Hi Sanveer Fans Jessica here. I am writing a Sanveer OS for you guys. Hope you’ll like it .
A beautiful girl is shown wearing a pink frock with metal having lose curls. She was checking her patients.
Girl: You are absolutely fine now. I’ll give you discharge then you can go home.
She comes out of the ward and sees someone going to store room and was looking as if he was up to something wrong. He was wearing a long black shawl and his face was covered with it. The girl saw him. She move towards him.
Girl: Excuse me… Who are you… ? Where are you going..?
The person ignored her. He kept walking and gave no reply. The girl followed him.
He went to the store room.
As soon as they reach the store room, the man pulled her and holded her tightly. He took a knife from his pocket. Girl gets scared.
Girl: What are you doing..? Leave me…? Help…
He puts his hands on her mouth and she couldn’t shout for help.
Man: Stop shouting… Or else I’ll kill you..
He removes his hand.
Girl: Who are you …? Leave me plz let me go…
She cries. Man tries to attack. Girl closes her eyes.
Girl: Ahhhhhhhhh….
She shouts…
Man moved back and started laughing..
Man: hahahah … ?
Girl gets scared.
Man removed his shawl and girl recognizes him.
Girl: Veer you….!!! What is this Veer … ?
Veer: Just look at your face Sanchi… Omg… I can’t stop laughing…
So the man is Veer and the girl is Sanchi.
Sanchi slaps his shoulders.
Sanchi: You idiot…!! You scared me…
Veer: Ouch …!! Ok sorry… But what is this Sanchi next week is our marriage and you are working here. Go apply for a leave and take rest.
Sanchi: No Veer my patients are more important.
Veer: Ohk ohk… Btw miss golgapaa … We are here all alone… So….
Sanchi: So..? I’m going..you go and play your stupid pranks on someone else.
She tries to leave but Veer pulls her and pins her to the wall.
Sanchi: Veer…!! What are you doing..? Let me go.. If someone saw us then.?
Veer:So what ? Let them seee i don’t care. You are mine and everyone knows it.
Sanchi blushes.
Sanchi: But Veer.. I need to go I’m on duty
Veer: Ok I’ll let you go but give me good bye kiss first.
Sanchi: Veer plz… Let me go na.. Acha ok then close your eyes first.
Veer closes his eyes. Sanchi kisses his cheek.
Sanchi: Happy..? Now let me go…
Veer hugs her and frees her from his grip.
She leaves.
So the week passed. And finally it was the a bright day.
Veer wakes up in the morning. He messages Sanchi.
Veer: Good morning miss golgapaa..
Sanchi replies gud morning mr prankster
Veer: Sanchi finally we are going to get married tomorrow. I can’t wait now.
Sanchi: Patience mr prankster patience..
Veer: Sanchi i want to take you for a long drive.
Sanchi: But Veer today is our Mehndi function.
Veer: Oho miss golgappa why are you always worried. The function will be in the evening. And I have already taken permission from Jaya maa. We will be back on time. Now get ready I’m coming ok..
Sanchi: Acha baba ok…
Veer : Bye….
Sanchi: Bye..
Sanchi gets ready wearing purple Salwar suit.Veer comes to pick her. He messages her to come out, he’s waiting.
Sanchi goes out. Veer stares her lovingly.
They sit in car and leave.
Sanchi: Veer tomorrow is such a big day of our life.. I still can’t believe i am going to marry you.
Veer: Even I can’t believe it Sanchi. It’s just like a dream come true.
Sanchi smiles.
Sanveer were enjoying their long drive. It was a long smooth road and both sides of the road were covered with greenery. It was cloudy weather and was drizzling. Cold winds were making their time even more romantic.
Suddenly Veer gets worried.
Veer: OH NOO….!!
Sanchi: What happened Veer..?
Veer: Sanchi the brakes are not working..
Sanchi: WHAT..?
Veer tried a lot to manage somehow and stop the car but it was of no use.
Veer: Sanchi jump….
Sanchi: No Veer…
Veer: I said jump Sanchi …
Suddenly a truck comes from the front and their car gets crushed under it.
The truck driver was drunk. He escapes from there. However Sanveer were taken to hospital by some people. Their family was informed by the hospital as they got Veer’s phone.
Veer goes in coma. His family comes and everyone cries.
Veer was treated by the best doctors. Finally after three long months he gained consciousness.
He wakes up and asks about Sanchi.
Dr Malhotra : I’m sorry Veer but actually .. S-S-Sanchi ……
Veer shouts.
Veer: I’M ASKING WHERE IS MY SANCHI. IS SHE FINE. CALL HER PLZI WANT TO SEE HER.
DR Malhotra: Veer plz don’t panic… Actually we lost Sanchi. She died in that accident.
Veer is shocked. His world was completely destroyed. He stares at Dr Malhotra for someone. and then bursts into tears and shouts.
Veer: No this can’t happen. You can’t leave me alone Sanchi. You promised me you won’t leave me alone. Then why Sanchi…. ?? It’s all bcz of me I am the reason for your death.. I have no right to live..
He was broken completely. He couldn’t imagine his world without Sanchi. Doctors and how family tried to calm him down as he had just recovered from coma and it was not good for him to get panic like this. Doctor gave him an injection and he sleeps.
Savitri was crying badly. Jaya consoles her.
Jaya: Savitri plz don’t cry. I know how you must be feeling too see your son in this condition but now you have to be strong. It’s all bcz of me… I gave permission to Veer to take Sanchi for drive in that day. If I wouldn’t have given permission to him that day then our children would be living a happy married life today. My Sanchi would me alive.
She remembers the day when Sanchi’s dead body was brought after the accident and she was taken to fulfill her last rights. Tears drop from her eyes remembering that day.
Savitri: Jaya plz don’t blame yourself for what happened. It was all destiny’s plans.
Half a month passed like this and now Veer was given discharge. He became quite, and his smile had completely disappeared. Ishagya tried to cheer him and let him become that old naughty prankster, but couldn’t. He was like an alive dead body. He rarely talked to anyone and, most of the time he was engaged in his work as a doctor, and he often used to lock himself in dark rooms. He had completely changed. No one could believe that he was the same Veer. One month passed like this. He was standing on the terrace of Sdch staring the bright moon with tears in his eyes.
Fb starts……………………………………
Sanchi and Veer were sitting on the terrace of Sdch. Sanchi’s head was lying on Veer’s shoulders and Veer was holding her hands.
Sanchi: Veer look, the moon is looking so beautiful.
Veer: Yeah, but not more than you.
Sanchi smiles. Seeing her smiling, a beautiful smile appeared on Veer’s face. He kissed her hands and then her cheeks.
Sanchi: Veer, plz… If someone saw then..?
Veer: My dear Sanchi, there’s no one here except for us. We are alone.
Sanchi: Veer, we are not alone, look the moon is here too.
Veer: So what..? He is just witnessing our love.
Sanchi: Veer…!!
Veer: Sanchi… Promise me that you’ll never ever leave me…
Sanchi: Promise baba… I’ll never leave you.. And if I go somewhere, then this moon will make you remember me… He’ll always be there for you in my absence.. Wherever you go he’ll follow you like I do.
Veer: Oh.. You mean that you are planning to go somewhere leaving me alone..?
Sanchi: No Veer, i didn’t mean that… I mean that if any situation occurs that I have to go somewhere then…
Veer: If you go somewhere away from be then firstly I’ll never let you go and secondly if you still leave then I’ll make you return to me and thirdly if i can’t make you return to me then I’ll come to you wherever you are…
Sanchi: Veer, i love you….
Veer: I love you too…
Fb end………………………………
Veer looking at the moon…
Veer: You promised me that you’ll never leave me… But you broke your promise …. You left me alone… I promised you that I’ll never ever let you go away from me… And if you do then I’ll come to you wherever you are….. I’ll keep my promise…. You couldn’t fulfill your promise but I’ll fulfill mine… I’m coming Sanchi I’m coming…..
Saying this he jumped from the terrace… He was lying on the the floor and was bleeding … The crowd gathered and was immediately brought inside the hospital but he was declared dead. Dr Malhotra took off his glasses looking at his dead son and fell on the floor. His body was taken to their house and his last rights were fulfilled…….
After this… Mr malhotra’s family shifted to America… And Sdch was managed by Dr Kabir…..
The story don’t end here…. True love never dies…..20 years passed. They returned to fulfill their promise they did to each other. Veer took rebirth as the son of Neeta and Adarsh, who named their son Veer and Sanchi took rebirth as the daughter of Khushboo and Ashok.. Not only their names but their faces, their habits, their likes and dislikes were same. Everybody believed that they are reborn but they never told anything to them about their past. Jaya, Savitri and Dr Malhotra were no more…
Veer returns to India to continue his practice in Sdch as soon he got to know that his uncle was the owner of this hospital and the hospital is still his property legally. Sanchi cane here to do her internship here. It was her first day in the hospital. Isha Pragya Garv and Riya were now the ssenior doctors here and Dr.Kabir was performing the duties which were earlier performed by Dr Malhotra.
Sanchi enters and hospital and collides with Veer. They fall on the floor and Sanchi was at the top of him. They share an eye lock. As soon they got back to senses they stood up and apologize to each other.
Sanchi: I’m sorry…
Veer: I’m sorry…..
Veer: Anyways, who are you..?
Sanchi: I’m an intern here…. And you..??
Veer: I’m also an intern here…
Sanchi: Oh.. Great…
Veer: So Miss Sanchi… Friends..?
Sanchi smiles.
Sanchi: Sure..
Both shake their hands.. As soon as Sanchi feels the touch of his hand she gets a flashback, but the vision was not clear rather blur. She faints. Veer carries her in his arm and takes her to the hospital and asks a doctor to check her. Doctor checks her and said there is nothing to worry about she is alright and will gain consciousness soon.
Sanchi was lying on the bed still unconscious when Pragya was passing through and she notices her. She gets shocked. She comes near her and stares her for some seconds. Tears were rolling down her cheeks. She sat bedside her.
Pragya: Sanchi… My Sanchi.. You are alive….. I can’t believe it. You are here infront of me…. I missed you so much….
She hugs the unconscious Sanchi and crises hard.
Pragya: Isha…. I have to tell Isha…
She rushes to Isha. Isha was in her cabin. She holds her hands and run towards Sanchi’s room.
Isha: Pragya what happened..? Where are we going..? Will you tell me something…?
Pragya don’t utter a word. She takes her to Sanchi’s room. Isha saw Sanchi and gets surprised. She goes near her and sits on her bed. She holds her hand and there were tears in her eyes. Just like Pragya she also couldn’t believe her eyes.
Suddenly Sanchi gets consciousness and looks at them. She thinks why are they crying and who brought her here.
Sanchi: Who are you both…?
Pragya: Oo maharani…. Don’t you remember your best friends.. ? And where were you in past 20 years.. ? Don’t you missed us..?
Isha: Sanchi these 20 years were so hard for us.You have no idea how much we missed you each day. Where have you been hmm..?
Sanchi was surprised to hear them.
Sanchi: What are you talking about..? 20 years… Friends …. I am not getting it…
Ishagya were surprised…
Isha: Are you Sanchi Mishra…?
Sanchi: Yes , I am Sanchi. An intern here.
Isha and Pragya look at each in surprise.
Pragya: Can i see your documents.
Sanchi: Sure.. Here they are.
Pragya takes her documents and notes her address. She gives the documents back he to her.
Pragya and Isha leave from there and they reach to the address they noted in the documents. They were shocked to see Khusboo and Ashok there. Ishagya inquired about Sanchi and they told them that she is not Sanchi but their own daughter who was born after one year of Sanchi’s death. They named her Sanchi and much to their shock she is complete shadow of Sanchi and they are sure that Sanchi has taken rebirth as their daughter. They requested Ishagya not to tell anything about it to her. Ishagya agree and leave.
Ishagya tell this whole thing to Kabir Riya and Garv. And they also agree not to tall about this matter with Sanchi or anyone else.
Kabir was checking the intern list where he founds the name of ” Veer Malhotra” and is shocked. He calls him in his cabin and earth slips under his feet when he sees Veer standing in front of him in his cabin. He immediately hugs him and Veer is surprised.
Veer: Sir..?
Kabir gets apart and turns around to dry his tears.. He again turns to face Veer.
Kabir: Mr Veer may i see your documents.
Veer gives it to him.
Kabir’s eyes were widely opened to see his parents name Adarsh Malhotra and Neeta Adarsh Malhotra..
He gives his documents back to him and asks him to leave. He calls Adarsh and Adarsh tells him that Veer is their son who is exactly the reflection of Veer. Kabir discuss this matter with Isha Riya Garv and Pragya.. Now they were sure about their rebirth. They decided to make them come close and realize their incompleted love.
Sanchi and Veer used to see flashbacks of their past life since childhood but they were always blur. These flashbacks disturbed both of them a lot.
Sanveer started their internship. Sanchi was called by Isha in her cabin.
Sanchi: May i come in Dr Isha..?
Isha: Yes Sanchi. Come.Sit here with me.
Sanchi sat with her on sofa.
Ish: Look Sanchi, you and Veer are going to a trip with us doctors.
Sanchi: But Dr Isha… Why only we two… I mean what about other interns ..?
Isha: Sanchi… Other interns will stay here and look after their patients. They’ll be given opportunities later. You have to inform Veer for about trip. Am i clear..?
Sanchi:Yes Dr Isha…
Sanchi leaves…
They go on a trip to Shimla. A hotel was booked for them.. Prabir were sharing same room as they were married Isha and Riya were sharing same room, Bala and Madhu were sharing a single room and Sanveer were asked to share a same room. At first Sanveer refused to stay in a single room but agreed when others insisted saying that the rooms are already booked and they have no other choice.
Sanveer enter their room.
Sanchi: I am so tired i an going to sleep.
Veer: Ohk you go and sleep on the bed I’ll adjust on the couch.
Sanchi smiled and nod.They both go to rest.
Veer dreamt that he is with Sanchi and both are eating candy floss. Actually it was his past life memory.He woke up and saw Sanchi still asleep. He sits beside her and gently caressed her face.
Veer: I don’t know why Sanchi but i feel like i have a deep relation with you, as if you are connected with me somehow. I feel like we have a strong bond with each other. I came to know you since some days but looks like i know you since years. I don’t know why am i feeling like this. But Sanchi you are very special for me.
Sanchi woke up and found Veer softly caressing her face. Veer takes her hand off and stands up.
Veer: Good morning Sanchi..
Sanchi: Good morning Veer…
Veer: I’m going for a morning bath…
Sanchi: No..!! I’ll go first…
Veer: No I woke up first… So I’ll go first..
Sanchi: Don’t you have manners..? Ladies first…
Veer: Look what’s that….
Sanchi turns behind and Veer runs to the washroom…
Sanchi: Hey you cheater… Stop …
Sanchi locks the washroom from outside and smirks.. She messages Riya of she can use her washroom she agrees. Sanchi leaves the room leaving Veer locked in the bathroom…
Sanchi gets ready and forgets about Veer .. She was having breakfast with Riya and Isha in their room…
Veer founds the washroom door locked from outside and understands who must have done this.
Veer: This Sanchi… She locked me from outside.. Let me come out then I’ll make her regret this and show her who i am…
He shouts from inside…
Veer: IS ANYONE THERE..? I’M LOCKED INSIDE… PLZ HELP… HELLOW…??
Sanchi came in the room and heard Veer shouting. She didn’t open the door and was enjoying him shouting like that.
He sees a cockroach inside the washroom and jumps…
Veer: SAVE ME PLZZZ SAVEE ME FROM THIS COCKROACH .. SAVE ME SOMEONE…IS ANYONE THERE ?
Sanchi starts laughing and Veer heard her. He shouts from inside…
Veer: Sanchi… Sanchi you are there… Sanchi open the door… Open it i said..
Sanchi opens the door..
Veer comes out and pins her to the wall they both share an eye lock… They came to senses in a few minutes…
Sanchi: Veer.. Leave me…
Veer: Say sorry first….
Sanchi: Never…
Veer holds her from her waist and carries her in his arms..
Sanchi: Aah.. Veer leave me..
Veer moves outside the room and walks through the corridor. Everyone were looking at them and were giggling… Sanchi turns red in embarrassment..
Veer: Until you apologize i won’t put you down…
Sanchi: Okay fine SORRY
Veer: Say it again..
Sanchi rolls her eyes..
Sanchi: Veer I’m sorry….
Veer: I couldn’t hear it properly.. Will you repeat..?
Sanchi: I AM SOORRYYYYYY VEER..
Veer puts her down…
Veer: Next time be careful…
Sanchi looks around and finds everyone smiling at her. She runs from there…
It was time to go out and enjoy. All went in a car and visited the beautiful places. It was evening and Sanchi told Veer that she is hungry. Veer takes her to a golgappa stall.
Veer: Sanchi these are your favorite na Have it..
Sanchi: How do you know golgappas are my favourite..?
Veer: I guessed…
Sanchi smiles and both eat golgappa…
They spent two days over there. Sanveer come close to each other. Finally they returned to Sdch…
After a couple of days Veer got to know about their house in India… Malhotra mansion… He decided to visit it. He took the keys from Kabir and leaves for the house …
He unlocked the house. It was all surrounded with dust. The furniture was covered with white coloured sheets. He walks through the corridoor and reaches his own room… Veer’s room… Where he spent his past life… He enters it and founds a picture of himself over there. He gets shocked.
Veer: What is this..? I didn’t click that pic then how it is here..? And who supposed to live in this room.. He started searching things and found an old diary… Veer was written on the top of it… It was a quite thick one with many pages. He took it with him and leaves the house.
It was quite dark when he reached hostel. He was tired so he kept the diary in a drawer and locks it.
Next day in Sdch………………
Veer was in hospital at his duty. He was constantly thinking about the diary. He couldn’t concentrate on his duties. Sanchi was passing by the corridor and saw him.
Sanchi: Veer..?
Veer was so lost in his thoughts that he didn’t notice her. Sanchi pats his shoulder from behind. He turns around and saw her standing there.
Veer: Hi Sanchi….
Sanchi: Veer is everything OK..?
Veer: Yeah everything’s fine…
Sanchi smiles and Veer similes back.
It was dark and their duties had finished by that time so everyone had left. Veer comes to the hostel and started reading the diary. As he started to read it, his blur flashbacks of past gradually became crystal clear. He found written on his diary….
” Sanchi… You entered my life, being a stranger at first, then we became friends and then… best friends, we started to love each other, we confessed our love, your presence made by life beautiful, you became my world, you were the reason behind my smile, you made me want to live… You promised me you’ll never leave me but you broke your promise… You let me alone in this world… Without you my life has no meaning… It’s useless…. If we can’t be together in this world then it’s better that i come to you wherever you are .. I’m committing suicide bcz i can’t live without you… I love you Sanchi… I love you….”
And the rest pages were blank…. Veer got to know his past… His memory was back… He now knew everything… He wanted to rush to Sanchi and tell her everything… But he couldn’t … He had to wait for Sanchi to realize his past..
It was next day in Sdch… Veer ran towards Pragya and hugged her. She was confused… He was about to tell her everything when he saw Sanchi standing beside a door near them busy in reading her files. He took Pragya to Kabir’s cabin and Kabir was there too. He locked the cabin and hugged Pragya again. Kabir got confused seeing Veer hugging her wife. He asked what was going on. Veer ran and hugged him and told everything to both of them. Prabir were extremely happy that he remembered everything. But Sanchi was still unaware of her past. Veer teases Prabir that they have turned old but he is still young ..
Prabir Veer Isha Garv and Riya decided to make Sanchi realise her actual identity. Kabir threw a party inviting all interns and doctors of Sdch…
A projector was placed in a dark big hall… A voice came from it.
Today, we will remember the best Dr of Sdch…. Who died 20 years ago in an accident… Her story will be today’s topic and the main reason of the party… Today is her death anniversary…
Sanchi’s childhood pics were shown with Sunny, Jaya, her Dadi and her best friend Ishagya..
Sanchi was feeling that she had heard the story before.. As if she was a part of this story… For her, it seemed to be very similar…..
Now the lights were on and the hall was decorated beautifully…. Veer was standing on the stage with mic on his hands… ?
” This beautiful Dr of our Sdch is still alive in our hearts… Her name was Miss golgappa… You might be thinking what a strange name it is but actually this wasn’t her real name… Her best friend no… Not best friend … Actually his lover used to call her with this name so she was popular with this name… A beautiful simple girl and very talented and honest Dr… She was the heart of our Sdch… She came here with big dreams… Of becoming a Dr…. She fell in love with a handsome prankster of Sdch.. Who was the heart throb of thousands of girls but she was the only girl whom he fell for…. They gradually came closer and confessed their love. Finally the time came for their marriage. Her lover took her for a long drive but their car met with an accident and she died… Her lover couldn’t bear the pain of her death… So he too committed suicide… This was the story of my… I mean our Miss Golgappa … Her real name was…..
A female voice interrupted….
” Sanchi Mishra..”
All turn around to find Sanchi there…. She was in tears with a big smile on her face… Yes, she too got her memory back… She ran and hugged Veer and whispered in his ears… ” I remember everything… I love you Veer… I love you…”
Veer broke the hug and bents on his knees.. He took out a ring from his pocket and proposed her…
” Will you marry me Miss Golgappa..?”
” Yes… I will …”
Veer makes her wear the ring and everyone clap for them…
Veer: So Miss Sanchi g… Will you go on a long drive with me..?
Sanchi glares.
Sanchi: Do you think i will ever go on a long drive…?
Veer laughs and hugs her… The screen freezes on their happy face… Indeed it was the start if their love story….
Finally i did it… The happiness after completing the entire OS is just priceless. Thank you for reading and plz drop a comment if you enjoyed reading …
28 Comments
Wow… fabulous Jessicca.. no words
Just loved it from core of my heart.. inspite of being a kanchi fan..i loved sanveer part just bcoz of u.
Thank you so much dear…. ?
omg what a love story lovely sooooooooooooooo gooood thankyuuuuuuuuuuu I can’t express my feeling amazing keep writing lovely ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Thanks a lot dear… Glad you like it ?
Thank you so much dear …..??
Great story! I loved it! Good job! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Amaz nice os jessica
Same here dear m kanchi fan but for u i read and commnt on it u r amaz writter jessi keep it up post nxt os on kanchi too.
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Its just woooooowwww
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Wow Jessie….it was fantastic…..i loved it…being a kanchi fan I loved reading it….it was amazing we upar wala….you are very talented….great job dear and keep up the good work….love you loads and loads ???
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Heyy jessica it was mind blowing awesome..pfect love story..loved sanveer..start another ff too..
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Such a great story jessicca loved it❤️
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What a beautiful concept…. Love u lot yaar…. U r awesome, mind-blowing, ravishing, magical n baki saare words bhi kam par rahein hai…..
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Super fantastic story
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omg Jessi dear………u r simply amazing………..what an emotional story……………I felt as if I’m watching a movie based on reincarnation………luv u loads dear………..
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Wow Jessica this story is really touching I felt so bad when Saanchi and Veer died. But they were reborn, wow I like the way how u made veer veer Malhotra and Saanchi Saanchi Mishra again never thought so ???
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Amazing superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing fantastic. love you loads
Thank you… Thank you so much…. Glad you like it…?