Here I’m with a new episode of my ff.. hope you guys enjoyed my all last episode.. as my exams are over so I’ll post long update..
The episode start with avneil and riyali being together… A beautiful venue … The air of the venue is full of romance… A dim light with balloon and candle decorations is like wow… Some couple are enjoying their day avneil and riyali joined them..
R:wow Ali … It’s beautiful..
Ali(low tone)not more than you..
R:what? Did you say something??
Ali:no riya nothing…
Avneil smiles..
Avni to Neil
A: the place is very beautiful..
N: beautiful(looking at her )
A:hmm I said the same.. Neil today you’re looking damm cool…
N:omggg.. avni praise me… I’m impressed… Do you want any favor..
A: praising you is also my mistake…duffer..
N: excuse me!! Duffer kisko bola..
A: ACP Neil Khanna ko…
N:avni..I’ll …
A: what..
N: nothing… Vaise today first time you are looking like a girl.. vrna phle to you look like a don..
A:Neil I’ll kill you..
Ali: hey you both what are you discussing.
N: case
Ali: not here at least..
A:ok sir noodle bhaiya(memicring DD )
Riya laugh..Ali lost in her laughter…
Ali was bought back by a sound of the manager.
M: ladies and gentlemen… You will enjoy your day but before let’s play some games…
All couple become happy
M:so let’s check the compatibility of you guys…
I’ll ask some questions and the couples have to answer and the partners will not see the answers..
So male will sit here and female will sit there..
All the male and female take there place..
First question what is love?? In just three words..
Avneil:trust.. honesty… Life…
M: second question… How to make your relationship better
Avneil,:never hide anything from your partner..
M:third question.. quality you prefer while choosing your love…
Avneil: love is not chosen it just happens to anyone… Qualities criteria is not defined for love..
M: what is similarity between you and your partner…
Avneil: hate lies and cheaters…
M: last question when you met for first time…
Avneil: 2 years back in our training camp…
M: I’ll check and results will be declared soon…
After sometime
And the winner is avneil..
Avneil:( shocked) huumm..
Everyone claps for them…
Avneil see each other and react wow..
A: compatible. Impressive..
N: really shocking..
M: now guys enjoy..
Avneil and riyali have dinner
There is slow music.. All couple dance..
Avneil and riyali too joined them..
Mile ho tm hmko bade nasheebo se plays…
A waiter is shown carrying a box…he place it near avneil.. and call someone… A eye of lady is shown…
W: ma’am the work is done..
L:well done ..
And smiles devilly
Avneil dance and are lost in each other eyes..
Suddenly riya stops and goes on her knees..
R: Ali I love you..??? Will you be mine forever.
Ali was hell shocked… His happiness level was damm so high… He was on the seventh sky flying…
Avneil are also shocked as Ali was going to propose riya but here riya proposed Ali..
Avneil has a big smile on their face…
Ali: yes riya… I’ll be always by you side… And I love you too,???
Avni goes and hug riyali…
A: I’m really very happy for you both..
Riyali smiles
Neil hug them too..
N: yes guys always be happy… Hmm riya you are grt. . You proposed Ali… Ali was here to propose you but you… Well done..
Avneil smile..
Scene freezes at avneil…
Precape:will avni save Neil?!?
Writer’s note: thanks you guys for comments and support.. hope you enjoyed my writing today. And happy dussehra to all my dear friends?
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Guys plz do comments as no comments on my ff is making my moral down and is discouraging me .. so plz do comments
Woww Avneil. But who’s that lady.
That lady is still the suspense dear…
1st of all sorry. Due to puja festival I could not able to read & comment about your episode. I know that it’s already late for commenting & wishing you happy dussehra. The way you think to express the same answer which avneil are given for all of those question are very beautiful. At last the proposing scene is really surprising for every reader. No doubt interesting that your storyline is too interesting to read. I wish that best result will come out. Just keep writing & give surprising with your strategy. All the best.
It’s ok… Don’t be sorry and thanks for your comment