Hey guys I’m starting my new ff actually I delayed bcuz
1❓?????? lack of ideas
2 lack of time
Guys so.this story is based upon a movie named aaja nachle.of.madhuri dixit I.love this movie
Any suggestions and constructive criticism is welcome I wont mind guys ols.do comment otherwise I will feeel disheartened
America
A man …Kabeer u have to visit India ti collect pictures of Indian culture and ? dance
Kabeer … Sir but r u sure u will get pictures on Indian culture and beauty a
man yes sure I suppose it’s a good country so you should leave tomorrow Kabir yes
Sir
man you have to stay there for almost 2 months and get me the best of it as you can
Man
you are going tomorrow have booked the flights do your packing fast now
Kabir s home
Kabir does all the packing takes the blessing from his mom and leaves
In flight ….
kabeer … Varanasi here I come
Girl with her was Riya her pa she secretly crushed on Kabir and leaves no stone to make him touch her
Riya in mind … kabeer I will make u fall for me in that varansi
Both reach Varanasi
A man is holding board mr kappor
Kabeer goes there
They get into a car and reach the hotel
They get freshen up and they meet a guide
Guide …hello sir I’m ur guide for varansi
K…Hello ( Kabeer = k)
K- so Mr Kumar can u tell me any good place where Indian Beauty is present
Guide.. sir I know.a place named Ajanta
K.. so whats special about this place
Guide sir actually it is surrounded by all trees there is a big stare present here .. Ajanta is a.art and dance stage of olden times … Moreover there is a girl ???? she is a nri a dance choreographer in London she is teaching dance and music to the unprivelliged girls
Kabir …. hmmm let’s see who is this girl
so Ajanta we r coming
Riya who was getting jealous … sir
what’s the need there might be many other places here afterall it’s a big place
Guide … yes There are many other places but like Ajanta none is there
Riya frowns
Kabir … so it’s final we r going there
They
Go to Ajanta
( sometime someone comes into ur life so unexpectedly takes ur heart by surprise and changes ur life forever
)
Sanchi was dancing with a group of girls on the song o re piya from the movie aaja nachle (do search google for o re piya song Madhuri Dixit grooving dance steps and the song I love ?❤️❤️ it it’s a personal request pls see this song )
Kabeer was staring at her … her dance was perfect moreover her angelic figure attracted him to her
Guide … sir again sir
Kabeer came into his senses
Guide …. sir she is sanchi . He shouts Sanchi beta come here
Precap … intro of Kanchi and romance
Sorry guys I’m really very late I hate excuses I thank u all for ur precious comments and the other ff I will write on Saturday don’t be angry on me guys I will try to post asap take care
15 Comments
superb ff update next one soon…
Nice episode
I am sorry I cannot hear the song now (as everyone else is sleeping at my home.It is late night n I am the one who uses mobile stealthily under the blanket)
But I will hear the song tomorrow.Pinkie promise!!!!
Inspired from Aaja nachle??? Plz make Kabir an everlasting character. If Kabir plays the role of the foreigner he will not have much role.Plz show him come back plz…..
Nice!! Hopefully isn’t completely like the movie
Amaz dear nd o re piya song is personally my one of fav song,,,post nxt asap dear
Superb ? ? ?
First of all, Happy Durgashtami dear…………coming to the episode, it was fab………& kanchi romance, wo bhi itne jaldi!!!!!! I mean, its just one episode, don’t u feel they’ll be moving too fast……plz show their frndship first(dear don’t mind at all, its just a suggestion………rest is upto u)…..plz update nxt one asap……..
Nice
Can’t wait till saturday.. Amazing episode update soon…
Amazing
Sure
Kylie…it was as amazing as the movie.. but plz if Kabir have to play the foreigner role than plz make changes..otherwise in future KANCHI have to separate bcoz of divorce..i will surely enjoy their Daughter’s presence but plz don’t vreak their family.
Otherwise excellent writing..
Super awesome amazing fabulous mind blowing update soon
Really fantastic…. Fab….loved the concept!!
Fabulous… Brilliant… Fantastic… Keep going..