Hey guys
Guess who ?
Trisha here ! Oops ? really sorry for bkwaas in last post !
And literally I have NO words ?…. to describe how I felt after reading your comments ! Seriously guys …. I was dumbstruck I mean so much love so much support me to pighal gyi (I just melted …)!
Thankyou will be the smallest word for all the people who showed such support !
So finally I am not going anywhere for next ***** years hehe ? jyada hogya shayad !
(Overacting )
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Thanku guys!
I will just stay keep showering your love and support guys ! That is on the top !
So here I am back with 101th post or you can say Shagun !
An os !
After this I will start another ff !
Which will be uploaded daily !
“Are we really married ?”
“Eeee” she shouted at the peak of frustration and anger ; when at the same time loud sounds of throwing utensils were heard !
How could he be quiet ?
He shouted from his room “atleast spare the utensils; angry bird” !
Saachi(murmured)- what the hell ? What he thinks himself to be …..! Even mom is gone out of station atleast now ? No ! For god sake what I am expecting from a workaholic ….! I still remember our wedding day !
FLASHBACK ;
Wedding night …!
Kabeer- hope you are comfortable after changing the heavy dress !
Saachi- yeah ….a hectic day right !
Kabeer- hmm anyways love uh baby… u may go to sleep I have some work at laptop I will come asap after that !
Saachi- Kabeer ? at least today skip your work !
(she said with a helpless face )
Kabeer- ….?! I am really sorry I could even talk wd u today !
FLASHBACK end !!
Saachi (still in the kitchen)- i really hope I could add green chili to this sweet dish ! Huh !
She angrily made the dishes nd carries serving plates upwards in their room .
Saachi-dinner is ready Kabeer come fast !
Kabeer- thanku so much for bringing upwards love uh !
Saachi- nd I hate you !
Kabeer- Saachi ??
Saachi- pls now don’t behave like I am lying !
Kabeer- but….
He stops at first seeing her deadly glares !
She serves both the dinner murmuring …..”ofcourse see truth! Truth ! Infact Kangana Ranaut was right in her movie …. these men ….huh….always be the same just tooooo much romantic before messing nd then suddenly ….. tooo much workaholics …. infact govt should make some rules for such irritating husbands ” !
Kabeer – did you said something ?
Saachi- no ! (Still giving furious looks) I said whole Ramayan and she’s saying who was Ram ji ?
They ate the dinner in middle he was stealing her angry but cute looks !
Saachi- till u complete your work …. I am looking forward to a movie !
Kabeer- what ? I send mom at relatives just to spend time with you !
Saachi- seems your brain back from a long holiday of one month !
Kabeer- Saachi ! (He gives her glares )
Saachi- no use me khduus kapoor… I am not at all afraid !
Kabeer- huh !
She teasingly starts “Tabu weds Manu returns ” in between the start of the movie she was constantly rolling her eyes upon him ; he was aware of that still engrossed in laptop !
Kabeer- see Saachi I really wanted to spend time wd u bt you know Na this work….
Saachi (interrupting)- no problem pati dev ! I never complained ….. actually you know when on the first day after wedding I specially made all dishes for you and you left for hospital without even praising me ….. kasam se that was too romantic !
Kabeer- (mind) uff ! Don’t know when these tauntrums will end …!
Kabeer- u remember our first date … before mrrg too romantic !
Saachi- yeah my first nd last date !
Saachi- anyways I just want a bath else my head will burst !
Kabeer- ofcourse ! That too with cold water. !
Saachi gave him a smirk nd left for bath while he was too engrossed in his laptop !
After few minutes the door of the bathroom opened nd a girl with wet hairs ….barefoot came out in a long white shirt ….. no doubt she was looking too hot !
Someone was trying hard to concentrate on his work but couldn’t manage stealing constant glances of his lovely dovey wife ! No doubts he was looking super hot in “without shirt looks” ….!
Saachi- stop starring at me !
Kabeer- I am not !
Saachi- lier !
Finding hard to get over her he finally gave up nd closed his laptop nd started starting her with full attitude !
Saachi- what ?
She was drying her hair with hair dryer .
Kabeer- my shirt !
Saachi- find yourself !
Kabeer-don’t change the topic ! Who told you to wear my shirt !
Saachi- my husband my shirt so no more questions !
He rolls his eyes !
Kabeer- I want it back !
Saachi- take it tomoroww !
She ended drying her “still wet” hairs… nd continued to body lotion sitting in front of her mirror !
Kabeer- I want it back now !
Saachi- ok then give me back my pendrive asap !
Kabeer- huh !
He stood up moving towards the mirror where she was done wd her body lotion nd standing adjusting her hairs ….
He came from back nd hugged her from behind rubbing her waist …nd pulling back with her back lying on his chest nd his breaths against her neck !
She could feel his hot breaths … he touched her shoulders measuring down to the fingers which got a sudden electric shock running down her spine….
He kept kissing slowly her neck…. shoulders moving upwards to the earlobe… when she whispered his arm in a seducing voice…”Kabeer….”
He put a finger in her lips ….”sssh” … made her face him … sided tangles of her hair from face…with his hand running back her forehead…….their eyes closing with each passing second nd decreasing the distance between their lips…nd finally they shared a passionate kiss …later he dimmed the light …. picked her in his arms in typical bridal style nd made her lie on the bed…the scene ended with their hands entangled with each other…! The moon that night kept himself awake A little longer …. the sole witness of their love…!
Next day during dinner….!
Kusum- Saachi …. he didn’t fought with you again right ?
Kabeer coughed hard on this !
Saachi- ahm no mom.
Saachi- Kabeer pass on the pickle pls !
Both kusum nd Kabeer were eyeing her suspiciously…!
Saachi- no !
Kusum nd Kabeer- yes !
Saachi- nooo !
Both burst out laughing on this !
Kusum- jokes are good for health beta !
Saachi-(mind) thankgod !
The end !
So this was it guys a romantic OS ! Tumpamoni asked me for this …. Last but not least ….once again thanku so much for all the support guys !
And pls pls drop a comment if you guys like this!
Regards
Trisha
55 Comments
Trisha dear………..main vaari jaavan tumhari iss os pe…………..haye……….meri toh bolti band hogayi……..too good dear………….rocking, dhamaakedaar, epic, histoic, mindblowing……….in short……tussi bade kamaal ke writer ho ji…………too good yaara, just too good…………….a big waala teddy hug for u & luv u a lot meri Cutie pie……….
Omg tusi vi bde kammaaal ho ji ?
Such a beautiful comment
Uff ! Margyi ! Bchgyi ! Thankyou riya u really rocked !
Love uh loads my chocopie nd a big teddy hug
Take care
It was awesome…
I am your silent reader of your ff and os and I have been reading it from first,but I have not commented on your ff and os, sorry for that definitely from now I will comment..
And congratulations for your 100 posts in telly updates..
Take care..
Omg thanku so much aafia
Knowing few silent readers is like getting few drops of water in drought ??(sorry for overacting ) but really thanku so much
Take care you too dear nd love uh sweetie
Aww, di it’s amazing OS . Can’t have words to describe this . I think i start in looking dictionary for u as every word is nothing in fron of your os .Glad that u back with ff & i am dancing with happiess.Lots of love to u . Congrats for your shagun post hehe…..Take care.
Happy Dussehra di.
Niyu
Awwwww that’s so so sweet of you niyuu! Nd yeah I have submitted next post with a message for everyone nd teaser !
Take care sweetie !
Same to you !
Your Di
Haye kya mast likhte ho Ji.
Before marriage date -first nd last date of saanchi nd not praising for food being romantic was hilarious u rocked it dear.
So post asap
Nd if u don’t mind why don’t you write 2nd part of this os. It’s amazing
Sure I will look onto that dear !
Thanku so much Priyanshi for such amazing comment ! I am really glad u liked it
The cutest and hottest OS!! Just Speechless!! Hats Off!! Grand Salute!!
Omg thankyou so much palak ! Getting compliment from such an awesome writer is like super se bhi upar !
Haaaye!!! Trishu thanx u shona for coming back and soooooo much congratsssssss for 101th shagun wala post.i wish tum aise hi 1001 post pure karo..love u dear and coming to os ,ab main kya boluu?? And happy waala dasshera
Awww your “Shona” directly went to the heart sweetie ! Nd thanku so much I am so happy I liked it dear !
Same to you too
It’s the best. ..really liked it …i mean it’s just perfect .
Thanku so much neha
TRISHA !!! TRISHA!!! TRISHA!!
No words yaar.. it was spellbound.. it was so cute and romantic…utensils and the marital dram was too much realistic.. i fell in love with ur writing dear.. thanks for mentioning my name in ur article..its a big achievement for me to be a part of ur journey. Love u a lots dear..gbu. keep smiling
Awwww thanku so much mitali ! Infact I am also a crazy fan of your writings ! Love uh loads dear
And a big teddy hug too
Tc
Congrats for shagun post!!! And i m happy that u r going 2 start a new ff! Yay!! I m sooo excited
Thanku neha nd sure dear
Amazing
Thanku
Omg trishu it was soooooo amazing….. I loved it a lot dear….. My heart is still beating fast and my cheeks have became red reading ur os…. Ittne simple concept ko ittna beautifully kese likh leti ho yaar?? Mujhe ye baat toh pata hai ki har wife ko apne husband se ye complain hamesha hoti hai!! Aur ye baat ittni common hai par tumhare os mai boohat unique lagi!!! And congrats for ur 101 post dear…. I wish ki hamara saat marte dam tak naa choote… Love u loads??
Awwww thankyou so much vrushti for this awesome comment dear ! You made my day dear really !
Ofcourse Ofcourse I am not going to leave you guys so soon ! Hehe ?
Love uh too dear
It was quite funny yet romantic.
I loved Sanchi’s taunts so much that I was laughing visualizing the scene.
Plz plz plz post its sequel na. I would love to read more of the workaholic Kabir.
Congoratz for ur 101th post Trishi.
Thanku anonymous I Ann so happy I iiked it ! Infact another reader asked me for the sequel so I will look forward to that read but before that something is on the way !
“Trishi ” was cute !
Omg trishu ???????????….what a romantic is..haye mai various jawa is pe…..jaw dropped os yr…loved it to infinity!!!
Thanku so much abhilasha! I am so happy u liked it dear !
Amazing…. Loved it very much
Thanku amnaa
Hey trishu finally u updated ur shagun post …hehehe.. Short sweet nd hottest realistic os post nxt one nd ur ff chpt too lovvv u tc sona
Thanku so much dear glass u liked it niyaa !
Love uh too sweetie ! Take care
Glad*
Awesome super fabulous fantastic os Trishu and update ur ff also missing soo much
Hey dear I have discontinued “connected by birth ” nd started a new one that will be posted soon sweetie !
Ooossssmmmm trishu dear
U r the os queen
How these ideas came into ur mind
That was sprb
And ya plz continue ur ff (CONNECTED BY BIRTHS)
Hey dear I have discontinued “connected by birth ” nd started a new one that will be posted soon sweetie !
Nd thanku so much sweetie !
Oww i was waiting 4 that but thats alright
Excited 4 the new one
And ya also cngrts for ur century
Lots of kisses and a big wala teddy hug to u
Keep writing dear luv u alot
Awww thanku so much dear
Return teddy hug to you !
Luv uh loads dear
Soooooo sry [holding ear] 4 late commenting my sweet angel queen.. U know what i lost my words,,nthing 2 say 4 ur outstnding,,super se uppaaaaaar os.. Lots of lv & kisses.. Thnk u sooo much 4 accept my rqst..
Awww no need or say sorry dear but yeah I wasn’t waiting for your comment ! Thanku for this amazing comment nd love uh back !
Nice epsd.. Waiting 4 ur ff..
Thanku faria
Glad u commentEd dear
Ff is on the way
Amazing.. Ur silent reader..
Thankyou alo
Your commment means a lot keep commenting ?
Its awsm..amazing..splendid…tooo gd…nd mny more…write an OS on Kanchi nd Praveer…I like Praveer also…
Thankyou sanyukta nd I will look forward for your wish
it was awesome, mind blowing, what i said about your os i have no words i just love your os a big hug for you and congress for 101 (shagun wala 101) post.
keep writing…..keep entertaining us…..come with new one ff/os….. bye…
HeheHmm thnku so muchsweetie don’t mind but looks like you commented sitting in metro
Loads of love
Take care
Bye
So so beautiful and amazing story
Thanku anu
Sorry Trisha.. I’m the last one to comment.. Actually I was not well…. Coming to your story.. It’s always fabulous, mind blowing, ravishing etc… A song only for u
O Trisha! Chura liya hai tumne.. Chura liya…
? awww thanku so much anu that was so sweet nd not an issue dear u r always welcome !
Sholly trishu for the late comment… But it was truly fantastic… Amazing… Outstanding… Marvelous… Superb… Brilliant.. You always come with super interesting ideas.. Loved it… And love you too❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤