RAGSAN :SUBBAH KA SITARA BY HARNEET

HELLO GUYS ,,,, so soorry as i had given the glimpse of this os from long ago but writting it today , guys plz dont stop reading it in starting ,, it has a sweet , peacefu and happy ending …… it my be a emotional start but a very soothing and calm story with a bit of romance as alot of emotions ,…. but please read full and enjoy ..( read a very important note at last )

The story revolves around a poor orphan girl, Ragani, who lives with her cruel and money-minded aunt (sumi ).The only loyal people in her life, she had were her friend swara ,sahil and sanskar(brother of sanskarl). A rich businessman, sahil (very nice and positive character), falls in love with Ragini and marries her. sahil’s family – except for his younger brother, – behave badly with ragini , AUNT and cousins of Ragini always demanded for luxuries from Ragini and sahill .sahill never refused Ragini and tried his best to make her happy. Some yars after marriage, sahill dies in a car crash. Now, it was easy for his family to treat the meek Ragini like an unpaid servant.Her aunt took her back in her home, as she knew that sanskarl had transferred a lot of money and a house on Ragini name.Her aunt wanted to file a petition in the court for the property of Ragini and wanted her to marry his son(laksh)

.But sanskar took her back in their house.Again in her In-laws, her life is very hard, she have to done all works of house along with servants but she got none of appreciation from households.It is found that sahil has willed all his wealth to Ragini, who is expecting his child. Soon, Ragini and sahil’s daughter, samaira, is born. ragini’s father-in-law father coaxes sanskar to marry the young widow, pretending that this is for her security. But the real intention is that sahill’s share of wealth should stay within the family. sanskar, an upright police officer, has already gone through a marriage (wedding ceremony) with kavitaa (not in the story), though they are waiting for the rukhsati after which they can live together as a couple. His father suggests that sanskar could merely have a paper marriage with Ragini. sanskar tries to discuss the matter with kavitha, and demanded a (divorce). sanskar finally agrees to marry Ragani, but he remains indifferent to her.

anskar is mostly away from home because of his job. One day, he gets shot in the course of his police duty. He has to remain with his family while he recovers. Ragini takes care of him and he begins to understand her situation. He also gets attached to little samaira, and she starts calling him ‘Papa’. sanskar’s mother asks him to marry another girl and leave Ragini to her fate, but he refuses. Now he realizes his parents’ true intentions in arranging his marriage to Ragini. He talks to his parents about it, and, disappointed with their attitude, decides to leave the house with Ragini and samaira.

AUTHOR NOTE ( GUYS THIS IS ALL TRUE AFTER THIS OINT I AM GONNA WRITE IN MY WAY . READ THE NOTE AT END AND U WILL UNDERSTAND )

LEAP OF 5 YEARS ….

EVERYTHING IS DIFFERENT . LETS SEE HOW …

ITS WINTER OUTSIDE . SAMAIRA IS SLEEPING IN HER ROOM AND SHREYA THEIR YOUNGER DAUGHTER IS SLEEPING TOO . A HANDSOME MAN OF NEARLY 30 YEARS IS READING A BOOK WITH A DROP OF TEARIN HIS EYES STOPS IN BETWEEN . HE LOOKS UPWARDS AND THEN GOES INTO HIS DREAMLAND …

FLASHBACK

A man is seen sleeping when a girl of 2 and a half years is crawling and stepping out of sofa cum bed . the man saw this and hurriedly came towards her .

sanskar : samaira , what are you doing ..
samaira : PPPPAA PPAAAA .

she jumped into his arms and he was shocked . he looked at the innocent soul who don’t even know what she have said and kissed her forehead .

then only the door slightly opened a girl in sea bue kurta and white trousers opened door she came inside with her eyes heavy with drops which were ready to fall . she looked in the man’s deep brown eyes and saw the sincerity and innocence . he was feeling blessed of holding his little princess . yes HIS LITTLE PRINCESS .

ragini ; give her to me sanskar , woh swara she disturbed you . its her milk time . she picked in his arms and went down to avoid any further chats …

( everything was not as before . marriage of sah…..rag was fine but his death and then thier remaariage cause diference in them , it was just a formal talk now days )

FLASHBACK ENDS .

he saw towards a 6 years old girl and kissed both his angels forehead … he came outside , wear it was snowing and saw his lady love sitting on bench with her face slightly pale and he can heard some weeping sounds .

he silently went towards her and sat beside her . she saw him and said

Ragini : which page till you read
sanskar : my princess first word for me ..
ragini : u didnt read the whole book yet . hw muh i have to wait …
sanskar : i am imagining all those moments .

ragini rested her head on his shoulder and they remember all thir moments …

FLASHBACK (1)

things were becoming normal and they both started talking , no doubt samaira was the reason behind this change . for the first time ragini did something which reminds him of their relation , a pious relation of this world . relation of husband and wife . it was the relation from whom he was trying to escape . she for the first time kept a shirt for him . they were in thier parents house . asusual , they were taunting and ill treating ragini at the dinning table . this was it for sanskar , he couldn’t take it anymore nd he made all mouth shut .

sujata ( mother of sanskar ) : till when u will shut our mouth . first she ate ur brother , now she will eat u . see what have u made urself , a workaholic man , do uu even know that we r ur family .leave her , divorce her , i can tolerate that kavita but not her .

sanskar : enough mom ,

sujata : y enough han y enough see ur self in mirror . r u sharing any relation with her , no its a force relation and u r caged in this relation .

sanskar : MOM she is my wife . BIWI HE YE MERI . ( he shouted in all his boldness and anger )

THIS WAS THE STARTING OF THEIR RELATION . HE TOOK THEM TO THIER HOUSE AS HE COULDNT STAY A SECOND THEIR WHERE HIS FAMILY WAS ILL TRATE AND DISCRIMINATED .

FLASHBACK ENDS

saskar and ragini opened their eyes and tears fall from their eyes ,

sanskar : what u saw
ragini : saw u saw ur first right on me , saw ur first step towards r relation .
sanskar : me too .

RAGSAN THEN TURNED THE NEXT PAGE OF THE BOOK IN THIER HAND AND SAW THE TITLE AND GOES INTO A DEEP MEMORY

FLASHBACK (2)

WHEN HE CONFESSED

many days passd , thier relation improved . samaira was addictd towards sanskar . and sanskar was obsessed with her . today all bars were going to break as he was going to confess but was it as a coincidence or planned .

today he saw his first lady love KAVITHA . she was with a boy . she was carring the significance or symbol of thier love . he was not really jealouse but yes he seeing ragini at that place ..taht night he was totaly drunk . he stumbld and somehow came home .samaira was asleep . ragini came and hugged him and cried ad said

ragini : where were ou sanskar . i was so tensed…. ?????
sanskar : shhhhh ( he placed his finger on her lips and whispered ) I LOVE YOU
ragini : ( she was mum )
sanskar ; I LOVE YOU RAGINI
ragini : ??

he was now out , he was continously confessing , she was in a delima and he can’t wait , he instantly captured her lips and kissed pasionately .. with this she came back from her senses and felt a tounge tasting the essence of her mouth . she was first shocked but then responded .

FLASHBCK ENDS

sanskar : u havent confessed me yet i am still waiting for those 3 magical words ….
ragini : hahaha i love u …

ragini’s pov

mu life was so … i dont know what to say . my life with sahil was blessed but my life with sanskar was bliss , with him i felt in heaven i felt in peace . i love him . samaira my world my jaan . unfortunately love sanskar more than me . shreya my zindagi , my everything . she is mammas doll and my jaan is dady’s girl . sanskar is my world . we are not always lucky to have our love . i have ust have done a numerous good things that i got my first love and true love both . yes sahil , i LOVED him . he was definatey my first love but sanskar was my TRUE LOVE AN i trully LOVE HIM . god bless him with lots of health an wealth …….

people always say ,

JAANE WOH KON LOG THE , JINKE PYAAR K PYAAR MILA ……

NOW SANSKAR IS CALLING ME WAIT NOW WHAT HE WANT , HE IS DISTURBING MY BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS ..

POV ENDS ..

sanskar : where were you lost
ragini : nothing , just thinking how my life turned .. but i love my life ..

sanskar ; ragini i read all , but last page is left M#h#a#a SUBBHAH KA SITARA …… whats that ???
ragini : sanskar so listen this mohaabat ka sitara ….

FLASHBACK (4) IN RAGINI’S POV

I WAS A SMALL GIRL , MY MOM PASSED WHEN I WAS SMALL AND DAD PASSED WHEN I WAS 15 . OE DAY I WAS AT MY TERREACE . i was talking to the most brighteststar of the sky ,, MY MOM . i daiy used to talk to her , my dad came ,,, and he said

raj : beta , what are you doing here ,
ragini : dad i am talking to mom , see the brightest star , ( pointing towards a star )
shekhar : oh my daughter is so grown up … u miss her ..
ragini ; yes i miss her so much . thats y i talk to her daily .
sekharr . u know ragini what is subbhah ka sitara
ragini : ubbhah ka sitara , whats that ????
shekhar ; SUBBHAHA KA SITARA .. TELL ME WHICH IS UR SUBBAHA KA SITARA ??
ragini : dad we cant see any star in morning ,,
shekhar (giggled at the foolish thought of her girl ): no my child .
ragin: then what it is dad ? what is this sitara . , which we can see in morning ..
shekhar : whn u will gown up then u will understand

POV ENDS ..( SHE SAID ALL THAT WITH CHOKING VOICE AND NOW SHE WAS CRYING )

SANSKAR SENSING THE EMOTIONAL SCENE , HE ASKED

sanskar ; so u got he answer .
ragini : yes i got …

MOHHABAT SUBBHAH KA SITARA HAI …

MOHABBAT . YOUR MOHABBAT IS SUBBHAH KA SUTARA , MOHABBAT WOH SITARA HAI JO HAR WAQT APKE SAMNE HAI , MOHABBAT WOH SITARA HAI

YE JO IK SUBBAH KA SITARA HAI
ZINDAGI TERA GOSHWARA HAI
AY MUKKADAR KOI HISSAB TO RAKH
KON JITA HAI KON HAARA HAI

break

ISHQ KE DARMIYAN BOL GAYA
KIYA TUMAHARA KIYA HAMARA HAI
RNG BHI KHUL RAHA HAI CHAAHAT KA
KIS NAYE MANZIL KO NAYE SAWARA HAI
YE JO IK MOHAABAT KA SITARA JHAI
YE JO IK MOHABBAT KA SITARA HAI

singer : harshdeep kaur
poet : naseer turabi
composer:shani arshad

sanskar ; woah , so ormantic words , love u jaan .
ragini : thanks ….. i love u too

with this they kissed and the book was marked as worlds best book for romantc and joined destiny …

the end

huh finally done . it took me 1 hr and 15 ins to type , thanks for reding so guys , this is not my imagination , it is a story of a drama from pakistani series , guys starting is thier confession is mine , words are thier typing is mine ( hahah ,, be serious ) song is thiers and the book idea is mine and else all characters are same from serial .. sorry it was not that romantic but next will be defintely . guys see this serial on youtube plz … u will love it its a pakistani drama “MUHAABAT SUBBAH KA SITARA ” , maybe one of you have read it .. i love you … BYE … cannot write my other ff as my fingers ad ars are paining … plz comment and like .. my lovely ragsan fans and i expect swasan fans maybe … guys in the above pic or cover pic they are the real cast of
serial .. boy in shirt is sanskar and girl is ragini and man in suit is sahil … bye