Hey guys back wid new episode….
Guys if u need any changes of story like any scenes u can suggest me…..
Typo errors pls ignore…
Hope u guys like the episode….
News (TV)
Today we witnessed a murder in city outskirts …both husband and wife are travelling from their place in car then this murder might have happened…here his wife was dead….but husband stood numb and only murmuring..”I Saw him” …police are enquiring him…but he doesn’t even answering any of the questions except those three words…
For more news about this stay tuned …
Turned off the TV
Sanky – Terrific murders are happening….y he just saying those three words…..any way I have to leave the place and I have to find her…I have to move to town now…where lot of people present….
#office
Lucky – hey Riya , where is ragini ???
Riya (pa) – ragini mam still not came ….
Lucky – if she comes inform me…
Riya – ok laksh
Lucky – today I will ask u for coffee or for lunch…common lucky u have to do frndship it is d base for love…make her frnd….
Mei intazaar Kar Raha hoon ragini come fast…
#Kapoor mansion
Servant – Mam, break fast ready….
Ragini – ok , I will come…
Servant (thank god she is in good mood…I escaped)
Came to dining area
Servant 2- serving breakfast suddenly spill on her hand…
Servant 1- ufff…he is finished now…
Ragini – how dare u??? Can’t u see properly….where r u looking….and slaps hard….if u repeat this again ….U will be fired….she went to her room and cleaned it and drive to office…
Servants discuss – u lucky…don’t repeat this…already I have told u ….but u negelcted…
S2 – she slapped me very hard Yaar…now I got to know these many ppl have changed y…
S1- here all servants are new….she sent all the old staff from here…dono y….
S2. – seems like psycho boss…
S1- don’t dare to say infront of her…..next time she will kill u…
Come let’s get back to work….
# office
Ragini – Riya what are meetings today…
Riya – mam…vo….Mr Sharma’s project meeting will be tmrw mam…they have postponed it….and we have to submit presentation of the project xyz still it is in process…we have to submit it Asap….
Ragini – ok , who is working on this project ?
Riya – laksh & his team mam
Ragini – send them to my cabin……
Riya – ok mam…
Lucky – how much time will she take to reach office ….
Riya – she already reached laksh….
Lucky – really…y are u telling me this late…
I have to meet her…
Riya – she too called u …in her cabin now…
Lucky – thank god…
Riya – oye helloooo go with ur team…she is about to talk about xyz project..
Lucky – oh k ?
Lucky – may I come in …
Ragini – yes…Mr laksh…
Lucky – Ragini……..(she glared at him) mam……u called me???
Ragini – about presentation……till how much time it will take to complete…
Lucky – mam data is given only today mrg…we have been assigned for it yesterday itself…
Ragini – I dono need any explanation I hate them…. do Ur job that’s what Ur coming for… complete it today itself…
Lucky – whatttttt??? Today???
How is it possible???
Ragini – if u can’t then u may leave mr. Laksh….we are paying for u for doing job and listening my words…
Lucky – yeah iam coming here for listening Ur words..(slowly)
Ragini – what???
Lucky – I will do it mam…but on one condition…
Ragini – condition???? Look Mr.
Interrupts by lucky…request or may be condition or anything….will u join for lunch ?? Or for coffee…plssss
Ragini – what the hell are u thinking about urself???
Lucky – me …..my self…..nothing mam…u have to say if u think anything about me…
Ragini – take this file and get lost…she throws the file on him…
Lucky – how rude!!!!!! iam going…think about it once plssss (pout face)
He went from there…
A curve appear on her lips….but she get back to normal as it soon vanished….
#evg
Riya – mam, it’s already 6pm…
Ragini – yea Riya , but we have to submit this project also na…ok u go I will go after completing this..
Riya – ok mam…
Riya Came to lucky…
Riya – laksh still working…
Lucky – yeah Riya …have to submit na…
Riya – ok iam leaving….
Lucky – ok bye…
#after 2hrs…
Oh it’s already 8 ….ok I have to leave now….
Both lucky and ragini are coming in opposite directions….
Lucky didn’t see ragini….he moved towards the car…
Ragini came to her car…but driver is standing outside and changing the tyre …
What happened??
Man wo…tyre punctured hogaya….iam changing it…
How much time it will take …??
Mam half – an hr…pls sit in car mam…I will make it fast…
By then lucky came towards her in his car…
What happened bhayya??
Car tyre got punctured…with in minutes I will change…
Suddenly lucky got down and said to driver which is unnoticed by ragini
Pls bhayya don’t make it ready….pls I will drop her…
No sir , sorry if she got to know…I will lose my job…I have two kids…pls don’t make me beggar…
Uffooo y Ur thoughts are going far like rockets…pls stop imagining high…I will ask her u just tell it will take time…ok??
No sir pls …
Listen to me…u keep silent I will manage…
He came to ragini and said hii …
What????
Arey don’t u know how to smile while talking to ppl??
It’s none of Ur business ..
It’s my business….can I drop u???
No need…I will go by my car…
Oh , common I too checked …it will take more than half an hr…u can come with me…by d way I won’t eat u…u r safe with me…I can assure u….
Aftersometime she nodded as yes…
Lucky jumping in happiness…
He opened the car door and he came to driver seat….
Both drove off to ragini’s home…
Ok Mr laksh thank u for dropping me..
Won’t u invite me to Ur house??
No…
How rude u r….at least for dropping u…keep some concern….and here iam not Ur employee…treat me as ur frnd…
Come in…she said gently…
Yea….coming….
After sometime both had dinner…….
Lucky is thinking about ragini….this is the chance I have got ….but God pls don’t ruin this…pls support me….
Ragini bid bye to lucky…but he was not willing to go…
By then heavy rain started….ah lucky…think think…god is also helping u….
Yea??
Ragini ….it’s raining heavily..would u mind if I stay back…
Yes I mind…
Ah seriously….it’s raining can’t u see….if anything happens to me…u will be responsible….he is continuing his blabbering…
Stop it….come on in….
Oh thank u so much ragini….
Both went in….after sometime..lucky asks her to chitchat with him…which she refused….but after so much efforts…finally she is also talking wid him…sharing …laughing…. unknowingly she enjoyed his company….both were talking till late night…finally lucky gained ragini’s trust…lucky asked him for friendship…she nodded positively…….
Both dozed off….
Scene shifts to sanskar…
Holding one pic(Ragini)…he is talking… I got the details of u…..I don’t know why iam connected to u…..it feels like iam nothing without u….it’s been a year iam searching for u…now I got u…I don’t leave u at any cost….that moment I saw u… is still in my eyes….
Flashback:
Ragini is trying to run away from her house …she got escaped from her security and she is running and then she came to outskirts where no man is found….she don’t know where she came…she scared and dono wat to do…then some goons came and catch her and took her to some place in jungle…and tied her hands and legs…they blindfolded with cloth that she don’t see where she is….she then heard their conversation…
Goon- man ….she is big industrialist daughter we can ask her father huge money…
Ragini – u idiots why did u brought me here…u don’t get single penny…bcoz my father thrown me out of d house…(she lied)
Goon – what ??? Is she saying truth..????
Ragini – arey dumboooo…how could he know about me and my dad…iam telling u na…leave me….
Goon – Yaar she is talking too much…I will kill her…
Goon – 2– stop it yaar…what if she is saying true…she is of no use then..
Goon – ok I will enquire about it and come…till then keep an eye on her…
Goon 2- ok but come soon ….I can’t handle her…..she is too talkative…
Ok i will come soon…
After some time…other goon went out ….
By then ragini is screaming….arey dumboooo y did u kidnapped me…ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
By then one person is passing like a wave stopped as his heart beating got increasing….it never happened to me…y iam feeling strange….then he enters into the place where it seems like old godown…
He saw her …..yes I saw her….she looks like angel….I can’t even express how beautiful she is….god my heart skips a beat….he looks her like a wonder of the world….
He came near her and kneel down….and looking at her…
Ragini – u idiots …leave me….u know .(slowly telling to herself)..I have to enjoy my life so I left the place…I didn’t even experience any enjoyment in my life..panipoori …..long drive…visiting beach at night….travel to middle of sea….. skydiving… love…first kiss….hmmmm list is so long……
I heard all the things which spills from her rosy lips…i lift her in my strong arms and ran as fast as I could…. and dropped her in one place…
Ragini – Who r u???
I don’t know what to answer…all I could see is her angelic face but I don’t see her eyes….I untied her both hands and legs…and cupped her face and all I keep thinking is kissing her….I dono y feel like this…but right now…if I didn’t kiss her …I feel like all my life just fade away…I just kissed her….but what shocked me is she too reciprocated with equal passion..i can sense every drop of my blood is circulating so fast through my veins……she hardly kissed me by drawing her hands through my hair ….I hardly kissed her for more than 15min….i don’t want to be parted from her…but she is breathing heavily….I tried to be apart…but her grip was so tight…after a break she kissed me again….actually we SEALED WITH A KISS….totally it lasts so long….after that…we both stopped….she tried to open cloth on her eyes….but I denied…..by holding her hands…dono y she wants to see me badly…I can sense that….then she opened her blindfold….her eyes….if I got a chance to stop the time…I will definitely stop it…by looking into her I got so awestruck…
“Listen go straight to your house and don’t think about what just happend” I compelled her…
I know she don’t think about it….but she will remember me and the incident….
Flash back ends…..
Present
Two persons are kissing like there is no tmw…if we apart then I feel like i will be not able to live without u….I sensed that feeling dono y my heart felt like kissing u badly…..I may not able to see u…but …I can see the love u have for me in this kiss…so I never wanted to be apart…iam breathing heavily…but if I die I don’t care….but someone whom loves me…I don’t want to loose u…after such a long time kiss…we aparted…I have to see u ….iam trying to open my eyes by removing cloth …but u denied….don’t worry who u r ? How Ur ?? I don’t want anything…I want love that all I want from u…finally I opened my eyes…..wow such a charming face … chocolate brown eyes…..in his eyes I can sense love for me….but I have seen pain also……but then just went blank….
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Ragini – every time I endup with this dream….what happened to me….who is he??? How to find him??
Somewhere one person is talking….
I will not let u be happy ….I will ruin everything which belongs to u…..I will make Ur life miserable….I will make u suffer….iam already on it ……I know Ur in love…so i made the person suffering now….now come here….I will make Ur love mine….I will see you suffering….I killed Ur parents…I will kill your loved ones…..just to see u suffer…I will promise u that I will give u miserable life till eternity…..
Slowly person goes to middle of road ….and slept on road…suddenly one car came and stopped…”hey y r u sleeping in middle of road”….’yeah bcz iam happy so I slept here and iam hurt, u didn’t realize my happiness sooooo(with wide smile on his lips) I will kill u ‘ the person ripped his heart out (with in fraction of seconds)…….
U disappointed me dude …good bye …have a nice sleep…..
To be continued….
Guys is it boring….pls let me know……I know it’s boring…but what to do….thoughts are dancing in my brain…and endup with this stuff…
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And if u can suggest me anything yup …personally u can msg me…ur thoughts…
Thank u so much guys…for the love and support…
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Love u guys…keep smiling…
Signing off
URS
Suma
17 Comments
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