Ek Rishta Aisa Bhi
Here is the previous part link :- Part 14
SPECIAL MENTION: The whole part I am dedicating to the birthday girl #rosey. Happy birthday to you Dr.
This part I am dedicating to my all reader friends too from starting who were regularly demanding me to give punishment to Laksh for his deeds. I don’t know I have reached all your expectation or not . But I have tried.
So now I am stopping my bakbak and starting my story?
Part:-15
Sumi opened the door when the bell rang continuously for the 5th time. Before open the door she saw the wall clock which is showing 12:30 am of midnight. Suddenly a fear entered in her heart. Who might be here at this time. Before open the door she took God’s name that might haven’t been any bad news. When she opened the door she found swaragini have stood before the door. Sumi first took a deep breath seeing her dearest daughter in front of her eyes but next moment her normal face changed into tensed face when she saw Ragini’s devastated look. Her eyes were swollen and red due to continuous crying . Tear strands were clearly visible on her face and her hairs fallen in a messy way on her shoulder. Swara tightly hold her from her shoulder like if she will leave her the next moment Ragini would fall on the floor.
Before Sumi asks anything Swara took Ragini inside her room.
Swara gently sat Ragini on the bed and went to kitchen to bring water. When she was returning to her room holding water bottle with a glass Sumi called her name from her back.
Sumi 🙁 in a tensed and concern voice) what has happened with Ragini? Why you both are here at this time? In Maheswari house does anyone know about you that you are here ?
Swara just ignored her maa’s words and started to walk .
Sumi: ( in a slight angry voice) I am asking you something Swara. What has happened with Ragini and you? Why are you both behaving so strange
Swara:( asked in an outraging voice not controlling her anger any more) what you want to know maa. Ok I am telling you… why we both are here at this time looking at the wall watch which is showing 1 am. Because we both have left MM . We have no other place where we can stay so we came here. And about di , why is she looking like this because today she got to know about her marriage’s truth ( a loud gasp escaped from sumi’s mouth next moment her mouth covered by her palm . Tears are flowing from her eyes .)
Swara: Yes, today she has known to get about the deal which had done by her loved ones. Her father never cares about her feelings and just did a deal on her name sake thinking she will stay in happy in her life but never thought how will she feel when the truth will come before her. Her mother who knows her better than her did never thought once about her emotions and kept quiet seeing her daughter’s buying and selling. Her husband which she thought she will spend her rest of life peacefully had never thought he will also cheat her with her parents by the name of love ❤. ( said angrily with her sob where tears were flowing without her concern )You all have cheated my di ( pointing her fingers towards Sumi ) I forgive all of you …what you have done with me. But never ever forgive all of you… what have you done with my di.
At this time Sekher came out from his room listening loud sounds from the hall
Sekher:( seeing Swara in his house said in a surprising voice) Swara you are here that also at the mid night. And why are you crying like this my princess.
Swara wiped her tears and looked at him in an angry face. She walked off from there giving a death glare to Sekher holding her water bottle and glass.
Sekher looked blankly towards Sumi who just looked towards Swara ‘s departure direction.
In MM
Sanskar and Laksh entered inside their house with a broken heart. The entire house was quite which is showing that all are sleeping in their rooms . Laksh and Sanskar entered in their respective rooms with a heavy hearts.
SONG:- BAATON KO TERI HUM ……
…FROM MOVIE ALL IS WELL
Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Laksh opened his room where he found a happy Ragini has waited for her with a smile. Automatically a smile spread on his face. He ran towards her to hug her . When he took her in his tight embrace Ragini faded from his arms. He searched her everywhere but didn’t get her.
Kitni chahat hai dil mein tu jaane na
Kaise dil ko samjhaaye dil maane na
Next moment he sat on floor tiredly holding tightly his marriage photo and a baby’s doll near his heart . He cried loudly loosing his two precious persons in his life.
Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Sanskar entered inside his room where he found only emptiness…..emptiness of his princess. Taking a deep breath he locked his room . He opened his cupboard taking his nightshirt . When he was searching his clothes a family pack of Cadbury chocolates fallen on floor. He collected it from floor and remembered …before two days how Swara gifted him it. Immediately he kept it inside the cupboard and closed it taking his clothes.
Meri tammanaao ka ehsaas tum
Main kahin bhi rahun mere aas-paas tum
Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..
Ek pal bhi tumse door jaa na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Sanskar came out from his washroom and went to near his bed. When he tried to lying on bed he saw another Sanskar has slept with Swara holding her in his embrace. Immediately he got up from his bed and walked off to his balcony where he got fresh air which is miss inside his room like Swara.
Ajnabi silsila mere saath hai
Bheed mein tanhaai ka ehsaas hai
Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..
Swara was looking towards Ragini through the mirror sitting before dressing table who was lost in her thoughts. She looked one of their photo frame which placed on one corner of the dressing table. Few fresh tear drops flowed on her cheeks . When she sensed tears are flowing from her tears she took her left hand to wipe it but something touched her cheek. She saw her hand bringing it before her eyes few fresh tears fallen from her eyes when she saw her engagement ring ? in her ring finger.
Yaadon ko teri hum mitaa na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Ragini lied on the bed like a lifeless body who is breathing but her soul missing from her body. She was looking the ceiling blankly and remembering her beautiful memories with her family which she spent with her parents . She recognized her new journey with Laksh how had she started it with love keeping to the trust at the base. But unfortunately it was only one sided . This relation was nothing for Laksh which was hurting her more. A lone tear escaped from her eyes.
Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
The camera zoomed on their faces where all are shedding tears thinking about their loved ones.
Next day
Sanskar woke up listening car ‘s horn sounds and checked time from his wrist watch which is showing at 5:10 am morning. Sanskar stretched his arms and blinked many times after rubbing his eyes in a sleepy way and looked outside standing from near the edge of his balcony where he had slept last night.
Laksh was going hurriedly to outside of the main gate of MM sitting inside his car. Without thinking further Sanskar came downwards holding his car keys and followed Laksh car.
Laksh entered Gododia house where shemish are present in hall . Without saying anything to them Laksh directly moved towards Ragini’s room calling her name loudly.
Shemish looked each other tensely and then went behind him.
Ragini hearing Laksh voice locked her room door from inside before Laksh reaching the entrance of her door.
Laksh:( banged her room door and said in a trembling voice) Rag..i..nii plz open the door. Please Ragini. You can’t do this with me. I am sorry for everything . See I am holding my ears( immediately held his both ears in his both hands) . I can’t hurt you again. No..no actually I will never do anything wrong again. Please forgive me for the last and first time. I love you Ragini …i love you . I can’t live without you. ( hearing his words Ragini closed her mouth in her own hand to stopping her loud moans) please Ragini give me one chance to keep my points before you ( wailing and banging the door again loudly) In future I won’t hurt you again. I will never do this again Ragini .
Swara held his wrist and dragged him to hall where Laksh was shouting…. Ragini please give me one chance …not for me then please for our baby give me a chance Ragini. I will say you everything why I had done everything? I will never cheat you again Ragini after all I love you.
Swara pushed him with her all force that he stumbled a little and moved few steps back . If at the exact time Sanskar holds him then he falls on ground.
Laksh immediately freed himself from Sanskar ‘s grip and ran towards Swara and said holding her hand
Laksh:( said in sobbing and trembling voice) Swara please tell her na I can’t live without her. I really love her . I know I have done a mistake no no I have done a sin . She will give me any punishment I am agreed for it but tell her don’t leave me …don’t go away from me. ( swara furiously pulled her hand from his grip) I can’t live without her. Seriously I can’t ( sat on his knees bowing his head and folding his both hands near his mouth in front of Swara)
Swara: ( in a challenging voice making a disgust face )You have remembered jiju one day I had told you ” if one-day you will beg for my di’s love then I am not Swara” . And see today that day has come. That day I didn’t mean those words. But see the truth had come out from the darkness on his own way. ( in a mocking voice ) And I will never want my di spends her whole life with a person who never love her. For him my di’s love is a weapon which he has used for his own brother ‘s benefit. I never trust you and your cheap words . So get out from here and from my di’s life. ( said jointing her both hands )
Laksh looked her picking up his head . Sanskar made stand straight him on his own feet holding his shoulder and taking him with him.
Laksh was looking everyone faces with a hope that someone will come and give him a hope. Shemish had stood their like a statue and Swara turned her face in opposite direction never want to see their faces. Sanskar expression was also same like Laksh …he was also looking Swara with a hope that now she will run near to him and hug him and will say : I will miss you Sanky …i will miss you so much ( expanding her both hands in a straight angle) but it won’t happen.
Laksh:( in a tiring voice) please give me a chance. I love Ragini. I can’t live without her. Only give me one chance.
Sanskar taking him outside of Gododia house. Like him his voice also faded away from Gododia house behind him. But the heart broken words were echoing near everyone’s ears which may be they can’t also too erase from their own mind.
In MM
Sanskar and Laksh returned MM in a sad face where Laksh was walking like a motionless creature and Sanskar has held him from his arms supporting him on his walk.
All females are busy in kitchen preparing bf where males are busy reading and watching news from newspaper and tv.
First Uttra saw their two brothers who has stood on the stairs of the corridor.
Seeing both of them specially Laksh condition she couldn’t understand anything. She called everyone
Uttra: ( said loudly) Maa , papa , bade papa , badi mom , Adhrsh bhayia , bhabhi plz come here.
The next moment all are gathered in hall.
AP run towards Laksh
AP:( in a caressing and concern voice) what happened to you Laksh? What have you made your condition?( said caressing his cheek affectionately )
That time a phone rang on Adarsh’s cellphone. He walked off few distance from everyone. After sometime he hang up the phone and holding remote changed in other news channel where a breaking news was flashing on it
Reporter: A very good morning with a very good news . Yes today’s morning is very good with starting a good news for whole business world . The news is The great Mr Sanskar Maheswari is back. Yes you all have heard correct. Last night we have caught him in Royal blue hotel with Mrs Maheswari. And seeing both of them in hotel it’s now confirm Mr Maheswari is now fit and fine. Mr Sanskar Maheswari’s mental condition wasn’t good almost before one year . But now the hire of business world is back. We are trying to contact him but till now we haven’t contacted him or with any of his family members who can confirm the news. But today’s big news is Mr Sanskar Maheswari has returned back to his original form.
All family members looked at Sanskar surprisingly before anyone asked anything Sanskar showing his hand to stop them for further discussion.
Sanskar: Not now and walked away from there holding Laksh and at the same time instructing his PA handle the reporters and the channel.
At night
In Gododia house
Ragini hasn’t come outside for once the moment she entered inside her room . She has kept herself close inside her room and didn’t eat anything from morning which was increasing tension more for her and baby’s health.
Sumi couldn’t see her daughter ‘s pain more. Finally at the end of the day she walked off inside her room holding food plate. How can a maa see her own child’s pain? How can a maa sleep where her own child wouldn’t eat anything.
Sumi placed the food plate on the bed side table .
Sumi:( gently caressing Ragini’s hairs) Beta eat something. From morning you haven’t eaten anything. It is not good for you and your baby. In the starting stage you will stay fit and eat more . Then your baby will become healthy. With the months pass , your craving will increase.
You eat something beta.
Sekher: ( who had come behind Sumi interpreting Sumi’s talk and said) yes beta , your mother is saying right. You are needing more care now. You are not thinking yourself then won’t think but for once think about your baby and eat something
Ragini:( in a blank voice ) what will I think about my baby? I will think no no I should think , in future how will I sell my one child’s happiness for other one . I should think how I will I use one child’s happiness above my other child . I should think , how will I snatch my one child’s happiness by the name of other happy life? I should think, in future how will become a partial mother who will do partiality between her two own children.
Hearing Ragini’s harsh words Sumi and Sekher were shedding tears with Ragini . They never thought that their Ragini will make an sensible girl after her marriage.
Ragini:( wiped her own tears and went near to Sekher) papa , now how are feeling seeing your COWARD daughter in front of your eyes. You would feel ashamed na after all for me you obeyed Laksh deal and sold your little princess happiness for me.
Sekher: No beta you are not a COWARD. you are my brave girl.( trying to cupping her face but Ragini stepped back )
Ragini:( in a frustrating voice) no ..no ..i am a COWARD. For me only everything happened. For me ….taking my love Laksh did a deal with you . For me you agreed for this marriage . Only for me Swara married with Sanskar. Everything happened only for me….only for my love. If I wouldn’t love Laksh then nothing would happen . But it’s me who is the main cause of everyone’s sorrow . I am the COWARD for this now all are paying back on their life. ( walked towards Sumi ) why did you born this COWARD mom. See for me your other daughter ‘s life destroy. I have destroyed your princess life maa. Just hate me maa just hate me ( Ragini slide down holding Sumi’s hand. She is crying so loudly that anyone will see her now her/his eyes will become teary seeing her heart break )
Sumi 🙁 in a tense voice) beta you haven’t done anything wrong. Don’t stress yourself beta. ( wiped her tears by her hands )You aren’t the cause of Swara’s destruction. It’s me and your father who have destroyed Swara’s life not you beta. You are a good daughter no no you are world’s best sister. We all know how much you love her like she loves you. You are only Swara and Ragini in the name sake but in real you are Swaragini who love each other infinity. Who doesn’t see each other pain. ( picking her up from the floor and sat her on the bed) . Now drink it ( passing a glass of water ) and eat something ( forwarded a bite of food)
Ragini stopped her hand in middle and took the plate from Sumi’s hand 🙁 in a confident voice) I will eat maa by my own hand. Don’t worry about me and my baby . I won’t give anything happen to my baby. I know I am a COWARD DAUGHTER for you but for my baby I will become a WORLD’S STRONG MOTHER .
Precap: One month leap
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18 Comments
Oh seema thank you so much yaar…
It’s just too go o f yaar amazing one…I just love it…and it’s really an awesom birthday present I really really loved it…emotional and full of drama and guess what I love Ragini character too much
Superb..
Awesome…
Super
Eagerly waiting for next
The whole epi was really emotional..
I’m nt a ragini fan but really liked her in this particular epi..loved it ❤
Tc..
It’s too good. By u update it so late. Plzzz update soon. Don’t separate them yrr.
Awesome ???pls post next part soon..
awesome update next [part soon
Amazing part seemuuuuu…. loved it but just a request please do raglak patch up soon and show some intense emotional SWASAN scenes… please do focus a little more on them..
Hope I didn’t hurt you or anyone with my words…
Post soon dear
loved it yaar
Update is soo emotional nd painful. …
Wat dis is really nt done. Watevr sanlak did dat was nt wrng. Jst situation made them to do dis. No more saddy saddy scene pls.
Very painful epi dear….literally u makes me cry. I love fan fiction Ragini….now ur ff Ragini, just fantastic character! Loved her characterization. I really want to see her emotions n words….u fullfilled it dear. And Laksh’s…I m not disappointed with ur punishment. Eagerly waiting for next part Seema….
Hmmmmm……
Awesome
Amazing but next time clear all suspens
Amazing dear.. Emotional chapter..
Laksh deserved that,, I agree he loves Ragini but he have no right to do deal with her marriage