Hello everyone!!! Here comes the next part. I know I give this Story after long gap but now I will give it frequently as I think its end is coming near.Thank you to all those who comment on my stories that really means alot.
Let’s begin:
Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Part 16:
Recap: Swara forgive Sanskar.
Gododia House:
After one week:
Its been now one week since swasan patch up. From today their marriage rituals are going to start. The whole House is decorated and in the evening is the haldi ceremony.
Swara is roaming here and there as usual daffy is after her. She is very excited and her face is glowing. Sanskar is sitting on sofa in Hall. Shekar said that he will not do any work after all he is one and only groom.
Sanskar: swara take rest.
Swara: I can’t control my happiness finally we are getting married.
Sanskar (smiles): I m also so happy.
Swara: what about sahil and kavita when they are coming?
Sanskar: I had talked to sahil they are coming tomorrow.
Swasan were sitting and taking then only a man in mid twenties with a bag in his hand came. As the door was wide open he looked inside and then saw swasanffy sitting. He came near them and said
Man: hey swara
Swara turn and looked up and saw nikil standing there.
Swara: omgg nikil u here.
She jumped and hugged him friendly.
Nikil: u r getting married so I can’t skip it.
Swara: but u were saying u can’t come.
Nikil: I wanted to give you surprise.
Swara: so sweet.
Sanskar clear his throat to gain their attention.
Swara: Sanskar he is nikil once u were talking about.
Nikil: hey dude so still u want to marry her??
Sanskar: yeah its love.
They shake hands.
Nikil: u know swara I warned him as well wisher that he should not marry you but he didn’t back off.
Swara(hit him): idiot how can u say like this.
Sanskar: but why u didn’t want me to marry swara??
Nikil: bro this marriage life is hell. U can enjoy with many girls but once u r committed u r bounded.
Sanskar (smiles): true man care for only his Lady rather than wandering here and there.
Sanskar said intensely and Swara’s eyes widen listen his words.
Nikil: but still
Sanskar(cut him): I want to be one woman’s man.
Nikil(surrendering): alright as u wish but this philosophy is not for me.
Swara: yeah we know okay leave all that u take seat.
Nikil: where is uncle aunty and all??
Swara: they went out for some work they will come soon.
Nikil: ohhkk
Later,Swara is sitting on sofa beside nikil. Both are laughing and talking about their days in USA. Two great personalities are sitting in the front and fuming and they are none other than sanskar and daffy.Jealousy can be clearly seen in their eyes.
Sanskar look at daffy and asked
Sanskar: feeling jealous??
Daffy nodded.
Sanskar: me tooo but see her she forgot us.
Daffy make puppy sound sadly.
Sanskar: don’t worry she is our only.
Daffy’s eyes shine listening him.
Sanskar: I m feeling like to punch that nikil
Daffy looked at nikil with rage agreeing to sanskar’s condition.
They both keep on burning but swara was not understanding anything as she didn’t noticed them.
Sanskar: daffy let’s go to room. I can’t see more.
Daffy nodded and both left to swara’s room.
After half an hour:
Swara’s room:
Swara enter inside and saw sanskar and daffy sitting on bed with flown face.
Swara: hey why u came here??
Sanskar: finally u got time for us??
Swara: what u mean??
Sanskar: u ignored us as u were so busy with your so called best friend.
Daffy bark agreeing to sanskar.
Swara jump on bed and started laughing.
Sanskar and daffy look at each other like why the hell she is laughing now.
Swara: ohhh god how much you both get jealous.
Sanskar: we are not jealous.
Swara: ohhh really?? Then I should go to nikil.
Swara was about to go when Sanskar pull her and she lands on his chest.
Sanskar: dare u to go again.
Swara: I m only yours then why jealousy??
Sanskar (pout): I don’t know.
Swara peck his pout and daffy make sound showing his presence that he is also angry.
Swara(pick him): aww daffy u r my first love and no one can take your place.
Sanskar: means I m on second no.
Swara: no my heart half belongs to daffy and other half to you.
Sanskar smiles at her talks.
Swara: okay let’s get ready for haldi ceremony.
Sanskar: hmm
Evening:
There is hustle bustle in the hall as guest were there for the haldi ceremony. Sanskar is waiting in the hall for swara. He is wearing while shirt and blue Jean. Nikil is beside him who is telling him disadvantages of marriage.
Sanskar was signing off as he is least interested in his rubbish talks.
Swara came down with shomi and of course daffy. Sanskar was mesmerized seeing her in white and yellow half saree. Her hairs are long open and a single chain in her neck. She is looking so beautiful that Sanskar skipped his several heart beats.
As she came near, she smile at him.
Shomi made swara sit on left side and sanskar was on right side.
Male members are with sanskar and all ladies with swara. All applied haldi one by one. In between SwaSan were stealing glances. Daffy is sitting beside swara as her bodyguard.
When everyone applied the haldi, swasan went to their rooms to clean it.
Daffy was with nikil this time.
Swara’s room:
Sanskar came inside and look for swara. He keep the haldi bowl on table he bought for her. Soon she came out clearing all the haldi and saw sanskar.
Swara: Sanskar what r u going here??
Sanskar smiles and came near her.
Sanskar: I thought to apply haldi to my would be wife.
Swara: then drop this idea as I had cleaned now only.
Sanskar pull her closer with his left hand holding her waist.
Sanskar(huskily): don’t worry I will clean it.
Swara: sanskar…..
Her words left incomplete when he rubbed his hand filled with turmeric on her neck sensuously.
Swara is breathing heavily and her eyes are half closed.
Sanskar give wet kisses on her cheeks. He bite corner of her lips making her mourn.
Sanskar looked in her eyes for asking permission. She closed her eyes in anticipation. Sanskar place his lips on her. Swara’s hand reached his hairs fisting them. Sanskar slowly sucks her soft lips. She was not opening her mouth to tease him. Sanskar squeeze her waist making her gasp. Taking chance sanskar enters in her mouth exploring it.their bodies are pastered against each other and both kissed each other passionately.
They unwillingly broke the kiss to inhale oxygen.
Swara blushes and hugged him tightly.They were disturbed by the knock at the door.
Sanskar went and opened the door and saw nikil and Daffy.
They came inside and look at them suspiciously.
Nikil: what were u both doing??
Sanskar: nothing just talking.
Nikil: ahha don’t lie to me I m romance guru I know everything
Swara: shut up nikil.
Nikil: it means I m right secret romance and all.
Swara went to washroom to avoid his teasing.
Nikil: so u need any tips for romance??
Sanskar: u r giving couching for it?
Nikil: no I will tell you in free.
Sanskar: okay then tell.
Nikil: how many times u had given her surprise?
Sanskar; never
Nikil: not even once??
Sanskar: no
Nikil: then how she is ready to marry you??
Sanskar: what you mean?
Nikil: she always used to say that I will marry that person who will give me surprises and make me feel special
Sanskar: she likes that??
Nikil: alot she will love if you will give her surprise.
Sanskar remembered how she had arranged to propose him but that time it was spoiled but he never try to give her surprise like that.
Nikil saw him lost and said
Nikil: so planning for surprise??
Sanskar: hmm
Nikil: good
Swara came out and saw them talking seriously.
Swara: what’s going on??
Nikil: nothing I m still warning him not to marry you as u r a drama queen.
Swara: u don’t fill sanskar’s ears. He won’t listen you right sanskar??
Sanskar: yes
Swara stuck her tongue at nikil.
To be continued….
Precap: Mehndi and sangeet.
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52 Comments
Mr nikhil is like so much experienced about love n all but really touched by sanskar words .I really enjoyed sanffy jealousy waiting for their marriage. I know it would be best as marsu i s gonna write it.pls post ss 2 also.
Nikil has done PhD in love?????
Sanffyy????? thank you so much dear will give soon and sufferings also will try to post soon tc??????
Awesome Mars????☺??????.
Poor Daffy and Sanskaar ???????? how jealous were they!!!!! Swara my cutie pie???????be ready r SANSKAR is ready with a surprise?????????????. For u.
Nikhil is damm funny but making two lovers jealous??????
U know I thought Daffy will bite Nikhil?????? as he was talking to his love. ????????
My crazy mind filled up with crazy thoughts only loved it????????
Sanffy poor babies were burning??? khoi nahi agar nikil jada swara se Frank huya tho daffy bite b kar dega??????? and swara tho???? I m also excited to know what surprise Sanskar will give to Swara??????????
Thank you so much depuu dear tc????????
????????? me too waiting for surprize
Wait wait???????
Lovely lovely marssu???
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Awesome Loved it dear especially sanffy bonding and jealousy
Thank you so much diii tc???
Superbbb … Amazing …waiting for nxt part..tc
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Amazing dear loved it……swara is so cute…..sanskar daffy jealousy…..Awesome
Indeed swara is so cute???? thank you so much dear tc??????
Nikhil ne lagta hai PhD ki hai romance me????
I m very much touched by sanskar’s word.. That was such a cute one…❤❤❤❤❤
N sanskar n daffy jealous ???
O god this two na?????
N swasan romance… ? ? ? ? ???
Waiting for sanskar’s surprise… ???
Update soon dear ?????
Nikil will give romance classes to Sanskar???? and swasan romance???????????
Thank you so much dear will post soon tc????????
Oh oh… awesome as alwayz….
Poor Sanffy….. They are so jealouse…!!!??
May be Nikhil has many experience on love…?.. But our Sanku gave a very good answer for him… Loved it…?..
Swara darling… wait for Sanskar’s surprise…
Even im waiting….??
Yuppp nikil know so much about love???? I m also waiting for Sanskar’s surprise????? thank you so much dear tc??????
Awsm
Thank you so much dear tc????
Awesome..
Sanskaar and Duffy r????
Waiting for the surprise ??
Tc??
Thank you so much dear let’s see what will be the surprise tc?????
Awesome ???
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Thank you so much dear tc????
sorry di late … i am again late for commenting….
i am eagerly waiting for the suprise … ?? hawww di u made sanskar and daffy hell jealous … i could imagine their faces …. so cute … are you having a pet … just guessing from the scene . the way u describe daffy ….
bye tc
next part soon ..??
Yuppp sanfyy were jealoused for their lady love?????? no need of sorry its okay even I m late for replying???? thank you so much dear tc????
di m waiting for ur sufferings … plz post soon?????????
I m relly sorry for the delay but will surely try to give it soon tc??
Wow Yr… it’s fabulous
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Nice yaar
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Awsm chappy…loved Sanskar daffy jealousy part…continue soon ripu darling 🙂
Thank you so much dii will give next part soon tc????
Nyc
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you are awesome dear… and superb shot
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Too good dear….. loved it.
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superb
Thank you so much dear tc????
huh!!! Nikil has soo many experiences…
Yuppp he is expert in romance????? thank you so much dear tc????
Ha ha ha….this time Sanskaar got one company for burning jealous…..lol! Jealous SanFfy….ROFL yaar!!! Thanks dear, for making me laugh. And Nikhil….seems like romance guru has so many experiences in romance?!!!
Yuppppp nikil know so much about romance??????
Poor sanffy?????
Thank you so much gayuu dear tc???????