for you’’
Everyone else also came forward…Tej looked at all of them
Om ‘’Mr.Oberoi where is my mom…what did you do with her…how did all this happen?’’
Tej ‘’relax Om…someone has trapped us…we …we came here to spend some good time away from all the tensions …but I don’t know how all this happened’’
Om ‘’don’t lie Mr.Oberoi…when you are around can something good happen? I am sure this is your move to make my mom permanently away from you’’
Shivaay ‘’Om relax…let me handle this’’
Rudra ‘’Papa…please tell what happened exactly…may be…may be we can get some clue’’
Shivaay ‘’yes Bade papa…please tell everything clearly’’
Tej started narrating everything starting from the Swethalana – Tej plan followed by ghost drama and then they coming to Nainital, About Naren and what he did and later how they found Naren dead
Everyone were shocked
Anika ‘’Sorry to ask you Tej uncle…if you had hit Naren on his head …why did Jhanvi aunty get arrested’’
Tej ‘’Anika…when we found Naren dead…Jhanvi pulled the knife out of his body…..so it’s obvious her finger prints came on the knife…secondly when the police arrived they already had a pic of Jhanvi holding the knife …so she was arrested’’
Shivaay ‘’that means …you were being followed by someone without your notice…and someone was keeping eyes on you and took the advantage’’
Om ‘’who else Swethlana…I don’t understand what was the need for Mr.Oberoi to get her out of jail when we all did so much to send her into the jail’’
Tej ‘’it was needed Om…she had proofs of ‘’ He couldn’t complete the sentence
Rudra ‘’she had proofs of what?’’
Tej ‘’I mean she had papers signed by Om …which stated that she is still property holder of Oberois and we cannot afford to keep those with her…I had to get back them from her and so I did all this’’
Shivaay ‘’but she is more intelligent bade papa, than what we think’’
Anika ‘’yes…’’ She turned towards Bhavya
Anika ‘’Bhavya…we need your help’’
Bhavya ‘’haan Bhabhi…I will support you’’
Anika ‘’we need to check the crime location…can you help us with this first’’
Bhavya ‘’ I will try to talk to Commissioner sir and then get back to you’’
Tej ‘’why do you want to do so?’’
Anika ‘’to collect proofs Tej uncle’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika…this is not a james bond movie that you will investigate as per your wish’’
Anika ‘’Who is that Jeans…what?’’
Shivaay ‘’james bond…forget it …you will not understand’’
Anika ‘’I know you will say this…and if you don’t trust me then work in your own way to reach truth’’
Gauri ‘’Shivaay bhayya I think Bahujaii is saying right…we need to check the crime location first …then only we can assess what might have happened’’
Om ‘’yes Shivaay this time I too agree with Bhabhi…’’
Shivaay ‘’fine…fine then …if you all say…we should…but before that we need to wait till Bhavya gets the permission’’
He looked at Anika while Anika showed attitude…..Shivaay set his hair in his style and walked away to his room……
Anika folded her hands against her chest and looked in equal tashan towards Shivaay while he was leaving….
Shivaay called Khanna and asked him to trace Swethlana …while Anika and Gauri started planning about what to do next…Lawyers, Om, Rudra , Bhavya , Gauriand Tej left towards the Jail where Jhanvi was being kept……
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Shivaay ‘’Hello Khanna’’
Khanna ‘’Sir, Swethlana ji is in Nainital and has been here since the time Tej sir has been here’’
Shivaay ‘’Khanna keep an eye on her without her knowledge…I need to know every movement of her….no one from Oberoi security must be keeping an eye on her as she is well versed about it…so hire local people’’
Khanna ‘’Yes sir…’’
Shivaay ended the call……..
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Anika TAM ‘’If swethlana did so I will have to search every nook and corner …I am sure she will have left some clue…and about the pic…how is it possible?
This swethlana is always chantomind…iss baar iski band mein baza ke rahoongi…bahut ho gaya iska khel’’
(This swethlana is always Chantomind…this time I will teach her a lesson…enough of her games)
Shivaay passes by her room and sees her in thoughts and comes to her
Shivaay ‘’Anika’’
Anika doesn’t respond
Shivaay ‘’Anika ‘’ he calls her a bit louder
Anika still doesn’t respond as she was in her thoughts scolding Swethlana in her typical language
Shivaay holds her and shouts ‘’Anika’’
Anika ‘’hahhhh’’
Shivaay ‘’are you okay? Where were you lost? I have been calling you from a long time’’
Anika ‘’woh…I was thinking something?’’
Shivaay ‘’really? Do you think too? I mean I thought you do everything without thinking..like what you did three months back’’
Anika stood up and looked at him
Anika ‘’What do you want to say…ki mein bina soche samjhe kuch bhi karti hoon..yehi…yehi lagta haina aapko..aur aap …aap kya karte hain…’’
(What do you want to say…that I do anything without thinking…this…you feel this right?..and you..what do you do?)
Shivaay ‘’what do I do?’’
Anika ‘’Aap kuch jyada hi soch ke sara raita phelate hain…tabhi…mere wapas aane ke baad ye shaadi ka drama itna lamba keech gaya’’
(You think so much that you create a huge mess…that’s the reason …after my return you dragged this marriage drama for an extra long time)
Shivaay ‘’you mean all this happened because of me?’’
Anika ‘’yes…you thought so good that you announced my engagement and marriage with that che footiya in two weeks and you yourself announced your marriage in two days…not only
that…’’
Shivaay ‘’ok..just…just stop it’’
Anika ‘’why..why should I stop…you started …so you stop…I wouldn’t stop..huhhh…’’
Shivaay closed her mouth in one go and they both shared an eyelock……..he was lost in her brown orbs while she kept on looking at his kanji eyes…..he removed his hand from her mouth and took it towards her cheek and then towards the hair strands to tuck them behind her ears….Anika was shivering out of nervousness and proximity while having a deep eyelock…..
Anika ‘’Shivaay’’ she said slowly
Shivaay ‘’hmmm’’ he looked at her and then dropped his hand from her face and turned his head towards other side
Anika ‘’Shivaay…did you find out anything about this case?’’
Shivaay ‘’yeah…swethalana has been following bade papa and Badi maa …so I am sure she must have been behind this conspiracy’’
Anika ‘’I knew…that swethlana is chantomind and see this time I will end her chapter…she has given much pain to OmRu and Jhanvi aunty…I will just not leave her…once she is caught na I will just hit her with my purani chandni and chameli, so that she will remember that with whom she has taken panga and what will be the further consequences for taking panga…’’
Shivaay ‘’ok stop it Anika…you can do all these when we expose her…for now we have to plan something to trap her’’
Anika ‘’ to do anything we have to go that place…and I have few questions…’’
Shivaay ‘’what?’’
Anika ‘’who took the pic? How did it reach police? If swethlana has done it why will she give them to police …she must have shown it to Tej uncle and blackmailed him ?’’
Shivaay ‘’you are right? Swethlana is an intelligent player and we need to make her do stupidity out of her intelligence…and for that we need to plan’’
Anika ‘’yes’’ she said holding his hand……..Shivaay at once looked at her….Anika came to senses of what she did and took back her hand immediately
Shivaay ‘’mujhe laga tum mera haath kabhi bhi nahi chododi …par’’
(I thought you would never leave my hand..but)
Anika ‘’aapne khud hi kaha tha na …ye haath chodne keliye nahi pakda…fir aapne kitni asaani se mera haath chod diya aur ghar se bahar nikal diya’’
(You have said right…that you have not held my hand to leave it…then how easily did you leave my hand and kicked me out of house)
Shivaay ‘’Ab inn bataoon ka koi fayda nahi hain…jo tumhe karna tha tumne kar diya..jo mujhe karna hain woh mein karke rahoonga’’
(There is no meaning of these talks now…you did whatever you had to…now I will do what is should )
Anika ‘’yes I know …..once Jhanvi aunty and Tej uncle are out of this case…you will get the new divorce papers and will get them registered this time…am I right’’
Shivaay was stunned to hear that and angrily said ‘’yes’’ and left from there
Anilka felt sad
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OmRu ran to Jhanvi
Jhanvi ‘’Om , Rudra…I haven’t done anything…someone has trapped me in this case…I am saying truth …I am innocent’’
Om ‘’mom…relax we know you did not do anything…and no need to give any explanations…we will take you out of here as soon as possible’’
Rudra ‘’yes mom…don’t worry …Shivaay bhayya and Anika Bhabhi are also with us and Shivaay bhayya has promised to make everything fine’’
Om ‘’yes mom…we will do everything but bring you out clean’’
On the other hand Bhavya spoke to commissioner and made him speak to the Nainital police to get required permission…after few hours they got the permission…..
Bhavya also took the copy of few evidences against Jhanvi from the police in which jhanvi was seen holding the knife…
Gauri and Bhavya also pacified Jhanvi and since the policewoman asked them to leave they all left sadly to their stay……
After coming back…Bhavya , rudra, Gauri, Om , Anika , Shivaay and Tej rushed to the place where the crime happened …..and started searching for clues……
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Shivaay ‘’bade papa …where was the body ?’’
Tej took them to the store room and showed them….
Bhavya took the pic and was seeing the pic and was looking around the room……Anika came to her, she too saw the pic and looked around
Anika ‘’Bhavya….it seems this pic has been taken from there ‘’ she said pointing towards a window
Bhavya ‘’yes dii…you are right…I think we must search there’’
Anika ‘’no…you stand here …I will go’’
Rudra ‘’I will also come with you bhabhi’’
Anika ‘’Bhavya try to lie down at the same spot where the body was laid’’
Anika ‘’Rudra enact as if you are killing …remember you are killing not taking the knife..this is first step…then enact as if you are pulling the knife…in both cases we will take pics’’
Shivaay ‘’Anika …have you gone mad…what are you trying to do?’’
Anika ‘’Shivaay recreating crime scene…can’t you understand’’
Shivaay ‘’What? I can’t believe !! I already said you this is not a movie it’s real…for God sake will you stop your kiddish acts?’’
Anika ‘’do you have any better idea Shivaay?’’
Shivaay looked on
Anika ‘’no is your answer right…then please let me do what I am doing and haan don’t disturb me’’
Anika ‘’Om will you come with me to help me?’’
Om ‘’sure bhabhi’’
Anika and Om started to go when Shivaay joined them …Anika smiled while OM nodded his head horizontally
All three reached the place from where the pic might have been probably clicked and stood there….
Anika ‘’Om when Rudy tries to kill take the pic of him and when Rudy tries to pull the knife take the pic of him’’
Om agreed and the entire scene was recreated…….the pics were taken…all the OF youngsters along with Tej gathered to see the pics….
All the three pics: 1 where Jhanvi was pulling the knife, 2. Rudra’s act of killing, 3. Rudra’s act of pulling the knife were placed side by side…..
Bhavya ‘’We got it’’
Shivaay ‘’yes we got it’’
Om ‘’but what?’’
Bhavya’’ Om bhayya….when a person kills I mean pushes the knife the angle of his hand position is this ‘’ she showed the pic 2
Bhavya ‘’and when a person pulls the knife the angle of his hand position is like this’’ she showed pic 1 and pic 3
Shivaya measured the angles and then looked at them
Shivaay ‘’exactly…in pic 1 and pic 3, badi maa and Rudra’s hand positions are almost at the same angle …that means ‘’
Rudra ‘’that means we can get our mom cleared off the case’’
Bhavya ‘’no Rudra …we cannot…as court will not accept this evidence’’
Gauri ‘’what?’’
Bhavya ‘’we need some more proofs’’
Anika ‘’proofs like what?’’
Bhavya ‘’I can’t explain what….But we need strong evidences… when I spoke to the officer in charge of this case he said that all the proofs were against Jhanvi aunty’’
Shivaay ‘’can you tell me what all are the evidences against badi maa?’’
Bhavya ‘’primarily she was in the same location of crime, the pic, her friendship and enmity with victim, the footprints that were in mud matched the size of Jhanvi aunty and a video proof where a woman has said that two people were there and she found jhanvi aunty’s ornament’’
Anika ‘’video proof ? but we did not know this?’’
Bhavya ‘’ I will show you’’
Bhavya showed the video where an old woman was giving her statement and showing the ornament…
Om was in thoughts….
Om ‘’no my mom is not the culprit…she cannot be’’
Everyone looked towards Om…..
Shivaay ‘’om relax …I know badi maa hasn’t done anything…it’s time we tackle Swethlana and show her the right place…you need to be strong’’
Anika ‘’Om …’’
Om ‘’shivaay…this ornament was given by me to swethlana’’
Rudra ‘’what?’’
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Fenil Bro…sorry but I couldn’t cut short the episode as this was pre decided…coming episodes I will try to make it as short as possible…sorry for that
ALL CREDITS TO FFFAN1234 aka DIPTI for the concept !!!
So this was the second part…please let me know how you felt after reading this by posting your opinion in the comment section…I will reply as soon as possible…….
50 Comments
Pls don’t make this short pls pls
Hi Gangu…don’t worry i will try to maintain balance…not too long not too short….thank you for posting the opinion
Amazinggggg dii phenomenal…….. uhh juzz nailed it as always… n yeah they r solving mystery on their own n shivaay as always being tadibaaz keep on disagreeing Anika’s plans…. he cannot change at all…. it seems anika must have been a cop in her previous birth haha….. anyways juzz loved it ….. cant wait for d nxt one…. post as soon as ppppoooosssssssiiiiibbbblllleeeeeeeeee….
Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…lol…he he he…Dipti wanted to involve swethlana track and i like writing mysteries, though i am not good at writing them ….next episode i have uploaded just now….love you loads …keep smiling and take care
Dii…as always u stopped at d suspense point making it more and more interesting.
Episode is superb with all that interesting links Anikas bonding wid omru is ???.i loved it and anikas Bindass attitude is ????.
One thing is that…dii i personally feel that d episode length is fyn..there is no need to cut short d episodes.fenu bhaiyya its not like disagreeing with u..sry.
Hehe no worry and no need to say sorry.
I m fine with this length and after you all are old with Di hehehhe ? Dii me aaj paka mujhe pitwane Ka irada Bana liya Hain.
Hey Chotii,
Thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i will try maintaining the balance in the lenght of episodes so that everyone will be happy …but this will happen only after episode -5…till then the lenght of the episode will be same as it is now….love you loads chotii…keep smiling and take care
Fabulous…..eagerly waiting for next part
Thank you so much Nandhini…thanks a lot…i have uploaded the next episode just now…hope it gets posted soon……
Noooo di don’t cut d epi…..
Fenil bhayu thoda jayda padne se kuch nahi yoga……
Now coming to epi,
Di u Amazingly wrote this thriller epi….. I wish it happened in ib….,,
Luv u Akki not u….????????
Hey Bani gorgeous…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…Akki and I both love you….keep smiling and take care
Aflatoon chappy.
Tadibaaz Shivika never change.
OmRu’s reaction was perfect ShittiMaar.
Can’t tolerate bhavya……make her stay away from my Rudra at least 1000000000000000000000*10000000000000000000000feetsssssssss….
Anika apne rewind mode me hain lol yaad aaya kuch dii ?:D:D:D:D
Hey Bro….thank you so much…thanks a lot…change is one thing that constantly changes…so we need to accept the change and move on…this i am saying because we need to accept Bhavya and move on…and coming to actual point …this FF is of Shivika …so the other pairs will not be projected so much…..hope you would continue to support me as you always do…loads of best wishes…keep smiling and take care
exactly fenil bhai ….. should make rudy bhaiyya 100000000000000*10000000000 far frm tat bhavya??….. bt i thnk tat distance is very very low…. wht do u thnk bhai
yaa right….Bhavya ko nilkal do
Its fine lengths and no need to change for me oky:D:D:D i m fine.
Mujhs pitengs sab kya aap bhi dii….
Di…. Whoa!! A crime scene….. This exactly looks lyk a crime film???? ….. Di again my Chandu didi proved herself kidkithod ??….. This Shivaay Jiju haina Yaar ?…. But I can’t be angry n Jiju fr a long tym?…. Kidkithod epi di…. Do something di I can’t see my Om bhaiyya In pain ??…. But di u r a ????
Hey Ajee…thank you so much chotuu…thanks a lot…the story will do everything what will i do chotuu…enjoy the episodes…and ya all the best for exams…love you loads …keep smiling and take care
Awesome fabulous mind blowing part di…..loved it to the core.it’s very interesting di I’m so excited to read the next part eagerly waiting for next part update soon di
Love you ??Take care and stay safe
Hey Niriha…thank you so much …thanks a lot…next episode i uploaded just sometime before…hope it gets posted soon….love you loads …keep smiling and take care
This is super awesome update, You have stopped at the cliff-hanger. Looking forward to next part.
Thank you so much Dipti for the opportunity…all credits to you…
awesome episode
Thank you so much Pritika…thanks a lot…
Superb … Loved the bhabhi devar bond…. I think this length is okay. But whatever ur decision I’ll respect it.
Hey Kiki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…awee so sweet of you….i will try maintaining a balance in the length
Superb update
thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot
Super Di…. Loved the Devar Bhabhi bond….
Thank you so much Kavinda…thanks a lot ….
Harika di this episode is emotionalbaaz…Loved the way anika pacified both om and rudra…Why shivaay is teasing all plans of anika??He sont have any idea..So he should let her to execute her plan???Loved the explanation of the angles in the pic…Really you wrote this episode in the view of CID officer di??????????????You rocked the second episode too…Get rid of that donkey svetlana?????i hate her…Plssssss dont cut short…This lengthis enough…Its the correct length….Plssssssss update soon….????
Hey Logesh…thank you so much …thanks a lot…..lol CID Officer and me …ha ha ha…next episode i uploaded sometime before…hope it gets posted soon……
It is awesome dii.. Crime scene description Is awesome..
Hi Nikki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot….
Lovely Update!
These 2 tadibaaz people will never stop. I’ve always adored Anika’s bond with Omru…..
This is getting so interesting, can’t wait to read the next chapter. Update Soon 🙂
Hey Shivika….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode i uploaded it sometime back…hope it gets posted soon
Di… it was a khidkitod episode!
Jhanvi is in jail and tej is outside tryin to free her. Omru’s condition ?? i can’t see them like tht… anika was the one who could calm them both down, shivay was also not able to calm om down… love anika’s bond with omru… it’s so sweet filled with love and so pure, for them anika is like their mother since bhabhi is also a mom. Om won’t believe tej so easily aftr all tht he has done for so many years, It’s not easy for him to forget it all in one moment and believe tht tej has changed for good.
Anika’s mind has already strted makin plans on how to solve the case whereas shivay is stuck at one point only ?. The way she was cursing swetlana in the room ?? and thn shivay comes and their small moment ? and their feelings and anger towards each other for not believing on their love.
Omru consoling jhanvi and tellin her tht they trust her blindly and would get her out of the jail ???. Bhavya got the permission and they will now strt investigation on their own way. Shivay has to follow anika no matter wht since he has no idea and everyone’s already on her side ?. Anika’s investigation is better thn the police… or u could say james bond as well ?. So now all the youngsters have got some idea of wht’s goin on… and khanna’s ppl are keepin an eye on tht chantomai.
Can’t wait for ur next epi di. Take care di and love u ❤❤❤. And a hug frm me to u ?.
awee thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i always feel so happy and special to read your opinion…thanks for those perfect descriptions…i loved it….loads of love and hugs….keep smiling and take care
Fabulous Di ! You write everything so perfectly.. how do you do this ? It actually felt like I m watching the serial. I loved AniRuOm bond and the takkar of Shivika…
More power to you Di ??
Hey Pui…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i did this because of Dipti…all credits to her….awee so sweet of you dear…loads of love to you…keep smiling and take care….
Very good…amazing nd superb…u r awesome in writing mysterious stories…everything was well defined…
Nd yeah u can call me Tanz or anything u like…
Love nd best wishes…
Hey Tanz….thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…all credits to Dipti for the concept …my hand is very less in this…loads of love to you….keep smiling and take care
Truly mysterious and amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much Yvone Codner…thanks a lot…after a really long time i have seen you back on my FF’s….so nice to have you back…
Awesome episode…..omRu’s reaction was wow…..N Anika’s bhabhi avtar….I love her when she is that…..in happy as well as difficult times, I Love the bhabhi-devar jodi more…..
Sahi jaa rahe ho meri detectivebaaz di…..now toh I have stopped guessing only….I know next one is posted, going to read that now
Thank you so much Nita…thanks a lot…am so glad that you liked the emotions-jodi and Anika’s avtaar….ha ha ha …is mein sab kuch pata chal jayega Nita…pakka …itni mystery nahi par alag tarah se dikha rahi hoon …bas aur kuch nahi….love you loads …keep smiling and take care
Hi akka I know I am too early to comment ???? but couldn’t help it…..
Coming to the update ….. I wish ACP Bhavya nahi balki Anika honi chahiye….. marvellous update akka …. every time you start a new ff, you remind me of your previous ff ….. this time I am remembering mmkad …..
And dipti di….. thank you for bringing back our THRILLER AND MYSTERY WRITER BACK with your concept … all the best both of you ???
Hey Ashwinee…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i am so happy to see you back…ha ha ha …you still remember MMKAD…this statement made my day…All credits to Dipti for the concept…thanks a lot again dear…keep smiling and take care
Awesome mind blowing part di…
Loved it to the core.. don’t short the story…
Thank you so much Sissy…thanks a lot…will try to balance the length…it’s a promise