Hi guys. This is my first time writing an ff. Please support me. Hope you guys enjoy.
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A wedding house is shown…. Preparations are going on. People are giving instructions to workers. Kids are running around. Women are gossiping. Uncles are enjoying food.
The bride is sitting alone looking into the mirror. She is wearing a beautiful lehanga. A voice calls out…”are you nervous?”
She turns around. Her face is shown. She is looking so beautiful. Just like an angel.
“You look so beautiful today. Kissi ki nazar Na lage.” Says the lady to the bride. Her face is shown. She is none other than our Sanchi. Sanchi is wearing a peach and pink coloured saree with matching ornaments. She has tied her hair into a bun and has worn jasmine. She also has applied sindoor.
Sanchi comes forward and applies kaala teekha. Sanchi teases the bride..” woh tumhe dekhte hi flat ho jayega”.
The bride smiles shyly.
Two guys are shown getting ready in their sherwani. Their face is not shown. One is getting ready in an off white sherwani with red and golden embroidery while the other is wearing a blue and black sherwani.
“Chale….?” A male voice calls out to the bride. She smiles at the owner of the voice.
Veer and kabeer are shown in two different frames smiling broadly.
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A little girl of six is seen sitting on a bench in a park. She is writing in her diary…
“Yesterday we lived for today,
Today we live for tomorrow.
In this journey we forget
What we were and what we are.
For we only think of
What we will be tomorrow….”
She closes her diary and smiles. She walks home. She enters a cafe cum library. A lady is seen at the counter with her back turned towards the entrance.
“Hi se..y” she calls out.
“He Barbie doll. So how did it go. Did you finish your poetry ?” Asked the lady turning around. She is Ishq.
“You know that I don’t like praising myself. But kya karun, mein hoon hi ithni talented ki bole bina rah bhi nahi Sakti. Aisi kavitha likhi hain ki judges padthe hi flat ho jayenge….”
Isha (muttering): tum Na apne baap par gayi ho…
Kid: kya???
Isha: I was just asking about what did you write.
Kid: (she settles on one of the chairs at the counter and dramatically) love, life and dreams.
Isha: don’t you think you are too young to understand these things?
Kid: it’s only been six years since you know me, but I have been seeing you since my birth. So don’t underestimate the power of a little girl.
Isha: toh life ke bare main ek choti si advice doon? Never give your mamma’s number to your class teacher…
Kid: (holding her head) oh Teri! Ab mein kya karun..maasi help..
Isha: tum to mujhse zyaada experienced ho Na. Toh khud sambhalo Na. Mujhse kya poochti hon?
Kid: maasi, youre the worst.
Isha: I know. and YOU are the best. Good luck.
After raavi leaves, thinking aloud ” waise , doon ek hi baat hain na?”
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A lady is seen searching for something and muttering angrily. “Koi bhi cheez apni jagah pe nahi hoti. Yeh ladki hain ya toofan. Aane do use. Aaj main use nahi chodoongi. Hamesha apni manmani karthi rahti hain.”
Just then someone forwards a cane towards her. Sanchi sees the girl forwarding the cane.
“Raavi, subah subah kaha chali gayi thi? Aur yeh kya hain? (Taking the cane)
Raavi: mamma, aap na mujhe maro. Mujhe para hain ki aap mujhse bahut pyaar karthi hain. Par iska yeh matlab nahi ki aap mujhe nahi maar Sakti. (Sanchi looks at her suspiciously. Raavi makes her sit on the sofa and sits beside her.) Mamma, main achi bachi nahi hoon na. Mujhe para hain. Main hamesha apko Kush dekhna chahti hoon but always end up disappointing you. You love me sooooo….much. that is why am getting spoiled. So I want you to beat me so that I become a good girl from fearing you.
Sanchi makes Raavi lay in her lap and strokes her head. ” Yeh tum kaisi baatein karthi hon beta. You know you are the world’s most precious thing for me. No one can understand your value in my life. You make my life complete. Tum jaise bhi hon, mere liye you are always the best. I don’t care for the world.
Raavi gets up and hugs her happily. “And you are the best mamma in the world. I love you mamma. Aaj se I won’t create any trouble in school!!!
Raavi runs to her room and Sanchi chases her. “Are rukh. Come back. Aaj tum zaroor mar khaogi. ” Isha comes and stops her. “Chodo na Sanchi. Kyu bachi ke peeche padi ho. ”
Sanchi: you are spoiling her. School main hamesha jagda karthi hain.t teachers par pranks karthi hain. And see how she manipulates me always. Today I won’t leave her. Main toh kabhi aisi nahi ti.
Isha: jaisa baap, vaisi beti.
Sanchi’s expression changes suddenly which doesn’t go unnoticed by isha.
“Sorry Sanchi , just slipped. ”
Sanchi gives a weak smile. Isha drags her to the cafe downstairs. “Chalo. Customers will start arriving.we have a lot of work.”
Sanchi and isha are busy arranging the cafe. Customers start arriving and they become busy with their business and happily work around.raavi also joins them.
Kisne jaana ke kalame kaha
Dhoonde hain Jag saara
Chabi bagal mein hai
Taala khulega khud yahaan
Meri sunega toh agle shanichar ko
Paar lagegi naiya
Aur jo na lage chinta saari chhad de
Sur mila ke gaate ja
Gham bhula ke shugal laga le
Rang jamaa ke shugal laga le
Befikar tu shugal lagaate ja
Shugal laga le
Naach le tu shugal laga le
Dum laga ke shugal laga le
Befikar tu shugal lagaate jaa
Shagal laga le… aur gaate jaa
Aey jaane de fikrein
Faarig ho jigre
Jaane de jo beeta
Aane de dil mein
Ho ja ab jinde
Jee le ab ye lamha..
Kal jo beeta to usko jaane de
Na kar koi parwah bas ud jaa
Koi na jinne honi taali hai
Bas iraadon ke parr lagaate jaa
jaa jaa jaa ud jaa…
Shugal laga le, shugal laga le…
Precap: intro of first hero
PS: I know it was quite boring. I’ll try to make the next episode more interesting
22 Comments
Baap ? Kabir or somebody else?
But I suppose precap says something else.
By the way nice and so cute start. Keep doing dhamaka. Plz post next epi asap
Thanku dr
superb update next one soon…………….
Thanku so much
Superb
Interesting episode.
Pls update soon
Thanku so much guys. Meant a lot for me. I’ll update the next asap??
amazing superb mindblowing waiting for full episode
Amazing
Hey Ziya!!! I love ur name. One of my friend’s was also Zeiya except her spelling and last name was different. Her name was Zeiya Albertson. Now the intro was awesome!!! I loved all the scenes and it seems to interesting. I am looking forward to reading it. Btw, can u add translations to the Hindi dialogues? I kinda get lost reading them. I am still trying to learn hindi from all of you so, some words are still out my reach. Anyways really excited for the next one.. Keep writing and keep rocking!!??
Annie dear, thanku very much. Your comments mean a lot to me. Am a huge fan of all your ffs. Love you
Amazing one . Do update soon.
The kid is talking like Veer…is he dead…?? Thn who is Kabir here…??? Wowwww lots of mystery nd masala in the intro…continue soon…
Woww amazing yar …….love to read further ….hope its kanchi but still ur creativity ….hats off!!
amazing yaar…….just too good………..can’t wait for the nxt one dear, plz update asap………..
Jsut too gud ziya amaz mindblowing start …. Baap i thing veer kyunki kabir ko prank ka p tak nahi pata mr. Arrogant anyway post nxt asap nd last not least welcome to kanchi family and on TU too….
Hi ziya intro was amazing……keep write dear…. and definantly dr v will support u.and
Superb
Amazing… Loved it.. Awesome… Will be interesting to read further… Plz update soon..
It’s great dear ??? but I’m little confused!! Hope it’ll get cleared when you start the story ???
Thanku all for your love. Love you all too….??
So so beautiful episode