Hello guys how r u hope u allri8…thanks for supporting me nd showering ur lots of love..m on cloud 9 after reading ur beautiful commnt
AUTHORS NOTE-SORRY THIS IS MY FIRST FF SO M LILL NERVOUS ND SO I FORGOT TO SUBMIT INTRO
(HERE IT INTRO-
sanchi-sweet simple dedicated ambitious nd many more
kabir malhotra-mr arrogant but not that much,handsome dashing experienced dr. Of sdch
veer malhotra and aarav malhotra-bro. Of kabir in orderly
ishgya-sanchi’s bestie and aarsha nd praveer loves each other since collegetime sanchi r common frnds of all
no ria no revenge drama no identity confusion no enemy no one in negative role in my ff and rest same as show jaya mishra,sunil mishra,sunny,sanchi’s dadi, anand malhotra and savitri nd many more nd acco.to need introduce later)
recap-sanchi bumps in kabir head collides with each other.. Sanchi leaves from there.. Nd kabir take a glance of her nd smile.
here start episode 2
kabir(k)-turns nd see sanchi again nd smile k himself “weired but sweet” nd goes but bad luck of k someone peeping him from a lill distance nd notice his smile but k gud luck he see a girl but not her face..
Whatt whattt is going on hey bhagwan m i dreaming someone pincth me said in top of voice as he can(obviously veer)
aarav(ar) pinched veer hardly from behind
v-ouchhh idiot itne jor se pinch karte hain
ar-sorry m just helping bade bhaiya u said him so i thought…
V- u dumbo itna dimaag mat lagaya kar bhai k chamche m just kidding
ar-sorry u should said before naa nd make puppy face
v-ok lets enjoy and what to say we did a party
ar-for what
v-our promotion r going on we r made dever soonnn
ar-matlab
v beats him-u duffer nd bhai plzz tell urs chamche u r going to marry soon m ri8 naa said veer
k-what the hell is veer what is this…not again ur stupid useless prank anymor especially on dutyhours…if u came here for recieving my car keys then sorry m not giving it for ur stupid race fight.
Ohhh not bade bhaiya m just think about that weired nd sweet girl nd also think to inform mom after all a gr8 news for her..nd need to distribute sweets in neighbours,after all u find a girl nd we bhabhi
ar opened his mouth with O reaction..
k-shut ur mouth otherwise bees made a nest in it
and veer stop ur bakwas nd go to home mom will be waitting for u both nd last day for ur fun go nd take some rest
v-ohh bhai u said like we r going in a jail
ar- arre chote bhaiya bade bhaiya is not less than a jailor h naa bhai
kabir glares them
k-u r going or not yaa m giving u record room punishment
v pretends to callsome hello maa u know kabir bhai has a gir…
K -stop it blackmailing me..u need key take it enjoy nd pushes both them towards main gate
okkk bhai don’t worry we know exit have fun nd smile-veer said nd gave a evil smile
ar looked both of them with ye ho kya raha h bhai expression
kabir takes relief ohh bach gaya thank god he did not c whole incident…warna pure hospital mein parche(poster)lagwa deta k smirks nd goes
scene 2
sanishgya settledown in the hostel room finally we finished everything now lets sleep guys otherwise we got late for our first class said sanch
isha(i)-haan yaar otherwise i have wrinkle nd blackheads on my face i need complete bed sleep for my beauty subah se itna kaam kar k thak gayi hun
p-abeo nautanki we see that how much u did tab se to apne phn pe lagi hi baby my sona kuchi muchchi(p mimic of isha )
isha pouts nd make puppy face-u know pragya if i don’t talk to him then bechara (arav)not ate food whole day
p-haan bhai wo h bhi to doodh pita bachcha
sanpra giggles nd gave hi fi
is-o really pragya i will c u when veer called u
p blushed
sanchi-okk guys stop fight kya bachcho ki tarah ladne lag jate ho
i-u said so easily bcoz u r not in lov when u lov some one u never leave without him for a while
s-lov nd me never… No lov sove in my dictionary m not a love sick puppy atall(lol sereil ko dekhkar to nahi lagta hehehe)
ishgya-lets wait nd watch
s-sure
sanishgya wishes gud ni8 eachother nd slept
scene3 in mal. House @dining table
k-mom aaj khane m kya h
savitri(s)-ur fav food guess what
k- umm blah blah blah wowww
s-u like it
kabir kissed savitri hand ofcourse mom u r d best love u
love u too beta-s
veer arav came fast beta said savitri
yes mom both replied
s-veer arav how was ur ist day at hospital
v-weired but sweet
kabir choked on it.
S-kabir carefull beta whr r u lost
“in someone’ thought h naa bhai”veer teasingly asked
s-kya hey bagwan tune sun li meri aaj hi mata rani ko prasad chadhungi …. Raju (servant)ye sweets padoshiyon me baat aao
k mom plzzz nothing like that u r overreacting u know veer he is like that
s looked at veer (ek umeed bhari nighaon se)
v-maa u know m very innocent i never lied
k -no mom u asked arav
aarav shockingly looked at both one by one screen freezes on trio’s face
precap-officialy kanchi’s ist meeting
regards
niya
sry for late nd boring chapi again…kya karun mere chote se bheje m khali bakwas ideas h..gave ur veiw what u feel..
take care
bye
33 Comments
Awesome story
Thanks sweety, m glad u like it
Ye bakwas nhi super se bhi uper tha milne se pehle hi dono pyar me pad gye.??
Awww thank u so much sweety lovvv u…. Tc
Oh,,dear it was not boring at all.. It was amazing.. Update soon..
Thanks sweety nd sure try my best to post nxt asap as i can.
It was amazing…. Really enjoyed reading it
Thanks dear it means a lot to me
Hey dear , one suggestion , don’t take it otherwise ok , suno when u write no , use Caps for Initial alphabets of characters , like
K – I love u Sanchi
S – I love u too Kabir
K – Will u marry me?
S – Of course yes
If u write like this it wud b much easier for us to read and interpret , as u write without much spaces n without caps for Initial alphabets of character name , it becomes stressful for the eyes to read n decipher ur writing , I hope u understand and implement this , Don’t plzz take me wrongly , I ws just suggesting u , rest ur wish .
Sorry if I hurt u dear
Hey dear thanks for ur suggestion nd i think u r ri8 actually problem ye h ki main phn per type krti hun to 5000 words tak hi likh sakti hun issi chakkar me ki epi chotta rah jayega gap kam dene ki kosish ki actually mera pc kharab ho gaya h isiliye ye sab ho raha h… Don’t worry aage se dhyaan rakhungi thanks for a great advise nd don’t feel bad… Mujhe achcha laga tumne apne mann ki baat kahi isse mujhe apne apko improve krne ka mauka milega..lovv u a loads tc
Niyaa dear, agar ye bakwaas hai, toh hume ye bakwaas zindagi bhar ke liye qubool hai…haha……….u r an amazing writer dear……..really really enjoyed reading this a lot………..luv u dear……….
Awwww god omg moments for me sweety thank u nooo thanks bhi chotta pad jayega itni tarif k liye… Itna pyar mat lutao ki m bigad jau..hehehe…lovvv u or haan tumse jyada dher se bhi dherr jyada… Tc
Di , don’t sau this boring otherwise i will angry from you .Awesome , funny , Amazing update & the best part is positivity as I also believe in positivity.No negativity & villains. Loved this episode completely . Loved the sanishprag & brothers bond . Lots of kisses to u .
With wishes & love
Take care & stay safe
Your lil sis Niyu.
Hey my lill angel thanks… Nd haan m bhi negative character se thak gayi hun sdch ke show ne itne villain bhar diye h ki inhe best villain creative award milna chahiye..hahaha.. Lovvv u too nd more than u …samjhi tc and stop watching saavdhaan india..hehehe..just kidding …stay safe u nd ur family..gud ni8 cutie pie
Wow niyaa, not good…. It’s the best ff I read till now… Kuch ideas share karo na please…. Awesome especially isha pragya k dialogues padh k toh mera dil garden garden Ho gaya…. Great ff… Keep writing.. I’m waiting OK
Thank u so much sweety u can’t imagine kaisa feel kar rahi hun itna aasmaan pe mat chadhao mujhe..hehehe..nd sweety koi gyaan ki jarurat nahi h tumhe i read ur ff PIM nd i lovee it nd dialogue r superb thanks for a beautiful commnt u made my day…sorry ni8..hehe..tc lovv u sisy
Niyaaa ! It’s perfect ..lovee it
Awww thank u so much dear m glad u like it
Ohh niyaa,what an episode. Now i m falling in love with ur ff..and i just loved bonding between kabir ,veer and aarav..just a request write full namr of characters or use Bold letters for names.its little confusing while reading… and i loved savitri scene “hey bhagwan……..”
This episode was simply amazing…
Hey yaashi thank u so much dear nd sure i will correct myself nd don’ worry aage koi sikayat ka mauka nahi dungi especially confusion k mamle me nd story ka koi guaranty nahi..hehehe.. M abhi kosis kar rahi hun khud ko correct or pehle se behtar banane ki .. Gave ur view nd amaz suggestion… Tc sisy lovv u
Amazing
Tysm dear
Aawwww I totally agree with u riya !
Hme yhi pasand hai ! Dhamakedar ******** as usual sissy
Keep going !!!!
Tysm my QOOS (queen of os) don’ be surprised ye mat sochna niyaa khushi k mare pagla gayi kuch bhi likh diya shortcut ka zamana aage kabhi liku aise to confusiyan mat jana.. Nd cong for amaz achievement keep going on post more update nd entertain us..lovv u tc
Niyaaaaaaaaa hip hip hurray… amazingggg episode.. u r not doing bakwassss but u r entertaining us with such a lovely story…plz post next part soon..can’t wait to see how kanchi officially met for the 1st tym… lots of love and respect to u dear
Thank u sweety m especially waitting for ur commnt nd dear i respect u too a lot nd wo bhi show me sanchi jitna kabir ko respect karti h usse jyada…hehehe.. Uske respect k chakkar m do bechare munde bhas gaye h…leave it..nd officialy kanchi meeting i don’t think so going such good at all… Hope so u like that just finger cross…lovvv u nd tc gud ni8
Love u too dear.. i know all r going to enjoy ur superb writings dear.. good nught sweet dreams
It was spellbound your epi…i am speechless after reading it…dont say it is bad….love you loads
Thank u thank u tysm tania,i feel relaxed… M glad u like it.. Nd love u loads se bhi jyada
jordar, superb, mind blowing ff i love it and love you for that update next one soon……..
Thank u so much swwety but sorry kan pakad k actually aaj m thoda busy thi to tm nahi mila or jab mila to sirf apne os ka 2nd part hi type kar payi i will try my post to post nx part tommorw pakka pinky promise..lovv u tc gud ni8
it’s ok u can post when u free
gn tc
You are outstanding writer Dhruti dear… It was mind bowing… Loved it❤