avneil ff: kyun main jaagoon (Episode 13)

Chapter 13

This is my ff, hope you like it.

The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, and = for song

Sorry for such a late and short update, but I am very busy these days so please forgive me. Also will try to update soon.

Requests are welcomed, give suggestion please. Thank you.

Author’s Note: i am planning to write two shot, it will show what happen with avni in rang mahal, following which i will write a os on juhi’s feeling.i have thought about the storyline when juhi and rang mahal was introduced. please share your views on this regard. Also the ones who have requested me to continue my os with another part, please help me with ideas. Also i am thinking to wind this story as soon as possible, i think its good to finish a story without dragging much, also ending it soon will give me space to write another story. so what do you think. Share your views freely.

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Author’s POV

After aru left, all the three of them start talking, initially avni was having fun as the talks were around her but later she gets bore as neel and neela are talking about something boring.

Avni pouts and says “Neel I am getting bored”

Neel says “so what do you want”

Avni smiles and says “entertain me stupid”

Neel says “What do you think who am I, am I a joker that will entertain you”

Avni makes puppy dog eyes and says “Ma”

Neela smiles seeing her daughter’s cute act and say “Neel”

Neel copies avni expression and says “What ma, you are taking her side, not fair”

Neela laughs and says “don’t worry neel, you will learn soon, how to handle tantrums

Before neela could complete her sentence, avni gets angry and says “Tantrums? Really you think I am throwing tantrums”

Neela says “No no bacha, I didn’t mean that”

Avni crosses her arms and says “Then what do you mean ma”

Neela says “I wanted to say demands”

Avni says “You think I am demanding”

Meanwhile neel is enjoying the war between his wife and mother, finding neela ma helpless neel is enjoying very much.

Neela says “No bacha, see how old your ma is getting, her vocabulary is getting shorter, and memory is getting weak, please forgive your neela ma” and she hugs her.

Avni hugs her back and says “Fine ma, you are forgiven”

They breaks the hug and avni says “and you mr.”

Neel smiles and says “Yes my highness”

Avni orders “Entertain me”

Neel bows down and says “Okay madam, but what should I do, sing?” he has said ‘sing’ in an inaudible voice but somehow avni heard him.

Avni says “Yeah good idea”

Neel says “But I don’t know how to sing”

Avni says “Sing I don’t know how”

Neel says “Okay fine”

Neel sings:

= Soch Thi Hai Zyada
= Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai

He thinks of her tubelight moments and smiles. But avni gets angry hearing the song as she thinks neel is mocking her.

= Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
= Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai

He thinks how she loved him but denied all the time. Avni gives him death glares and pouts. She unconsciously starts to play with her hair and detangle it.

= Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
= Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

= Pyaar Usse Bhi Hai Magar Shuruaat Tumhi Se Chahe
= Khudh Mein Ulji Ulji Hai Par Bhaalo Ko Suljaayein

He smirks as avni is detangling her hair using her hands. Avni sees him and stops doing it. Meanwhile neela smiles looking at them. She thinks ‘god please keep my kids happy like this’

Avni says before neel could continue singing “neel, I don’t want talk to you anymore”

neel smiles and says “don’t be angry my jaan, I will sing another song for you” avni sees him and continues to give him death glare. Neel goes to neela, puts his hands on her shoulder, brings his face to her level and sings.

= Aati Hain Woh Aaise Chal Ke Jaise Jannat Mein Rehti Hain
= Dekhti Hain Sabko Aaise Jaise Sabko Woh Sehti Hain

Neel reminisces his encounters with her meanwhile avni’s anger is reaching heights, neel is actually testing her patience now very much. Avni gets angrier and she gets up and goes near the window and stands facing it.

= Par Gusse Mein Jo Aaye Aur Ankhein Woh Dikhlaye
= Ladte Ladte Galti Se Muskaaye

avni reminisces his teasing then his showing love, like when he teases her and she runs after him. and smiles but she is still mad at him.

= My Dil Goes Mmmmmm….

Neel thinks that he has made her very upset and goes to her, puts his hand on her shoulder, turns her and sings.

= Hey Hey Ey Ey Ey Ey Hey Hey Hey Hey……
= Tumhe Pata Toh Hoga, Tumhi Pe Main Fida Hoon
= Tumhe Hai Jabse Chaaha, Hawaaon Mein Udata Hoon
= Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein, Tum Aaj Mein, Tum Kal Mein

Listening to neel, her heart melts. She smiles and they dance, with her arms around his neck and his around her waist.

= Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona…

Avni sings
= Tumhe Pata Toh Hoga Ke Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai
= Chalo Kahe Deti Hoon, Kabhi Nahi Jo Kahaan Hai
= Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein, Tum Aaj Mein, Tum Kal Mein
= Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona, Hey Shona….

They come close and avni touches her nose with his and slightly rubs his with hers, then they rest their foreheads on each other’s with their eyes closed.

Neela says “Stop your shona mona”

Neela’s words brings them back in reality, they sees her and founds her sitting on the bed with her hands covering her eyes. They blush.

Neela smiles and teases them ” don’t you feel shy. I know avni has changed but your mother in law is here neel in the very same room and you are busy in romance. Uff. Kids these days.”

Avni says “Ma its nothing like that”

Neela says “I know what it is like”

Neel says “ma ”
neela says “you guys are going to be parents soon, and still romancing, what will your kids learn”

Neel got what neela ma said indirectly that now you have made her pregnant so at least now control yourself. Neel blushes meanwhile his tubelight blushes thinking the impact of their romance on her kids.

The door opens and aru comes with a plate of pasta. He hands it over to avni. The pasta’s aroma has filled the room making everyone hungry. Avni hops on the bed and starts to eat. Aru goes and brings pasta for everyone and they have it.

Later aru and neela goes to their rooms.

Avni says “lets sleep, I am feeling very sleepy”

Neel nods and they doze off. But avni is only acting to sleep. After avni checks that neel is in deep sleep, she gets up and surfs the internet.

After sometime, avni says “Now I got to know what tantrums pregnant women show, now I will also do that”

She looks at neel and smirks.

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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don’t forget to hit the like and comment down below please. Again sorry for late update.

Songs are, ladki kyun, my dil goes mmm, and hey shona.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak