Manzil Pyar ki os by Ashnita

Hi my lovely sweeties iam Ashnita and that girl who made u guys cry in my previos os. Iam sorry guys for making u guys cry. this is sequel of adhura pyar. Thank you for ur comments

A big bunglow is shown.

Aashi is sleeping peacefully. Some one caressing her face. She wakes up with a jerk and saw Kabir. She smiles seeing him. Sanchi came and saw her smiling .

Sanchi -Aashi beta kya hua papa aaye te

Aashi – yes maa

Sanchi – Kabir I want to see u pliz come infront aashi ask papa to come

Aashi – maa only i can see papa if you want to see close ur eyes and remember papa.

Sanchi closes her she saw Kabir smiling to her. She opens her eyes saw Kabir missing. She cries hugging Kabir pics.

Kusum – sanchi aashi pandit ji came.

They comes downstairs

Aashi – namaste pandit ji .

Pandit asked them y u guys r not happy. They tell all story to him . Pandit called them in Temple tomorrow. Sanchi didn’t understand y he called them.

Pandit was leaving he looked at sanchi pandit said tumara pyar adhura rehgaya lekin tum ab bhi apne pyar ko pura dekh sakte ho. Sanchi kusum and aashi was shocked to hear. Sanchi asked how.

Pandit said tumare paas ek nahi manzil hai aashi asked kya manzil. Pandit said manzil pyar ki. But u have to choose between do or die. Come to temple then I explain.

One day later they went to the temple. Pandit asked aashi to free Kabir soul. They do Kabir last rites. Kabir came to them and said I’m going forever and he vanished.

Aashi asked pandit papa left us forever. U said we have a manzil now where is manzil. Pandit asked something that shocked sanchi kusum and aashi. He asked how much they love Kabir. They said jaan se zyada.

Pandit said can u guys give ur life. Kabir can’t come to this world but u guys can go to his world. Think well u have only 10 mins to answer after that I can’t do something.

Sanchi and aashi looked each other then they recall their moments with Kabir. They agreed .Sanchi said Agar yahi manzil hai mere pyar ko fir se pane ko aur apna adhura pyar pura karne ke liye. Yeh manzil mujhe qubool hai aur yeh manzil pyar ki hogi.

Aashi i miss my papa if this is the way to get my papa mujhe bhi yeh manzil pyar ki qubool hai. Sanchi and aashi told kusum to go home. Kusum disagreed and said I lost my two sons if this is option to get my one son back so how can a mom will back out.

They all bath with milk. Pandit puts tilak to them. He brings a hot charcol and touches and burnt their hands. Tears flows from their eyes. But they r smiling .pandit said this will always remained u guys ur manzil pyar ki.

Trio r sitting with tears and they are saying Kabir we r coming to u ek naya manzil leke Manzil pyar ki. All pandit says hymns and they smashed coconuts to their heads. They r in pool of blood but still smiling for going to his world. After sometime they all died .pandit burns there bodies and do last rites .

A very big temple r shown with all diyas it’s so beautiful or should I say heaven. Trio soul is going on that temple.

Yamraj r sitting there with citrgupt in his throne. He asigned works to all the souls. He saw trio with same burnt marks. He asked them but they hurriedly leave to search Kabir.

They r looking for him they didn’t find him. They asked other souls but received only rejection.

Sanchi – kabirrrr kaha ho tum. Hum tumare liye woh duniya chod di aur tum kaha ho.

Aashi – papa where r u i missed u so much pliz hugg me.

Kusum – beta where r u.

Just then aashi flies in air her heart beats faster than ever. She knew Kabir is somewhere near. They hear a voice and they follow the voice.

And saw a handsome tall hot boy singing song Hum na rahein hum (from creature )
With all children.

They smiles seeing him he is none other than Kabir. They quickly ran and hugged him. He gave a blank expression.

Kabir – who r u guys.

Aashi – papa iam aashi ur daughter.

Kabir – i dnt know u guys

Sanchi cries just then yamraj appears and told them he won’t remember anything. U have that burnt marks so u guys will remember ur manzil but he doesn’t have anything. He can’t remember.

Sanchi so wat can I do. Yamraj u have to make remember him everything. Warna tumara pyar fir se adhura reh jayga. No I can’t iss baar mera pyar adhura nhi rehga iss baar mein pura karungi manzil pyar ki.

Sanchi singing song daastan (from Om Santi Om ) Kabir recalled everything. He quickly hugged everyone. Kabir asked everyone that itna pyar karte ho.

Aashi said yes papa we love you we missed you that’s y we came here to u. Kabir was crying as well as others.

Yamraj gave them blessing u guys always stay together. He Disappeared.

They hugged eachother and went to their small house in heaven with eachother holding hands. They lived happily after forever.

In earth

Pandit telling story about them to all students. He said that called love between the family. Their adhura pyar was over and with nahi manzil. Manzil pyar ki.

The End

I hope u guys like it.
Sorry for any mistakes
Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads

Regards
Ashnita