Yes u read right.. this is the conclusion part of this few shots.. thank u for ur response guys.. last part link
Rikara FS by Verna- “And now I understood.. you are my BETTER HALF” – Part 4
Om, while driving back home thinks how to seek apology from her. He practice like speaking with her. He found himself silly and laugh. Om reached his apartment and runs to get ready. He opened door with full excitement and smile. He is in urge of meeting his wife and didn’t notice changes at first. He just throwed his files on couch and placed all those gifts he bought for Gauri on dining table. He poured water from water jug in glass and started drinking. Just then he noticed water jug on dining table placed in its tray.. he wonder, I did not place this jug here.. I had breakfast when talking to Rudra.. I was sitting on couch and had food there.. this jug was on side table. Even I didn’t clean my breakfast plate from couch, I just left it there on couch and jug on side table.
He turn around and found home is like real home. The second he felt difference he shouts Gauri.. Gauri.. where r u? (Extremely excited). He run to balcony, kitchen finally to their bedroom. Om open door and in mean time Gauri too came out of bathroom after hot shower in bath robe. Om and Gauri look at each other and smile. Without wasting another second Om just went and grabbed his love around her waist and started twirling her. Gauri screams in fear by his sudden act, but she know he won’t let anything happen to her and enjoys. Gauri landed safe and turn to him with blushing smile. Om cups her cheeks and say, when did u come pagli? I thought u r still angry with me and won’t come back to me so easily. Gauri admire his cute puppy face, she smile and say, I got a message that someone is missing me a lot.. so I just came to see that person. Om’s smile fade away a bit and say, did u just come back.. r u still angry with me? She turn and dry her hair talking, Yes.. he just said he is missing me.. I thought I should not make him long for me.. so I came. Om understood what she means and hug her from the back and turns her facing mirror. He first pecked a gentle kiss on her cheek and look at her blushing face through mirror, he say, I know pagli.. u expect an explanation from me.. and yes I deserve to explain u. Gauri look at him with questioning eyes who is still in warmth of his embrace.
Om takes deep breath and say, huhhh.. u know what Gauri.. I really missed u.. ur absence made me realize ur value in my life.. in fact I learnt that how much I’m dependent on u.. I was thinking that I’m free soul, independent person.. but I’m not.. I was wrong.. I’m totally dependent on u.. Without u, my life can’t move smooth. U use to take care of me like ur child, u check each every needs of mine which I don’t even know about myself. I really feel ashamed of my behavior that day. I should not have insulted u like taunting. And u know what Gauri? I realized that household work is not so easy.. in fact we should be very alert and careful in each and everything. Patience, planning and dedication is nedded to manage all this work.. u know I burnt a toast this morning in griller.. also milk came out of vessel yesterday when preparing tea. I understood its not so easy to handle 3-4 household work at same time.
Then I realized how much u work before I go to office.. u wake up early, clean home, make breakfast and lunch for me, managing me and my needs and all that efforts u make is just for me, even after I go to office u’ll work on laundry, drying clothes ironing, clean home, buy groceries.. much more. I just made fun of all this without knowing how much work loads u have. I even felt very proud about u.. u know why? Gauri nods no. Om say, U manage all these work and also help me in my business and passion. Gauri just admire him with smile. He continues, that moment I felt how low I’m to think silly about household work. I’m working all day office on same work. But u r multitasking and doing well and perfect. I just come home and start relaxing, but u, whatever it is, however tiring day it is u never backed out from ur duties. I really understood the value of each and every home makers today and thanks to u (he touch his forehead on her one sided). But Gauri was just looking at him admiring.
Om confused and ask, hey pagli.. I’m talking to u.. what r u looking at my face.. I know I’m super hot, dashing, handsome young artist.. girls love me, long for my single look.. but I can’t allow u to look at me like this.. stop it yr. Gauri pouts and pat on his cheek and tries to get out of his embrace, he ask, heyyyy.. where r u going? (Gripping tight and pulling ger back again to him) Gauri again in his chain say, leave me Om.. I want to make dinner.. I know u didn’t have food properly. I’m going to make ur favorite Paneer Tikka. He hold her more tight in his embrace who is trying to move away from him. Gauri ask, Om.. listen to me.. we have to eat dinner right? At least leave me pls.
Om say, U need not cook tonight’s dinner.. u just stay with me don’t go away from me my love (lean on her shoulder and talked like adamant kid). Gauri say, Y r u behaving like kid Om? Then what will we have for dinner? I know u r hungry.. see u r really tired, we can’t go out now it already started raining, outside food orders won’t reach in time during rainy days sometimes they don’t even deliver at door steps.. u know about Mumbai rains right? I can’t leave u hungry like this.. even I’m hungry after cleaning all ur messes (remembering all those mess he done and glares at him). Om just then remember what he done that morning while making breakfast, he look up, side ways and pout like he don’t remember anything and leave her. He took towel and head to bathroom and shuts the door.
Gauri curiously look at his doings and laugh at his act. Gauri move from there and Om opened bathroom door and said, just go to dining and display our dinner.. I’ll back in 5mins to join u babe. Gauri was confused and went to dining and saw what all Om bought for her. She saw few gifts, opened all food packets that had her favorite chats, and sweet box from her favorite sweet shop. She was really surprised by this and say, how he know that I’ll be here by now? Om come out after his shower and say, actually I was planning to visit u tonight in ur mom’s place. I thought to surprise you.. but u gave me big surprise. Gauri smile at him. Om ask, ok.. when did u come and how u changed ur thought? I know it was all my mistake.. I really feel bad about what happ.. Gauri stop him by placing her finger on his lips.. she say, not again Om.. u apologized more than I deserve. To be honest, I was really angry with u after all that happened.. so I just went to my home without even informing u.
I thought not to tell u but my sister nagged me to inform u that I reached there. But u called me the next second.. I was startled and don’t know how to handle it.. so I rejected ur call. Then I can’t resist myself to help u looking after u.. so I messaged u.. but u didn’t read my messages. I was much worried for last 2 days.. I got relief only when u read my messages this morning. Om just keep admiring her cute innocent face that still shows worry for him. She continues, But I know, if I hear ur voice I will not stay there for a second.. that’s also a reason for not attending ur call.. But u know, when I saw u typing for long time and I thought u’ll send big story.. but u just sent, “I miss u Gauri.. will u come back to me?” What will I think (more worried). Om ask, yes, what is wrong? She say, what’s wrong? U don’t know how scared I was.. I have no idea in which mood u r writing..
Either u r angry with me or emotionally said that.. I really can’t understand. But I know u can’t be angry with me for more time.. but if u r emotional, I know u will not be under ur control.. what if u do something like.. Om eager to know and ask, What? Something like.. What? Gauri just stare at him and say, leave it.. I was relieved only when Rudra told me that u confirmed attending meeting. Om say, one minute.. where did Rudra come in this? Were u in contact with him for these 3 days? Gauri realized that she is caught in her own web and try to change topic but Om don’t listen to that. Finally Gauri say, yes, what will I do if u didn’t read my message? So I use to call him and get to know about u. Om say, U guys r impossible.. even that duffer didn’t utter a word about this to me.. I’ll see him tomorrow. Gauri laughs and say, don’t say anything about him.. I asked him not to tell u. Om glares at her and she tries her antics on him to make him cool. They both had her favorite chats as dinner with candle lights arranged by Om suddenly. Gauri say like teasing, wow Mr. Husband.. no one in this world would have experienced such candle light dinner.. not a scented candle, leftover birthday candles, road side chats like, pav bhaji, pani puri, vada pav and our favorite ras malai, look at this background music.. it should be romantic light music.. but we r having daily soaps running on TV and laughs.
Om smile at her naughty antics which he missed badly. He say, also look at the outfit we r wearing.. Bathrobe.. I’m sure no one in this world would have experienced such candle light dinner and laughs hard. Gauri realized and she too joins him, couple had hearty laugh. Then they enjoyed their super special candle light dinner by chatting and feeding each other. After dinner Rikara sitting in balcony and enjoying rain on each other’s arms. Om say, I really struggled a lot without u pagli.. I didn’t know how to clean kitchen, buy groceries, cook a proper food for myself, I really really missed u.. (embrace her with love and grab her near him) did u miss me? She kiss on his cheek and say, I too badly missed u baby.
But after coming here I really felt bad and realized that I did a blunder mistake by leaving u alone. Om excitedly ask really? She look at him and say, yes.. again she buried herself in his chest and say, u have messed whole house and killed my kitchen.. I should not have given garland in the monkey’s hands.. its my mistake and makes puppy face. Om nods like yes before he understands what she meant. Then he realised that she called him monkey and teased him for messing up. Before he could conclude Gauri get up and call him monkey and run from there. Om chase her and say, U pagli.. how dare u call me monkey.. am I looking like a monkey? U’ll not be spared today.. stop there.. Gauri run to save herself and finally Om cornered her at the wall. He tickles her by asking, am I monkey to u? Will u call me monkey again? Will u..? She can’t control her laugh because of his tickling. Om can’t resist her expressive face that is so close to him and suddenly grab her by waist and moved closer to her. Gauri knew what he is up to and reciprocated by putting her arms around his neck and they shared passionate lip lock followed followed by another beautiful nights in their life.
*** STOP DROOLING ***
*** END OF THIS STORY ***
How was it?? 🙂 🙂 this concept popped up in my chemistry lab (My proud Brainy ???) when I was cutting veggies for lunch (on independence day). It was a normal day.. yes holiday too, with lazy mind for me.. there started a cat war between my mom and dad, then somehow, like all women in the world using their default defending statement, slipped from my mom’s lips too.. but wait..that what was that in my story.. because I robbed my mom’s statement for Gauri 😉 😉 😉 ??? (U’ll know my value only when I’m not here.. u guys remember this dialogue by Gauri in 2nd part?). I never interfere or try to calm them in their cat fights because at end they team up and start frying me for my last life’s silly mistakes ?? So I never ever take that chance, instead I use to watch and enjoy it like India vs Pakistan match ??? it was just 1-2 dialogue that they helped me in this FS.. but I imagined this whole concept while cutting veggies and as u guessed, there was chemical reactions in my super brain and then this FS with my strange thinking stuffs ??? how funny creature I’m..
Its ok even if u call me mad, because I know that ??? And I don’t know whether this one was good.. because same concept u could have experienced in own life or may have appeared in movies and other shows.. but I want this to get applied for our Rikara too.. so I didn’t wait for show writers and I presented it to u 🙂 🙂
Only concept I wanted to convey u was that any relationship should have equality, understanding and most importantly respect towards each other. We always expect what we need from other, but we never mind about their expectations.. this will always lead to misunderstanding. Communication is much needed in relationship, if communication gap arises then there will be no point of love there.. even if love exist there is no use of it. A small ripple of sharing will make huge effects on the needy.. same way, in a relationship, both should work and try to make everything fine. The one making full effort and other not at all caring about it is not proper relationship.. it should be balanced with both sides.. if its balanced by both then there will be happiness that lasts life long between them.
If one is working to make the relationship better the other also should participate in building better relations, this will make a complete relationship. Here relationship I meant is not only between husband and wife, its with ur friends, lovers, even at the work place relationship between employer and employee is also needed to building better career. Hope I have justified these words through my few shots.. please share ur views here without fail. Hope I didn’t bore u guys with this piece of my thought that I shared.. if I bored u pls forgive me babies.. and I know.. u’ll forgive me 😀 😀 😀 Meet u in next epic creativity till then bye bye.. Take care my drs.. love u all 🙂 🙂
23 Comments
It is awesome dear… Lovely update…
Thank you so much Nikita Jai 🙂 🙂
Wow just amazing……. I don’t have a words to discrete this…. U are just a!azing dr… I really really loved it to the core….. Please write more about Rikara…. Love u dr…..
Thanks for ur lovely words Maha 🙂 🙂
Awesome di…..loved it ….?
Thanks San
AWESOME BEAUTIFUL CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT MIND BLOWING PERFECT ROMANTIC SUPERB??????????????????
Thank you so much UF
Akka indha ore oru dialogue aa vechu ivlo creative aa story ezhudhunadhu periya vishayam…?????????Hats off to you akka…indha dialogue usual aa namma tamilnadu mummies ellarum solradhu dhaan????But idha neenga rikara version la sonnna vidham super????Regarding episode,om gauri ku surprise kudupaan nu nenaicha reverse aa nadanduchu????Loved their unique candle light dinner?????please come up with more stories for my rikara…Indha maadhiri oru oru dialogue kum few shots ezhudhunga akka???????
Hahaha thanks a lot Logesh 🙂 🙂 but such long story for a single dialogue every time is too much.. really means a lot 🙂 🙂
Wht a epi dr?.dis epi was ek dum khidkitod?????????I loved it 2 d coreeeeee???? such a beautiful happy ending. N i really liked d concept of dis story. Men always underestimate women. They tnk they r d ones who works hard coz they earn money???? my parents also had arguments regarding dis topic. Bt nw my dad say nothing about dis.coz he had 2 face d same situation as om???? actually my mom undergone an operation few months ago.so my dad had 2 do all d house hold work 4 a month.my dad did better than om..(cooking???) bt he also couldn’t manage office work n house work 2gether. (Even though we helped him)????sometimes he got angry too coz he couldn’t handle. ????nw he understand hw difficult 2 do household work. So about d story I guessed dat gauri will be @ home when om return. I loved d way om apologised.??? i’m sad coz dis ended so soon☹?? plz come back soon vth another beautiful stry??n plz post ur other ff too asap.i’m missing it☹ n it’s k dr if u r mad coz i’m also somewhat mad n stupid type??? n my most of d frndz r also like dat??????so it’s totally k.? k dr enough of my blabbering.byee dr tc??
Wow Dinu.. ur comments really means a lot.. u.guys r sharing your life story here and making me feel like a family.. it really feel so good.. hope ur mom is fine now and take care of her.. don’t worry I’ll try to come back with another OS ASAP
Veru di….?????…this was just khatarnaak??….stop drooling note was specially meant for me r8..???..cz I was literally drooling?????….
Nd wht u don’t take part in cat fight of mom n dad?????? HEY BAA MAATAJI….
I take part wd so much of enthusiasm.. ??….instead of claiming them down…i work as Activation Energy????….i love adding fuel in their fight???…but sometime it backfires…nd both them end up scolding me????..but ko8 nai chalta h?????..
Awesome part keep it up….come up wd another story ….
Nd haan…If u r free…THEN FRM URBUAAMAA SCHEDULE REMOVE SOMETIME ND START WRITING WEEKEND SHOTS OR LIFE HAS SOMETHING…..??????….DONT FORGET IT’S NOT REQUEST ITS ORDER….SAKU KA ORDER ????????????….
Now days u r becoming very lazy…???..
Now stop laughing…..nd saying nothing can happen of me???….
Time pass bolo sirf…chalo jao kaam karo…u hv lot of pending work…instead of completing that.. .wasting time in reading my comment??????….
Waiting for Reply…
Chameli’s r NOT ACCEPTED…
(If u have any brand new sandals or sports shoes then they r accepted…but here is condition…u hv to throw both pairs…single will b thrown back to you ???)
Ur wholeheartedly
Saku???
Oh God!! Pls save me from this naughty potato.. Y do u always nag me with ur madness.. and u naughty girl, even I use to play igniting their fight but nowadays they r aware of this and start frying me for my doings.. so I remain silent.. and u.. I won’t listen to u this time.. do whatever you can 🙂 🙂 😉 😉 let’s see..
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Saku why you are so naughty????????Why are you talking to verna didi like this?????We can bear chamelis…But we cant bear beatings with sports shoes?????
Arre…u r shock only in this..???..its demo ….picture abhi baaki h mere dost????…this is nothing….i m beyond ur imagination?????????
Enough u both.. go abd chat personally.. is this ur chat box.. get out from here u naughty creatures
Awesome fabulous ????loved it
Thank you Niriha
Ohhhhhhh Verna Verna Verna…… it’s just amazing and superb yaar
Lessons learnt. We just need to appreciate each other. Thanks for your amazing insights!
I have no words my dear……… I enjoyed a lot reading this FF. Really great and love reading it again and again…… Awesome………